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Sephero
08-04-2009, 04:38 AM
CHECK IT

Editing manga is almost never a chore for me because I'm given so much great material, even if the words weren't there as a guideline to begin with. When the lead of a Japanese mangaka's pencil touches paper, it doesn't draw -- it transmogrifies everything on that page into pure melodrama. Every expression in the Japanese repertoire, from a consternated glare to a blank gaze, is over the top and makes everything unintentionally humorous.

This time I decided to go with Chapter 458. Anyone who's ever read my manga edits, though they be few and far between, know that I usually rip on pairings -- I didn't have much interest in doing that this time around, though there is some commentary.

Let it be known, as an aside, that to me personally, this manga grows more and more hilarious every week Hinata doesn't show up after the world's crappiest romantic interlude. Just watching this Hinata-obsessed forum squirm is enough to make my day a little brighter. Even the mods can't contain their wangst.

Haven't seen the buddy on Narutofan you used to talk to everyday? He probably said Hinata smells like toe jam; everybody knows that's a one way ticket to the stockades, so you better watch the fuck out or the admins will kick you out of their comic book club for an hour.


Enjoy.



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Diarrhea
08-04-2009, 04:43 AM
''It's like when 8o year-old women predict the weather with their tits.
Don't ask me how it works''
You're a genius. :lmao

ZigZag
08-04-2009, 04:46 AM
Have to admit, some parts were quite funny. :lmao

Sephero
08-04-2009, 04:56 AM
I try looking for this thread in the HoU and it's not appearing. What devilry is this?

Maka Albarn
08-04-2009, 05:37 AM
I laughed at some parts.

Diarrhea
08-04-2009, 05:39 AM
I try looking for this thread in the HoU and it's not appearing. What devilry is this?

There are these refreshing problems because of the new server.:argh

αshɘs
08-04-2009, 06:21 AM
Awesome thread once again.Some parts were really funny:lmao

I try looking for this thread in the HoU and it's not appearing. What devilry is this?

Refreshing problems because of new server.

Bellatrix
08-04-2009, 06:37 AM
That was funny :lmao

Sake
08-04-2009, 07:35 AM
:lmao .

AppleChan
08-04-2009, 01:21 PM
I loved the last part what Sai said to Sakura. :lmao And the last page was epic win for me. :hurr

Edit: Scratch that. The whole thing was funny! :rofl

Missy
08-04-2009, 01:29 PM
"...it's very clear to me now who's disco stick you would prefer if it came down to it."

:rotfl

AppleChan
08-04-2009, 02:20 PM
^ I lol'd hard at that. :ryoma

Animus
08-04-2009, 04:17 PM
"When was the last time you punched someone BESIDES Naruto? A villian, bad guy, perhaps? No?"


LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL.

To be fair she did punch that Pain summon, but that was one punch since the Rescue Gaara Arc.

Sephero
08-04-2009, 05:17 PM
Fuck these servers, I tell you.

Kairi
08-04-2009, 05:23 PM
Bitch ass, punk ass, old ass, slutty ass, faggot ass bitches. Do you know where I'm from? South Side nigga. Lightning Country.

I lol'd so hard at this :ryoma

shurei
08-04-2009, 05:28 PM
Sephero, you are a fucking trip!:rofl

Sunako
08-04-2009, 06:04 PM
:ryoma ...

Tex
08-04-2009, 06:40 PM
:lmao

Great stuff. Have a link to your other work? :awesome

Quincy James
08-04-2009, 08:34 PM
Jesus, this was funny. Sai was great. :lmao

Iruka
08-04-2009, 08:39 PM
LOL. :lmao That really was funny. XDDDD
Good job, good job. :rofl

Tyrannos
08-04-2009, 09:36 PM
I chuckled. :zaru

Gamma Akutabi
08-04-2009, 10:38 PM
A plethora of poz shall come your way.

AeroNin
08-04-2009, 10:53 PM
toasting in epic bread

made me laugh :lmao

HolyHands
08-04-2009, 11:15 PM
I am amused.

dummy plug
08-04-2009, 11:15 PM
LOL good thread :lmao

i love how the Rai and Tsuchikage talks. very realistic LOL :high

Aldo Raine
08-05-2009, 12:18 AM
ROFL! Another winning thread that we have you to thank for.

Mihael
08-05-2009, 01:33 AM
LMAO good thread

Kage
08-05-2009, 06:28 AM
WHAT'S THIS TABLE DOING HERE?!

:lmao

lol'd a lot at the sai sakura convo. pure gold.

Confetti
08-05-2009, 07:11 AM
:lmao:lmao ..........

Kakugo
08-05-2009, 03:42 PM
Genius thread is genius. :lmao

rofl "Whats this table doing here!?"

xTheDark3stAng3lx
09-07-2009, 03:53 AM
:lmao this is so funny

Pringles
09-07-2009, 11:34 AM
That too funny : Whats this table doing here!
:rotfl

tsunXtsun
09-07-2009, 11:55 AM
:rotfl :rotfl :rotfl

Genius! Sai's speech = win :lmao

PinkHeartsYellowStars
09-07-2009, 12:57 PM
Great edits.. I BURST into LAUGHING.. Disco Stick.. South Nigga

Carolyn♥
09-07-2009, 07:19 PM
ahaha. i lol'd :rotfl

Paptala
09-07-2009, 07:49 PM
All of your threads are so full of lulz and truth! :awesome

Best line ever was still Sai's comment to Sakura about how he could smell tears, along with the comparison to 80 year women predicting the rain with their tits! :lmao

Forlong
09-07-2009, 08:56 PM
:laugh
:lmao
:rofl

:rotfl

:clap

That was to funny!

Ukeness
09-08-2009, 12:52 AM
:ryoma


I must say, I seriously lol'd at this win.

Ngure
09-08-2009, 12:58 AM
That made me chuckle. :hurr

Cronos
09-08-2009, 04:46 AM
and lose a few pounds