My Gundam Novel: Meaning of Mobile Suits

[mnorth]

I love gundams. My favorite mobile suit is the Serpent Custom. I liked it for its uniqueness - triangular head, small body and large legs, its feet are also the biggest in the Gundam Wing Series. Please feel free to send your criticisms and other stuffs. This fanfic happens just after the Endless Waltz Series. Well, here is my fanfic:

"Mikhail, you should remember that being a member of the Maguanac Corps mean you have to fight for the Arab Countries.. Even if it means losing your life in the process. Tomorrow, I will be retiring as a Gundam Pilot, but I will still protect the Arab countries. Tomorrow will be your first day as a member of the Maguanac Corps. And Gundams are not a tool for getting revenge. Remember what I said all the time. Well, actually, it's what your grandfather Iskra said to me also the day before the ceremony.." "Yes, Father!" After that Mikhail went his room to sleep.

The next day, Mikhail woke up very early because he was so excited to protect his country. "Mikhail, what are you doing? It's 4:30..." "Well, I want to protect the Arab countries as soon as possible. I can't wait for it." "Well, you know, if there is something you want, it feels like forever when you wait for it." "Ok... but thats what you always say." After doing their prayers, they head to the desert for the turnover ceremony..

Meanwhile....A black-winged Gundam carrying a Scythe approaches the desert, having this murderous intent...
To be continued....

[Mindless]

Uhm... interesting.

One thing though: It's kind of hard to understand it since there is no background what so ever included in your fanfic. Who is this Mikhail?

If this information will be added later on, it should be a good read though. Keep it coming. :)

[mnorth]

Sure I will! Mikhail is the main character. There will be a leading lady, by the name of Yoo-Jin. BTW - when I wrote the 1st part I just wrote what came to mind... Thanks for the support.

If this information will be added later on, it should be a good read though. Keep it coming.

This inspired me... I hope more will read it... Please spread the news!

[mnorth]

Trivia:
Mikhail is my name.
Mikhail's father's name is Khalil. It is my father's name.
Iskra is not my grandfather's name, because it doesn't sound Arabic. so what I did is combined his two names to make it sound Arabic.
The Mobile Suits of the Maguanac Corps is one of my faves, that's why I decided to use them as characters...
The Black-winged Gundam's name is Gundam Death Angel Zero.
There will be three new main characters but I don't know where to insert them in the story. Their names will be Ian(M), Antonio(M), Reginald(M).

[mnorth]

PART TWO: Didn't even became a Maguanac

"Welcome to all my fellow Arabians." It is my honor to present to you the Maguanac Corps Inauguration Ceremony." Mikhail was so excited, that he can't wait to serve his country. He was so bored listening to the Maguanac Corps' oath. "1ST Oath:Never betray your friends and family, and never kill them even if it is what they want. For example..." Michael slept while after listening to the 1ST OATH. He was so bored because his uncle Kikho keep saying examples in every Oath.

Mikhail had a dream: It's a dream wherein a black angel is coming to destroy the holy city, Mecca. He shot the angel and he became the most Maguanac member because of what he did.

Mikhail woke up. "What the fuck was that dream?" "And finally, for the last and most important oath of them all, although it contradicts all the other oaths.... Never let anything stand in God's will. Contradict every other oath in here but do not let anybody, even you yourself, stand in God's way. Protect your religion and you will be guranteed paradise. And that is all." You may now recite it. Please raise you right hand"

"Now, for our last inauguration, as a team captain please welcome Cadet Mikhail Raiyan Castillo Magnaye!" "Remember your oath; Here is the proof that you are one of the Maguanac Corps... The Gundam Serpentarius. You should be honored because for now, it will be a heirloom to the next captain of the Maguanac Corp. It is colored crystal silver. But it's not just the color. Every part of its body, from the eyes to the smallest screw and tubes are made out of diamond. It will never explode or even get a scratch unless you hit the self-destruct switch. It also has 6 Diamond wings which represents an Angel, who is unquestionably protecting the religion of Islam."

"Here is the Gund....." Something pierced Kikho's heart. It was a black-winged gundam carrying a crystal-silver scythe. It is colored crystal blue. A Boulder-like Gundam suddenly bumped the black-winged Gundam. The black winged gundam did not even get a single scratch from it. And the shoulder of the Boulder-like Gundam was destroyed in the process. Then suddenly the Boulder-like Gundam said something: "Mikhail, run to your gundam and take as many people as you can to the Right Gundam's Foot! Hurry! Just go away from here and flee.. And do not help me... Do not disobey God's...."

The Black-Winged Gundam stuck the scythe's end to its cockpit. "Father??? I'll avenge you for this!"

Mikhail gathered 80 citizens and made them stay in the Gundam Serpentarius' right foot. He fled as far away as he could. he saw the Black-Winged Gundam high in the air, aiming it's buster-rifles to the center of the city...



To be continued...

[Mindless]

I think I remember hearing that about 80 people in a left foot somewhere else... I wonder where it was. :S

[mnorth]

It was the left-foot of the Gundam Serpentarius. It's ashelter. Oooops!

Trivia:
I actually mistyped the 80 people. it should've been 81.

The Gundam Death Angel is actually made up of sapphire: I think it's the second hardest diamond in the world, (I researched, correct me if the source is wrong.) It's scythe is made up of Diamond. It has 9 wings.

All of Gundam Serpentarius' part are made of up diamonds, even it's exhaust fans in the horn. It was made by Mikhail's great-great.....great grandfather.

The Boulder-Like Gundam Look's like Gundam G's Gundam Bolt, except it's steel ball has spikes in it and has one-eye (to match the head of most of the Maguanac Corps.) It's name is Gundam Thunderbolt A Custom. More to come on this "A" System. The Gundam Thunderbolt has 1 black wing.

The Gundam Serpentarius looks like a Gundam Wing Zero Custom instead it has Six Wings. There is a secre..oops! This is because according to the Qu'ran, an angel has six wings, and is larger than any other Gundam. It is also because an angel is said to be 6 times more taller than a human. So i made it a kinda like Giant Gundam.

In this trivia, there is a very important plot point character which is really impossible to happen, but it did. Well, actually he is the only character mentioned in this trivia. Good luck finding him.

[mnorth]

The Vaporized City and the Maker

As the 81 people were flying in the hot desert, The Black-Winged Gundam is still on the air, motionless.

"Looks like it stopped..."

He sent a message to the right foot. When they replied he heard a requiem of shouts and curses: "Damnit, my son is still..." "What the fuc..."Are we GONNA DI..." "Where's my mommy?" Then suddenly there was a faint voice. "QUIET......" It was a freaky voice that made everybody stop. "Just don't think of going back, it's charging it's rifle... Go as fast as you can!!!" Mikhail maxed the vernier output of the Gundam Serpentarius... "At this speed we are flying, our fuel will run out. What to do old man?" "Don't question me, just do it, Godammit" The faint voice really freaked out Mikhail. "Roger!" He went faster than 500m/h.

"Hold on to anything everybody! We're out of fuel!" Everybody held into an object. Some took advantage of the situation and held unto some boobs.

"Then came a streak of light approaching the Black Winged-Gundam at a very high speed. Faster than Mikhail's speed before" The Gundam used it's whole body force to stop the Black Winged-Gundam's attempt to vaporized the city. The Boulder-like Gundam held unto the Black Winged-Gundam's rifle. and pointed it to the farthest possible location from any city and from Gundam Serpentarius. The Black Winged-Gundam accidentally fired the 10% charged rifle to the city of Istanbul, Russia.

After a moment, the whole radius from Istanbul to Gundam Serpentarius' right foot was caught in the blast.

"Such an ultimate form of art, this Gundam is. I haven't done a single mistake on making it."

Mikhail receives an incoming transmission. "Father??" Mikhail, come to the right foot after this is over. And don't forget even if you have to do what I will do, protect God's religion no matter what!"

A Energy-Shield Covered the Boulder-Like Gundam and the Black Winged-Gundam in the air... "Die, you INFIDEL!!!" Khalil hit the self-destruct switch. The two exploded in the air and on the Boulder-Like Gundam fell on the ground, it's cockpit the only thing undamaged.

Next on Meaning of Gundam: PART FOUR - "The Useless Sacrifice"