My first attempts at comedy

[gtw1983]

Please tell me what you think of them.I need constructive criticism to grow as an artist/moviemaker.

Both of these are inspired by 'that guy with the glasses' five second movies, even though they may be a bit different.


Dragonball Z made Easy- I summarize the entire Plot of Dragonball Z in a bit over a minute.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ztvzaCtf-c8

Queen of the Damned in 5 Seconds-Once again I break down the basic story of the movie to make a short humorous clip.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Sw5yXQA0OYQ&feature=channel

[mortsleam]

I didn't laugh.

[Eldritch]

I don't think comedy is something you can learn. If you thought your own videos were funny, well there's an example.

[gtw1983]

I didn't laugh.

AND......???? :huh

Do you have any tips perhaps?