FullMetal Alchemist AMV

uchihafangirl15 · 01-24-2006, 04:49 PM

I have mad two AMVs so far and was hoping you could look at the first one I made to give me ideas of what I could improve on, shouldn't do the next time, etc. There is a link in my siggy

uchihafangirl15 · 01-26-2006, 03:23 PM

Common peoples! It can't be that bad! Can it??

martryn · 01-26-2006, 03:32 PM

I enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing. I can't really evaluate it per se because I'm not much of an artist, but I'd watch another you made if you had more.

Kucheeky Badkuya · 01-26-2006, 03:52 PM

Thats your first one? Excellent. Keep it up.

uchihafangirl15 · 01-26-2006, 03:55 PM

thank you!

SGT.FROG · 01-29-2006, 10:28 PM

nice man keep up the nice work here is some reppah

uchihafangirl15 · 01-30-2006, 05:48 PM

^.^ thankyous you guys! I am glad to finally be getting some feed back from my video ^.^ I am trying to add my second video to the internet but it isn't working very well.... If i get it working i will leave a link (ps. I think it is better than the first)

Son Goku · 01-30-2006, 07:01 PM

i think you know i liked you cuz i repped you for it i would like to see your second one though

kakoishii · 01-30-2006, 10:34 PM

I hate to be critical since it is your first one and all I won't be too harsh cause I remember my first one and it wasn't up to par with my work now but here's just a little advice. Make your AMV a story that flows and stay away from being to litteral with your action syncing unless it's suppose to be a comedy video (i.e. lyric inside = Inside Al's armor) good for being brand new though continue to improve.

Jaejoong · 01-31-2006, 09:47 PM

The song matched pretty well, but I didn't like the song.
But that's just me, so nice AMV.
7/10

uchihafangirl15 · 02-02-2006, 09:32 PM

thank you everyone for telling me what you think.
kakoishii: Your advice makes sense... i will try and work with what you told me ^.^
Again thanks everyone!

~Redchaos325~ · 02-04-2006, 08:05 AM

Yes take that on board and hopefully it helps you, if not come back and redo..lol..

uchihafangirl15 · 02-06-2006, 04:04 PM

I finally was able to get the other AMV I made up if anyone is interested ^.^

i_be_ninja_zabusa · 02-27-2006, 11:15 PM

Very nice i thoroughly enjoyed it

Shadowscar · 03-05-2006, 05:27 AM

Liked them both

uchihafangirl15 · 03-06-2006, 04:15 PM

thankies ^__^ I will continue to add more

Ssj3_Goku · 03-07-2006, 04:11 AM

i just saw your whisper one... 2 things really, Get rid of the Divx logo you can do that in the divx options to disable it .

also timing and placement of your parts with the song to make the whole AMV make better sense etc.. thats all i can come up with at the moment.

NaraShikamaru · 03-07-2006, 04:26 PM

Pretty awesome. I quite liked them and im a huge fan of the anime itself!

~~Cloud_20~~ · 07-07-2007, 05:57 PM

very good video

01-24-2006, 04:49 PM	#1
uchihafangirl15 the stealer of pants Rookie Join Date: Jan 2006 Posts: 46	FullMetal Alchemist AMV I have mad two AMVs so far and was hoping you could look at the first one I made to give me ideas of what I could improve on, shouldn't do the next time, etc. There is a link in my siggy

01-26-2006, 03:32 PM	#3
martryn Academy Registration Mod ̣ Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: Swanney's Posts: 13,474 Blog Entries: 36	I enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing. I can't really evaluate it per se because I'm not much of an artist, but I'd watch another you made if you had more. __________________

01-29-2006, 10:28 PM	#6
SGT.FROG chickens????????????????? ??? Rookie Join Date: Dec 2005 Posts: 57	nice man keep up the nice work here is some reppah __________________ MUCH CLOWN LOVE FOR MY HOMIES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

01-30-2006, 07:01 PM	#8
Son Goku Gold ̣ Join Date: Jan 2006 Posts: 1,649	i think you know i liked you cuz i repped you for it i would like to see your second one though __________________

01-30-2006, 10:34 PM	#9
kakoishii bishoujo kunoichi no konoha Missing-nin Join Date: Jan 2005 Posts: 2,126	I hate to be critical since it is your first one and all I won't be too harsh cause I remember my first one and it wasn't up to par with my work now but here's just a little advice. Make your AMV a story that flows and stay away from being to litteral with your action syncing unless it's suppose to be a comedy video (i.e. lyric inside = Inside Al's armor) good for being brand new though continue to improve. __________________ Take The quiz yourself! Which Naruto Character Are You?

01-26-2006, 03:23 PM	#2
uchihafangirl15 the stealer of pants Rookie Join Date: Jan 2006 Posts: 46	Common peoples! It can't be that bad! Can it??

01-26-2006, 03:52 PM	#4
Kucheeky Badkuya ->- Elite Jounin Join Date: Jun 2005 Posts: 2,895	Thats your first one? Excellent. Keep it up.

01-26-2006, 03:55 PM	#5
uchihafangirl15 the stealer of pants Rookie Join Date: Jan 2006 Posts: 46	thank you!

01-30-2006, 05:48 PM	#7
uchihafangirl15 the stealer of pants Rookie Join Date: Jan 2006 Posts: 46	^.^ thankyous you guys! I am glad to finally be getting some feed back from my video ^.^ I am trying to add my second video to the internet but it isn't working very well.... If i get it working i will leave a link (ps. I think it is better than the first)

01-31-2006, 09:47 PM	#10
Jaejoong Doesn't want a Custom Title Torture Specialist Join Date: Jan 2006 Posts: 1,095	The song matched pretty well, but I didn't like the song. But that's just me, so nice AMV. 7/10

02-02-2006, 09:32 PM	#11
uchihafangirl15 the stealer of pants Rookie Join Date: Jan 2006 Posts: 46	thank you everyone for telling me what you think. kakoishii: Your advice makes sense... i will try and work with what you told me ^.^ Again thanks everyone!

02-04-2006, 08:05 AM	#12
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02-06-2006, 04:04 PM	#13
uchihafangirl15 the stealer of pants Rookie Join Date: Jan 2006 Posts: 46	I finally was able to get the other AMV I made up if anyone is interested ^.^

02-27-2006, 11:15 PM	#14
i_be_ninja_zabusa Yo is what yo is Genin Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: Texas Posts: 144	Very nice i thoroughly enjoyed it __________________

03-05-2006, 05:27 AM	#15
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03-06-2006, 04:15 PM	#16
uchihafangirl15 the stealer of pants Rookie Join Date: Jan 2006 Posts: 46	thankies ^__^ I will continue to add more

03-07-2006, 04:11 AM	#17
Ssj3_Goku Hey dood! God of Shinobi Join Date: Sep 2004 Location: Dillsburg PA Posts: 19,623	i just saw your whisper one... 2 things really, Get rid of the Divx logo you can do that in the divx options to disable it . also timing and placement of your parts with the song to make the whole AMV make better sense etc.. thats all i can come up with at the moment. __________________ Education Bachelor of Science (B.S.) Information Technology: Network Specialist Concentration (BNW) Associate of Applied Science (A.A.S.) Information Technology: Network Technology Emphasis (NW) Information Technology: Technical Support Technology Emphasis (TU) Minor Business Administration Certificates Certificate for CCNA Exploration: Networking Fundamentals Certificate for CCNA Exploration: Routing Protocols and Concepts Certificate for CCNA Exploration: LAN Switching and Wireless Certificate for CCNA Exploration: Accessing the WAN NFGAMING IRC CHANNEL! #nfgaming The Nintendo Fanclub The Xbox360 Fanclub The Sony Fanclub (All Sony Products) PSN - DrGregHouseMD Xbox Live - Ssj3GokuSan Wii - Very long code. Last edited by Ssj3_Goku; 03-08-2006 at 11:25 PM.

03-07-2006, 04:26 PM	#18
NaraShikamaru \o/ ̣ Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: Scotland Posts: 3,622	Pretty awesome. I quite liked them and im a huge fan of the anime itself! __________________ last.fm

07-07-2007, 05:57 PM	#19
~~Cloud_20~~ Banned Chuunin Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Usa for ever Posts: 251	very good video