Sun Kissed Jinchuuriki: Nibi No Nekomata [Naru/Yugito]

Ephemeralistic · 12-26-2007, 06:48 AM

I started this up after reading many careless fics. It is generally 10k words a chapter, so it is by no means a wham bam thank you ma'am fic. Six chapters soon, and I have been looking for a little bit more publicity into the fic, since I know I have to wade through the countless crap infested fics to find the perfect gem most of the time.

Naruto / Nii Yugito predominate pairing.

Here is the link to the fic.

So by all means, post your comments, questions, and ideas regarding the fic or the author.

Lucifus · 01-04-2008, 09:13 AM

Wow man, I have to say, I read your story awhile back and I've been itching for an update but I couldn't remember the name of your fanfiction. I've been searching through hundreds of crappy stories to find yours and for some godforsaken reason Yugito isn't listed as a main character in the Naruto section so I had to google Yugito pairings. needless to say I finally found you and the title of your story.

People, this guy is an amazing author, hes one of the very few that make you feel wowed every minute of a story. Your OCs are great man; you gave Yugito such a realistic personality. This story is a true as you call it 'gem' so I do hope you continue with your updates.

Do give this guys fiction a read people, you won't regret it.

On a side note, why are anonymous reviews disabled on your story? If your looking for more publicity, reviews are required and I'm sure most people don't even have accounts on fan fiction. They're just there to read. Granted if the story is amazing enough one should register just to post a review but most people are just too.... well, lazy I suppose to do it. Just some advice. I mean...I took the time to write all this out but I just don't feel to bother myself with registering..........

Edit: Though I did for some reason register to post here...........0.o......ironic.....

Ephemeralistic · 01-04-2008, 02:56 PM

Thanks for the kind words, and I'll look into the public reviewing thing. Holidays have been busy for writing, but I'll have another chapter out soon.

Edit: It is funny that you brought up the fact that most people don't have accounts. I didn't until I made my fic, and I had long since used fanfiction to read up on stories. Hehe.

Lucifus · 01-05-2008, 01:12 AM

Oh my god man! Your the effing best! Update for the win!
Thanks a million.

Ephemeralistic · 01-08-2008, 08:31 PM

Public reviews are up. Chapter 6 is up. This is a ~~stick~~ bump up.

nimistar · 01-23-2008, 03:55 PM

just have to say that this is a great story, the character depth and interaction is quite good. yugito is a perfect caracter for a fanifiction because she is pretty much a blank slate, i am glad to see you using her as a main character in a story.

Lucifus · 03-13-2008, 07:51 PM

/Sigh....I wish there would be more discussion for this kool piece of literature. Give the author some incentive to write people!

Lucifus needs a crackfix.

Miss Fortune · 03-14-2008, 03:37 PM

freakin AWESOME!!!!

Polyx · 03-23-2008, 11:43 PM

I'm surprised that there isn't more comments about this story in here. Even though it has been a long time since updated status I've kept it on my favorites. It truly is a good read.

Chidoriblade · 03-30-2008, 10:19 PM

Very good story. Nice length for the chapters, and the story-line makes sense. Good work.

Ephemeralistic · 05-27-2008, 07:46 PM

Thanks for the comments, frnds.

I will be updating soon. I apologize about the delay. Huge family problems and such, as well as financial issues.

Thanks for your loyal support, and look for the next chapter soon. It is about 50% completed as of right now.

Ephemeralistic · 07-01-2008, 03:43 PM

Chapter 8 uploaded. Have fun reading. I'm off to London for two weeks~!

Senzairu · 07-02-2008, 05:08 PM

You seem to be getting good reviews on your story. I'll check it out.

Have fun in London.

Proman · 07-10-2008, 07:37 PM

Great Story i like how you made Naruto Mature during the story itself rather than 2.5 years offscreen I also like how you gave Naruto a real jutsu and made him confident and serious actually thinking about his moves

I actually like your naruto better than the story one (at least the anime one) i also find it interesting how Ino likes Naruto and how everyone isn't obsessive over Sasuke (especially Naruto and Sakura)

Keep up the good work I hope that you can incorperate Rasengan or at least some new jutsu into his arsenal i'll be waiting for new chapters

Søphié™ · 07-10-2008, 09:17 PM

Great job on the FF..
One of the best i've read so far..
Keep up the good work..

Ephemeralistic · 10-16-2008, 12:24 PM

Thank you, thank you. Chapter 9 is around the corner. Just need a few finishing touches on it and I'll hand it off to a beta. I apologize about the delay. I'm in Saudi Arabia right now and there is just too many hot young virgins being offered to me.

Shorties have had my attention span for a bit now.

Speaking of which, if anyone is interested in beta-ing this story, lemme know. I am interested in finding people who've had a solid education in English writing to help me cultivate my lack of such. Learning from mistakes has proved to be valuable in my case.

Ephemeralistic · 10-31-2008, 05:06 PM

Chapter 9 be out. Go forth, my adoring fans, and feed my megalomania.

Proman · 10-31-2008, 09:59 PM

Finally! I was starting to think you died or something

~~Mider T~~ · 10-31-2008, 10:08 PM

This is good stuff. Is this the first Nii/Naruto fic in existance? Also, how will others deal with the age factor?

Ephemeralistic · 11-01-2008, 09:08 AM

Nah, I wouldn't die. I've just been extremely busy traveling to London, Amsterdam, Saudi Arabia, Yemen, this whole summer. Once I get back to the states in December, things will mellow out with more frequent updates.

As for the fic, I don't know if it is the first, but I do believe it is around second or third. I do know it is the first good one. Shrug, who knows? The age difference is whatever, but I am thinking about making it canon soon for spoiler reasons. As of now, Yugito is only 4 years older than Naruto in this AU fic.

I have big plans for this story, and I'm thinking about a trilogy. :D Good things will come.

12-26-2007, 06:48 AM	#1
Ephemeralistic Newbie Rookie Join Date: Dec 2007 Posts: 67	Sun Kissed Jinchuuriki: Nibi No Nekomata I started this up after reading many careless fics. It is generally 10k words a chapter, so it is by no means a wham bam thank you ma'am fic. Six chapters soon, and I have been looking for a little bit more publicity into the fic, since I know I have to wade through the countless crap infested fics to find the perfect gem most of the time. Naruto / Nii Yugito predominate pairing. Here is the link to the fic. So by all means, post your comments, questions, and ideas regarding the fic or the author. Last edited by Ephemeralistic; 10-18-2008 at 03:43 PM.

01-04-2008, 09:13 AM	#2
Lucifus Newbie Academy Student Join Date: Jan 2008 Posts: 3	Wow man, I have to say, I read your story awhile back and I've been itching for an update but I couldn't remember the name of your fanfiction. I've been searching through hundreds of crappy stories to find yours and for some godforsaken reason Yugito isn't listed as a main character in the Naruto section so I had to google Yugito pairings. needless to say I finally found you and the title of your story. People, this guy is an amazing author, hes one of the very few that make you feel wowed every minute of a story. Your OCs are great man; you gave Yugito such a realistic personality. This story is a true as you call it 'gem' so I do hope you continue with your updates. Do give this guys fiction a read people, you won't regret it. On a side note, why are anonymous reviews disabled on your story? If your looking for more publicity, reviews are required and I'm sure most people don't even have accounts on fan fiction. They're just there to read. Granted if the story is amazing enough one should register just to post a review but most people are just too.... well, lazy I suppose to do it. Just some advice. I mean...I took the time to write all this out but I just don't feel to bother myself with registering.......... Edit: Though I did for some reason register to post here...........0.o......ironic..... Last edited by Lucifus; 01-04-2008 at 09:44 AM. Reason: Irony.....

01-08-2008, 08:31 PM	#5
Ephemeralistic Newbie Rookie Join Date: Dec 2007 Posts: 67	Public reviews are up. Chapter 6 is up. This is a ~~stick~~ bump up. __________________ Sun Kissed Jinchuuriki: Nibi No Nekomata A fanfic of epic proportions

03-14-2008, 03:37 PM	#8
Miss Fortune Senbonzakura Kageyoshi Jinchuuriki Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: Pants Posts: 6,016 Blog Entries: 3	freakin AWESOME!!!! __________________ Byakuya Gundam Spoiler:

03-30-2008, 10:19 PM	#10
Chidoriblade Ye who lost the map... Chuunin Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Here, there, up that wall, down that wall. Posts: 242	Very good story. Nice length for the chapters, and the story-line makes sense. Good work. __________________

01-04-2008, 02:56 PM	#3
Ephemeralistic Newbie Rookie Join Date: Dec 2007 Posts: 67	Thanks for the kind words, and I'll look into the public reviewing thing. Holidays have been busy for writing, but I'll have another chapter out soon. Edit: It is funny that you brought up the fact that most people don't have accounts. I didn't until I made my fic, and I had long since used fanfiction to read up on stories. Hehe.

01-05-2008, 01:12 AM	#4
Lucifus Newbie Academy Student Join Date: Jan 2008 Posts: 3	Oh my god man! Your the effing best! Update for the win! Thanks a million.

01-23-2008, 03:55 PM	#6
nimistar Newbie Academy Student Join Date: Jan 2008 Posts: 1	just have to say that this is a great story, the character depth and interaction is quite good. yugito is a perfect caracter for a fanifiction because she is pretty much a blank slate, i am glad to see you using her as a main character in a story.

03-13-2008, 07:51 PM	#7
Lucifus Newbie Academy Student Join Date: Jan 2008 Posts: 3	/Sigh....I wish there would be more discussion for this kool piece of literature. Give the author some incentive to write people! Lucifus needs a crackfix.

03-23-2008, 11:43 PM	#9
Polyx Newbie Academy Student Join Date: Feb 2008 Posts: 10	I'm surprised that there isn't more comments about this story in here. Even though it has been a long time since updated status I've kept it on my favorites. It truly is a good read.

05-27-2008, 07:46 PM	#11
Ephemeralistic Newbie Rookie Join Date: Dec 2007 Posts: 67	Thanks for the comments, frnds. I will be updating soon. I apologize about the delay. Huge family problems and such, as well as financial issues. Thanks for your loyal support, and look for the next chapter soon. It is about 50% completed as of right now. __________________ Sun Kissed Jinchuuriki: Nibi No Nekomata A fanfic of epic proportions

07-01-2008, 03:43 PM	#12
Ephemeralistic Newbie Rookie Join Date: Dec 2007 Posts: 67	Chapter 8 uploaded. Have fun reading. I'm off to London for two weeks~! __________________ Sun Kissed Jinchuuriki: Nibi No Nekomata A fanfic of epic proportions

07-10-2008, 07:37 PM	#14
Proman Doesn't want a Custom Title Academy Teacher Join Date: Jul 2008 Posts: 343	Great Story i like how you made Naruto Mature during the story itself rather than 2.5 years offscreen I also like how you gave Naruto a real jutsu and made him confident and serious actually thinking about his moves I actually like your naruto better than the story one (at least the anime one) i also find it interesting how Ino likes Naruto and how everyone isn't obsessive over Sasuke (especially Naruto and Sakura) Keep up the good work I hope that you can incorperate Rasengan or at least some new jutsu into his arsenal i'll be waiting for new chapters

07-10-2008, 09:17 PM	#15
Søphié™ ̣ ̣ Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: Tacoma<3 Posts: 1,491 Blog Entries: 1	Great job on the FF.. One of the best i've read so far.. Keep up the good work.. __________________ Fanclubs/Myspace ------

10-16-2008, 12:24 PM	#16
Ephemeralistic Newbie Rookie Join Date: Dec 2007 Posts: 67	Thank you, thank you. Chapter 9 is around the corner. Just need a few finishing touches on it and I'll hand it off to a beta. I apologize about the delay. I'm in Saudi Arabia right now and there is just too many hot young virgins being offered to me. Shorties have had my attention span for a bit now. Speaking of which, if anyone is interested in beta-ing this story, lemme know. I am interested in finding people who've had a solid education in English writing to help me cultivate my lack of such. Learning from mistakes has proved to be valuable in my case. __________________ Sun Kissed Jinchuuriki: Nibi No Nekomata A fanfic of epic proportions

10-31-2008, 05:06 PM	#17
Ephemeralistic Newbie Rookie Join Date: Dec 2007 Posts: 67	Chapter 9 be out. Go forth, my adoring fans, and feed my megalomania. __________________ Sun Kissed Jinchuuriki: Nibi No Nekomata A fanfic of epic proportions

10-31-2008, 09:59 PM	#18
Proman Doesn't want a Custom Title Academy Teacher Join Date: Jul 2008 Posts: 343	Finally! I was starting to think you died or something

10-31-2008, 10:08 PM	#19
~~Mider T~~ Banned God of Shinobi Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: Tech Dept . Bananas: 95,740 Posts: 20,313 Blog Entries: 4	This is good stuff. Is this the first Nii/Naruto fic in existance? Also, how will others deal with the age factor?

11-01-2008, 09:08 AM	#20
Ephemeralistic Newbie Rookie Join Date: Dec 2007 Posts: 67	Nah, I wouldn't die. I've just been extremely busy traveling to London, Amsterdam, Saudi Arabia, Yemen, this whole summer. Once I get back to the states in December, things will mellow out with more frequent updates. As for the fic, I don't know if it is the first, but I do believe it is around second or third. I do know it is the first good one. Shrug, who knows? The age difference is whatever, but I am thinking about making it canon soon for spoiler reasons. As of now, Yugito is only 4 years older than Naruto in this AU fic. I have big plans for this story, and I'm thinking about a trilogy. :D Good things will come. __________________ Sun Kissed Jinchuuriki: Nibi No Nekomata A fanfic of epic proportions