Naruto Trail Of Freedom

*Genesis* · 02-24-2007, 10:50 PM

My second Naruto fic which is an AU. Constructive criticism and comments appreciated.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3390341/1/

~~narutofangd~~ · 02-25-2007, 10:32 AM

Only had the chance to read the first few chapters but i already think it's awesome mate!

Rise Against713 · 02-25-2007, 10:42 AM

awesome so far (as expected)

pretty confusing

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but i'm sure you'll clear it all up in due time

~~narutofangd~~ · 02-25-2007, 12:11 PM

Can i ask a question concerning the dragon are you basing it off the Western dragons with 4 legs and wings or the traditional Chinese dragons which are more serpentine in nature?

*Genesis* · 02-25-2007, 12:21 PM

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Originally Posted by Rise Against713

awesome so far (as expected)

pretty confusing

Spoiler:

but i'm sure you'll clear it all up in due time

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Originally Posted by narutofangd

Can i ask a question concerning the dragon are you basing it off the Western dragons with 4 legs and wings or the traditional Chinese dragons which are more serpentine in nature?

A mixture really.

His body is serpentine but he stands on 2 feet along with having no wings, much like traditional Chinese dragons.

His arms and legs are thick and and quite visible though like Western types.

There's a lot more to Genkei than you know though. But that won't be shown until the final third of the fic.

I'll just say that if you thought HoD took you for a ride, this'll be an even bigger rollercoaster.

Rise Against713 · 02-26-2007, 06:59 PM

bump

Gaara of the Desert · 02-26-2007, 09:28 PM

This is a really good fic. I hope that you will keep your word and make it a NaruSaku.

Any idea when you will update?

Rise Against713 · 02-26-2007, 09:31 PM

one of the great things about Shodai's fics is that he updates them every few days or so.

*Genesis* · 02-28-2007, 07:49 PM

^Indeed, but i am going to slow down soon. Busy days.

Anyways, Chapter 6 is up.

Rise Against713 · 02-28-2007, 10:21 PM

awesome chapter, and how do you always make me want to read more at the end?

Rise Against713 · 03-03-2007, 04:11 PM

bump

*Genesis* · 03-05-2007, 07:06 PM

@ rise - lol, there's no need to bump.

Anyways, the next chapter should be up tomorrow at some time.

Also, some people have been saying that they don't like Naruto smoking. In response, i will say that there are mutliple reasons for it. A few will be revealed through the course of the story while the final one is one of symbolism and i'll explain it at the end when i finish the fic...hopefully, i'll finish it.

Rise Against713 · 03-05-2007, 09:20 PM

^^Why do people have a problem with him smoking?

Spoiler:

*Genesis* · 03-06-2007, 12:44 PM

Chapter 7 is up!

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Originally Posted by Rise Against713

^^Why do people have a problem with him smoking?

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I don't really know why people have a problem with it, though it doesn't really matter if they do.

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Rise Against713 · 03-06-2007, 08:27 PM

sweet as always

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*Genesis* · 03-09-2007, 04:53 PM

^Answered the dragon thing a few posts above.

Vae · 03-09-2007, 06:15 PM

Lol nice ff :0

Capacity · 03-09-2007, 07:58 PM

Man youre frickin great i love this story and your first story "Hands of Destiny" XD

*Genesis* · 03-09-2007, 10:25 PM

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Originally Posted by Darky^Sonic

Lol nice ff :0

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Originally Posted by Kazama-san

Man youre frickin great i love this story and your first story "Hands of Destiny" XD

Thanks for the comments.

Rise Against713 · 03-10-2007, 09:07 PM

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Originally Posted by Shodai

^Answered the dragon thing a few posts above.

sorry didn't see that

02-24-2007, 10:50 PM	#1
Genesis Jinchuuriki Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: It's over, I won! Posts: 6,408	Naruto Trail Of Freedom My second Naruto fic which is an AU. Constructive criticism and comments appreciated. http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3390341/1/

02-25-2007, 10:42 AM	#3
Rise Against713 Lord Of Dogtown ANBU Squad Leader Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Chicago Posts: 1,358	awesome so far (as expected) pretty confusing Spoiler: like how Sakura and Sasuke know Naruto, even though he left when he was like nine but i'm sure you'll clear it all up in due time

02-26-2007, 09:28 PM	#7
Gaara of the Desert Dedicated Sakura Lover Missing-nin Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Getting trampled by a tank... Posts: 2,166	This is a really good fic. I hope that you will keep your word and make it a NaruSaku. Any idea when you will update? __________________

03-05-2007, 09:20 PM	#13
Rise Against713 Lord Of Dogtown ANBU Squad Leader Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Chicago Posts: 1,358	^^Why do people have a problem with him smoking? Spoiler: I thought it was because he's depresced about what happend when he was 16 (when he stopped being a shinobi)

03-06-2007, 08:27 PM	#15
Rise Against713 Lord Of Dogtown ANBU Squad Leader Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Chicago Posts: 1,358	sweet as always Spoiler: was the little dragon more of a western style or was he more like the other one (forgot his name)

02-25-2007, 10:32 AM	#2
~~narutofangd~~ Banned Jinchuuriki Join Date: Sep 2006 Posts: 7,127	Only had the chance to read the first few chapters but i already think it's awesome mate!

02-25-2007, 12:11 PM	#4
~~narutofangd~~ Banned Jinchuuriki Join Date: Sep 2006 Posts: 7,127	Can i ask a question concerning the dragon are you basing it off the Western dragons with 4 legs and wings or the traditional Chinese dragons which are more serpentine in nature?

02-26-2007, 06:59 PM	#6
Rise Against713 Lord Of Dogtown ANBU Squad Leader Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Chicago Posts: 1,358	bump

02-26-2007, 09:31 PM	#8
Rise Against713 Lord Of Dogtown ANBU Squad Leader Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Chicago Posts: 1,358	one of the great things about Shodai's fics is that he updates them every few days or so.

02-28-2007, 07:49 PM	#9
Genesis Jinchuuriki Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: It's over, I won! Posts: 6,408	^Indeed, but i am going to slow down soon. Busy days. Anyways, Chapter 6 is up.

02-28-2007, 10:21 PM	#10
Rise Against713 Lord Of Dogtown ANBU Squad Leader Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Chicago Posts: 1,358	awesome chapter, and how do you always make me want to read more at the end?

03-03-2007, 04:11 PM	#11
Rise Against713 Lord Of Dogtown ANBU Squad Leader Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Chicago Posts: 1,358	bump

03-05-2007, 07:06 PM	#12
Genesis Jinchuuriki Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: It's over, I won! Posts: 6,408	@ rise - lol, there's no need to bump. Anyways, the next chapter should be up tomorrow at some time. Also, some people have been saying that they don't like Naruto smoking. In response, i will say that there are mutliple reasons for it. A few will be revealed through the course of the story while the final one is one of symbolism and i'll explain it at the end when i finish the fic...hopefully, i'll finish it.

03-09-2007, 04:53 PM	#16
Genesis Jinchuuriki Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: It's over, I won! Posts: 6,408	^Answered the dragon thing a few posts above.

03-09-2007, 06:15 PM	#17
Vae Evolution Join Date: Jun 2006 Posts: 1,387	Lol nice ff :0 __________________

03-09-2007, 07:58 PM	#18
Capacity Soul Resonance ̣ Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: にほんご Posts: 2,452 Blog Entries: 1	Man youre frickin great i love this story and your first story "Hands of Destiny" XD __________________ aka Blaze