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nanni
06-15-2009, 02:39 AM
No Less Than Colour

Look around you, around no where.
All you can grasp is this? More lines of gray?
Keeps none red bleeding heart, like blue of water or clear of air?
white as bone, black as hair? Skins reduces to pink, orange, and yellow?
Or brown or likes of bio? Who are you? Of your kind?
Voices can speak, can sing, make NOISE!
Minds up, down, here, then, now, what?!
People will tell you to be a person, may them be young turn old.
Changing colours around and around. From what can't be seen.

Sen
06-24-2009, 08:49 PM
Nice job :wtf

I'm not very good at analyzing poems and such, but for me I can imagine a certain meaning and I think some of the lines are very nice. Also I like the imagery it invokes.