Mai Hime AMV ( My Second Creation) Tell me what you think.

[Ssj3_Goku]

This AMV is 5 mins and 20 seconds long. The song playing behind it is done by Meatloaf called i would do anything for love. Tried my best was a difficult song to use for this kinda thing but i think it worked out ok.

This AMV shows mainly Mai and Tate. Shows alot of Mais emotions and all that good stuff

The file is 32.9 meg. Enjoy!
http://rapidshare.de/files/13527607/Mai_AMV_2_Project.wmv.html

Yea i used the same opening scene ( kinda a trade mark of my sig :P ) also i belive i ended this one rather well. let me know what ya think!


Edit
I do appolgize their are subtitles is some of these sences i had no raws or no program to edit them out. i

[Ssj3_Goku]

your thoughts? i wish i had raw episodes i know that could help. Right now all i am using is Virtual dub and WMM.

any sugguestion from the pro's or comments would help :) again this is my second one ( i made 3 so far their in my sig)

[Jikes]

I'll have to download this, i love that meatloaf song!

[WarDragon989]

it an ok video problem is

- when meatloaf or the woman sings you have a talk scene and in those instances amv people would be looking at lip syncing. So be careful.
- don't really need to start with her in her underwear again :P
- i think you need to work on beat of the song and try to match it in pace and feeling with the anime. When it picks up in pace have a really romanic moment, or sometimes people have a fast paced action/romance bit

Overall it could be better

[Ssj3_Goku]

it an ok video problem is

- when meatloaf or the woman sings you have a talk scene and in those instances amv people would be looking at lip syncing. So be careful.
- don't really need to start with her in her underwear again :P
- i think you need to work on beat of the song and try to match it in pace and feeling with the anime. When it picks up in pace have a really romanic moment, or sometimes people have a fast paced action/romance bit

Overall it could be better

umm good points thx. Like i stated i do not have raws :( sucks i know.

the underwear thing was a grabber :P i did that on purpose lol.

yea some of the senes i thought draged out a big in some aera's and could have been shorter to make more sense plus without subtitles the feeling would have been better.

I am working on these issues if you check out my Teaser for my next Mai otome vid i want to here your opinons on that.

again thx again :)