~Flippy
12-23-2007, 08:05 PM
I have been contemplating writing a long story, about the size of a novella or larger, and here's a general summary of what I came up with.
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A girl is very close to her slightly older brother as she grows up, and sees him as the ultimate model for a perfect man. However, this simple bond evolves into a taboo as she initiates incestive actions, such as pressuring him into sex and other romantic activities. He enjoys it for a while, but he feels increasingly guilty, and attempts to break it off with his sister.
His sister doesn't understand his disliking of their relations, so she continues to push harder and harder for more, to the point of risking all that she's good at to pursue her daring romance. In the meantime, her brother attempts to push her away more and more until her emotions take over and she turns to drastic measures to change his mind.
Her brother eventually begins dating a girl that his sister knows nothing about, and tries to tell his sister that what he and her did before was wrong, and that she should quit trying for more. She doesn't accept this, and has an emotional breakdown, resulting in a violent episode of her self-injury with razors and needles. When her brother discovers her sitting on the floor after the lashing, blood coating her arms and clothes, she is rushed to the hospital despite the fact that she is not mortally wounded.
It is here that her brother feels he must take responsibility, and tells his parents in confidence about their sexual relations. The parents are shocked, especially the father, who taught the brother time and time again to resist his 'primal urges'. His sister discovers he told their parents, and calls her brother a bastard before crying and mumbling her feelings for him.
It isn't long before the sister is placed in a youth corrections center (not a prison, but a sort of rehab-type center for counseling groups etc) for her eratic behavior and addiction to incest. It is here that she is diagnosed as being bipolar, but she argues she is not, saying that she just loves her 'damn brother'. She is assigned a room with another girl the same age, who is addicted to oxycotin and heroine. The two act as allies of sorts, and the sister soon begins recieving oxycotin from her to get high off of when she's angry or bored. This is never discovered, although the counselors suspect that she isn't truly getting better as planned.
About a month after her placement, she is sent an email from her mother, who mentions that her brother was seeing another girl, and that 'he seems happy'. She takes a blow to the heart, but doesn't fully believe what she reads. She sends an email to her brother, demanding the truth, and he tells her that he's seeing a girl named Nikki and that he no longer has sexual feelings for his sister, and there never was any romance; just hormone-induced sex. He tells her to leave him alone and 'grow up'.
She is so devistated by this that she returns to her room and locks herself in the bathroom.There, she uses a piece of ceramic tile to cut her hand, the blood she uses to write on the mirror 'I love you, precious. I always will.' . She then removes her overshirt, wearing only her skirt and bra, and overdoses on oxycotin. 30 minutes later, she loses control of her body, and she faints. The subsequent fall causes a collision of her head on the corner of the sink counter, killing her (she meant suicide, but expected the drugs alone to kill her).
When her friend finds her, she is lying dead in a fetal position, with nearly dried tears on her cheeks. When the family hears of her fate, her brother is crushed, and feels that if he would have given in, she wouldn't have committed suicide. Her parents feel they have failed, and her friends still don't understand what the source of her anger was. The story ends here.
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I would like an author that would add to the story, look over what I've come up with, exchange ideas, edit, etc. Contact would be kept via instant messenger, email, or phone if you are in the US.
This story will be of the drama and real teen troubles genre, and will not contain explicit sexual content. Once finished, I will print the manuscript, which I will mail to the co-author to keep and do whatever he/she wants with it.
I'd like the author to:
-Have an understanding of proper grammar, diction, and other english concepts.
-Be tolerant of extreme themes and violent/dramatic content.
-Be creative; what kind of creativity doesn't matter.
-Has some experience with writing fanfiction or novellas.
-Understand flow and sequence, adding content where appropriate, and properly continuing started passages.
-Is atleast 13 years of age.
Let me know! I'll be looking forward to it :)
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A girl is very close to her slightly older brother as she grows up, and sees him as the ultimate model for a perfect man. However, this simple bond evolves into a taboo as she initiates incestive actions, such as pressuring him into sex and other romantic activities. He enjoys it for a while, but he feels increasingly guilty, and attempts to break it off with his sister.
His sister doesn't understand his disliking of their relations, so she continues to push harder and harder for more, to the point of risking all that she's good at to pursue her daring romance. In the meantime, her brother attempts to push her away more and more until her emotions take over and she turns to drastic measures to change his mind.
Her brother eventually begins dating a girl that his sister knows nothing about, and tries to tell his sister that what he and her did before was wrong, and that she should quit trying for more. She doesn't accept this, and has an emotional breakdown, resulting in a violent episode of her self-injury with razors and needles. When her brother discovers her sitting on the floor after the lashing, blood coating her arms and clothes, she is rushed to the hospital despite the fact that she is not mortally wounded.
It is here that her brother feels he must take responsibility, and tells his parents in confidence about their sexual relations. The parents are shocked, especially the father, who taught the brother time and time again to resist his 'primal urges'. His sister discovers he told their parents, and calls her brother a bastard before crying and mumbling her feelings for him.
It isn't long before the sister is placed in a youth corrections center (not a prison, but a sort of rehab-type center for counseling groups etc) for her eratic behavior and addiction to incest. It is here that she is diagnosed as being bipolar, but she argues she is not, saying that she just loves her 'damn brother'. She is assigned a room with another girl the same age, who is addicted to oxycotin and heroine. The two act as allies of sorts, and the sister soon begins recieving oxycotin from her to get high off of when she's angry or bored. This is never discovered, although the counselors suspect that she isn't truly getting better as planned.
About a month after her placement, she is sent an email from her mother, who mentions that her brother was seeing another girl, and that 'he seems happy'. She takes a blow to the heart, but doesn't fully believe what she reads. She sends an email to her brother, demanding the truth, and he tells her that he's seeing a girl named Nikki and that he no longer has sexual feelings for his sister, and there never was any romance; just hormone-induced sex. He tells her to leave him alone and 'grow up'.
She is so devistated by this that she returns to her room and locks herself in the bathroom.There, she uses a piece of ceramic tile to cut her hand, the blood she uses to write on the mirror 'I love you, precious. I always will.' . She then removes her overshirt, wearing only her skirt and bra, and overdoses on oxycotin. 30 minutes later, she loses control of her body, and she faints. The subsequent fall causes a collision of her head on the corner of the sink counter, killing her (she meant suicide, but expected the drugs alone to kill her).
When her friend finds her, she is lying dead in a fetal position, with nearly dried tears on her cheeks. When the family hears of her fate, her brother is crushed, and feels that if he would have given in, she wouldn't have committed suicide. Her parents feel they have failed, and her friends still don't understand what the source of her anger was. The story ends here.
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I would like an author that would add to the story, look over what I've come up with, exchange ideas, edit, etc. Contact would be kept via instant messenger, email, or phone if you are in the US.
This story will be of the drama and real teen troubles genre, and will not contain explicit sexual content. Once finished, I will print the manuscript, which I will mail to the co-author to keep and do whatever he/she wants with it.
I'd like the author to:
-Have an understanding of proper grammar, diction, and other english concepts.
-Be tolerant of extreme themes and violent/dramatic content.
-Be creative; what kind of creativity doesn't matter.
-Has some experience with writing fanfiction or novellas.
-Understand flow and sequence, adding content where appropriate, and properly continuing started passages.
-Is atleast 13 years of age.
Let me know! I'll be looking forward to it :)