My Obscure Thoughts on Uchihas...

[Uchiha_Sin]

I decided to post a fic (ItaSasu) on fanfiction.net and I wanted some read and reviews on it. I hope someone out there enjoys it, but be WARNED! Uchihacest, Adult Language, Graphic Situations, probably Rated M, NOT WORK FRIENDLY! I really love to write, but this is my first time writing anything... of this nature. Please give me some comments and suggestions. Thanks!!


http://www.fanfiction.net/~melicat

[Therahedwig]

That was... awkward...

It seems asif the battle made them both very horny...

One question, why exactly do you ship Sasuke with Itachi?
What makes you like them more then other yaoi/incest couples?

[Uchiha_Sin]

Why Itachi and Sasuke? Well, I think the aspects of hate and love that they share together makes them interesting to write about. I'm drawn to the desire to accomplish that they both possess, the way they both go for it, even when most of the time it's not the most "moral" decision. As for the topic of yaoi/incest couples, as I said, this is my first attempt at love of this nature. Itachi and Sasuke are the first, but certainly not the last couple I'll write about if I get the urge.
So, it seemed awkward to you? Hmmm... perhaps "it" was too rushed? I'm a newb when it comes to sexual writing, I'll try hard to make it "flow" next time! Thanks for your comment!

[Therahedwig]

well, I always found that Itachi was a silent person who... well, I don't know...
I think what trew me off was the firstperson point-of-view on Itachi, as we never see anything of his emotions, so it was really weird to read.
Esspecially the idea of him admiring Sasuke like that was weird, and actually I think you should elaborate on it.

It was also awkward to think he would be killed in this battle/fucking thing.
Bear in mind this is the first Uchihacest I've seen in Itacam, and the first one in which I haven't seen Itachi as "Teh Hawt Rapist" of his little brother(which I absolutely hate!)

I was just curious what made you ship Sasuke and Itachi...(as some only do it because they are "Teh Hawt!"

[Uchiha_Sin]

I suppose Itachi's inner thoughts can be whatever we desire because he's so secretive and cold. I guess I just think of Itachi a little differently than most people, I don't find him to be evil or malicious, just lost. To me he's silent, lethal, but brewing, torrid on the inside.
You say this was awkward to read because of Itachi's point of view and the lack of Sasu-Rape. Beyond the abnormalities, was it a good read?

[Therahedwig]

yeah!
Actually it was...kind of...

[Uchiha_Sin]

Okay! : D Thanks for your input!

[K']

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