Fanfic-Storyline starting after Manga 234.

[NarutoSasukeSakura]

This starts right after 234.
Hope you guys like it. I was getting bored waiting soo long for the mangas issues to come out!
Please comment.
Its rated PG or PG13. Action, a bit more drama, and umm angst, and some other stuff too. :D
It may start up slow, but it gets better!




Chapter 235...
"I hope we're not to late..." Kakashi said, jumping quickly from tree to tree.
His small, but loyal dog looked at Naruto silently. "We only have a little ways left till we reach the village."

* * *

"Do you know how they are?" Ino asked.
Sakura looked at her. "I'm not sure yet. Maybe we should go see Kakashi-Sensei about it."
"Are you worried about Sasuke?" Ino asked, looking in the distance.
Sakura nodded, "and Naruto. But I'm sure Naruto will bring Sasuke-Kun back."

***

"How does he look, Tsunade?"
"I healed most of his damage...But Naruto is struggling against something emotional."
Kakashi looked up from Narutos face, to see Tsunade's.
"Something must have happened between Naruto and Sasuke.... Narutos body is really stressed out. Knowing him, he'll be up in about a day."
"So he'll make it?"
"Yes."
"What should we do about Sasuke?"
Tsunade sighed. "There's nothing we can do at the moment. We have to make sure our own shinobi are fine."
The door burst open, and two ANBU members came in. "Hokage Tsunade, a member of the genins team is dead."
Tsunade looked at them sharply. "Who? Is there any others?"
"Akimichi Choji. We haven't located the others yet.."
Tsunade looked at the ground, saddened. She looked back up at the ANBU members. "Well don't stand there! Hurry up, and get on with the search with your other ANBU members, and report as quickly as possible."
"Y-Yes, Tsunade-sama." With that, the ANBU members disappeared.


Comment Please! :)

[NarutoSasukeSakura]

heres the next one...


Chapter 236

*Flashbacks in Narutos head*

*Naruto crying*Can you kill me calmly...Sasuke?

Do you..no longer consider me as you friend?! Everything we did together as Team 7. Was it all just meaningless to you?!
It's not meaningless...To me, you have...become a close friend.
Then why...?
That is why...it is worth killing you.

I'll say it once more. I WILL kill you!


Sasuke! You won't go to Orochimaru! Even if I have to break the bones in your arms and legs, I will stop you!


For me...it's one of the first bonds i've ever had.
Then come Naruto...I will break that bond!



*End of Flashbacks*

Naruto sat up quickly.
"Naruto?" Sakura asks. Kakashi-Sensei had gotten her right after they had put Naruto in the hospital...Even Naruto couldn't bring back Sasuke?

Kakashi looks up tiredly from no sleeping. "What is it Sakura..?" He looks over to Naruto.

Kakashi-sensei walked over. "Are you alright, Naruto?"

He looked out the window blankly. The only thing that went through his mind was his battle with Sasuke.

Do you..no longer consider me as you friend?! Everything we did together as Team 7. Was it all just meaningless to you?!
It's not meaningless...To me, you have...become a close friend.
Then why...?
That is why...it is worth killing you.

tsunade walked into the room, seeing Naruto was awake. "Naruto..." She shook his shoulder gently. "Sakura...can you leave us for a second?"
As Sakura left the room, NAruto turned his head over to her. "I'm sorry Sakura-san..."
Sakura turned around. "Don't be silly...At least your alright." She left the room and leaned against the wall, crying.
Tsunade looked at NAruto again. He was staring at the floor, as if thinking deeply about something.


Do you..no longer consider me as you friend...? Sasuke?









So what do ya think?

[Substance]

keep going man lol this is what i wanted to hjappen sorta :)

[NarutoSasukeSakura]

thanks! Finally, someone comments! =D


okay, I'll try to update later tonight, if i can't , then tomorrow for sure!

[NarutoSasukeSakura]

Chapter 237



A glimmer of light caught Narutos attention.
"Whos forehead protector is that, Kakashi-sensei?" Naruto asked. His own Forehead Protector was right on the bedside table. He looked at Kakashi's face intently. His small part of face looked depressed, sad, and tired.
Kakashi looked at Naruto painfully. He then opened his hand, and let it drop on Naruto's lap. There was a large slash in it.
"Sasuke."
Naruto looked up, at Tsunade. "I have to go after Sasuke."
Tsunade shook her head. "You can't. He's across the border now. He made it quite clear that hes no longer a Konoha Ninja. You can't."
"Don't tell me what to do!" Naruto almost yelled angrily. He stood up, and began to pull on his shirt before Tsunade could say anything.
Kakashi-Sensei appeared at Narutos side, and put a hand on his shoulder. "You can't. We will not allow it. People will be watching you 24 hours each, and every day." He said quietly. "Sasuke is not Konohas concern anymore. Hes gone."
"How can you say that?" Asked Naruto angrily. "Sasuke is part of this team. Don't you care about our team?!" He moved so Kakashi-sensei's hand fell from his shoulder.
"Your stressed out Naruto, you should get back to bed." tsunade interupted.
"Hell with tha-" Narutos eyelids fell, and he was quiet. Tsunade picked him up, and laid him in the bed.
"I used that sometimes on others who had trouble falling asleep before surgery. He'll probably wake up in a few hours at the least. I have to recruit ANBU members to watch him. You should get to sleep too, Kakashi. Tell Sakura that too." They left from the room quietly, not saying another word.

[NarutoSasukeSakura]

Chapter 238:
Narutos Escape


Naruto's eyes fluttered open. It was pitch black in the room. For some reason his eyes had trouble focusing, but he heard voices.
"Uzumaki Naruto, eh? He always seems to be getting in trouble..." said a deep, males voice.
The next voice was the sound of an irratated women. "I can't believe they acually need two ANBU members for this job. WE're supposed to be protecting the Hokage, and doing missions. Not watching after a kid."
"You know what this kid acually is...Who knows if he'll all of a sudden become the-"
Naruto sat up quickly. His eyes could focus now. Two masked ANBU members came to the sides of the bed.
"You weren't thinking of getting away easily, were you?"
"No. I need to go to the bathroom."
"Very well," said the man ANBU member. He helped Naruto up, and walked him into the bathroom.
"Do you think I could go alone?"

[NarutoSasukeSakura]

that was part 1........

[zawabr]

wow... this is pretty good... you guys from here (this forum) have a good imagination and creativity! :D... i can´t wait for the rest of the chapter!

[ninja_sakura19]

wow..that was a good story! ^_^ keep writing more! :D

[NarutoSasukeSakura]

Thanks! ^_^!
Part 2 coming right up!

Chapter 238 (continued)


"fine." The ANBU officer said, shutting the door behind him. Naruto looked around the small bathroom frantically. There had to be a way out of here. There was the celing, a light, a mirror, a window. A window! Naruto looked at it. It was basically to the ceiling. He quickly concentrated on putting chakra in his feet.
Naruto walked up the wall, trying to be as silent as he could. He pushed the window open with a big push, and jumped out.
Naruto started to run as fast as he could toward the forest that he sometimes went to, to go and train.
He would train as hard as he could, and then he would find Sasuke to bring him back.
To me...you have become an important friend...
I will bring you back Sasuke! No matter what, i'll bring you back. Even if I have to myself!

[NarutoSasukeSakura]

Hellllo!
Just wondering a bit...
How coem theres been over 150 views of this, and only, like 3 ppl have commented? Is it that bad? ='( Or is it just like...boring? If you have any tips on me to improve it, please tell me!
On a higher note...Thanks everyone who has commented! =D it makes me all warm and fuzzy inside! lol. ^_^
Next part is coming soon!
I cant wait for the next Naruto Episode to be translated in english! :)

[NarutoSasukeSakura]

Chapter 238:
Narutos Training

"Kage Bunshin no Jutsu!" Naruto yelled. Nearly 100 Naruto's appeared. He would train. Using his own techniques.

As Naruto trained himself by fighting against his own clones...

"5th Hokage!" The ANBU members said, bowing their heads to her. "Uzumaki Naruto has escaped. WE have found no sign of him in the village either an-"
"What?" She said. "I thought I told you to watch him! To not let him out of your sight!"
"We're truly sorry. he had to go to the bathroom, so..."
"Don't tell me your lame excuses! Alert Kakashi right away, along with the other recovered SHinobi now!"
"Y-Yes." They quickly went away to alert the others.
Tsunade looked outside, and sighed. If Naruto went away too...

[zawabr]

Hellllo!
Just wondering a bit...
How coem theres been over 150 views of this, and only, like 3 ppl have commented? Is it that bad? ='( Or is it just like...boring? If you have any tips on me to improve it, please tell me!

of course no! this is very interesting! i like a lot! keep going :D !

i think the others people don´t have nothing to say...like me.....but they liked your story..like me....

i´m waiting the rest of the story! (i´m don´thave any complains about your story...neither tips.. :p )...

[NarutoSasukeSakura]

history? what do you mean? lol! sry, im sorta slow. =)
Thanks a ton for the comment though! it means alot! lol-im soo cheesy :D :p :)

And i know my style of writing can be annoying, i have no discriptive words or anything. I have to work on that...and my sentances can be sorta short. But don't worry, im working on it! :D

[zawabr]

history? what do you mean? lol! sry, im sorta slow. =)
Thanks a ton for the comment though! it means alot! lol-im soo cheesy

And i know my style of writing can be annoying, i have no discriptive words or anything. I have to work on that...and my sentances can be sorta short. But don't worry, im working on it!


sorry...i mean story! that´s because my english isn´t so good...then sometimes a make some mistakes...
:o
your story is something that could happen in the real naruto manga! that´s why is so good! about your style...is very good too :D....but that´s how you said.... if you describe some more....it´ll be much better... ;)

[NarutoSasukeSakura]

thank ya very much! :D

[NarutoSasukeSakura]

Chapter 238:
Narutos Training
PART 2

Naruto breathed heavily, trying to catch his breath.
'What should I do now?...'
Rasengan! Chidori!
"A better...Rasengan...? Kage Bunshin no Jutsu!" *sound effects of the other naruto starting to start up the rasengan*
'concentrate, concentrate.'


"Hmm? Kakashi-sensei...and Iruka-sensei?" Sakura asked, confused, once she opened the door. "Whats going on?"
"Naruto is gone."
"What?"
"Your going with Kakashi, and i'm going with Shikamaru." Iruka said. "We have to go quickly, in case he's going out side Konoha."
"Right..." sakura said, stepping out into the sunlight. 'Please Naruto...Don't leave me too...'


"Not good enough." Naruto said outloud. There were multiple enormous trees on the group from being hit from Rasengan. "Again!"





Sorry this chapter is sorta short...But great news! i'm (trying) to actually DRAW a small part of each chapter. if anyone else wants to help with that, PM me, or whatever.
I dunno why, but I sorta like it how in my story, Naruto has finally cracked, and is being real serious about it. i'll write more later!
^_^

Thanks again zawabr for being a great reader, and commenting!:D

[NarutoSasukeSakura]

Chapter 239
We found you Naruto!


Why would we come to the cities hot tubs? Naruto wouldn't be here... Sakura looked at Kakashi-sensei doubtfully.
"Jiraiya!" Kakashi said, walking toward a old man.
Sakura looked over at the old man. Jiraiya? The name sounded familiar...Yes...He was the person Kakashi-sensei was talking to after Narutos and Sasukes fight on the hospital roof...
"What do you need now?" Jiraiya asked impatiently, sipping some wine.
"Naruto is missing."
Jiraiya looked up from his wine glass. "Really now...I suppose then I'm supposed to help you find him by order of Tsunade. All right then. Lets go."

They walked toward the forest.
"I'm guessing Naruto would go in here...Considering this part of the forest is closest to the hospital." Kakashi said. "Kuchiyose no Jutsu!" (summoning technique).
Pakkun appeared. "Is Naruto or Sasuke missing again?" He asked right away.
Sakura looked at him. "Y-yes. We need your help Pakkun."
Pakkun sniffed the air. "i need to ask you one question first..."
"Alright." Sakura asked, forcing a smile. "What is it?"
"You changed your shampoo, didn't you?"
"RRR. WHAT SORT OF QUESTION IS THAT?!" Sakura yelled.

*Two hours later*

"Rasengan!" Naruto thrusted the Rasengan at the nearest tree. It toppled over, causing another four or five trees to fall.
He breathed in and out hard, sweat falling down his face.

Can you kill me calmly Sasuke? Naruto looked up. "I will not...lose a important friend! RASENGAN!"
(NOTE: Naruto has learned to control the Rasengan without the use of another Naruto clone.)

"What in the-" Sakura whispered. It sounded like tons and tons of trees were falling...at a fast rate. Could it be..."Pukkun! Are we almost to Naruto?"
Pukkun looked back. "We're going at a very fast rate, and Naruto is moving, I don't believe...We should reach him in about half an hour."
"That must've been Naruto..." Kakashi said to Jiraiya.
Jiraiya looked over to Kakashi. "Yes...That was enormous chakra..."


Naruto looked around him. His last Rasengan had done alot of damage. He noticed something was different about it though. Instead of it being completely blue chakra, there were red streaks of light going aroung it like lightening as well. He had learned how to put some of the Foxes power in the Rasengan...

[zawabr]

haha, pretty good! something the pakkun could say! keep going! i think just not me, but the others are waiting for the rest! :D.... i can even imagine all the chapters describe by you!

[NarutoSasukeSakura]

Thank you again! LOL :D
i like Pakkun. whenever i think of him, i think of the shampoo part. lol
Whoa...Just found out i had TONS of spelling errors on my last post...i gotta change that...Anyways! Back to the story!

Chapter 239
We found you Naruto!
PART 2

Naruto looked down at the ground, thinking deeply. Sasuke...
"NARUTO!" Sakuras voice rang out.
Footsteps approached behind him.
"Naruto!" Sakura said. He didn't turn around. "Naruto, you have to come back to the village!"
"I can't Sakura-san." Naruto whispered. "Until I bring Sasuke back...I can't."
"You do relize, if you don't come with us, we'll force you to." Jiriaya said.
"I won't." Naruto said, starting to get impatient. "Let me get back to my training!"
"Come with us right now." Kakashi said severly. Sakura looked at him...He never had this tone before with any of them.
Naruto turned to them. "I'll say it again...I WON'T COME BACK UNTIL I GET SASUKE! If I have to fight you, I will!"

[zawabr]

wow! this getting interesting ! :D

[NarutoSasukeSakura]

lol.
its like NAruto is a total Drama Queen. haha:D

[NarutoSasukeSakura]

next one...


Chapter 240
Sensei vs Student?!


"I didn't even know you could be this foolish..." kakashi said, looking at Naruto sternly. "Your handling your emotions wrong." Naruto has had a hard time his whole life...The pressure of everything...Its getting to him...
"Do not...tell me how to deal with things!"
"Besides, if your going after Sasuke, how do you plan on doing it? You think Sasuke is just going to pop out of nowhere?"
Naruto was silent. He hadn't thought of that that much. "I know the direction he was heading. I won't stop until I find him!"
"Naruto, if you don't come with us now, I'm going to force you too."
"Even if you DO get me back, what makes you think I won't run away again? I have to do this."
"NARUTO! Don't be so stupid! Your being an idiot!" Sakura cried, tears starting to stream down her face.
"I have to do this." Naruto repeated.

[NarutoSasukeSakura]

hmm. some stuff in here is sorta happening in the manga
(like the ANBU being with him, and someone telling NAruto to forget about Sasuke, that its not their problem) Thats kinda cool! lol :D
I'm almost finished with my first three boxes of the Naruto manga strip. lol. its just a small little part, and believe me, its not THAT GOOD. lol.
i'll update later!

[NarutoSasukeSakura]

Chapter 240
Sensei vs Student?!
PART 2


"I...must. I will not let a friend become like Orochimaru. I will not see a friend suffer."
"It seems we have no choice Naruto. I will force you to come."
Naruto got ready to fight, taking out his knife.
In a second, Kakashi pulled out to skrinkens and threw them, almost carelessy.
"Gah!" Two shrinkens (spelling?) had gone into his right shoulder.
Naruto grabbed them out of his shoulder, and threw them in the soft earth.
"Kage Bunshin no Jutsu!"
"NAHHHHHHHHHH!" All of the Narutos started to head toward Kakashi, throwing shrinkens at him. Some hit, causing him to stagger backwards. Then there was a small "poof" and a log replaced him.
Kakashi-sensei appeared, taking out most the Narutos.
Once he got to the real Naruto, he held a knife to his throat.
"I guess this means I win?" He asked, sounding bored.
Naruto looked at the ground, avoiding eye contact. Kakashi-sensei barely tried... "But Sasuke..."
"He's out of Konohas hands now. He's classified as a missing-nin." He lowered the knife.
Naruto looked away from everyone.
"If you...come with us right now, I'll give you somemore training, and teach you another technique." Jiriaya said, looking up at the sky thoughtfully.
"How long will the technique take?" Naruto asked. If he could learn it quick enough...
"Well...It depends on how hard you work. Its almost as hard as learning the Rasengan."
"Fine." Naruto finally said. "I'll go."
"but you have to promise...That you won't go after Sasuke."
"Lets just go." Naruto started walking toward the village, not ever planning to give that promise.

[NarutoSasukeSakura]

i know...that whole, Kakashi vs Naruto thing would NEVER happen, but I was having writers-block...lol:D

[NarutoSasukeSakura]

Chapter 241:
The new technique!


"How deep are the wounds?" Sakura asked Naruto, once they were back in the moonlit Konoha. She looked at his shoulder.
"He aimed them so it didn't go to deep. He didn't even want to hurt me that bad."
"Of course not! He cares about you, you know. You should of saw him earlier..." Sakura cut off. "Well, bye."
Naruto went inside his house, and sat on his bed.
He heard something russle outside, and looked outside the window, seeing shadows move. He knew that it was several ANBU members, or jourins, who had to make sure he didn't run off again.
Jiriaya agreed that he would teach Naruto the new technique tomorrow.
he looked at his bed covers, frowning.
How long will it take?
Sasuke...I'll come after you in three weeks.

[zawabr]

yeah....a fight between kakashi e naruto never gonna happen... but it´s cool imagine :p...

[F.Angel]

well they did sorta fight when they were signed the teams (although kakashi wasnt serious when he did heh) thats some great writin man, if i can be assed ill prob start drawing some mangas of it heh :P can't wait for next installment (almost like waiting for the real thing)

[zawabr]

your story is so good...that´s why i´m copying and saving in my pc!
and is much better than the manga...it not take so long to the next chapter! :p
it´s just missing draw your story! :D

(wish i have skills to draw your story....i just know how to paint... :( )

[uzumaki-unk_chaos]

That is really good :), and it is getting really interesting, keep 'em coming!!!!

[Therahedwig]

great stuff, though it's a bit flat and rushed...

try telling more instead of so much dialogue...

[NarutoSasukeSakura]

whoa...lots of comments all of a sudden.
Thanks everyone! :o :)
Okay...not so rushed. I'll try that. LOL. Oh-and just so some of you know, I may go and change little bits and pieces so its more detailed, sounds better, you know, whatever i think should be done.

EDITED UPDATE:
I changed the kakashi vs Naruto fight, because I never really wanted it to have Kakashi being serious fighting him, because hes loads stronger already (unless the nine tails comes out, like the fight with Sasuke).
So I hcnaged it. I think its a bit better.
Still gotta work out that flatness though. :D

[NarutoSasukeSakura]

Note: There will be three parts to chapter 241.

Chapter 241:
The new technique!
Part 2


Naruto walked over to the Ramen stand, told by Jiriaya that he'd meet him there. The morning sky was bright blue again, with large, white clouds.
"Jiriaya-sama?" Naruto asked, stepping inside. Jiriaya stirred his tea slowly.
"Hmm? You had anything to eat yet?"
"Yeah. I had ramen at home." Naruto said, sitting on a stool. "When are you going to teach me the technique?"
Jiriaya kept on stirring his tea thoughtfully. "I'm still thinking fo what to teach you."
"You mean...You don't know what to teach me?" Naruto looked at him doubtfully. "I thought you were some great ninja, and you can't decide whaty to teach me?"
"I narrowed it down to three different ones." Jiriaya said. "They're all about the same in strength too."
They both sat silently for a moment, thinking to themselves.
"Well explain what they do, and I'll pick which one I want to learn first." Naruto finally decided.
Jiriaya studied him. He has gotten more serious about fighting. Naruto's going to go after Sasuke again later...

[NarutoSasukeSakura]

Chapter 241:
The new technique!
PART 3

"Nope. I picked one now." Jiriaya said.
"What is it?"
"I believe Kakashi-sensei told me that you were number one in surprising people. I'm going to teach you this...Its Doton, or an earth-type technique. Shinjuu Zanshu no Jutsu."
"Shinjuu Zanshu no Jutsu?" Naruto asked, confused.
"It isn't a widely used technique, since it is only used when surprising the enemy. After performing hand seals and raising your chakra, you can be buried underground using your chakra. You can then move freely inside the ground, as if your was outside."
"Then I can pop out of the ground?" Naruto asked, he looked at Jiriaya intently. "How many people know this technique?"
"Basically all Jourins. I know it, Kakashi knows it, some more people know it too. It's going to be difficult for you to learn it though, since your still a Genin."
"Let's go start then." Naruto said, standing up, and walking back outside.
Jiriaya got out of his seat, and followed Naruto. "We're going to do it over where you first were with Kakashi, Sakura, and Sasuke."
"By that one stone thing?" Naruto asked.
"Yep."




Thanks the NArutoFan website, for the defintion and everything. :)

[NarutoSasukeSakura]

no comments...?
How is it going do u guys think?

[zawabr]

hey! keep going! it´s very good...it´s just....i´m just reading :D...

ah, other thing.... you said you are trying draw something about your story....

how is it? :) .... did you made something?

[NarutoSasukeSakura]

theres acually a team, me being the author, donkey someoneis the drawer, and Ponum is the colorer, so we're making it into an manga-type thing...or gonna try to..

I'll continue the story tomorrow, or late tonight, because im really really busy.

[Therahedwig]

yay, dousjinni!

gime gime gime!

[NarutoSasukeSakura]

lol, thanks.

Chapter 242
The Teachings of the Technique!


"But first Naruto...I don't think you've heard..." Jiriaya started, and looked at the sky.
'What?"
"Akimichi Choji died." He ended sadly. "He was found dead where he was fighting."
Naruto stopped in his tracks, and looked at the ground sadly. "He's...gone?"
I thought you were said skilled Ninjas!
I believe in you Choji! You better catch up to us later!
"Yes."
"I should of stayed and helped Choji. There was no point in going any further anyway. I would of just gotten beaten by Sasuke either way..."
"Thats one of the difficult parts in being a ninja. You have to think ahead on everything you do, not just decide right on the spot without a seconds thinking." Jiriaya said as they continued walking. "And every now and then people make a bad decision. But the decisions you made...no one would ever be able to see the outcome of it. So theres no blaming yourself. Kakashi has lost all his teammates...and his teacher. He lost almost all his close friends, when the fight against the demon fox happened. He's always tried not to blame himself."
Naruto felt a sudden guilt on his shoulders. He never relized that the thing sealed inside him had kiled peoples close friends, family, and other loved ones.
"Is that...why Kakashi-sensei doesn't like training or being with me?" Naruto asked. "He trained Sasuke during the Chuunin Exam. He had me train with someone else. Then he had you take care of me, and train me. And now, even with no Sasuke, he's having you train me again."
"That doesn't mean anything."
"The thing inside me killed his best friends, and his teacher! You just said so!" Naruto said.
"Kakashi cares about you. Never think he doesn't."
Naruto looked away. "he plays favorites alot."
"Well, we're here. Lets get started."

[NarutoSasukeSakura]

Chapter 242
The Teachings of the Technique!
Part 2


"Now, first, I'll teach you the hand seals...serpant, boar, monkey, ram."
"serpant, boar, monkey, ram?" Naruto repeated.
"Yes. Now, I want you to practice those over and over."
"Okay."

***hour later***

"Serpent, boar, monkey, ram." Naruto said, as he did the seals for each one.
"Good. Thats enough. Next, you have to learn how to control you chakra, and raise it extremely high. Have it come out all your body, but it must be very powerful." Jiriaya explained.
"Allright." Naruto said.

[Phatback]

wow this is great anyhitng i can help out with id love to this is better then the reql manga now..............much more creativee anyway to basicly copying dbz which looks like is going to happen in naruto manga

[NarutoSasukeSakura]

thank you!
i know...im afraid of it turning into a DBZ thing to...hope it doesnt...that would suck! lol
Thanks again!

[Phatback]

lol i triying to write chapter well wat u think



Chapter 243
*The next day*
"Serpent, boar, monkey, ram." Nauto yells into the red hot day
*he falls to the grund gasping for air*
"Naruto You need to take a rest you've been at it for hous" Kakashi says apearing out of nowhere.
"No i need to be STRONGER" Naruto yells and sudenly starts extracting his inner chakra
"Serpent, boar, monkey, ram!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
*continued*



lol pretty bad lol i was bored but tell me if you like lol

[NarutoSasukeSakura]

lol. um its good! ahaha
except i dunno why kakashi would be there...considering Jiriaya is training him. and you should probably talk about Naruto practicing letting all his chakra out.
Because since its a "jounin" scaled technique, hes gonna have to do it in steps (just like the rasengan)

If you want to be a co-author, then PM me your chapter first, that way, i can change some stuff if i want, in case its off the plot a bit, you know, whatever. Just make sure to PM me it first.
also, so everyone knows.

but i think im gonna do chapter 243, because i've hadit planned out in my head. but thanks for trying! lol. so just so everyone knows, ill be doing chapter 243

[Vegeta]

Shuriken. Jounin. Can't be bothered picking up anymore of the spelling mistakes, you should turn it into a large fic. Expand I mean.

[NarutoSasukeSakura]

expand, large fic?
what do u mean?

[NarutoSasukeSakura]

Chapter 242
The Teachings of the Technique!
Part 3

Concentrate, concentrate. Naruto closed his eyes. Pour out chakra...Pour out chakra!
More of the reason to kill you.
Naruto felt chakra circulate through his body fast. He opened his eyes.
Jiriaya looked at him curiously. Interesting kid...On the first try...
"serpant, boar, monkey, ram" he did the hand signs perfectly, and felt wierd. He was under the ground.
Naruto began to walk. He noticed as he walked through, the little pieces of dirt was acually disinagrating, and somehow the ground above wasn't collapsing. He smiled and jumped up, right behind jiriaya.
"How did I do?" naruto asked.
Jiriaya looked at him. "You did fine. it's surprising that you acually kept your chakra at the same rate underneath the ground. Otherwise, you'd have a hard time getting back up."
Naruto looked at him. "I did do good, didn't I?"
Jiriaya nodded. "Though it drained almost all your chakra, but it does that all the time when you first learn it."

[Vegeta]

Just have a look at the other Fan Fictions, mainly the ones at FanFiction.net they are much longer. Each chapter in a decent fic should be between 1000-5000 ( some writers like doing 10,000 chapters, which i adore) edit: words that is.

[NarutoSasukeSakura]

i dunno....its easier to just do it on here. *shrugs* and everyone loves naruto here. lol :D

[Phatback]

can i do a couple of chapters tononihgt plz just for fun lol

[NarutoSasukeSakura]

PM me it first.

[Phatback]

ok sure i pming it over

[NarutoSasukeSakura]

Chapter 243
Jiriaya talks to Kakashi!


"Now...What did you need to talk to me about?" Kakashi asked on the roof of a building.
"Naruto learned the Shinjuu Zanshu no Jutsu on one of his first trys..." Jiriaya said. "He's more determined then ever to get to Sasuke."
Kakashi looked up at Jiriaya. "I don't think it was a good idea to teach him that technique."
"Tsunade has ANBU members by his house everyday, right?" Jiriaya asked.
"mm." He nodded his head. "Three of them. When they can't, us jounins help out."
"Can you tell Tsunade to get more members?"
"Is Naruto...really getting that strong?"
"I'm not kidding you when I told you he learned that technique on his first try. He accelerates in learning a technique everytime. the more he wants to learn it, and the more he focus', he learns it quickly. He learned the rasengan in a week." Jiriaya said.
"He learned the fourths technique in a week?" Kakashi asked. I, myself, couldn't even learn that technique...I had to make up the Chidori, which is less complex then the Rasengan. It took Sasuke two weeks to learn the Chidori...
"Maybe I should help train him." Kakashi said.
Jiriaya looked at him curiously.
"What?"
"Nothing." He looked at the clouds in the sky. "Naruto was just telling me today how he thought you hated him, because of the demon fox."
Kakashi looked away. "What did you say then?"
"that he was being silly... You sure you want him?" Jiriaya asked.
"yes. I'll tell him." Kakashi said, walking away.
Jiriaya smiled after him. naruto is gonna be one happy kid...

***Next Morning***

*Kakashi knocks on Narutos front door*
"Coming." Naruto yelled, he opened the door. "Kakashi-sensei?"
"Good...your dressed. Let's go train." Kakashi says.
"Really?" Naruto asks excited. "Alright!"
"Hey, hey, whos stronger? You or the hermit trainer?" naruto asked as they walked toward the stone hedge.
"I don't know."
"Hey, hey...Wheres Sakura? She's not here." Naruto asked.
"She's getting medical training from the hokage." he replied.
"So your just training me?" Naruto asked suspiciously.
"Yes."
Naruto continued to stare at him suspiciously.
"What?"
"You usually play favorites, kakashi-sensei."
Kakashi looked up at the sky, with a hand on top of his head. "Hn...Lets just start. Show me the new technique you learned."
"Yes sir!"

[NarutoSasukeSakura]

sorry about all the spelling errors i have you guys...my two main languages is English and spanish.

[ninja_sakura19]

WAAAAII!! this fanfic is sooo darn goood ^_^ I can imagine everything taht's going on!! ^_^;; but im not that good of an artist lol! XD I can't draw as good as the anime.. darn those Japanese artists!! *is jelous*

[zawabr]

ahhhhhhhh!!!!!! this is very good!!!!!! :D
i don´t think you need a expand each chapter...... i think the people need write like they like..... neoenigma said to me: art is art....each people have your own style (something like that).. and i agree! i don´t miss one chapter! :p ... your story isn´t just decent...it´s awesome too! ;)

[Inactive nathan]

this is soooo awsome :)

[Zmozie]

Hey...I think that your fan fic is better than the real manga. Because I dont need to wait a whole week..keep up the good spirit...:cool: and I don't think that you should care so much about the spelling errors...Who cares?:D

[NarutoSasukeSakura]

Thanks so much you guys! It really does mean alot! :)

[Phatback]

i cant wait for the next chappter *bitting fingers nervisouly*

[ChristianKO]

holy shit... best fan fic eveR~~~ keep it going!!!1

[NarutoSasukeSakura]

Chapter 244
And So the Training with Kakashi Begins!

"I want you to stay underground for as long as you feel your chakra is going to stay at the same rate." Kakashi-sensei said.
Naruto closed his eyes, telling himself to concentrate again. Once he felt chakra going through his body at a fast rate, he began doing the hand signs. "Serpant, boar, monkey, ram."
He opened his eyes, noticing he was underground.
"Now I have...to stay down here?" He said to himself. He started walking around out of boredness. After around two minutes, his chakra was starting to drain.
naruto jumped up, and felt the warmness of sunlight surround him.
"Pretty good." Kakashi said, nodding his head. "You were underground 1 minute, and 50 seconds. Though...since this is mainly for surprising...Would you be able to locate me if I moved around once you were underground?"
Naruto looked at him thoughtfully. "I could just try to sense your chakra.."
There was a small smile under his mask. "Correct. Let's practice that then." You go underground, and I'll move."
"Okay." Naruto concentrated hard. "Serpant, boar, monkey, ram."
Darkness swallowed his body, as he began walking around. Shoot...I've never been good at loacating chakra. Naruto looked up at ceiling of dirt.Come on, come on! Some dirt fell from the ceiling.

[Phatback]

Chapter 244
And So the Training with Kakashi Begins!

"I want you to stay underground for as long as you feel your chakra is going to stay at the same rate." Kakashi-sensei said.
Naruto closed his eyes, telling himself to concentrate again. Once he felt chakra going through his body at a fast rate, he began doing the hand signs. "Serpant, boar, monkey, ram."
He opened his eyes, noticing he was underground.
"Now I have...to stay down here?" He said to himself. He started walking around out of boredness. After around two minutes, his chakra was starting to drain.
naruto jumped up, and felt the warmness of sunlight surround him.
"Pretty good." Kakashi said, nodding his head. "You were underground 1 minute, and 50 seconds. Though...since this is mainly for surprising...Would you be able to locate me if I moved around once you were underground?"
Naruto looked at him thoughtfully. "I could just try to sense your chakra.."
There was a small smile under his mask. "Correct. Let's practice that then." You go underground, and I'll move."
"Okay." Naruto concentrated hard. "Serpant, boar, monkey, ram."
Darkness swallowed his body, as he began walking around. Shoot...I've never been good at loacating chakra. Naruto looked up at ceiling of dirt.Come on, come on! Some dirt fell from the ceiling.


great chapter luv it cant wait for the next 1 :)

[NarutoSasukeSakura]

Chapter 244
And So the Training with Kakashi Begins!
PART 2

Dirt fell from the ceiling into his eyes. "Nah! Ow!" He blinked several times. he could also hear very very light footsteps above...He could find people that way! Naruto followed the dirt falling, and he light footsteps. "Right...There!" He jumped up as quickly as he could, and jumped right in front of Kakashi.
Naruto grinned.
"Hn. Good." Kakashi said, again nodding his head. "I want you to keep on doing that technique over and over for a few days. You'll learn how much chakra you exacly need, so you won't run out so soon."
"yes sir!"

***************

Sasuke walked up to Orochimaru and kabuto.
"What can I do for you, Uchiha Sasuke?" Orochimaru asked, smiling to himself.
"Make me...stonger." Sasuke said.
Orochimaru's smile widened. "with pleasure."

[NarutoSasukeSakura]

thats it for tonight, hope you enjoy! :)

[Phatback]

no it kabuto lol anywayz luve em keep em comen

[ninja_sakura19]

wow. it's getting exciting!! ^_^ *shakes w/ excitment* lol!! XD

[NarutoSasukeSakura]

lol-thanks again, but i gotta go to bed...i'll do more tomorrow *sleepy yawn*

[zawabr]

it´s interesting! what gonna happen with sasuke? i´m waiting very anxious the next chapter....

[Inactive nathan]

this may seem stupid... but can i help somehow? i dunno really what i can do but im kinda bored and id like to be part of this :P

EDIT: i can draw pretty well... i could show you some samples on MSN if u want :P... do you need an artist :confused:

[NarutoSasukeSakura]

Nathan-check your messages, I PMED you about it...
Thanks for all the lovely comments again everyone! :D
This Chapter may be a bit shorter then usual...


Chapter 245
Kabutos Order


Orochimaru smiled. "Kabuto...You will train Uchiha Sasuke now. Teach him..."
"Should I teach him some medical techniques?" Kabuto asked.
"No...Don't waste time on that. Do what he said. Make him stronger."
"Yes." Kabuto nodded his head toward the door. "Lets go, uchiha."
They walked outside. "you need..revenge?" Kabuto asked, smiling slyly.
Sasuke looked at him. "I need to kill more then...one person." Naruto and Itachi flshed in his minds. "I will become stonger then them."
"you just need Orochimaru...and me to help?"
"Yes."
"Why don't we get started then? Your probably itching...to kill..."

***Two Days Later***

"How is the Uchiha doing?" Orochimaru asked.
Kabuto smiled, his glasses glinting. "He's doing...fine. He's already learned a technique. Sasuke will be great for getting a new body."
"good."

[NarutoSasukeSakura]

Chapter 246
Another Technique!?
Part 1

"You've gotten that technique down perfectly." said Kakashi, a few days later.
Naruto grinned.
Hatake Kakashi looked up at the sky. "i'll teach you a new technique..."
Naruto looked up at Kakashi happily. "really?!"
"hmm? Yes."
"Whats it called?" Naruto asked eagerly.
"Kokuangyo no Jutsu."
Naruto looked at him. "Whats that kakashi-sensei?"
"Or...maybe you shouldn't learn this move..."
Naruto looked at him, confused. "Why?"
"Because it temporarily, but effectively, blinds the enemy and they can see nothing but their own body. Then you can attck them freely, unless the enemy is extremely talented and figures out how to counter attack it quickly." Kakashi said. "This is a serious technique, Naruto. You have to use it responisibly."
"I will Kakashi-sensei. I promise I will." Naruto said. He looked at Kakashi seriously.
"I guess I can trust you on this then...but I'm warning you...this technique is...unbelievly hard."
"I don't care! I'll learn it!" Naruto said, sure of himself.
This kid sure has stamina. Kakashi gave Naruto a small smile.

[Phatback]

lol keep em coming :)

[ninja_sakura19]

yaay!! NARUTO!! ^_^ *has nothing else to say* XD but it's good keep up the good work hehe. (yes i know im lame)

[NarutoSasukeSakura]

thats all for tonight...i havent done any of my homework yet...tehe

[Inactive nathan]

this is reminding me of dbz somehow :P im talking about that blinding thingy :).
*look around at the ppl in the forum* why are you looking at me like that? im not saying it bad! :D. its very entertaining! keep up the good work!

EDIT: added my signature :P what do ya think ^_^?

[NarutoSasukeSakura]

lol. I like it nathan.
Well-I got the blind thing off the narutofan.com website, under all the techniques, so don't look at me. Except its different...They're engulfed in darkness, not blinding light. This is alot cooler. :D

Chapter 246
Another Technique!?
Part 2

"Hand seals...are tiger, serpant, boar."
"Tiger, serpant, boar." Naruto did the hand seals perfectly. He looked up at Kakashi and grinned.
"But instead of doing the hand seals first...You start controling your chakra." Hatake said.
Naruto looked at him confused, and looked at his own hands. Would he be putting chakra at his hands? Or feet? Or...
"It's very difficult...I want you to use your chakra as if it were for...protecting you."
Naruto stared at Kakashi now, not getting anything.
Kakashi-sensei sighed. "So if I threw something at you, it wouldn't hit you. So repel it...Just all over your body."
"Ohh." Naruto said, and started to gather his chakra.
"I'm done." Naruto said, keeping his chakra at the same level.
Kakashi picked up a small rock next to him and threw it lazily at Naruto. Before it hit Naruto, it backed off, like it was hit into an invisable wall.
Hatake picked up a larger rock, the size of his hand, and threw it at Naruto again. This time though, it went through the invisable barrier. The rock hit Naruto's head painfully, as he fell over.
"Oww." Naruto rubbed his head.
"You have to make it a stronger force. Repel it a bit more."
He stood up and started over.

***

"You girls are doing great." Tsunade-sama said smiling at them.
Hinata, Sakura, and Ino looked up, as a little smile appeared on each of their faces.
"You all have learned basic healing, and Sakuras now on the advanced healing. we'll continue the lessons tomorrow. I'd go train now, for fighting. In order to stay in a team, you have to be able to fight good as well."

[NarutoSasukeSakura]

Chapter 246
Another Technique!?
Part 3

*At Sunset...*

Naruto sat down, breathing heavily.
"I didn't really expect you to have mastered using the chakra. I wouldn't worry about it." Kakashi sensei said. "You can do more tomorrow."
"No...I'm going to stay here until I'm able to control my Chakra correctly." Naruto stood up, and concentrated his chakra.
Kakashi sighed, and took a large rock, throwing it at him. It hit the invisible wall hard, not hitting Naruto.
Naruto relaxed, smiling.
Kakashi nodded his head. "Good."

[Phatback]

keep em coming :)

[Inactive nathan]

is that all you ever say, phatback?
well in any case.. good, and good again! keep em comming :)

[Phatback]

is that all you ever say, phatback?
well in any case.. good, and good again! keep em comming :)
stfu I say more than that u little tik lol

[zawabr]

humm. today... no new chapter? ah.. too bad.... but i know is hard make one chapter always (i mean everyday!)... i always wait anxious for the naruto anime, naruto manga... and now i wait everday for this fanfic! thanks narutosasukesakura for the work! each chapter is good as ever! :D

[NarutoSasukeSakura]

thansk everyone!
yeah, i know each chapter im gonna write, its just that i dont have the time every single day to get on here...sry-double chapters tomorrow! :D

[NarutoSasukeSakura]

just so everyone should know...I changed 3 chapters. My first two (because i mean, come on! crying when hes not even awake...sheesh i found some things really bad in it. lol. Just wanted to make it better-and more Naruto-like.) Another one is the "fight" with Kakashi and Naruto. I made it so Kakashi was barely trying, and that it wasnt a serious thing for him.
So hopefully you like those changed chapters more...i think its way better on how they were before.

[NarutoSasukeSakura]

Chapter 248
Another Chuunin Test?!
Part 1


"Lets go Naruto. I have to go somewhere." Kakashi said.
"Hmm. Where do you have to Kakashi-sensei?" Naruto stood up.
"Hokage is having a meeting..."
"Tsunade-sama? What for?" Naruto asked. His expression dulled. Probably about me.
"Thats between the Hokage, and the other Shinobi attending."

***Later that evening, the meeting with Tsunade.***

The door opened, and Jiriaya stepped in.
"So everyone is here now, then?" Tsunade looked around. There was Jiriaya, and all the other teacher Jounin teachers. Along with Iruka.
Iruka looked at everyone worried. "Did Naruto do something?"
Tsunade smiled at him. "Don't worry about it...Though we do have to talk about Naruto some." She said, her eye brows narrowed.
Asuma took out a cigarette, and lit it, getting comfortable.
Kurenai frowned. 'Whats going on, tsunade-sama?"
"As I said...Some of this is about Naruto. But its also about Chuunin exams."
"Chuunin exams?" Asked Gai.
"Instead of having the Chuunin exam with all the other countries, its been decided, that we'd have it just between our own country. We can't take a risk of the same thing happening like last time."
Everyone nodded in agreement.
"So we're just going to have Ibiki, and some others watching it, along with their teachers, friends, and family. it's going to be more private then last time. They will have to show us their skills, and techniques, along with going through some obstacles, and fighting." tsunade said. "We'll have the chuunin exam in one week."
"Now...What about Naruto?" Kakashi asked.
Tsunade looked over to Jiriaya, who sat up straighter. "Go ahead Jiriaya."

[Phatback]

so are u doing 1 more today that wuld be nice LOL :) well anyway i like it

[Inactive nathan]

whoa phatback cool it was just joking around O_o
nice chapter btw :)

[Inactive nathan]

ummm i think we need to get more ppl to be following this. i think we only got like 4-5 ppl here... i came here by chance (dont really remember how) :P
we want part 2!!! NOW!

[zawabr]

another chuunin exam? cool! actually, to teel the truth...i was a little tired to have many chapters with just the new technics (i liked...but... it´s great! :D) ..keep going :p!

[NarutoSasukeSakura]

what do you guys mean? I promised i'd do twice the chapters today! *does a Gai thumbs up and smiles* thats a promise! haha. lol
Lets see....I usually do like, two chapter a day, so im gonna do around 3 or 4 chapters today (hopefully)

heres the next part!

Chapter 248
Another Chuunin Test?!
part 2

Jiriaya looked around at everyone. Iruka seemed worried, kakashi looked at him with mild interest, Gai, Asuma, and Kurenai all exchanged frowns. "As most of us know...Uchiha Itachi, a missing-nin, and Hoshigaki Kisame, also an S-ranked criminal from the Hidden Mist village, are after Naruto...well...the demon fox sealed inside of him." Jiriaya paused. "they recieved the order to capture Naruto by the Akatsuki organization, who has a total of 9 missing-nins and criminals."
Iruka looked at him. "Then what do we have to do?"
"We have to make sure they don't get Naruto. Which is why tsunade-sama hired ANBUs to watch him secretly all the time, whenever hes not with kakashi, myself, or Tsunade..." Jiriaya paused for a second, and turned to Kakashi. "Do you think he's over the whole Sasuke thing?"
"it may seem like it, but hes been more and more serious about learning techniques. I don't think he is though..."
"Don't you think we should tell Naruto about the dangers of Itachi, and the group he's in? That way, Naruto will always be on his toes, knowing theres people after him." Iruka remarked.
Jiriaya nodded. "Tomorrow, instead of Kakashi training him, i'm going to talk to him about Itachi."
"whats happening with orochimaru?" Kurenai asked. "what are we doing about that?"
"We're not at that level yet. But its almost impossible to find him anyways. We'll worry about that later." Tsunade answered.
There was a pause. "Also...I'm expecting even the Jounins to train to get ready if itachi comes again. We can have all the Genins train together. Haruno Sakura, Hyuuga Hinata, and Yamanaka Ino have been my pupils for around two weeks, and are making steady progress. Haruno Sakura is making huge progress. She knows two different healing techniques. I've told them to practice their regular techniques though, and they have been training together. I think that concludes just about everything." She finished.
"Though before we all leave..." Asuma started. "I'd just like to say that Akatsuki organization shouldn't be taken lightly at all. Kakashi was defeated easily by Itachi, because of his Mangekyou sharigan."
"And thats only one of their members...imagine if all of the organization shows up."
"Thats what we're hoping will not happen. Which is why i stress you to train."
"i think we're done for now." jiriaya said. "it's getting late."

[NarutoSasukeSakura]

ohhh that was long!

Chapter 249
Chuunin Exam Announcement!
Part 1


*Next Morning*

Sakura walked into the Ramen shop.
“I knew you'd be here, Naruto.”
Naruto turned around. “sakura-san!” Sakura sat next to Naruto on a stool.
“Have you found out yet?” She asked excitedly. 'They're gonna do another Chuunin exam! Theres flyers all over the place. Though its only going to be within our country, and the whole thing is independent work.” Sakura smiled.
Naruto slurped noodles. “So...I have another chance at becoming a Chuunin?”
“Yes. We all do. I'm going to go around seeing the others to ask if they're going to do it. Todays the only sign-up day.”
“I'll go with you. But I have to train too.” Naruto said, drinking up the juice left in the bowl. He paid the person, and walked out with Sakura.
“I have to train too. With Tsunade-sama.”
“your being trained by old lady Hokage?”
“for medical training, yes. Along with Ino, and Hinata. After, we train together for being shinobi.” she said. They walked on a street toward the Hyuugans house.

[Inactive nathan]

Awsome O_O keep it comming!!
hows the rules of this exam gonna be? do u need 3 ppl in a team?

[NarutoSasukeSakura]

like sakura said, they work independantly on this one (by themselves)

[NarutoSasukeSakura]

Chapter 249
Chuunin Exam Announcement!
Part 2

"Naruto?"
Naruto and Sakura turned around. Neji, along with Hinata, who was carrying a bag of groceries, walked up to them.
"Hello Neji, and Hinata-san!" Naruto grinned. Hinata blushed, and walked behind Neji shyly.
"how are you doing?" Neji asked, he gave Naruto a smile.
"Ah-good! We were just coming to tell you guys about the next Chuunin exam!"
Neji looked at Naruto. "Theres another one? When?"
"In one week. Are you gonna compete?" Naruto asked.
"Yeah. I wouldn't miss it."
"What about you, Hinata-san?" Naruto asked, looking over Neji's shoulder.
"I think so...Naruto-kun..." Hinata whispered, looked at the ground. Her face was flushed.
"Nah?" Naruto looked at Hinata curiously.
"Todays the only sign-up day, so I'd sign up at the Mission Center." Sakura said, as she and Naruto waved goodbye.
"Thanks!"
***
"Hey, Sakura." Ino said as they entered the flower shop. "And naruto."
"Hi, Ino. Did you hear about the Chuunin exam?" Sakura asked, smelling a flower.
"Yes. Asuma-sensei told me during breakfast. We had barbaque with Shikamaru." Ino looked away sadly.
sakura frowned. "The teams are being ripped apart. Choji's gone from yours...and S...S-Sasuke-kun is gone from ours."
"I'm gonna go see Kiba..." Naruto left, starting fro Kiba's house. He didn't feel like seeing the girls cry, since one of reasons was because he had failed at bring Sasuke back. He looked up at the sky. But he would bring Sasuke back eventually.
***
Naruto knocked on the kiba's door.
"Hi." Kiba's mother opened the door. "just a minute...i'll go get kiba."
"Right here mom" He said gruffly. "Hey Naruto."
"Hi Kiba. What have you been up to?"
Kiba shrugged. "I've been training...You too, right."
"Yeah. But it's a good thing." Naruto grinned. "Because the chuunin exam is coming up again!"
kiba looked at him surprised. "It is?"
Naruto nodded. "And we have to sign up today at the Mission reports place." Naruto grinned again. "I'd stay longer, but I gotta go sign up myself, then train. Think you can tell your other teammates?"
Kiba nodded. "yeah, thats fine. I better get a hustle on training more too."
"See ya, Kiba!" Naruto was already walking down the street.
***
Naruto went into the Mission Report building.
"hey, hey! Iruka-sensei! Where do I sign up for the chuunin exam?" Naruto asked, seeing that Iruka was here too.
Iruka turned around. "You sign up with tsunade-sama. How are you Naruto?"
"Training." Said NAruto shortly. "Getting ready for the exam."
"Thats good, i guess."
Naruto smiled, and nodded. "i have to sign up, then train! Bye, Iruka-sensei!" He walked over to Tsunade. "Old Lady Hokage! i'm gonna sign up for the Chuunin exam!"
Tsunade smiled, adn wrote his name on a piece of paper. "there. your in. meet at the same place as the last exam."
"hey, Hey! Who else has signed p so far?" Naruto asked.
"Rock Lee, and TenTen."
"Ah. Okay. I'm off to train." Naruto walked out the door. "Hmm? Jiriaya-sensei?"

[NarutoSasukeSakura]

i think thats all for today...i've written tons...two chapters, and most the parts are like really long. i may do one more later, but i gotta think somemore. hope your all enjoying it! :D

[NarutoSasukeSakura]

decided to do one more.

ohhh. long title. lol :D

Chapter 250
Itachi and Orochimaru! Finally Naruto's questions answered!
Part 1

"Come with me Naruto." Jiriaya started walking over to a building, and jumped onto the roof.
Naruto jumped up. "Whats going on?"
"Do you remember when we were looking for Tsunade-sama, and two men came to our hotel door?"
"yeah. One had a large sword, and the other was Sasukes brother, he had sharigan."
"Sasukes brother is uchiha Itachi. Do you know what itachi did to the Uchiha clan?" Jiriaya asked intently.
"yeah. He killed everyone except Sasuke." Naruto said thoughtfully at the sky, and then looked at Jiriaya. "Then he became a missing-nin, right?"
"Yes. he's also an S-ranked criminal. He almost killed kakashi, and he could have easily done so. But kakashi wasn't his target. Their target was you, the demon fox sealed within you."
"he's that strong...?"
"Yes. And the thing is...we think they might come back with their whole orgazination. they're all S-ranked ninjas, and very strong. Theres a total of nine of them."
Narutos eyes widened in shock for a second. He looked at the ground. "What do I do then? Shouldn't I be training?"
"Yes. your going to have to. But we just want you to be aware that people are after you."
they were silent for a little bit.
"Tell me...Who is Orochimaru anyways? i want to know who he is. I've seen him before, but I don't really know what hes like. He must be powerful too. He killed the third hokage."
Jiriaya now looked up at the sky. I was hoping this subject wouldn't come up...but I probably should tell him...




cliff hanger! cliff hanger! I'm gonna leave you guys on this part for now. :p :D :)

[zawabr]

2 chapters in the same day? you cross your own limit! :D

yeah!!!!!!! good for us! (in a good way)

[NarutoSasukeSakura]

yes, i do. lol. :D

[Inactive nathan]

argghhh i hate it when ppl do this to me :(

EDIT: YEA IM #100 IN THIS THREAD!

[Inactive nathan]

:) i just completed the first frame of the 2nd chapter...
well i dunno if it looks good really, so some1 will have to judge it :D
note- if it isnt good ill just change my style...
if narutosasukesakura allows ill post it here so u guys can see what the hell im talking about.

[zawabr]

humm.. before that, why you don´t post in the hiddem museum of art?

[Bellium]

lol, I'm also working with narutosasukesakura for drawing and coloring manga for this fanfic. I got chapter 250 done, awaiting permission to release it :P

[zawabr]

ah.. create a new topic and post in art! i want to see..:D

[NarutoSasukeSakura]

arg-sry, super-duper busy today! :( sry.

wait a bit more longer to post it u guys...im gonna ask ponem if he wants to color it. he hasnt been answering me lately though :/
thanks 4 the comments!:)
the manga is turning out reallllly good! :P

[Phatback]

this cliffhanger is killing me plz release the chapter lol ic ant wiat

[Bellium]

the manga is turning out reallllly good! :P
Thanks to my elite computer drawing skills xD

[NarutoSasukeSakura]

yep bellium! :D
i finally got on...

Chapter 250
PART 2

Jiriaya sighed, and began. "Orochimaru was in my genin team. Always power-hungry. He was extemely talented and skilled...Just like how Itachi is. He wanted to learn every single jutsu in the world. That was his ultimate goal. And hes pretty much almost succeeded that. He's invented his own jutsu as well........He can switch bodies, with someone elses when he begans to die."
"What!?"
Jiriaya nodded. "He's planning to us Sasuke's body once he starts to die. Sasuke, himself, will die though. But as Orochimaru sees it, who cares. He has a strong Uchiha clan body."
"We...can't let Orochimaru do that." Naruto said angrily.
"there's nothing we can do, Naruto."
"I'll kill Orochimaru myself if I have to!" He stood up.
Jiriaya stood up too. "this is NOT something to take lightly! Orochimaru killed the 3rd. He is not weak Naruto!"
Naruto looked down. "Someone has to stop him though."
"Orochimaru may be part of the same organization Itachis in. that would mean that we'd be facing even more difficulties." Jiriaya sighed again. "Tsunade's been worrying about that lately. Which is why all of the jounins are training. Also...Naruto....You can not go after Sasuke. Please don't. If you do, there would be a risk of them getting you along with Sasuke. Konoha can't deal with that right now."
Naruto looked down at the ground guiltly. The wind blew in the silence. Naruto finally stood up. "I have to get ready for the Chuunin exam." He walked away.
"Remember." Jiriaya said standing up after him. "For once...leave Sasuke."
He froze for a while. How could've Jiriaya said that? Naruto began walking away again, hands in pockets.

[zawabr]

ehhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

i was thinking...
"today a new chapter not going be done!" :D

[Phatback]

wait so u r saying that oro is still in akatsuki ???? srry i a bit confused by latest chapter

[Hakk3]

oro quit the akatsuki....

[Inactive nathan]

whos in the team? i wanna at least know who im working with :).
btw: nice sig zawbar.. owns the previous one :P.

[Inactive nathan]

whos in the team? i wanna at least know who im working with :).
btw: nice sig zawabr.. owns the previous one :P.

[zawabr]

hum... i don´t know if it´s necessary a chapter just to tell to naruto about all this...
in the anime this was said many times (not to naruto....) but... it´s good! at least i read some chapter last night :D!

[zawabr]

whos in the team? i wanna at least know who im working with .
btw: nice sig zawabr.. owns the previous one.

thanks :D! the other was very ugly! i know, this isn´t perfect, but it´s better!

ah, about the team... no i´m just a fan reader ;) ! i don´t draw well, i just know how to paint (it isn´t like ponem colors but i thinks is good :D)...

[Inactive nathan]

ah :D... well i like drawing :) i can color pretty well in photoshop too :)
argh just put up all the eps ok? stop hiding them i know u got them somewhere nar.sus.sak :P

[Bellium]

lol, I do drawings and colors as well :)

[NarutoSasukeSakura]

okay-thats really stupid...it cut off the chapter!
well-i've fixed it now...
I never said Oro. was acually IN IN it. he may be...but i might not tell u till later! ma-wa-ha! lol :D
just pretend the NAruto ppl never said he was out of it, so nobodys sure if he is or not...

Chapter 251
Finally! The Chuunin Exams!

Naruto woke up at dawn, eating his normal ramen. He stirred it slowly, and looked at his calender. In bright, bold, red letters it said "Chuunin Exams!" on this very day.

***Later that day***

"Naruto!" Sakura said, as she entered into the arena where the 3rd chuunin exam step had taken place.
"Good Morning Sakura-chan!" Naruto said happily. "What do you think they'll make us do?"
Sakura shrugged. "When we asked Tsunade-sama, she just smiled, and told us she wouldn't tell us. Though theres something to test our strength, ability, and strageties, i think."
Naruto looked around. There was Sakura, Ino, Kiba, Shino, Rock Lee, Neji, Hinata (who blushed when Naruto looked at her), and Tenten.
"Genins of Konoha...And their guests." tsunade started. Naruto looked around, seeing Iruka-sensei in the stands. "Today, we will began the Chuunin Exams! It will take the rest of the day, so by the end of the day, we can tell you if you were passed or not...Instead of having a writing part to start with, we're going to start with something different." She smiled, and everyone else looked at her with espressions of worry, and curiousity.

[zawabr]

hehe...stay calm :D! i liked the chapter 250! i just said as a comment! :D

[Inactive nathan]

oh geez cant you end the suspense in one post??... at least once!!! :)

[NarutoSasukeSakura]

haha! never nathan! lol. :p:D
And the reason for Jiriaya telling NAruto all that...ANruto doesn't know that, so now he has more things to think about. ALSO, i wanted to refresh everyones memories. :)



Chapter 251
Finally! The Chuunin Exams!
Part 2

"You'll all..."Tsunades eyes glittered. "Just going to stay here."
They all looked at her, utterly confused.
She smiled. "I'm going to have ninjas come at you, and you just defend yourselves, and fight back. You can't kill though, and all the ninjas will have masks on so you don't know who it is. Also, the rank of the ninja will be Chuunin, or Jounin, and they're acually going to be testing you, and scoring you, on your abilities as well. Along with them, I'm going to grade you, and Ibiki."
Sakura raised her hand.
"Yes?" Tsunade asked, looking up.
"Can we help defend each other?" She asked.
"Yes. Just don't do it to much, because we want to see your fighting abilities as well." Tsunade looked at everyone. "its begining now!" She walked away, and around 15 cloaked Konoha ninjas appeared.



i did a cliff hanger, just for u nathan. :p

[Phatback]

tight i have a guess that kakshi takes on naruto and naruto uses that blindy thingy lol well cant wait till next chap

[Inactive nathan]

sounds cool already :)

[Phatback]

he hasnt done one today yet i am sad i hope one comes soon or i am gonna weep (acutally i will play halo 2) L0l well anywayz i hope u make anotrher and keep i tgoing

[NarutoSasukeSakura]

Have no fear u guys! :D I'm here! And yes, im writing a chapter! :)


Chapter 252
Let the test begin!

The ninjas started toward all the genins, and immediatly started battleing.
Naruto sensed something behind him, and turned around quickly, recieving a blow in his stomach. He was forced backwards about 50 feet.
He stood up quickly. "Kage Bunshin No Jutsu!" 5 Narutos appeared at his side, and charged at his opponent.
The person easily kicked, and punched them. The real Naruto was jumping down from above, and was about to kick his opponent, but the person jumped sideways, avoiding the collision.
Naruto stood up. he'd have to take this seriously if he wanted to become a chuunin. He'd use the technique...But What if it was Kakashi? He'd know about it...Naruto started expelling his chakra fast. he had to spend as little time as possible protecting himself.
tiger, serpant, boar. Naruto did the hand seals quickly, but perfectly.

[Phatback]

kool are u doing another 1 today ? plz :)

[NarutoSasukeSakura]

no i cant! :'( i have to finish the rest of my homepork. :P bleh.

[Phatback]

no i cant! :'( i have to finish the rest of my homepork. :P bleh.
HOME WARORK IS fu**in anoyingf lol it is getting really good anywayz

[zawabr]

ah... always stop in the best part =] ... but it´s k!
i´m waiting anxious for the rest of chapter! :D

[Inactive nathan]

as usual he keeps us in the suspense :)
geez its getting hard to keep up with the drawings... takes me alot of time sorry guys :(. well on tuesdays, and fridays i have alot of time off so i can finish drawings then :P i have only 3 panels from chapter 236... im waiting for permission from susuke naruto sakura to let me post a link to see what i made so far. i think its pretty good :P only a few flashbacks... well anyways nothing too intesting in the mean time. who else is helping other than bellium? :confused:

[Phatback]

ya it is suspensful but i hope he dose 1 today ihe hasnt been doing them as freuntly then when in the good old days l0l

[NarutoSasukeSakura]

yeah, i know, sry guys! Its just that schools being more stupid, tons of homework, and tests to study for. And one of my grades, I'm gonna get a C if i don't start doing better on homework and tests...i'll try to update later though! i can only be on for a bit right now

[NarutoSasukeSakura]

Chapter 252
Let the test begin!
Part 2

He looked at his opponent. "Kokuangyo no Jutsu!" A few seconds later, Naruto lowered his hands, and looked at the person. He was standing still, except for his head, which was looking around.
Naruto ran toward the masked man, jumped up, and punched him square in the face. He landed on the ground. And began kicking. The person was moving around now.
"Your doing pretty good." The guy said in a muffled voice. "But you can't keep this up for long. Its allready turning into just a thick haze for me. I can see you when you come close."
"Nah!" Naruto jumped up, and kicked him in the stomach.
"ag-" Someone crashed into Naruto forcebly.
naruto stood up quickly. Where was the guy? He looked around frantically, then felt a another strong force hitting him in the back. He flew into a wall.
He stood up more slowly this time. "Kage Bunshin No jutsu!" 10 more Narutos appeared by him, and started running toward the 'enemy'.




How'd u like it?

Oh...and just a quick question. I want EVERYONE to answer this. :D

Am I a....

A) Girl
B) Guy

What do you think I am? Or what have you always thought i was? ^_^ haha. Jusrt a random question. :rolleyes:

[Phatback]

boy lol anywayz i think that was kinda a filler one anywayz i wish they were longger :(

[zawabr]

i don´t have idea.... boy i think....:D
how to know... me (for example), i´m a girl...but my nick And avatar don´t show that way....

[Phatback]

er a girl wow i thought u wer a boy anyqyz i am a boy lol

[Inactive nathan]

O_o huh?! i thought everyone here was a boy :P...
well im a boy. i vote that susuke naruto sakura is a boy...
i haev my reasons :P but they may point to the other direction totally :D
actually.. u know what? i really dont care ^_^ (actually i do but nvm).

[NarutoSasukeSakura]

lol. Well, zawabr...uhh. im a girl too. haha lol. And my first few friends were all guys. :p
But I've always been a tomboy..soo, yeah. :D
im gonna try doing a chapter soon, but im going to my cousins house soon, and sleeping over. :)

[Phatback]

er a girl ! wow i am surprised lol well i hope u have fun at er cousins if u dont do 1 today will u do 2 tomrow ? plz anywayz to all the drawers and narutosasukesakura (order?) i will host all the images and text and create it on a webpage if u guys want lol

[Inactive nathan]

What The Hell???? :o

[shadow_sand]

This is pretty good. i've read everything. i don't like the fact that you made naruto so serious though. Oh well 8/10. Also it should be longer. And I can draw pretty good. Not Naruto characters but evironments and buildings and stuff. Well thats my 2 cents. make sure you come by and read my ORIGINAL fic Elite Union. ( sorry i also prefer non-naruto rips)

Heres the summary:

His name is Codrea. A human-like alien from the planet Crotan, also the main character. After escaping from his exploding planet, he and his older brother, Gallack, are forced to inhabit a new world. A world called Earth. On this new planet, he will face betrayal, death, new allies, and one hell of an adventure. Join Codrea on his quest to be the strongest.

If you are imterested come check it out and post your ideas in the topic. See ya. Have a nice day!

[zawabr]

lol. Well, zawabr...uhh. im a girl too. haha lol. And my first few friends were all guys.
But I've always been a tomboy..soo, yeah.
im gonna try doing a chapter soon, but im going to my cousins house soon, and sleeping over. :)

it´s a little difficult find anothers girls here :D(at the forum or any other forum of anime/manga/vg)... i thinks the girls are a little afraid to show yourselfs :p... but i don´t care... i like, and always will like this stuff! ;)

** my strange nick come from my last name....**

[zawabr]

er a girl wow i thought u wer a boy anyqyz i am a boy lol

hehe :D... hey... not just boy like animes... ;)

[NarutoSasukeSakura]

hehe. phatback-that'd be awesome!
and just so u all remember...all of the chapters have parts, but once im done with the parts, that whole thing is a chapter. so each of these little parts arent a chapter, its only part of one.
:)

Chapter 252
Let the test begin!
Part 3

The guy (again) easily defeated the Narutos, though when all the Narutos disappeared, he looked around.
Hands popped up from underneath the grounds, Naruto jumped up, and grabbed hold of the guys legs, and swung him around. Letting go, the chuunin examiner was flown over toward a wall. He flipped himself around, and jumped off the wall, hitting Naruto.
Naruto got up, to find that all the examiners were gone.
He looked around. The genins all exchanged looks of wonder.
There was a scream. A girl scream.
"Ten-Ten!" rock lee's voice yelled.
Everyone looked over in that direction. Once of the masked ninjas had a knife to Ten-tens neck, his other hand was over her mouth.
Sakura ran over to Naruto. "I know what they're doing." She whispered. "They're seeing how we would react in different situations. And how we would think of a stragety, and intereact with the other ninjas to decide."
Naruto nodded, then looked over at Ino, who was staring intently, consentrating. She caught Narutos eye quickly.
"Sakura-chan! Go over to Ino." Naruto whispered.
"Hm?" Sakura looked over at Ino. "Oh!" Ino nodded her head, and did the mind switching, just as Sakura started running toward her. Inos body started falling, and sakura caught her.

[shadow_sand]

pretty good. 8/10. cant wait for more. btw do you need any help?? With the manga that is.


( Also don't forget to check out Elite Union) :D :D

[NarutoSasukeSakura]

pmed ya shadow sand! :)

Chapter 253
Passed or Failed? The Final Test!
Part 1

It had worked, and Ino, in the ninjas body, lowered the knife on TenTen. Though it wasn't that simple. All of the other ninjas came out from hiding too, and started going toward 'Ino' and TenTen.
"NAHHHHHH!" There was yelling right by the ninjas. Narutos were everywhere.
Almost immediatly, all the other genins began fighting too.
Naruto paused for a bit, looking at everyone. Neji was fighting along side Hinata, meanwhile, so was Kiba and Akamaru. Ino had undone it, so she was in her own body. TenTen was fighting with another ninjas with her knife, and Rock Lee was running and kicking.
Sasuke entered into his mind. Would Naruto, just himself be strong enough to fight Sasuke and orochimaru? His plan was idiotic. There was no way he would be strong enough....He had to be better. Naruto looked at the ground, mad at himself, teeth clenched, and eyes narrowed.
"NARUTO! WATCH OUT!" Sakura yelled.
Naruto turned around, and grabbed an arm that was about to punch him.
There was a pause.
What if...
Naruto let the red chakra out a bit. This power...he's figured out how to control it himself. He started running, still holding on to the guys arm. His feet dug into the ground, and he slammed him opponent into the wall. Someone took a blow to Narutos head. He fell, and looked around. He was in a haze, and felt tired.
No...no...Get up. Naruto closed his eyes. he was to tired...
You are weaker then I thought... said a detestful voice. Naruto found himself by Kyuubi.
No I am not! Naruto seemed to say back to the demon fox.
Then prove it.
Naruto stood up, staggering slightly. Shaking his head clear, and looked around.
The ninja Naruto was fighting was standing against an unbroken part of wall lazily. "we're done."
Naruto looked at him. "What do you mean?"
"The test...its done."
Naruto looked around. All the other masked ninjas were gone, and the genins were talking with each other.
The ninja started walking away.
"wait!" Naruto ran over to him, he looked at him intently. "How long was I out of it? Sitting down by the wall?"
"Only a few minutes. Tsunade-sama decided to end it right before you got up. So all of us are done." He began walking away again.
"Is that you, Kakashi-sensei?" The person turned around, and took of the whole head mask. It was Kakashi. He walked over to Naruto, and then they went out on the street together.
"I knew you were thinking of sasuke today..."
Naruto looked away. "I won't be strong enough to get Sasuke." he mumbled.
Kakashi looked at Naruto thoughtfully. "Hm. So you finally figured that out. Good."
"It doesn't matter though. I'm going to go anyways. You said at the beginning, when we were still academy students, that betraying your friends is the scumiest thing we could do. but now you think I should do that. Betray a friend."
"he already betrayed you Naruto. He wants nothing to do about here. Even if you get Sasuke back here, hes not gonna stay here. He'll hate you, and everyone else."
Naruto felt helpless. He was still sorta dizzy too. "I promised Sakura...that...I...would bring him back." He looked a Kakashi.
"That...was a stupid promise."
Naruto looked off in the distance. Konoha lit up in the sunset sky. "Kakashi-sensei. Please don't stop me if I go after Sasuke. Please don't."
Kakashi looked at Narutos sad face.

[zawabr]

hey! that´s a huge chapter! :D ehhhhhhh

[shadow_sand]

another masterpiece 10/10

[NarutoSasukeSakura]

thank you! thats all for tonight though. :D

[Phatback]

so u want me to start hosting the stories etc etc etc if u would like to just give me a pm thx. And i loved this chapter it was long are u gonna say who made chunin and hew didnt ?????????????????????????

[ninja_sakura19]

waaaahh!!! o.o all those chapters r soooo goood!! :O !! hehehe keep writing more good chapters hehe :D maybe if it's really that good u could publish it :D

[zawabr]

hehe... more and more people are coming here.... that´s the proof....this is the best fanfic of this forum! :D

[NarutoSasukeSakura]

Thanks everyone! :)
Of course i'm going to eventually tell you passes the chuunin test!:D :p


Chapter 253
Passed or Failed? The Final Test!
Part 2

There was no answer, and they continued walking.
"We decided to tell you who passes the chuunin test tomorrow morning." Kakashi jumped away, and Naruto walked inside.
He looked outside the window detestfully. He hated knowing that he was no match for Itachi, Orochimaru, Kabuto, or even Sasuke.
Naruto sighed. He had to calm down. He didn't want to turn out like Sasuke. He layed down on his bed, and stared at the ceiling. sasukes sharingan eyes came into his head. Sasuke acually had wanted to kill me. On the hospital rooftop even. And still the question remained. Why exactly did Sasuke want to kill me? Naruto pondered on the thought, rolling over to his side. All he said is that...Thats more of the reason to kill you. After we talked about team 4. Naruto clenched his teeth together. Kakashi-sensei is right. there was barely any way of finding Sasuke. How do you find someone if you don't know where they are?

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"I really don't know why you wanted my little brother. He is weak." Itachi looked at Orochimaru curiously, and mysteriously. "But I doubt thats the reason you wanted Kisame and me to come here. I'll give you five minutes before I kill you."
"Your right, thats not the reason I wanted you to come here." He looked at Kisame and Itachi. "I found out that the Akatsuki organization needed the demon fox sealed within...a certain...boy. Named Uzumaki Naruto."
Itachis eyes flickered up to Orochimaru.
Orochimaru smiled. "The thing is, you need the Kyuubi, and you don't know how. And Uchiha Sasuke has requested that I get that boy for him. So how about we have a deal?"
"How would you even know about this? You left the Akatsuki about 10 years ago." Kisame said.
"I have my own ways."
"What sort of deal?" Said Itachi.
"You bring the boy to me." Orochimaru said. "And I will take Kyuubi from him. I think I might have a technqiue that will work."
Kisame scoffed. "You can't even move your arms. How are you supposed to do a technique?"
"Kabuto is almost positive that he has a technique that will work. He has been studying medical treatment for them for a while. He's going to perform the surgery on my arms in a week. Even if I can't do the technique, Kabuto can learn it."
"Its a deal. When do we need to bring you the kid?" itachi said.
"In about a month."

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"Naruto!!!" Sakura pounded on the door.
Naruto walked to the door, opened it, still in his pajamas and in his night cap.
"We did it! We passed the chuunin test!" Sakura hugged Naruto. "We already have a mission!" She smiled.
"Yes! I did it!" Naruto grinned at her. "What sort of mission?"
"Our food is running low, so we have to go buy some from another village."
Naruto looked at her. "Thats boring."
Sakura frowned. "No-but some others are coming too."
"Who?"
"Neji and Hinata."
"Ah-really? When do we have to go?"
"oh-not for a while. At the end of next week."
"Hey, hey, Sakura. Did all of the Genins pass?"
"Oh-yes, they did. We're having a small ceremony pretty soon for our family and friends. They said to dress casual, and to meet outside the academy school. They're just going to congratulate us, and then we're going to eat together. So get ready. I'll wait."
"Right!" Naruto went back inside, and changed.

Naruto came out of the house.
"How come your not wearing your regular clothes?" Sakura asked. Naruto had on some shorts, and a regular dark t-shirt.
"I like this better." Naruto said hands on the back of his head.
Sakura smiled. "Me too."
"Well...Let's go see every one!" Naruto grinned.

[NarutoSasukeSakura]

wah! AWESOME! Thats super long! hehe. Just goes to show how much i love you guys. :p :D :)

[zawabr]

hehe...more and more interesting! :D

[Inactive nathan]

finished chapter 236 :). took me long enough i might add ^_^.
i think we are waiting for some place to host the stuff. it would be nice if someone that knows about building sites could make something for us... good i dea, huh? :D

[NarutoSasukeSakura]

Chapter 254
Finally! We are Chuunins!


"Iruka-sensei!" Naruto yelled and waved to him, once they arrived at the school.
"Hey, Naruto." Iruka said, he smiled. "Congratulations on becoming chuunin."
"Thanks!" Naruto grinned. "Next week I get to go on a mission!" He turned around. "fuzzy eyebrows!"
Rock Lee turned around. "Naruto-kun! How are you?"
"good."
"Have you seen Sakura-chan?" He almost whispered, leaning into Naruto mysteriously.
"Over there." Naruto pointed over to Sakura, who was talking with Ino.
"Ah-Kakashi." Iruka said.
"Hey. Congratulations Naruto."
Naruto smiled. "Thank you kakashi-sensei."
"Congratulations all new Chuunins!" Tsunade said loudly. Everyone stopped talking. "I expect you all to be great shinobi for Konoha. You can now go on some missions alone, even some harder ones. Your jounin teacher will still train you, and go on some harder missions with you. So chuunins are still being trained, until they become a jounin. Everyone enjoy the meal."

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Thats it for that chapter. I justed wanted to show that they celabrate a bit, yadda, yadda. Hope you liked it. I have a great great great chapter for you...but when i shall release it...is unknown. It will be later tonight, or tommorrow. Hope u enjoyed these ones. :D

[Phatback]

lol nice 1 a long 1 and a med 1 in a day i feel touched lol there great I cant wait for more

[shadow_sand]

good chapters. you can host images at imageshack. or devianart

[ChakraMoldedGuy]

Hahaha! I'm CD-writing all the mangas right now!

[Zmozie]

No chapters today?:(

[NarutoSasukeSakura]

yes! of course theres a chapter today!
thanks everyone. :)

Chapter 255
The Mission Begins!

*About a week or two later...*
"Naruto! its time to go! Everyone is waiting for u!" Sakura yells.
Neji looks up at Naruto's house with no expression, and Hinata blushes, and looks at the ground.
"I'm coming Sakura-chan!" Naruto burst out of his house. "Let's go!"

"How long does it take to get to...whereever we're going?" Naruto asks.
"Its going to take somewhere around one day. We're going to a villages field, where we have permission, to pick up some food. Mainly sacks of rice. We're doing it for one of the markets on Konoha." Sakura said. "We'll be camping at night, putting up our own camp."
"Hn." Neji nodded his head. "Hinata-san, are you all right?"
"Y-yes."
"it's just that you keep looking at NAruto, and not talking." He remarked.
Hinata turned a deeper shade of red.
Naruto looked behind him, walking with his hands on the back of his head. He looked at Hinata a little, then shrugged, and turned back around.
Sakura smiled at Hinata and Naruto.

*At Sunset*

"Naruto-you and Hinata go get firewood. neji and me will set up camp."
"Aye!" Naruto started walking. "Coming Hinata-san?" He asked behind his shoulder.
"Y-yes...Naruto-kun."
Once they were out of evesdropping, Sakura turned to Neji. "When do you think Naruto will stop being so thick headed?" She mutters, her eyes dim with disappointment. "He's really blind."
Neji began setting up a tent, and smiled to himself.
A few minutes later, Naruto and Hinata came back. They each had an armful of sticks.
Sakura waved NAruto over to her when Hinata went to Neji.
"What did you and Hinata talk about?" She whispered casually, finishing the tent.
naruto leaned closer, and threw Hinata a confused look. "She doesn't talk much."
They started up the fire, when night fell, and the fire blazed in their eyes, as they started eating some rice.
"I...I..." Hinata started. Everyone turned to her. She blushed again, and looked down. "Naruto-kun...your clothes...they look nice..."
Naruto gave her a even more confused look then gave her a huge grin. "Thanks Hinata-san! The orange clothing always made me to hot. This is much easier to move in." he grinned again. he had on a dark shirt, tanish shorts, and the regular ninja sandels. His ninja supplies were in his backpack.
Neji smiled softly at Hinata, who was looking into the deep fire with the smallest of a smile too.

***

"Thank you." They all said, taking two large bags of rice from the owner. They paid him, and left.

"Theres only three others..." Kisame said, as they watched Naruto and the others from afar.
"Yes. Lets be thankful they're away from the village some, and theres no jounins. They probably thought Uzumaki Naruto would be fine since hes with his peers." Itachi said. "Though they're still going to put up a fight, even though it will be a worthless one."

The afternoon carried on...

"Should we go now?" Kisame asked impatiently.
"Yes."
They appeared before Naruto, Sakura, Hinata, and Neji.
Kisame took his sword out.
Naruto became tense, remembering them from his last visit. And what they did to Sasuke. They defeated Kakashi. He glared at them, and made sure he was in front of everyone.
"Uzumaki NAruto your coming with us." Itachi said.
"..." He stared at them surprised, and in disbelief.
"We have your friend." Kisame said.
Naruto looked at him, and his eyes widened. They had Hinata. They were fast.
"Come with us...Or she dies." Kisame lifted the sword, and started to swing it.
"NO!" Naruto started running toward her. He was going to be to late.

[Phatback]

good one. will she die? So tense lol i am still sad that choji died *weeps* anywayz keep em coming

[ninja_sakura19]

eeep.. the poor girl o.o
haha keep going ^_^

[shadow_sand]

another hit!! I hope neji and naruto pull of some cool justu. Anyways stop and read elite union some time

[Inactive nathan]

i agree with shadow sand :) my prediction exactly :D
btw like i said i finished the 2nd fanfic manga now im working on the first. im going to send the 2nd to sakura naruto susuke later today. i hope ill finish going over it with a pen b4 2005 :P

[zawabr]

oh my! always in the good part.....well.... i ´ll just wait... :D

[NarutoSasukeSakura]

thanks everyone! i'll finish up this chapter later today! :)

[Kajol]

Great, fantasic, superurp LOVE IT!!!
What a GREAT writer you are. KEEP UP!!!
Can't wait to see what is next!!!! :)

[NarutoSasukeSakura]

Chapter 255
The Mission Begins!
PART 2


Before NAruto relized what he was doing, he had grabbed Hinata.
Itachi studied Naruto. "It looks like your demon fox powers can come in handy." His eyes narrowed. Hes also grown alot stonger. Hes made very quick process.
Naruto set down Hinata, and glared at Itachi and Kisame. "Get out of here!"
Kisame smiled sickly. "Your coming with us."
Naruto said nothing. Neji stepped up next to Naruto.
Neji looked at Kisame with hate. He was obviously mad about how he had taken Hinata like that.
"Byakugan!"
"You picked up some interesting friends, Uzumaki Naruto. Shame they're going to die." Kisame chuckled.
"Shut up!" Naruto got ready to fight. He jumped, and tried to punch Kisame.
Kisame dodged easily, and hit narutos back with the back of his sword.
"Ah!" Naruto fell, but got up quickly. Neji got eyecontact with him, and he nodded. They both went for Kisame at the same time. Neji got a good kick on Kisanes lower leg.
Itachi stepped in, and looked right into Nejis eyes.

[zawabr]

again?!?!?!
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
;)

[Phatback]

sigh a bit short but whatevery hopefully another to make up for it :)

[NarutoSasukeSakura]

Chapter 255
The Mission Begins!
PART 3

Neji screamed, and put his head to his hands. Naruto spun around. "Neji!" He froze. Pictures of Sasuke screaming at the hotel filled his mind.
"Stop it!" He yelled, his eyes still on Neji.
"Ne-Ne-Neji-kun?" Hinata said, barely over a whisper.
NAruto sprinted toward Itachi, making sure he didn't look directly into his eyes.
He tried punching Itachi, but Itachi put out his own hand stopping it. He looked over at Naruto.
It was like thoughts started rushing through his heads, and he had no control over it.
Sasuke looked at him. "More of the reason to kill you." His sharingans seemed to dance in his eyes. "I will kill you this time...I promise...I will."
Naruto gasped for breath, seeming to suffacate. Sasuke all of a sudden was in front of him, holding him up by the throat with one hand. Naruto began coufing, and then he relized when he opened his eyes that he was on the ground on all fours. It took a while to focus, and he was still breathing hard, trying to get his breathing to work properaly.
He cringed. Sasuke was...The wind blew, and Narutos hair rustled around. Nobody talked for a while.
Someone grabbed Naruto, flinging him over his shoulder.
It was Kisame. "Lets just go." He was starting to get impatient again.
Naruto jumped down. "Just give up already." Kisame scoffed. He took out the sword again. "I'm starting to get annoyed by him..."
"No. Orochimaru said he wanted him in back in one piece. Otherwise, the deal on our half is anulled." Itachis eyes flashed dangerously.
"Deal?" Naruto asked. He became more louder, and angrier. "What deal?"
"We get the demon fox inside you." His eyes flashed again. "And Sasuke and Orochimaru gets you."
"Sasuke..."
"No Naruto!" Sakura ran up to him. "Don't go!"
"I..." He looked at Hinata, who was healing Neji.
"Don't go!" Sakura said again, shaking her head. Tears started welling up in her eyes. "Konoha can't withstain another ninja leaving!"
"It doesn't matter. Uzumaki Naruto has no chance at beating us. He's weak." Kisame said.
Naruto threw a nasty look at him. "Lets find out." He was shaking with anger.
Sakura looked at him. "You've lost it." She whispered. "Don't do it."
Naruto kept looking at Kisame. Kisame just scoffed again.

[shadow_sand]

This is great!! But I think Itachi is a little out of character. Why is he acknowledging naruto's strength??? He could kill him couldn't he?? Oh well, 9.9/10. I am also afraid to admit that I can't help with the manga, since I'm better at drawing my own characters. If you had made up ones.....mabye. Anyway more elite union chapters are up. you can go check it out

[Phatback]

This is great!! But I think Itachi is a little out of character. Why is he acknowledging naruto's strength??? He could kill him couldn't he?? Oh well, 9.9/10. I am also afraid to admit that I can't help with the manga, since I'm better at drawing my own characters. If you had made up ones.....mabye. Anyway more elite union chapters are up. you can go check it out

I agree to this fact it is a beat wierd of itachi to act like that and also i see the forsahdow *cough* naruto kiks kisames @ss*cough* lol anyways 9/10

[zawabr]

it doesnt´t matter... the chapter is great! :D
like the name say...fanfic...
there is so many absurds fanfic... this is the fanfic wich most like with naruto... so some things different ´ll not be wrong ;) ...

[Inactive nathan]

i think you should edit that one a bit... im not telling u, im just putting inm y two cents. i dont think he would really say that and even if it is a fanfic please try to stay with reality like you have done so far :). hey zawbar are u working with us? i still dont have any idea whos working with us O_O...

[NarutoSasukeSakura]

Bellium is nathan.
THanks for ur honesty guys-I'm gonna edit it right away. Check it out. :)

[Phatback]

are you going to do one-two today btw i like the edit lol

[zawabr]

i think you should edit that one a bit... im not telling u, im just putting inm y two cents. i dont think he would really say that and even if it is a fanfic please try to stay with reality like you have done so far. hey zawbar are u working with us? i still dont have any idea whos working with us O_O...

no :D... i already say the other time ;)... i don´t know how to draw manga... :( ...that´s sad...


**btw...the chapter was good...but with this changes...this is better than the old!**

[ninja_sakura19]

heheh o.o;; i can't wait to read what happens, poor sakura ^_^;; haha (I like Sakura tho..she's cool) :D

[Inactive nathan]

hmmm whats bellium is nathan mean? i didnt really understand that anyway...
well in any case i like the edit. did we get a place to store the mangas yet? maybe we could build a site for it like i said previously... with its own forum and all.

[zawabr]

hey i would like to help a build a site... i know dreamweaver.. not HTML code...
but i´m having a hard time at college...:D

[jdockins]

Why does it take so long for you to update your chapters? I really enjoi reading them and it would be awsome if you could post like 2 a day. I hope thats not asking too much.

[NarutoSasukeSakura]

Chapter 256
Hinatas Anger!
Part 1

"Can't we just take the kid?" Kisame said, bothered.
Itachi looked at him. "I have nothing against it."
"Good. Then we'll jsut take u right away." Kisame all of a sudden appeared right before Naruto. Again, they had great speed. He punched NAruto in the stomach with great force, which made Naruto fly backwards quite a ways.
"Naruto-kun!" Hinata said, rushing over to him.
Kisame began walking over to them lazily. Naruto sat up, winded. Hinata was sitting on her knees.
"Naruto-kun. Are you alright?" She asked. Naruto nodded his head slowly, then looked up at Kisame, who was in front of them.
Hinata glared at Kisame. Her eyes turned light purple as she looked at him. Jumping up, she tried kicking him in the head.
Naruto looked at Hinata. How long would she last?
"ah!" Hinata fell down at the side of Naruto, and got up again, trying to attack Kisame. Naruto stood up slowly, then ran over, helping hinata attack Kisame.
Punch. Missed. Kick. Blocked. NAruto became frusterated. His feet hit the dirt, but he immediatly bounced back. Kick. Again, Kisame was blocking every blow Hinata and himeself attacked.
"Kage Bunshin No Jutsu!" 10 Narutos appeared, and one of them acually hit Kisame, sending him flying backwards this time.
"Your now just getting annoying." Kisame said, as he stood up.
He came back, easily took Hinata out, as she layed on the ground.
"Hinata-san!" Naruto yelled. She didn't get back off the ground.
Something hit Naruto hard, he fell down, and didn't get up either. Kisame threw NAruto over his shoulder.
"Lets go bring him to orochimaru." Kisame said. He and Itachi started going inot the forest, jumping from tree to tree.
Sakura stood still, the wind blowing. She had a hand over to lip. Staring at the ground.
Naruto...Naruto! tears welled up in her eyes. I need to get to kakashi-sensei and hokage tsunade! She ran over to Hinata, and began healing her. Hinata opened her eyes slwoly, then sat up.
"Wheres Naruto-kun?" Her eyes widened with fright as she looked around, not seeing itachi, Kisame, or Naruto.
"We have to get tsunade-sama!" sakura said. "Help me heal Neji!"
They rushed over to Neji, and both tried their hardest to heal him. He opened his eyes.
"Can you sit up, Neji-kun?" hinata asked. He sat up, very slowly, and looked into the distance. "What happened...?"
Sakura exchanged glances with hinata. "We should get back to Konoha quickly."
They each put an arm around Neji, lifting him up.

[ninja_sakura19]

o.o; wow.. this is good haha! ^_^;;

[NarutoSasukeSakura]

thank ya ninja-sakura! :D

[zawabr]

wow! better and better! this is a awesome chapter!

[Phatback]

ya it is getting good i wish tho that naruto kicked kisames @$$ and itachi had to beat him :(

[NarutoSasukeSakura]

don't worry...Itachi will have his action soon enough.. WAH HA HA! ;)

[jdockins]

Then please wont you post MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!! I really like how the story is evolving. You should just make one insanely long chapter that is like 5 chapters. That would ROCK!!! :D

[Phatback]

Then please wont you post MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!! I really like how the story is evolving. You should just make one insanely long chapter that is like 5 chapters. That would ROCK!!! :D
are y cr@zy that would take a day and a dought she lol would have teh time to do it but it would be coo.........but unlikley

[NarutoSasukeSakura]

ah-thank you, new reader. needless to say...i don't have much time on weeknights. I have a project due tomorrow, and i still haev to write a few more pages about a war...im supposed to be typing it now...hehe :) thanks everyone again! tomorrows friday! so expect a long one! :D

[Phatback]

ah-thank you, new reader. needless to say...i don't have much time on weeknights. I have a project due tomorrow, and i still haev to write a few more pages about a war...im supposed to be typing it now...hehe :) thanks everyone again! tomorrows friday! so expect a long one! :D


a long one will maek me happy lol i have been reading this sinse the begging lol well i hope it is a great action filled chapter *gets *happy* :) :D

[zawabr]

ya it is getting good i wish tho that naruto kicked kisames @$$ and itachi had to beat him :(

haha.. totally agree! why he doesnt´use the kyuubi chakra (i think this is how write...)... he already knows..... :D

[NarutoSasukeSakura]

Chapter 257
The return to Konoha!
Part 1

*Heave, heave.* Sakura and Hinata reached Konoha at dusk, running out of breath. Neji was still limply at their sides.
"Hinata...We...Have to get Tsunade-sama..." She breathed more. "Lets lay Neji-kun right here for now." They set him down by a tree and ran toward the Hokages place.
They reached the door. "TSUNADE-SAMA!" Sakura yelled as she burst through the doors.
Kakashi, Jiriaya, Tsunade, Iruka, and the other jounin senseis looked at Hinata and Sakura. The talking in the room ceased immediatly.
"What is it Sakura." Tsunade narrowed her eyes. "What happened?"
"We met Uchiha Itachi, and another named Kisame ont he way back." She burst out crying. "they-they-took N-Naruto!" Tears poured down her face, and she covered it with her hands and hiccuped.
Hinata looked at the floor, her eyes welling with tears.
Tsunade, Kakashi and Jiriaya stood up, reacting the quickest.
"What area did they head, Sakura?" Tsunade commanded.
Sakura was crying hard, so Hinata answered.
"They went into the forest...northeastern."
Thats the same way Sasuke was heading...
"Explain the whole situation to us." Jiriaya said.
"Neji-kun is injured though..." Hinata said quietly.
"I'll get him." Gai stood up, and had Hinata accompany him.
"Now sakura...please tell us what happened." Kakashi said. He looked at her stressed, and angered.
She nodded, and began.

***

"Urgh..." Naruto opened his eyes slowly. This reminded his when he was with Kakashi after Sasukes battle...
He remembered where he was.
Naruto started struggling against the strong hand that was holding him against Kisames shoulder.
Kisame almost dropped him. "Quit it kid."
They all stopped, and Itachi watched as Kisame began to tie the ninja rope around NAruto (though with great difficulty since Naruto was trying to escape from his grasp).
Kisame finished, and looked at Itachi. "He's a pain. WHy don't you take care of him now?"
Itachis eyes flashed over to Kisame. When they turned back to Naruto, his eyes narrowed suspiciously.
There was a red chakra glow around Naruto.

[NarutoSasukeSakura]

i think i'll leave u at there...hehe :D

[ninja_sakura19]

wow.. interesting.. o.o;; hehe XD

[shadow_sand]

yep. next part please.

[Phatback]

lol ya yes plz i think i smell a fight........lol anywayz i think it is gettign really good 10/10

[NarutoSasukeSakura]

good smelling Phatback! lol :D

Chapter 257
The return to Konoha!
Part 2


Kisame followed Itachi's eyes. "What the hell..."
Naruto was still looking normal. There was just enormous red chakra.
Itachi peered at Naruto knowingly. He'd learned to control the kyuubi's powers...
The clearish strong string started to break when Naruto stood up. He was NOT going to let these people control him. It broke completely, and within a second, Kisame had felt a huge blow to the face, sending him backwards forceably. There was a crunch as he hit a large tree. Kisame stood up slowly, and took out his sword, and started at Naruto.
He swung the sword. Naruto jumped back. He swung again with all his might. There was a small "poof" and Naruto disappeared.
"What!?" Kisame exploded.
"U-zu-ma-ki-Na-ru-to Two thosand!" Naruto yelled.
Itachis eyes looked at the one Naruto remaining after all of the NArutos hit Kisame. He had seen Naruto do all the mass clones.
*Flashback of a few minutes ago... Shows Naruto when he hits Kisame in the face. Right after "Mass Kage Bunshin no Jutsu!" Then NAruto left one of his clones, while he went up in the trees.*
Naruto looked at the fallen Kisame. Then he began to move...really slowly. Until he stood up.

[NarutoSasukeSakura]

i forgot what you call the mass kage bunshin no jutsu...i wanted it to be the mass one, so i just put mass in front of it. haha:D

[NarutoSasukeSakura]

Chapter 257
The return to Konoha!
Part 3

"There was just no way to stop them." Sakura said sadly.
Tsunade exchanged glances with Jiriaya.
"This...isn't good."
"What should we do, Tsunade?" Jiriaya asked.
Tsunade sighed, and closed her eyes. She looked up at the ceiling. "I'm not sure yet. But whatever we do...We have to do quickly...."
There was a moments silence.
"Kakashi...I'm going to have you, Gai, and Jiriaya go after Naruto."
"Thats not enought people." Jiriaya said. "We couldn't even defeat Orochimaru with us two."
"I'm not finished, Jiriaya-san." Tsunade said sharply. "Isuma." She turned to him. "Your going too..." She looked out the dark window...Who else? "I'm going to have Mitarashi Anko come too. She has been taught some healing techniques...and shes good at fighting."
"Is that wise, tsunade?" Kakashi asked. "She used to be one of Orochimaru's apprentices i believe...What if she does something foolish?"
"She won't. Please leave the deciding to me, Kakashi." Tsunade said. "I want you to leave at dawn tomorrow, so you can get some sleep. Sakura and Hinata will be showing you where to find the place they took NAruto. Kakashi, use Pakkun, and you'll be able to track them down."
They all nodded. Tsunade stood up. "I'll make sure all the shinobi included in this are informed. All of you should get some sleep, and get ready to depart tomorrow right outside the village."

***During the night***

Shows Kakashi at his house.
Hatake Kakashi stared at the wall, and his gaze slowly drifted downwards to his pictures of his old team, and the picture of himself, Naruto, Sasuke, and Sakura. His eyes lingered on Sasuke. Then Naruto. The team...is definetly falling apart.
He got out of his bed, and left.

Kakashi looked sadly down at the stone, which held many names. "I don't know what to do anymore...Yondaime."

[zawabr]

do you know how much pages of fanfic has until now?

Font: Tahoma, Size 10 .... 25 pages! That´s a lot of chapters....how u have so much imagination? hehe! i thought naruto gonna defeat kisame at part 3....a little suspense...:D

[Bellium]

Ah, love your ending touch with kakashi :)

[Inactive nathan]

well its called taiyju kage bunshin no jutsu.
and btw i lik ethe suspense alot :). well in any case i know what it feels like not to have enough time to do stuff... poor me :D well anyways. everyone say hello to EL_Flavio, my sister, who has generously agreed to help me with the drawing.. and shes pretty good if i do say so myself ^_^. Well bellium now we have some1 new and.. is there any way to contact u other than PM? maybe msn or icq?

well in anycase... zawabr if you could make a stie that would be real cool :) let us know if u can do anything for us.
(this is getting pretty exiting ^_^)

btw do u guys like my signature? :D

[zawabr]

well its called taiyju kage bunshin no jutsu.
and btw i lik ethe suspense alot :). well in any case i know what it feels like not to have enough time to do stuff... poor me :D well anyways. everyone say hello to EL_Flavio, my sister, who has generously agreed to help me with the drawing.. and shes pretty good if i do say so myself ^_^. Well bellium now we have some1 new and.. is there any way to contact u other than PM? maybe msn or icq?

well in anycase... zawabr if you could make a stie that would be real cool :) let us know if u can do anything for us.
(this is getting pretty exiting ^_^)

btw do u guys like my signature?

k! ah and your sig is pretty cool! i liked i lot! :D

[NarutoSasukeSakura]

25 pages? Whoa....
And its cool because we've reached...Over 200 posts, and over 2,000 views. Very cool, and I'd like to thank everyone for reading, because if u didn't, i'd quit writing. :D
Thanks again! ^_^

Chapter 258
Fight With Itachi!?
Part 1

Kisame wobbled as he walked and stood, stumbling when he came over to Naruto.
He tried punching but missed almost everytime. Naruto grabbed Kisame's hand after one of his punches, and threw him over his shoulder.
Naruto turned his head toward Itachi. He clenched his teeth together, and his hands had turned into fists. Naruto turned his whole body toward to Itachi, and started to run.
His feet sunk into the ground as he ran, since he was running with such force, but it didn't slow him down. Naruto kicked with as much force as he could at Itachi, but Itachi grabbed his leg lazily, acting like Naruto was nothing.
"You can't control the complete powers of the nine tails." He said shortly. "Konohas ninjas are weak." Itachi easily flung NAruto.
Naruto flipped around in midair, and kicked off on a tree, landing about 20 feet from Itachi.
"Your weak." Itachi repeated.
Naruto glared at him, and clenched his teeth even harder. "Shut up!" The red chakra came back stronger. Naruto could feel it.

[zawabr]

25 pages? Whoa....
And its cool because we've reached...Over 200 posts, and over 2,000 views. Very cool, and I'd like to thank everyone for reading, because if u didn't, i'd quit writing. :D
Thanks again! ^_^

we have to thanks u for the wonderful fanfic.... no more days to wait the naruto manga or anime....we have your fanfic now! :D

[Phatback]

we have to thanks u for the wonderful fanfic.... no more days to wait the naruto manga or anime....we have your fanfic now! :D

I always trust my nose ...anywayz u got some grammar mistakes and i dont getr parts some parts of the chapters.....still i like 9/10

[NarutoSasukeSakura]

thanks zawabr expecially! :D
and thanks Phatback too. I think i fixed the parts u may have been confused about-thanks for bringing it to my attention. :)
Thanks loads again you guys, and i'll try to do a big one tomorrow!
Sorry-but I have a huge biology test tomorrow! *bites nails nervously* i better pass it...

[Chopstickx]

hi im a new reader ^_^ wow ur fic is really good ;)

[Taxidermy]

wow this rules keep writing!

[Inactive nathan]

i agree :) dont stop with all the suspense!

[NarutoSasukeSakura]

Thanks, to everyone!
And welcome new readers! :D I always like new readers! I'm glad you like it! :) Now to get on to the next part...Enjoy!

Chapter 258
Fight With Itachi!?
PART 2

Kakashi, Jiriaya, Gai, Asuma, and Anko started walking in the outskirts of Konoha. The sun had bearly risen on the bright blue day.
Kakashi held out a map. "I had Sakura show me on a map on where NAruto was taken." He said, pointing to the spot. Everyone nodded. "We'll probably arrive there in half an hour."

***

Naruto charged towards Itachi again. And again and again Itachi blocked them. Naruto hadn't even gotten one punch on him yet!
He went all out, trying just to hit Itachi, and he never did. He never expected Itachi to be this powerful...
"Kage Bunshin No Jutsu!" Naruto had everyone scatter. Every NAruto tried to punch or kick ITachi, but Itachi grabbed one NAruto, threw it in to another, which got rid of two of them. The rest he easily just kicked.
All of them were gone. Itachi narrowed his eyes.
"NOW!" All of a sudden a three other Naruto's grabbed on to Itachi, keeping him standing still. Naruto started running toward Itachi. "Rasengannn!"
The light of the rasengan glowed in Itachis eyes. "What?"

***

"Pakkun...please take this seriously." Kakashi said.
Pakkun sighed and nodded. "Though I'm disappointed you didn't bring the pink haired girl...I wanted to see if she changed her shampoo back."
Anko scoffed, crossing her arms, looking at the sky, in the other direction.
She remembered Uzumaki Naruto from the 2nd Exam. She looked at Jiriaya. "Let's go."
They all looked into the forest, and began their search.

[Chopstickx]

yay new chp :D

[ninja_sakura19]

whoo hoo! o.o;

[jdockins]

Do you think itachi knows what the rasengen is? Was he around with the 4th developed it?

[Kamie-San!]

good job! this is really good!!!!!! 10/10!

[NarutoSasukeSakura]

Thanks everyone again! ^_^ More new readers!

As for the rasengan...I don't think he does. Thats my thought...

Chapter 258
Fight With Itachi!?
PART 3

"GAH!" Kisame did something to Naruto, some technique, that had him crashing sideways into a tree. Taking out his sword, he struck the other two Narutos holding Itachi.
"What was that?" Kisame asked.
Itachi looked at Naruto, thinking deeply, but saying nothing. He all of a sudden looked up, his eyes looking into the distance. "Lets go. Shinobi are tracking us." He said shortly.
Naruto stood up, after his crash with a tree. He wobbled. Everything was fuzzy to him. He rocked back and forth, back and forth, until he fell down, crumpled on the ground.
"He's alive still. Thats pretty good..." Kisame said after picking Naruto up, throwing him over his shoulder. "Most guys die after that techinque." He flinched as he stepped on his right leg. "Damn...He injured me bad..."
"We don't have time." Itachi said, and they started off at a quicker pace. "We have to lose them." kisame nodded, and they jumped around in a wide circle, creating a trail of scents everywhere, in different directions.
Kisame chuckled, and they began off. That should hold them for a while...

***

'When are they going to get here?" He asked impatiently, mad at Orochimaru.
"they'll come when they get Uzumaki Naruto. Try to be patient, Sasuke." Orochimaru drawled.
Kabuto pushed his glasses up his nose, causing them to glare in the light. "We can still get in some training, Uchiha Sasuke."
Sasuke scoffed, and turned toward the window, glaring at everything outside. His hair was like it had always been, but instead of his regular clothes, he had on some long black pants, and a black t-shirt. He had sneakers on instead of the usual ninja sandels, and his eyes were darker, and more mysterious then ever. But more then ever...his eyes were murderous.

[NarutoSasukeSakura]

I'm gonna draw a picture of Naruto in his new clothes, and Sasuke in his new clothes... What do u think of Sasukes new look. sorta like Narutos...but its all black, and notice he has *ta-da!* SNEAKERS! ohhhhh. cool. And know had tennis-shoes. lol. hope u enjoyed, thats all for tonight! :)

[Chopstickx]

lol Sasuke has become goth boy :p
i can already imagine their new looks... :rolleyes:

[zawabr]

wow! i liked the new style of sasuke...
and thinking.... another fight between sasuke and naruto? can´t wait to the other chapter!

[ninja_sakura19]

hehehe I like that new clothes idea! ^^;; I like Sasuke wearing all black! make him look more cooler hehe :D

[NarutoSasukeSakura]

haha-and more EVILLLLL! haha. lol. :D no hes not goth! lol, cant u picture Sasuke with black saggy pants, with silver chairns on them, with a black sweatshirt? haha. maybe adding a black kakashi-mask on to his face as well...haha. im done drawing sasuke, now i gotta color him, and send him in! though im hitting the light switches for tonight! thansk everyone! :)

[Inactive nathan]

does it really matter if he knows? he just said "what?" meaning that he is surprised about the powerful jutsu, it doesnt have to mean that he knows what it is...
secondly, oruchimaru would have probably told them about narutos moves cuz hes working with them in this one.

[NarutoSasukeSakura]

Chapter 259
The Search for NAruto!


Pakkun stopped, sniffing deeply. He paused again, and looked up at Kakashi.
"What is it pakkun?" Kakashi asked.
"They've made scents, going in all different directions." He sniffed again. "its going to take a while to figure out which way they went. You guys sleep and rest, while I figure it out." Pakkun started sniffing again, and walking away.
Jiriaya nodded. "We're gonna rest here."

***

"Hatake-Kakashi." Kakashi woke up, and looked at Pakkun through the dark of the night.
'I've figured it out." Pakkun added, ready to start to leave. Kakashi got up, and woke the other.

***

"We're almost there." said Itachi, as the night went on. it was dark out, early morning.
Kisame grunted, his leg hurting more. He looked at the unconsciense naruto on his shoulder, and glared at him.
After another half hour of traveling, Itachi looked up, and saw a building type house. They stopped at the front door, and walked into the darkness.
"You here." A voice said. A pair of glasses shone it in the darkness.

[zawabr]

ah so shorts fanfic ... : (
where´s the big chapters?????

[NarutoSasukeSakura]

i love ur new sig. zawabr! :D
sry there isnt long ones :( but we got Harry Potter 3, and we're gonna watch it!
posty later tomorrow (and i have no school, so expect MEGA SUPER long ones. :)

[Chopstickx]

i love ur new sig. zawabr! :D
sry there isnt long ones :( but we got Harry Potter 3, and we're gonna watch it!
posty later tomorrow (and i have no school, so expect MEGA SUPER long ones. :)

yup thanksgiving break is finally here :D times going by so fast...before you know it its gonna be christmas!! ^^

[zawabr]

i love ur new sig. zawabr!
sry there isnt long ones :( but we got Harry Potter 3, and we're gonna watch it!
posty later tomorrow (and i have no school, so expect MEGA SUPER long ones.

hehe...dont´t sorry...i´m just kidding! i know you must be busy...end of year is a rush (i think this is how write).. i´m busy too with college things...;)

btw... thanks! i posted my new sig but i don´t have any comments.... :D

[Kamie-San!]

more more!!!
great chapter NarutoSasukeSakura-chan!
I LUV this fanfic! 10/10! ^_^

[NarutoSasukeSakura]

Chapter 259
The Search for NAruto!
PART 2

Kabuto walked over to them. "Orochimaru-sama and uchiha Sasuke are resting. You welcome to stay...This morning I will be doing Orochimaru-sama's surgery..." He started walking up the stairs, and Itachi, Kisame (with Naruto draped over his shoulder) followed him.
"Put Naruto-kun on that bed." Kabuto said, opening a door. it was more like a cot. It had no windows, and only had one candle burning for the light source.
Kabuto basically threw Naruto on the cot, and they all left, closing the door.
"You two, our guests, can sleep in that room-" Kabuto pointed to one on his left-"And that one." He pointed to one on his right.
The stairs curled around all the walls, like it was tower. It was damp, and the hallway was not lighted well. It only had some candles on the walls, like Narutos room he was staying in.
Though when Kisame and Itachi turned on a light switch in their rooms, there was a window, a nice sized bed, some lamps, and even a small restroom.

***

"Kakashi-kun..." Anko said, jumping next to Kakashi. The sun was just rising. "When will we get there?"
Kakashi looked at Pakkun. Pakkun sighed. "Around sunset this following day. We have a larger group, which makes us slower. And they set up all those scents back there, which slowed us down even more."
Anko didn't say anything, and continued jumping from tree to tree.
Asuma, as always, had a cigarette in the side of his mouth, and he blew a large puff of smoke as he sighed.
jiriaya went on silently, thinking deeply. Gai hadn't said anything the whole trip, as he never had much to think about except for Lee and how his next move would bring him to a higher then Kakashi.

***

"Guh..." Naruto's eyes flickered open. He sat up quickly, and looked around the room. A candle was next to him, on a small desk. He put his feet down on the ground, and grabbed the candle holder, walking over to the door. Naruto opened the door slowly, it creaked as it swung open. Right across from him on the stairs, was sasuke.
Naruto looked at Sasuke for a moment, with surprise on his face. Naruto started to open his mouth, but he stopped once he saw Sasukes expression. sasuke was glaring at him, his arms crossed across his chest. Naruto could only see half of his face, which was lit by the candle he was holding, and some of the candles on the wall.
Pure hate seemed to be hitting Naruto like knifes were being drived into him. sasuke looked like he hated Naruto MORE then he did last time. it didn't seem possible to Naruto.
Naruto looked at sasuke still, a twinge of hurt in his face. his eyes were sad, and he looked carefully at his ex-teammate, remembering a past thought.
Can you kill me calmly, sasuke?
The answer, Naruto knew now, was a defient yes.

[NarutoSasukeSakura]

hope u liked it...
I think i'm getting better at writing though, dont ya think? I talk about the surroundings more, and in my head, i could picture it clearly, as if i was watching the show. :)
What do u guys think about it?

[Chopstickx]

yea your writing is getting a lot more descriptive ^^ and its easier to imagine everything.

[zawabr]

hope u liked it...
I think i'm getting better at writing though, dont ya think? I talk about the surroundings more, and in my head, i could picture it clearly, as if i was watching the show. :)
What do u guys think about it?


true! it doesn´t have a image(manga), but i can see it clearly! very good! u don´t getting better... u always were good! ;)

[Phatback]

I agree the writing has been much better then normal keep up the good work it is really cathcing me on to the story 20/10 :D

[Kamie-San!]

hey Namia-san! great chapter again! i love ur fanfic soo much! ^_^ that was the best chapter yet in my opinion! i can help draw comics maybe...i'll pm u about it :)

[NarutoSasukeSakura]

wow, thanks everyone! :D yup, i got ur PM message, Kamie-san! whoa-cool! i love ur sig. ;)
Thanks again everyone:D and just so u guys remember, i probably wont be posting tomorrow since its Thanksgiving, but i will on Friday. and probably later tonight

[ninja_sakura19]

o.o wow cool~~ I love how Naruto meets Sasuke like that... o.o such hatred.. that's prob the best part hehe ^_^ ur writing is really good too :D keep it up!!

[Inactive nathan]

aaaaakkkkk SLOW DOWN PLEASE! i cant keep up with all these messages O_o.
well done... again... :P
can u show us that drawing of susuke? :D

[Phatback]

can u show us that drawing of susuke? :D

Yea, Can i c it to it i imagine it will be pretty good if you are a good drawer :D

[shadow_sand]

next part now.

[NarutoSasukeSakura]

ohohoh. im not that good of a drawer. i'll post it later today..though its bad haha:D

[NarutoSasukeSakura]

here it is....though remember...its not that good. lol-so dont be like-man, that sucks, to me because i already know. :D ur


http://photobucket.com/albums/v504/NarutoFanManga/
sry there so bad....i think i'm better at writing :o


Chapter 260
Silence
Part 1

Naruto found himself shifting uncomforably. sasuke wasn't glaring as much now, but he was still staring at him.
There were light footsteps echoing through the hall. Naruto looked up the stairs, to see Kabuto coming toward them.
Naruto glared at him, clenching his fists, ready to jump at him.
"Before you start anything stupid." Kabuto said, trying to calm down himself. "We will have...our chance." his glasses flashed dangerously as he took one last glare at Naruto before he walked past him. He also wanted to pay back Naruto for what happened with tsunade-sama.
Sasuke's eyes left Naruto, and he followed Kabuto. Naruto, stayed still a second, but then walked after Sasuke.
Naruto looked sadly at the stairs as he walked. Then his eyes shifted to the back of Sasuke. He didn't understand Sasuke, and he was having a difficult time, figuring out what to do. His sad eyes turned away from Sasuke and went to the walls. He was so confused. There was so many different kind of memories between them, that he didn't know which ones to believe anymore.
They all walked silently, not saying a word, until they reached the bottom of the stairs. they turned into a short hallway, and into a room. It was obviously the kitchen.
Kabuto took some things out of the fridge, and handed them to Sasuke and Naruto.
The rice rolls were cold in his hand, but he ate it anyways. Sasuke leaned against the counter as he ate his, his back to Naruto. At least he had finally stopped staring at Naruto.
Naruto studied him. Sasuke almost looked like the Sasuke he used to know. Naruto looked away once more, as he finished a sencond rice roll, and drank some water.
Sasuke finished. "Come with me." He started walking out the door, and into the bright daylight.
Naruto followed him. After all these weeks of preparing to get sasuke, he didn't feel like fighting him. Kakashi was right. sasuke wasn't, even if they beat him, going to come back to Konoha. If Naruto forced him, sasuke would just run away again.
"Why are you doing this?" Naruto asked, once they stopped. He was standing about 30 feet across from Sasuke.
Sasuke didn't answer.
"Why are you doing this?" Naruto said louder, almost yelling.
Sasuke just looked at him. "Your annoying." He cocked his head, arrogently.
Naruto clenched his teeth together angrily. "Thats not an answer!" He yelled. Naruto knew that was not the truth. The reason for Sasuke wanting to kill him could not be because he was just annoying. What was it?
Sasuke smirked slightly.
Naruto balled up his fists. He now wanted to fight Sasuke. though this time it would not be out of pity, sorrow, or of him trying to get the old sasuke back. He would fight him like an enemie. Because Sasuke was an enemie of Konoha now.
"What would you do...If you didn't have that seal Orochimaru gave you?" Narutos voice shook from being angry. "What would you do?" He was almost screaming at Sasuke.

[NarutoSasukeSakura]

i dont think that was the best chapter...but im sorta having writers block on how to word it...
What are your guys thoughts on it?

[ninja_sakura19]

it's really good O.o; erm..yah.. i dunno.. either haha XD

[Phatback]

it's really good O.o; erm..yah.. i dunno.. either haha XD

lol ya i kind of get the big picuture if you need help or advice pm me i would love to help :D

[shadow_sand]

I'm really good at writing fights. Can I write the sasuke vs. naruto fight??

[NarutoSasukeSakura]

er-uh. i think im gonna stick to the writing shadow-sand, if thats ok. because when i write, i sorta have a picture in my head of whats gonna happen in between, and all that kind of stuff. i think its gonna be one of my best parts yet.

thanks ninja-sakura, and phatback! i was sorta lost on ur comment though ninja sakura. but oh well. :)