My "Broken Team" Video

[Kahve]

Hey!
It actually features a Blonde Sakura that i, by misstake, created when using Invert... enjoy and please tell me if this sucks or not, need the feedback bad! :smile-big
Broken Team (http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members/members_videoinfo.php?v=77524)
Sure hope the URL works..


http://hem.bolina.hsb.se/ami/junk/blonde_sakura.JPG

[Vael]

Very interesting concept... how did you change the colors?

Oh, and how do I download this thing? :S I go to the page and there doesn't seem to be anywhere to actually get it from...

[batanga]

You need to register on AMV.org, then just click the LOCAL-link (in green).

I´ll edit when I´ve watched it.

+EDIT+
Hmmm, blonde sakura looks odd:oh well, it was actually quite nice. Too little action though. An' I didn´t like the overly used false-color thingy.

[Kahve]

It was suppose to be a sad video, not action .. guess it's a genre thing ..
Thanks for the comments in either case you guys :) Hope you got to download the video Vael!

[Valur]

ill download in a sec. im getting about 2 or 3 others now. so as soon as im done with them.. ill crit ya

EDIT: sorry it was midnight and i collapsed :P ill get them now

[Kahve]

Looking forward to it (or not) depending on your crit :D

[Valur]

I dont know what it was about your vid. I just really liked it. I like staind, but im pretty sure it was just the emotional connection you created with your vid.

The 5 things i think that make an AMV good (in order from most to least):

-Emotional Connection
-Story
-Quality
-Originality
-Editing (effects etc.)

And it had the top 4, the editing was pretty simple, but i think thats what the vid needed. No flashy smashy effects. So i feel like you've gotten a good level of each of the 5 ingredients :D

The song was nice. I've never heard and amv to that song, or even heard that particular staind song.

I think the middle of your video was the strongest. And possibly the very end. The other parts could have been better, just with shot selection i think. Maybe introducing the story. With slow, story AMV's its good to structure it like a movie... intro..problem... resolution(sometimes).

I dont have much else to say. THe aspect was a little off.. parts seemed stretched wide.. im thinking that was from your subtitle removal.

Overall. I'd give it an 8/10

Nice work. I'll add this one to my collection :D

[Kahve]

I most commend you on the most extensive "amateur" review i've ever seen online ..
Not just "heey, i liked it... Rock On" but you did it all the way huh? :)
I am so satisfied to actually read creative critisism for once, and i know what i most improve on my videos .. you have given me a great boost here friend, i thank you!
And, this is one rep-give that i will actually feel PROUD of giving :)

Thanks again, keep doing what you're doing, because we need it.. i downloaded you're video last-night into my "dump" drive.. if i can find it, i'll tell you what i think! :P

[diamondninja]

downloading it now and from what valor says i think i'll like it ^^ i'll repost or edit if no one else posted once i have seen it.

[Kahve]

Appreciate it buddy http://members.lycos.co.uk/asdfdsa213/index_files/thumbsup.gif

[diamondninja]

hehe no problem ^^ and yeah i liked it alot... although it didn't have alot of really crazzy effects some of the re-coloring things were nice.. sometimes it seemed alittle weird specially how it changed sakuras hair and inos and such.. but it also seemd ok at the same time... i really liked the flow of it only i think once did it seem like the video hiccuped or anything and that might have verry well been my computer (dose that after a few days of being on XD) and also i like how you had it were there was never anyone talking or moving their lips while it was going.. while that never bugs me too much sometimes it's just really kills the setting nad emotion and you kept it really nice with that. thats definately one of my faverite parts :thumbs and yeah all together i really liked it and the clips and everything seemed really well put together and the song too was pretty cool... can't really thank of much else to say XD but yeah great job all in all i'll give ya a 9/10 ^^ mainly casue the color change thing seemed odd but it was definately not bad, just a little different wich is nice.

[Kahve]

And also i like how you had it were there was never anyone talking or moving their lips while it was going..
Big thanks to you too friend, for the extensive comments about my video :)
I've done several videos in my days (this one is my first NARUTO video) and the main quality mantra i try to achive is to not show moving lips .. nor sub-titles.. it just doesn't fit in a video? It really makes or break a video for me :)

Thank you buddy, you give really good critisism, and you really deserve some rep aswell! :tem

[SaSuKeViEiRa]

coll sakura its looks like super saiyan sakura =P xD!

[Kahve]

Heh, thank you buddy! :)

[Jones]

large DL so it will take a while but seeing a blonde sakura will be kind of cool. get away from the usual pink.

[Kahve]

Heh, thank you! I'm looking forward to your comments on it? :)

[Majikman]

Well it looks like it should be good, I'll be back with an "in depth" review after I download.

[Kahve]

Appriciate it :)
And speaking of download... i'm proud to say that my video runs on 750 + downloads now :)

[Ichitootah]

Wow. Very emotional. I like how it's a bit more slow paced, it's not just trying to give you seizures like lots of the videos around. :P

Blonde Sakura looks ok, the false colors look slightly overused but its not a big deal. I'm keeping it. Good job. :)

[Kahve]

Thank you for the excellent critique! :)

[tinabot]

that's pretty cool :)

[Kahve]

Why thank you :)

[Avgac]

oh she is a blond...i guess that explains a lot :P
btw cool vid:)

[Kahve]

I'm thinking about converting the entire series so that she's blonde, trough and trough :smile-big

[Majikman]

Sorry it took me so long to reply, my computer AND my internet were screwed up so I couldn't download it till today... anyway,

I really like the music video, I'd give a 9 out of ten. It dropped a point in my book for two reason: 1. Personal thing of mine, I don't like the up and down wide angle, it just stretches things and makes them look funked up. 2. at the very end Naruto's hair turns pink, and I don't think its the best look for him in the world.

Besides those awesome vid two thumbs up :thumbs :thumbs

[JannetK]

THE HELL! The blonde Sakura is much better than the regular one! :o

( I´m serious )

[nArUhInA EnGiE]

hi guys im new here in the forum... can u give me some of ur naruhina xD piczz pls.. i beg u

NaRuHiNa \m/ rUlEzZ

[SANINS RULE]

man
seriously
blonde is not sakura

[SANINS RULE]

her name flippin cmes from a pinky red flower