View Full Version : Colors of Life And Death (Starts after manga chap 232)
Songbird21
05-22-2005, 05:49 PM
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2052337/1/
Here's my fanfic titled "Colors of Life And Death". It's 37 chapters, which average around 2500 words each.
Here's the plot summary: Naruto and Sasuke are honorary brothers, but Naruto is taken by Orochimaru. Through Oro's gruesome torture, Naruto's chakra will begin to change into something only ever heard of...in legends. NaruHina, SakuLee
Rotc Girl
03-29-2006, 11:20 PM
So when is 29 coming out? Great story by the way.
Songbird21
03-31-2006, 07:09 AM
So when is 29 coming out?Should be within the next few days. I'm trying to figure out some plot devices and then I should be back on schedual.
Great story by the way.Thank you. :)
Pyre's Plight
04-01-2006, 12:44 AM
Probably the best Naruto fanfic I've ever read, or one of them anyway. Keep up the awesome work. And don't just dissapear like most great people on the internet...
Songbird21
04-01-2006, 02:06 AM
Probably the best Naruto fanfic I've ever read, or one of them anyway. Keep up the awesome work.Thank you. :)
And don't just dissapear like most great people on the internet...Great people? *Blush* I'll defanitly finish this fic. In fact there will prolly be a few sequals and side stories. :)
Rotc Girl
04-10-2006, 09:17 PM
Just read 29, w00t. It's great. Please finish the story and not leave us hanging like some authors.
Songbird21
04-10-2006, 09:21 PM
Please finish the story and not leave us hanging like some authors.Lol. Don't worry chapter 30 is already 700 words in. :)
Rotc Girl
04-10-2006, 09:26 PM
Yeah *does happy dance* when will it be up?
Songbird21
04-11-2006, 02:53 AM
Hopefully by the weekend. :)
Deranged
04-11-2006, 11:04 AM
Hey, just read the first chapter and this is really good. The writing is brilliant and I wish there were more authors like you out there. I'm a slow reader so it'll take me a while to read it all but with so many chapters, i'll still be happy
Abscon
04-11-2006, 06:34 PM
Wow... "worships"..
I wish i could write like you.. It allways seems that other people get the great ideas :P I loved the part about Naruto and Sasuke being brothers..
If all of this was original, you could have published it.. And i would have bought it :D
By all means.. Write more... Please:)
Songbird21
04-11-2006, 09:24 PM
Hey, just read the first chapter and this is really good. The writing is brilliant and I wish there were more authors like you out there.Thank you very much! smile-big Oh, and I checked out your fic in your sig. I've only read the first chapter, but I'm lovin it. :)
Wow... "worships"..LOL. :)
I wish i could write like you.. It allways seems that other people get the great ideas :P I loved the part about Naruto and Sasuke being brothers..
If all of this was original, you could have published it.. And i would have bought it :Dsmile-big Hope you'll still think that way if I get the novel I'm writing published. I tell ya, it's so much harder than writing fanfic. *dies* Lol.
Abscon
04-12-2006, 04:31 AM
Whats your book about?.. Hope you get it published...
Are you a professional writer, or havent you quit you day job yet? :P
Songbird21
04-12-2006, 01:42 PM
Whats your book about?..:) It's called Daughter of Atlantis. Here's the summary: Samantha is a 22 year-old woman with psychic powers. She has no idea why until she finds a letter from her deceased mother. It says she is descended from an ancient bloodline. She wants to know more, but the secrets of her blood could cost her, her life.....
Hope you get it published...Me too. *Prays*
Are you a professional writer, or havent you quit you day job yet? :PI wish I was a professional. I've had a couple of poems published, but that doesn't really count. As for my day job, Lol. My 5 year old daughter is my day job. :)
Abscon
04-13-2006, 01:09 PM
Sounds like a cool book. When will the next chapter of the fanfic be up? i cant wait.. Keep it up. :)
Songbird21
04-13-2006, 05:45 PM
Workin' on it. Lol. It's up to 1200 words, but I just got an email from Anime Central saying I need to take my studio logo out of my AMV before they'll allow it in the contest. So I need to spend some time on that tonight.
Rotc Girl
04-16-2006, 08:45 PM
Haven't read it yet, my computer just let me on line, but I'm goin' to read it now.
I hate to ask this, but did you put chapter 30 on your home page? My computer won't load Fanfiction.net for some odd reason. Or have you just not posted it yet? 'Cause my computer's been screwy lately....
Songbird21
04-16-2006, 08:53 PM
chapter 30 isn't up yet. I have a cold right now so I don't have the energy to write. Hopefully it will be ready soon.
Rotc Girl
04-16-2006, 09:03 PM
Oh, ok. Thanks, I thought that my computer was being stupid again.
Abscon
04-28-2006, 11:19 AM
Hey.. Chapter 30 is up = )... Cool..Wye dident you tell use : /
Anyway... Good chapter. I like your ideas, very original : ) Pretty well written :P Keep on writing! Cant wait for next chapter
Songbird21
04-28-2006, 11:54 AM
Hey.. Chapter 30 is up = )... Cool..Why didn't you tell us : /Gomen ne. I blanked. ^_^;;
Anyway... Good chapter. I like your ideas, very original : )Thanks. :) I try. It's really hard with so much fic out there so I really appreaciate the compliment.
Rotc Girl
04-29-2006, 07:49 PM
oro and kabuto's deaths were very satisfying
Chapter 30 was great, when will the next one be up?
Songbird21
04-30-2006, 04:39 AM
oro and kabuto's deaths were very satisfyingheh heh. Thank you. :) And thank you for using the spoiler tags.
Chapter 30 was great, when will the next one be up?Hopefully soon. I already have 600 words of 31 written. :) I have some things to finish on the radioplay (I have a whole cast to do the voices and everything), then I can get back to writing.
Rotc Girl
04-30-2006, 12:17 PM
oh, you're welcome and i can't wait for the next chapter.
snakeye123
05-01-2006, 02:25 PM
hey. i've been on these forums for a while now, but stupidly only just looked in this section the other night.
and i found your chapters, and i stayed up for hours reading them!!!! damn you. (didn't get to sleep till 2 in the morning because i couldn't tear myself away)
anyways, after reading how much you like reviews i just want to say how amazing i think they are - you've got a really gripping sense of writing!
and i can't wait to read more.
thanks again.
Songbird21
05-01-2006, 02:56 PM
and I found your chapters, and I stayed up for hours reading them!!!! damn you.Lol. Gomen. :amuse
you've got a really gripping sense of writing!Thank you very much! :) I hope my original novel gets as much attention. smile-big
Rotc Girl
05-07-2006, 04:01 PM
When will your novel come out? and what's it on?
Songbird21
05-08-2006, 03:05 AM
When will your novel come out? and what's it on?It's called "Daughter of Altantis".
Summary:
Samantha is a 22 year-old taijutsu instructor with psychic powers. On her 22nd birthday she finds a letter from her deceased mother. It says she is descended from an ancient bloodline. She wants to know more, but the secrets of her blood could cost her, her life.....
As for a release date. I have no idea. Defanitly not till I finish COLAD. I can't concentrait on 2 stories at once.
Glad to know there's interest in it. :)
snakeye123
05-08-2006, 05:53 AM
cool. thats the first ive heard of it. (part from that fact your writing a novel)
is that to do with naruto or just ninjas in general?
& will it be on the internet, or physically published?
Songbird21
05-08-2006, 09:50 PM
is that to do with naruto or just ninjas in general?Lol. neither. This is an original story. Meaning all the characters and plotline are mine. Samantha is a taijutsu instructor who is an anime fan though. :)
Will it be on the internet, or physically published?I willl post the first 6 chapters on fictionpress.net If people wanna read the rest, they have to buy the hand bound books I'm going to produce. I don't know how succesful that method will be but I wanna give it a try. smile-big
Abscon
05-17-2006, 04:04 PM
And chapter 31 is up.. :)
Great chapter, as allways.. Not too much of a fan of Lee/Sakura, but you did a good job with that. Im probably going to read the whole thing again. Parts of the story slipped my mind:P Whens chap 32 up?
Tell me when you post the 6 chaps of your novel on Fictionpress..And when you update your story ;P
Rotc Girl
05-18-2006, 04:20 PM
I'm glad that Lee and Sakura are now together and the chapter is great as usual.
Songbird21
05-23-2006, 12:53 AM
Whens chap 32 up?Hopefully by Saturday, but with Anime Boston coming up it's a long shot.
Tell me when you post the 6 chaps of your novel on FictionpressThat won't be till I finish COLAD at the very least.
I'm glad that Lee and Sakura are now together and the chapter is great as usual.Thanks. :) And you have no idea how thankful I am that you used spoiler tags.
Rotc Girl
05-23-2006, 01:32 PM
Seriously, no problem. I don't want someone to ruin it for me, so I don't like to ruin it for others.
And I can't wait for the next chapter. :)
Songbird21
09-05-2006, 02:40 AM
Chapter 34 is up. :)
Songbird21
02-04-2007, 07:05 PM
Book one is COMPLETE! :) 37 chapters. What a monster. Lol. And book 2 already has 4 chapters to it. :)
Songbird21
05-15-2007, 03:49 AM
chapter 6 of book 2 is out. If you haven't already, you should move your subscription to the book 2 thread. ^_^\/
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