FullMetal Alchemist AMV

[uchihafangirl15]

I have mad two AMVs so far and was hoping you could look at the first one I made to give me ideas of what I could improve on, shouldn't do the next time, etc. There is a link in my siggy:)

[uchihafangirl15]

Common peoples! It can't be that bad! Can it??

[martryn]

I enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing. I can't really evaluate it per se because I'm not much of an artist, but I'd watch another you made if you had more.

[Kucheeky Badkuya]

Thats your first one? Excellent. Keep it up.

[uchihafangirl15]

thank you!

[SGT.FROG]

nice man keep up the nice work here is some reppah

[uchihafangirl15]

^.^ thankyous you guys! I am glad to finally be getting some feed back from my video ^.^ I am trying to add my second video to the internet but it isn't working very well.... If i get it working i will leave a link (ps. I think it is better than the first)

[Son Goku]

i think you know i liked you cuz i repped you for it i would like to see your second one though

[kakoishii]

I hate to be critical since it is your first one and all I won't be too harsh cause I remember my first one and it wasn't up to par with my work now but here's just a little advice. Make your AMV a story that flows and stay away from being to litteral with your action syncing unless it's suppose to be a comedy video (i.e. lyric inside = Inside Al's armor) good for being brand new though continue to improve.

[Jaejoong]

The song matched pretty well, but I didn't like the song.
But that's just me, so nice AMV.
7/10

[uchihafangirl15]

thank you everyone for telling me what you think.
kakoishii: Your advice makes sense... i will try and work with what you told me ^.^
Again thanks everyone!

[~Redchaos325~]

Yes take that on board and hopefully it helps you, if not come back and redo..lol..

[uchihafangirl15]

I finally was able to get the other AMV I made up if anyone is interested ^.^

[i_be_ninja_zabusa]

Very nice i thoroughly enjoyed it

[Shadowscar]

Liked them both

[uchihafangirl15]

thankies ^__^ I will continue to add more

[Ssj3_Goku]

i just saw your whisper one... 2 things really, Get rid of the Divx logo you can do that in the divx options to disable it .

also timing and placement of your parts with the song to make the whole AMV make better sense etc.. thats all i can come up with at the moment.

[NaraShikamaru]

Pretty awesome. I quite liked them and im a huge fan of the anime itself!

[Cloud_20]

very good video