Your Zanpakutou (Some Manga Spoilers)

[Biohazard]

mine would be a giant chopstick.

[zagman505]

hm. interesting blades here.

oblivion: ur blade... i think that its too strong in the end, and now the beginning seems pretty strong too. also, define guilty and not guilty when the black phoenix judges. wat happens if u don't go thru all stages of ur abilities? will you still be unable to fight for 3 days? also, i don't really think that the 3 day limit is very practical. and lastly, are the abilities all bankai abilities, or all shikai abilities, or start in shikai and extend to bankai, or wat?

ichirin: by 10 random cuts in the air, does that mean that u slash the air, and the cut just sits there until u attack ur opponent, or can u create them mentally too? when u touch the opponent, will the cuts all hit the same spot, or will they hit various spots depending on their positioning before attack, and ur position when u attack? also, if u 'throw' the cuts, will they go in the direction that u slashed, or in the direction that u tell it to go?

lol, i guess u don't like my blade very much, i.p. oh well. i think my sword's overpowered too, although i don't think that my shikai is all that overpowered. the hokukyoku can be controlled by me as to wat it freezes, after all, its my reiatsu. maybe it won't even freeze, if my enemy is all that strong. my bankai is overpowered, tho :)

nice to see this place be more active. =)

[Red_Ronin01]

Here's my zanpakutou

Name: Kagematsuri (Festival of Shadows)
Appearance: 5 1/2 foot long katana with a 4 foot blade and an 18 inch handle. Also has a black sheath, purple handle, and silvery black fittings for both the blade and the handle.
Zanpakutou's Avatar Form: A large black wraith with a tribal pattern painted all over its skull and bladelike hands
Shikai Command/Technique: "Fall like darkness, Kagematsuri."

The shikai form gives the user the ability to summon and control shadows in numerous ways. He can paralyze his opponents via their shadows either by pinning them to the walls or any other surface using projectile weapons (knives or bo shuriken mainly) or by stabbing directly into their shadows using the zanpakutou, which would not only paralyze them, but also cause immense pain as if a real stab wound were inflicted. However, no physical damage comes as a result of the latter. Kagematsuri's shikai form also has secondary function which allows the user to blend into or become a shadow in order to hide from his opponent or escape either by moving through the darkness or by travelling in other people's shadows. A more advanced form of this technique also exists in which the user can coat one or more projectiles with shadows and throw them before disappearing and quickly reappearing at the point of impact of any one of them. However, Kagematsuri still has a far deadlier and more terrifying effect for its shikai form in which the shadows, which are drawn to and feed off reiatsu will immediately invade and seep through an opponent's cuts before flooding his/her system and allowing the user to execute his bankai technique.

Bankai Command/Technique: "Fall like a puppet without strings.....Phantom Murderer"
The user gives out the bankai command stated before his zanpakutou suddenly disappears and forms numerous phantom strings leading to each and every one of his opponent's joints from his own before he himself disappears and materializes inside his opponent's body as his zanpakutou's avatar, which is a large black wraith with a tribal pattern painted over its skull and bladelike fingers. The user will then force himself out of his opponent's body in wraith form, gripping his opponent by the neck with one hand and holding his opponent's life force firmly in his grip with the other. After that, the user, who has become the Phantom Murderer will begin to crush his opponent's lifeforce, causing it to ebb and flow away as the blades, which are his fingers cut deeper and deeper inside, before finally reaching the core and shattering it, killing his opponent instantly and causing him/her to fall down limp on the ground "like a puppet without strings." Once that is all over, the user will transform back into his normal shinigami form with his dead opponent in front of him and his zanpakutou in its normal sealed state back in his right hand.

[Havoc]

Mine istantly kills my opponent randomly.

[zagman505]

hm. welcome to nf, red_ronin =)

anyways, as to ur sword.

i think its a bit too strong, because there are shadows EVERYWHERE. if u can do all that w/ shadow's, u'll be almost invincible. whenever necessary, u can hide in a shadow, and then strike at ur opponents shadow to immobilize and hurt them. aside from that feeling of overpowered-ness that i got, i like it. reminds me a bit of shikamaru =) also, ur bankai... O.o instant kills, pretty much. which i think is... unreasonable. also, ur bankai ability has pretty much nothing in common with ur shikai abilities, which is kinda weird.

[thx123]

thx: how would the opponents greatest fear make them scared if they hav no control over their emotions? also, i hav a feeling that ur blade is somewat overpowered, because apparently there's no way to escape the effects, even if u hav incredible reiatsu, all it would do is take more hits. and as for ur shinmoku, wat happens if ur fighting some guy w/ intense fire (like yamamoto)? would ur blade be burned? wat happens if for some strange reason u get hit by ur own attack? also, how would ur nature's dissonance kill you?
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okay, to clear up
1) I think the Shikai for "Kowanai" isn't overpowered, and the Bankai, well, it's suppose to be powerful. Plus, keep in mind that the opponent's spirit power plays a heavy role in the effects. Also, keep in mind that defensively, the Shikai is rather lacking. Even the Bankai isn't really defense oriented. Also, consider for a moment, You're being attacked by your greatest fear while your emotions are one giant spiral hell.

2) For Shinmoku, if the opponent is fire based, he most certainly would have a certain level of advantage. Granted, the wood is extremely hard, nearly metal like, so it's not going to flash burn, but yes, a fire based person could have a slight up hand.

3) I figure for the sake of it that the user is immune to the poisons.

4) Also, the reason why "Nature's dissonance" is so dangerous is because the user is INSIDE of hte forest as all of this swirling is going on. I believe it does mention that the user must stay inside of the forest to safely control all the spirit forces inside of the forest. Even then, if the user critically loses focus, the user may be swept up into the maelstrom. That would be bad.

Hope that clears up everything.

-Adam

[zagman505]

ok yeah, that makes a lot of sense. although i still don't think that ur greatest fear would be very effective on you if you can't control ur emotions. u could end up feeling like hyper and then depressed, but you might nvr feel scared because u can't control those emotions :P

[oblivionblade]

Mine istantly kills my opponent randomly.
...lol no competition there...

[BlackMageDryfe]

uhhh i guess ill try...

The common look of my weapon is a middle-sized, shiny-darkblue broadsword

Shikai: Call upon the spirits... Arasuka! (Arasuka is, i believe, the Japanese pronunciation for Alaska, considering my weapon to be an Ice/Wind elemental)
The handle grows incredibly and the edge (which does not grow) turns into crystal, which makes it look like an edged long staff. Also, another crystal edge of the same size grows on the other end of the staff. The zanpakutou, aside from using it as a close-combat weapon, can cast Ice and Wind special demon magic
Bankai: Spiritwolf Arasuka (Spiritwolf... i love that name). In this form the zanpakutou splits into 2: an incredibly huge, scythe with a scythe edge on each side (each edge curves to an opposite side, resembling a circle, the length of the original edges are the width of each scythe edge), and one incredibly huge Demon Magic staff with crystal orbs on both ends. While the double-scythe can be used for devastatingly powerful and quick attacks, the staff can be used for Ice, Wind, Water, Thunder, and Dark special demon magic.

I might change the bankai so that the staff and scythe are not double-edged (well, the scythe not having 2 blades and the staff not having two orbs), by stating that each of the edges of the shikai turned into a different thing and only the staff body duplicated... but that doesnt mean theyre huge and rigged... theyre bankai after all!

Also, if someone can traduce Spirit wolf and the release for the shikai i'd appreciate it... i can't find a good english-romaji translator on the internet (well, at least not for phrases)

[zagman505]

hm. interesting blade, but you didn't include any abilities...

[BlackMageDryfe]

hm. interesting blade, but you didn't include any abilities...

well... i DID say the shikai used Ice/Wind special (usable only through zanpakutou) demon magic, and Bankai was both Fast/destructive power, and more powerful magic, plus in Bankai i can use Water, Thunder and Dark special demon magic too... but.. its true i didnt specify the demon magic i can use with it XD ill think about it...

[zagman505]

yeah, but that's all like... demon magic. its not any specific ability or attack. for instance. red_ronin's zanpakutou (its a bit higher up in the pg) has the ability to control shadows and use them to hurt the opponent. my zanpakutou has several elemental based attacks, and in my 2nd bankai stage, i can control some of my surroundings. your bankai... its just sorta like its only there to help u w/ demon magic, so... O.o there should be actual abilities, effects, attacks that are specific to ur blade.

[BlackMageDryfe]

Yeah, i guess so... originally i had thought that the kind of magic my zanpakutou uses is unique... i was also planning on making a zanpakutpu that would transform into any weapon @_@ but thats too rigged

[zagman505]

lol, that'd be nice. but yeah, its a bit too strong if it can change into any weapon. well. i guess that the abilities of ur zanpakutou could involve enhancing demon magic or using unique ice/water or watever type demon magic. but i dno. ur choice. i was just expecting more after seeing a lot of other ppl's :P

[BlackMageDryfe]

This is an idea of what i have in mind...

http://i78.photobucket.com/albums/j83/BlackMageDryfe/Asasword.jpg

[zagman505]

lol, that is an ENORMOUS bankai, hahahaha. it looks interesting =) i keep on getting an image of darth maul when i try to think of wat somebody would look like w/ ur shikai. and ur bankai... O.o

[BlackMageDryfe]

Yeah, being a FinalFantasytard, im obssessed with black mages, and therefore with staff-like weapons... and for swords i like stuff like... for example the Master Sword from zelda... well i also really like the Frostmourne from Warcraft3

One of the few things i have thought for Arasuka are:

-As long as the weapon is being held by the true owner, the weight of the shikai and bankai are close to null.
-If someone touches Arasuka without my permission, they will be helplessly frozen until i set them free.
-In shikai, special demon magic takes 1-3 seconds to perform, in Bankai, special demon magic is instant-cast (except for the... major magic)

Im gonna need help for other abilities tho >.< all i can think of is Final Fantasy , Diablo 2 and such T_T

[sut_69]

Ok, thought I'd give this a try. Forgive me if any of this has been done before. Oh, and I don't know Japanese very well so the name and release names may be wrong. If someone wants to translate them properly, feel free.

Name: Kumori Kasai (Shadow Flare)

Sealed state: blade is 4'2" in length, handle is black with red bindings

Shikai: release incantation: Dance (don't know the japanese)

The blade turns a deep red, and begins to burn with a dark red flame, dripping embers everywhere. The main ability is not the fire, but the effect the blade has when an enemy looks at it. It causes reactions to slow, and disorientation, loss of balance and vision depending on spirit power. the weaker you are, the more it effects you.
The other technique is a rain of red hot ember over the opponent.

Bankai:

The Floor is covered with deep, red flames like on the shikai blade. The area is enclosed by a wall of fire which seems to cut out all outside sound, and only dark whispers can be heard that confuse and scare the opponent, making it incredibly eerie inside. It powers up Kumori Kasai and allows it to unleash massive barrages of black flame. If the blade touches skin, the area surrounding the cut becomes necrotic and unbearably painful. The main idea is to use this bankai in conjunction with 4 dances, known as the 1st, 2nd, 3rd & 4th Umbron Stances, each one designed to deal with a particular fighting style. For example, to fight a power fighter, the first stance would be used. It is a fast paced, flowing dance, where the user gracefully evades powerful lunging strikes and deals a multitude of small, but effective hits in a split second.
The other stances deal with Quick, nimble opponents (2nd), long range enemies (3rd) and technique heavy enemies (4th).

As a final trump card there is an ultimate stance that encases the user in flame, and increase speed and power to insane levels (much like ichigos bankai only this is heavily self damaging). This would kill the user in a little under 3 minutes though, in payment for the power. Even initiating it would require days of recovery.

So, what do you think guys? unbalanced? gimme some feedback.

[zagman505]

lol, i love final fantasy too, blackmage =) even tho i havn't played that many of them. heh.

anyways, i dno about other abilities for ur arasuka, but i'm just envisioning a lot of elemental control sorta thing, kinda like hitsugaya's blade, i think it was hyourinmaru.

interesting blade, sut. i like the abilities a lot =) a few questions, tho.

1. will looking at the flame through a reflection still affect the opponent in the same way?
2. do the embers do anything special, or just burn like any normal ember?
3. does the fire still have the same effect in bankai as in shikai?
4. in ur ultimate stance, you hurt urself, but can you set ur opponent on fire? and also, does the ultimate stance do anything else other than boost power and speed?

[BlackMageDryfe]

*thinks of a few abilites for Arasuka*

Burst of wind: After incantation, heavy currents of wind flow from the caster, making it harder for the enemy to get close. In order to keep the wind emanating, the user needs a considerable amount of concentration on the magic

Air Blade: Makes the edges a bit longer with an invisible amount of cutting wind. Requires a bit of concentration to remain active.

Cold Edge: The crystal edges can partially freeze what they hit, but in order to be successful, the user needs to cast the magic exactly when Arasuka hits, thus making it a waste of spirit force if it misses. It is instant-cast.

Ice shards: Can shoot ice from the crystal edges when concentrating. Obviously weaker than a close-combat hit. If Arasuka is rotated, it can shoot Ice spirals/rings instead.

And for Spiritwolf Arasuka:

Storm Field: Conjures several orbs of lightning which randomly float around the target. Lightning is discharged every few seconds (if not an amount of time less than a second), attempting to hit the enemy. A considerable amount of concentration is needed to keep the spell active. After 10 seconds, the lightning orbs disappear

Getsuga: Can fire black getsugas from scythe (similar to ichigos, except with a purple glow) and Water getsugas from the staff.

Dark quake: Smashes both the scythe and staff to the ground, expanding shadow several meters around the caster. If the shadows touches the enemy's feet, he/she will be slightly paralyzed (or slowed), then, spikes, orbs and randomed-shaped dark figures rise from the ground at gread speed, causing shadow explosions when colliding onto enemy.

Ice Beam: Similar to Ice shards, but discharges at a far greater speed, plus its more like non-solid matter, and can easily pierce through an enemy if not blocked.

Tornado swing: Shoots wind or water tornadoes when swung. can also keep rotating over users head to create a tornado around the user.

Also, the Scythe and Staff's weights are nearly null when its user weilds them, so the scythe can be rapidly rotated for mass destructive power, and can be thrown as if it was a boomerang or shuriken. When thrown, the user can control the scythes flight with the staff and a considerable amount of concentration.

[zagman505]

cool. i like them =) the only thing is that you'd hafta learn to hav insane concentration to be able to use them all properly, but thats good, i guess.

[BlackMageDryfe]

help with names in japanese anyone?

[zagman505]

hm. i can try, but... i dno. my stuff usually isn't all that reliable. i'll just work on the release phrases and that stuff first, i guess.

[BlackMageDryfe]

yeah thx... *is in the mood for a bleach fanfic where he uses arasuka*

oh, and about Dark quake...
even if the shadow does not touch the enemies feet (if he jumps for example), theres still a chance for the dark figures to hit him, even if its a smaller chance

[zagman505]

ok. some rough translations of the release phrases and stuff, if its in between the {} that means that i couldn't find how its supposed to be pronounced...

Call upon the spirits, Arasuka
精神 を 頼 みなさい、 アラスカ
Seishin o {頼} minasai, Arasuka

Spirit wolf Arasuka
精神 の オオカミ アラスカ
Seishin no ookami arasuka

its kinda rough... don't think it works all that well... =S

[sut_69]

interesting blade, sut. i like the abilities a lot =) a few questions, tho.

1. will looking at the flame through a reflection still affect the opponent in the same way?
2. do the embers do anything special, or just burn like any normal ember?
3. does the fire still have the same effect in bankai as in shikai?
4. in ur ultimate stance, you hurt urself, but can you set ur opponent on fire? and also, does the ultimate stance do anything else other than boost power and speed?

Hmmm, some good questions. Let me see...
1. I think that looking at them in a reflection would nullify the effect, yes. Also, you could just avoid looking at the blade i suppose, but even a split second glance would affect you.
2. Nah, the embers just make it look cool :), and powerful...no special effects.
3. In bankai, you can't avoid looking at the flames because you're completely surrounded. And they have the same effect but stronger, ie - more disorientation.
4. No setting on fire unless you use a special tech to throw a fireball at the enemy. The final stance does nothing else, but the power and speed boosts (speed especially) are massive. Think rock lee opening the (fifth gate was it) in the fight against gaara. That type of thing.

Hope that answers your questions zagman.

[BlackMageDryfe]

Call upon the spirits, Arasuka
精神 を 頼 みなさい、 アラスカ
Seishin o {頼} minasai, Arasuka

Spirit wolf Arasuka
精神 の オオカミ アラスカ
Seishin no ookami arasuka

its kinda rough... don't think it works all that well... =S

well, its better than nothing, thanks a lot! where do you get the translations? Or do u translate them urself? @_@

[Genis-Vell]

Well I back. And I came up with another controversial Zanpakutou
But I think its interesting, and I like it.

Name: HUITZILOPOCHTLI

Shikai - Release phrase: (Death is inevitable, show them their death - HUITZILOPOCHTLI)

My Zanpakutou then transforms into a pair of gloves.
My Gloves a have a special Ability thou. It can materialize any form of weapon (Bow & Arrow, Katana, Shield, Staff etc….)



Corte Dimensiones (Dimensional cut) my weapon is infused with the ability to cut thru dimensional barrier and space.

Fuera De Tiempo (Time’s Up) my waepon is infused with the ability to forward time in any direction it is struck or swing. So if I swing my sword and you actually receive damage from my sword under this technique. Your body starts to age dramatically (the part that was struck)

Banki - Release phrase: (Time, Space will always remind constant for all infinite - Ban ..!Ki…!)

Added Ability - Precognition. (refer to the 2nd Naruto/Sasuke fight ware Sasuke uses Sharingan to determine possible outcomes of Narutos actions.)

Timepo Espacio Infinito (Time. Space. Infinity) here an areana is put up ware if anyone (including myself) are to step out of the arena, you would be lost in another dimension.

[BlackMageDryfe]

jajaja eso explica porque estas en el FC de latinos XD... ntp yo tmb soy mexicano :wink

[zagman505]

thanx sut, that cleared a lot of things up. =)

and blackmage, i use a combination of sites, one site to get the romaji, and one site to get the japanese characters, then i use microsoft word to try and match the romaji to the japanese characters. it doesn't work as often as i like, so i don't do much translation.

nice blade, id. a few things...

1. how is the name of ur blade pronounced, and wtf is it supposed to mean?
2. when u create a weapon, do ur gloves morph into the weapon or does it pull them outta thin air? if its pull outta thin air, and its some sort of weapon w/ a ammo supply like say bow and arrows, do the arrows come with it, and you hafta carry them around, or do they materialize as u need to use them?
3. wat do u mean by it can cut thru dimensional barrier and space? as in you can cut me no matter how far away i am, or u can inflict unseen wounds on me thru different dimensions, or u can attack me thru time or wat?
4. since u say the time is affected the way u swing ur sword, then that means that if u swing ur sword 'backwards' the place that gets hit will get younger, right? but wat defines whether u swing it backwards or forwards? cardinal directions or ur body angle? and wat effect would happen if u swung it sideways?
5. does being lost in another dimension last forever meaning ur never goin to come bak, like deidara's exploding bunshin, or does it only last until the sword is sealed or the user dies or watever? and wat if somebody is half inside and half outside of the arena when the bankai is released?

um... thats about it for now.

[Genis-Vell]

jajaja eso explica porque estas en el FC de latinos XD... ntp yo tmb soy mexicano :wink

Your always welcome (along with all non - Latino origin, We don’t discriminate) To the FC.
Asi que cuando quieras, ven a postar.




1. how is the name of ur blade pronounced, and wtf is it supposed to mean?
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Oh um that name is hard to pronounce, It an Aztec God. (God Of War). I would have to be next to you to make sure its pronounce right. (Its an Indian Dialect, not Spanish)


2. when u create a weapon, do ur gloves morph into the weapon or does it pull them outta thin air? if its pull outta thin air, and its some sort of weapon w/ a ammo supply like say bow and arrows, do the arrows come with it, and you hafta carry them around, or do they materialize as u need to use them?
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Well I haven’t though how I would work the bow and arrow as weapons. But its materializes out of thin air. So I guess arrows would matirialzie out of thin air as well. I guess to balance it out, for every arrow materialized it would consume spirit energy (to keep it from being to cheap)



3. wat do u mean by it can cut thru dimensional barrier and space? as in you can cut me no matter how far away i am, or u can inflict unseen wounds on me thru different dimensions, or u can attack me thru time or wat?.

The blade or tip of the Arrow etc.. itself can cut thru dimensions barriers and space. It only cuts ware the sword is swung. Its not a projectile attack. So if your far away, my blade can not cut you.


4. since u say the time is affected the way u swing ur sword, then that means that if u swing ur sword 'backwards' the place that gets hit will get younger, right? but wat defines whether u swing it backwards or forwards? cardinal directions or ur body angle? and wat effect would happen if u swung it sideways?
.

I only thought of aging accelerating for now no matter how the sword is swung (to keep it simple for now)



5. does being lost in another dimension last forever meaning ur never goin to come bak, like deidara's exploding bunshin, or does it only last until the sword is sealed or the user dies or watever? and wat if somebody is half inside and half outside of the arena when the bankai is released?
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(Time, Space will always remind constant for all infinite - Ban ..!Ki…!)
When I came up with this Zanpakutou. I wanted to follow the concept of “Time”, “Space”, “Infinity”.

Fuera De Tiempo follows my Time concept

Corte Dimensiones follows my Space concept


Timepo Espacio Infinito follows my all with the added infinity concept

So for now once anyone (including myself) is out of the arena, he is stuck their for ever.

If half the body is present, it starts to suck him up, he can push himself out thou (Flash Step or something) before he is completely consumed.







For now it only forwards aging. So if you get hit with the time added effect. (I wanted to keep it simple)

Ok I now that this is just as broken as the other Zanpakutou “Azreal” but I wanted to have a blade that controls time and space. And anyone who can control Time and space has a vary powerful blade.

So I am aware that my Zanpakuto pawns utterly. But I just wanted to get my idea on paper since it seems to be unique (I think mine is the only one that has Time and Space elemental attacks)


So which of the my two blades do you think is more powerful?

[thx123]

This is kinda long *inhale*
Zanpakutou #3

NAME: Shuddering Mountain

Un-released appearance: The sword is slightly larger then most. The handle is about 50% longer, and the blade is approximately 25% wider then a standard blade. The blade’s length is essentially the same as any other zanpakutou. The blade itself is a bit on the dull side, and seemingly can never hold a polish. The Handle is a dark dirt brown color. Also, it is oddly heavy for a sword it’s size.

SHIKAI RELEASE: Crumble, Shuddering Mountain.

SHIKAI APPEARANCE: Upon activation, the sword morphs into a large hammer. Total length approximately 60 inches. The hammer’s head is shaped much like a sledge hammer, though is significantly larger. The head’s dimensions is about 14 inches high from the handle, it’s face is also about 16 wide, while the hammer head’s overall length from face to face is about 20 inches. The handle has a 30 degree bend to it at the 24 inch mark from the handle base. The handle is a dark tan color, while the hammer head is a dark mud like brown. It is extremely heavy, though due to it being in sync with the user’s spirit power, it takes far less effort for the user to move it.

SHIKAI MAIN: The zanpakutou’s main ability is hidden until used. While being swung, the hammer’s head can detach. The head is still connected to the handle via a heavy, spirit power imbued chain. The hammer head’s enormous weight can be devastating. While the head is detached the zanpakutou behaves much like a chain mace, and can be spun and whipped around as such. The hammer head can of course be easily recalled, either through verbal, mental, or physical command. It is in fact a very good idea to spin the heavy hammer since the centripetal forces being generated will only increase the destructive power of the hammer.

SHIKAI SUB ABILITIES
1) Crush Geyser: This ability is done by the user focusing spirit force into the head of the hammer and striking the ground. The spirit force enters the ground then is able to quickly travel through the ground, and burst forth from the ground as a spiritually laced large spire of stone. The ability can be further modified to created a quantity of small earthen spears, or one large spire of land. This ability requires a fair amount of spirit force just to use, and it’s speed of execution is directly proportional to the spirit force put into it. This can also be done with the hammer detached.

2) Petrifaction: With even more spirit force, the user can imbue the hammer with highly focused spirit force, that upon forceful contact with an opponent or object will cause it to become petrified temporarily. The petrifaction is not fatal, instead turning the attacked person or thing into a living stone of sorts. The petrifaction effect is directly related to the spirit power of what the hammer hit. Therefore if the hammer hits something with very little, or even no spirit force, the effect will be rather great, possibly petrifying the entire target or object. Inversely, if the hammer hit something with a much higher spirit force, the effect would be highly muted, and limited in size, if possibly no effect at all.

SHIKAI NOTES: The shikai stage is a rather slow weapon. Even though the hammer is highly lightened by the user’s spirit force, it’s still freakishly heavy, and requires considerable focus to properly attack. Every attack must be well considered, since a miss could leave the user wide open. Even when the hammer is detached and the speed is increased due to rotation, every attack must be well planned. It is prudent to use Crush Geyser and Petrifaction in conjunction with attacks, so as to optimize the user’s attack patterns, with the hammer, spires, and things becoming petrified with quick action and succession. Of course such rapid use would require quite a bit of spiritual focus.


BANKAI RELEASE: May mountains block the tides of war, Steel Faced Shuddering Mountain

BANKAI APPEARANCE: Upon activation, the hammer reforms into a large mass of rocks of various sizes. These rocks move and envelope the user completely, increasing the users height and over all size by nearly 100%. This rock armor of sorts continually undulates and moves along the surface of the user, all the while providing incredibly hard defense. The rock armor is also the user’s weapon. All manner of bludgeoning and smashing type weapons can be crudely fashioned out of the rocks, though a massive rock whip is the preferred weapon.

BANKAI WEAPONS/ ABILITIES:
1) Rock Whip: This massive, constantly shifting rock whip extends naturally about 2 feet from the tip of the hand. Via the constantly shifting rock armor, the whip can be lengthened up to 50 feet. Of course extending the whip to such a great length can prove dangerous since the extensions are pulled directly from the existing rock armor, thereby weakening the overall defense, possibly even exposing a part of the user altogether.

2) Rock Hammer: A large round hammer is formed around the user’s hand, and is used for heavy bludgeoning. The “handle” of the hammer can be extended to up 10 feet while being swung, though not much more, due to the extreme density of the rock hammer.

3) Crush Grip: This can be combined with nearly any weapon, though most often with the whip. Once an opponent is ensnared in the rock whip, the user will often slam the opponent into a wall or other sturdy object. With the opponent now thoroughly slammed against the wall, the user will send shockwave after shockwave of rock down the arm to slam into the victim. The effects are brutal, and can crush many weak opponents.

4) The Shikai abilities are still also present, though are highly amplified. If used properly, an extremely difficult multi-directional attack pattern can be achieved.

ULTIMATE TECHNIQUE: “Titan’s Rage”
This technique completely discards defense and puts of the user’s spirit force into full on offensive rage. Most of the rocks fall away from the user, except for a small amount for minimal defense. The rest merge into the ground. The rocks that now are in the ground act as a conduit for the user’s spirit force. Remember the Shikai Crush Geyser technique? Now think of that, but on a downright frightening scale. With this technique, the user has essentially gained control of the ground itself. The user can make literally dozens, if not hundreds of lances, hills, claws, tentacles and spires of ground to violently and quickly explode from the ground. Once the opponent has been ensnared properly, the user will proceed to viciously skewer the opponent, and essentially decimate the opponent. This ability requires IMMENSE spirit force as well as deep focus to control to full effect. Once this technique is halted, it is not uncommon for the user to essentially be drained of spirit force for at least a day or more.


As always, critique, questions, comments, on all 3 swords are welcome.

YAY

-Adam

[zagman505]

lol, nice. id, i think that your azreal is better in shikai, but thats probably cuz i understand its attacks better than huitzilopochtli. space, time, dimensional stuff, that kinda just goes right over my head. O.o however, i think that huitzilopochtli has a better bankai, because it would grant almost the same ability as azreals third eye (not quite as good, but useful nonetheless. like comparing sharingan w/ byakugan, which one's more useful?) although no speed boost, but then the ability used with huitzilopochtli's bankai is better because it won't completely drain you of spiritual energy, while the consequences for exiting the arena, although avoidable, are just as bad.

wow. nice sword, thx =)

a few things:

1. you say that the hammer and stuff is 'lighter' when you wield it, but how much of a difference does that make?
2. can you hurt urself with your hammer, by like swinging it around like a fool and accidentally having it recoil into you?
3. wat is the range of the crush geyser?
4. does the petrifaction do sorta area damage on the opponents body, with more area being frozen if the opponent is weaker (starting with the areas closest to where the opponent was hit), or does it randomly freeze up parts of the body (not affected by where the hammer hit, but you can control wat freezes)?
5. the kinds of rocks that make up your bankai, are they like... 10-20 huge/pretty big boulder types, or like 500-1000 smaller fist sized rocks or wat?
6. if an opponent were to sever the rock whip, or actually any one of the weapons you create out of rocks, and like disconnect the end from the main body, wat would happen to the rocks on the end? would they automatically be reabsorbed back into the main armor, or would they fall on the ground and be useless, taking away from your armor ability?
7. does the user need to slam the opponent into a wall to use the crush grip? cuz wouldn't they be able to do the shockwave thing regardless of whether there was a wall or not?

thats about it, thanx =)

lol, we hav some uber strong blades here, wonder who would be able to win if we did like a tournament.

[Honogram]

My Zanpaktou will be simple... dunno if anyone said this one yet... since i dont plan to read all 20 pages....

Name: "What is my name?"
Appearance: Looks like a regular Zanpaktou until mimiced shikai/bankai is called.
Shikai: "My name is your name."
Powers: Your SHIKAI :) The ability to copy and retain the abilities and traits of another zanpaktou that it crossed blades with.
Bankai: None. Basically it will be Your BANKAI :) (Requirement: If you got enough spiritual energy.)

[thx123]

wow. nice sword, thx =)

a few things:

1. you say that the hammer and stuff is 'lighter' when you wield it, but how much of a difference does that make?
2. can you hurt urself with your hammer, by like swinging it around like a fool and accidentally having it recoil into you?
3. wat is the range of the crush geyser?
4. does the petrifaction do sorta area damage on the opponents body, with more area being frozen if the opponent is weaker (starting with the areas closest to where the opponent was hit), or does it randomly freeze up parts of the body (not affected by where the hammer hit, but you can control wat freezes)?
5. the kinds of rocks that make up your bankai, are they like... 10-20 huge/pretty big boulder types, or like 500-1000 smaller fist sized rocks or wat?
6. if an opponent were to sever the rock whip, or actually any one of the weapons you create out of rocks, and like disconnect the end from the main body, wat would happen to the rocks on the end? would they automatically be reabsorbed back into the main armor, or would they fall on the ground and be useless, taking away from your armor ability?
7. does the user need to slam the opponent into a wall to use the crush grip? cuz wouldn't they be able to do the shockwave thing regardless of whether there was a wall or not?


Ho-kay, so.....

1) Upon further reading of it, I realized how confusing it sounds. Think of it like Thor's Hammer from marvel. He can lift it with relative ease, but the thing is still friggin heavy. So heavy that the hulk can barely lift it. I was thinking along those lines.

2) Yeah, I suppose you could royally mess yourself up if you were being overly careless about your attacks. I was sorta referencing that with the "user must plan out theri attacks well" part, but I can see the concern.

3) I suppose it'd be relative to the spirit power put into it. Think of it like electricity going through a wire. The longer the wire, the weaker the charge will become. So, I suppose it's a multi-tier proportionality between range, spirit power, and desired effect/quanity.

4) It would be AOE based, and yes, the overall effect would be proportional to the victims spirit power, or lack thereof. In theory, an extremely powerful foe, like say the head general (yamamato? w/e) would feel a tickle and not much more.

5) Okay. Thinking of visual reference. Hmmmm. OH! Remember the rock monster from "Galaxy Quest?" sorta like that, but with far more smaller ones. I'd say it'd be more like hundred (thousands?) of rocks ranging from pebble all the way to basket ball size. Maybe a few larger ones here and there.

6) Hmm, I would think that the rocks could either: A- Be regained, B - Be replaced with other surrounding rocks. I guess it would behave somewhat like Gaara's sand. The rocks just sorta feel the need to get back to the master. Much in the same way, if a person manages to breech the rock armor, they best make that hit a good one, cuz the armor will proceed to reformat it self.

7) The user doesn't need a wall, it just helps a bit. the ground is also fine, or just simply gripping the victim.

-Adam

[Tsukiyomi]

1) Upon further reading of it, I realized how confusing it sounds. Think of it like Thor's Hammer from marvel. He can lift it with relative ease, but the thing is still friggin heavy. So heavy that the hulk can barely lift it. I was thinking along those lines.

Just thought I would point out that its not that Thor's hammer is heavy, its that it has a spell on it. Only someone who is worthy can lift it, the Hulk isn't a very good being so the enchantment prevents him from lifting it.

Someone like Superman or Captain America could lift it because they are worthy souls.

[thx123]

Just thought I would point out that its not that Thor's hammer is heavy, its that it has a spell on it. Only someone who is worthy can lift it, the Hulk isn't a very good being so the enchantment prevents him from lifting it.

Someone like Superman or Captain America could lift it because they are worthy souls.

Oh nifty, I didn't know that at all. I don't really keep up on Thor's history, so all I know are little bits here and there that I've read or seen. I suppose a sort of "You're not my master's spirit force!" sort of reaction from the sword would be the same thing.

[zagman505]

oh, i c. cool, thx. =) u hav some sweet blades there.

and honogram, somebody made that sort of blade earlier, the only difference was that that person's bankai made it so that the user had two swords, making it possible to copy two people's shikais rather than just one. we had a huge argument about whether that was overpowered or not.

[Genis-Vell]

I have a new one for you guys.

Name: Siren


Shikai - Release phrase: (Sing….sing the melody of despair, agony, death….sing….Siren)

Nocturne in the Moonlight - The sword begins to emit sound waves, that slowly places the opponent to sleep.

Concerto of the Midnight Sun - The sword begins to emit sound waves, that slowly places the opponent in agony/pain and partial paralysis.

Crucifix of the Blue Moon - The sword begins to emit sound waves, that begin to distort the nervous system. The opponent begins to have a hard time with visual, and hearing distortion.


Banki - Release phrase: (Canta….canta la melodia de desparo, angustia, muerte….canta…Siren…..Ban-ki!)

Harmony of Dissonance - The combination of all three Shikai’s all warped in one.

Symphony of the Night - The same as the first Bankai + the added effect.
The extra effect is the control of the heart beat controlled by the rhythm of the sound wave.
When the music reaches its end, it causes the opponent heart to stop.

[BlackMageDryfe]

cool... specially considering how much spanish there is in Bleach XD

how about in shikai the sword turns into a harp?

and in bankai something more complicate... a violin?

or viceversa??? o.o

[Honogram]

oh, i c. cool, thx. =) u hav some sweet blades there.

and honogram, somebody made that sort of blade earlier, the only difference was that that person's bankai made it so that the user had two swords, making it possible to copy two people's shikais rather than just one. we had a huge argument about whether that was overpowered or not.

Well I was just trying to make it powerful... maybe too powerful... so the only weakness I gave my blade is that it can only copy the zanpaktou it crossed blades with...

So technically you can wiped me out by killing me quickly with your bankai while avoiding contact with my blade... hehe... though of course my philosophy is not to let anyone know the abilities of my blade... NOW YOU ALL MUST DIE! since the secret is out... haha :P

[BlackMageDryfe]

I can kill you!!

Great light, control, angry sky, broken earth...

Storm of tomorrow, rise from abyss!!

STORM FIELD! *read the post where i explain what does it do*

[zagman505]

bah. all you fools would get owned by the awesome overpowered-ness of my blade. or at least, the overpoweredness of my bankai form 2 =)

anyways, another cool blade, id. seems much more like an effect blade than an attack, and yeah, i just keep visualizing ur blade turning into a harp or something, lol.

anyways, just a few questions this time:

1. how do ur abilities work? do they only work if the opponent HEARS the sound, meaning that a deaf person would be completely oblivious? or does it work in the sound waves, meaning that you can't escape no matter wat, because you'll still get hit by sound waves?
2. could u use ur final bankai ability to other effects, like making their heart rate go up so much they hav a heart attack or something?
3. ur effects pretty much all 'slowly' do watever to ur opponent. is this a set amount of time, like it will take 10 minutes for the full effects to occur, regardless of opponent, or does it depend on ur reiatsu and that of ur opponents?

um. thats about it. maybe i should create another uber overpowered blade =)

[Akechi]

Well I was joking around at work, since I spend a lot of my time at work cleaning and sweeping up trash (I work at a movie theatre).

My zanpakutou's name would be Heftybag, and the shikai would be a strong red broom, the bristles having a deadly poison on them and the pole becomes a blade, the hilt appears at the handle of the broom.

My bankai would be a giant metallic mop, where the mop head extends in any direction and each piece could fling dirty mop water at the enemy which is poisonous/adhesive. It would also extend the pole if I needed to reach far away.

Heavenly slicing dirty smelly water attack!

That's my joke zanpakutou based off my job lol.

[Genis-Vell]

1. how do ur abilities work? do they only work if the opponent HEARS the sound, meaning that a deaf person would be completely oblivious? or does it work in the sound waves, meaning that you can't escape no matter wat, because you'll still get hit by sound waves?


Well it waves themselves. So yeah, its going to be hard to escape.


2. could u use ur final bankai ability to other effects, like making their heart rate go up so much they hav a heart attack or something?


Nope, that’s final Bankai unique ability. (I kinds like it that way keeps it from being to overpowering)



3. ur effects pretty much all 'slowly' do watever to ur opponent. is this a set amount of time, like it will take 10 minutes for the full effects to occur, regardless of opponent, or does it depend on ur reiatsu and that of ur opponents?


Yes the effects come in slow but gradually build up and intensifying in the process. So within the 1 min you might feel a discomfort, but by 3 min you’ll be able to notice the effects.


seems much more like an effect blade than an attack, and yeah, i just keep visualizing ur blade turning into a harp or something, lol.


I thought about turning my sword into harp or musical instruments. But I rather keep it as a blade. I use the excuse that my blade can emit sound waves, because it’s a vibrating sword.


Well if you have any questions, go ahead and ask. And if you have come up with a new blade post it.

Me I have one more on my mind. This one is going to be somewhat interesting blade.

[zagman505]

lol, nice sword akechi, love it =)

and thanx for clearing things up, id. i'll think of another uber powerful blade later and post it =)

[Genis-Vell]

Final Judgment - My final technique causes to use the rest of my power. Any thing caught up within my presence (more than one person can be caught in my technique), is undergoes a ritual ware I begin to remove the 5 human senses. 6 is the brain activity, and finally Sealing away the spirit in Hell. While the opponent’s is caught up by Spiritual power he can neither defend or attack. But if there is out side interface and manages to harm me, or break my concentration it halts the ritual. This is technique can only be used once, until replenishing my spiritual energy.


Well Azreal Final Banki has bin toned down. I think it adds more balance.

Well here is the new edited version to Azreal.

Final Judgment - My final technique causes to use the rest of my power. Any thing caught up within my presence (more than one person can be caught in my technique), is undergoes a ritual ware I begin to remove the 5 human senses. 6 is the brain activity, and finally Sealing away the spirit in Hell.

The opponent is surrounded by false images of my self, and has a short time to strike the real me, before his senses area taken away.

But if there is out side interface and manages to harm me, or break my concentration it halts the ritual. This is technique can only be used once, until replenishing my spiritual energy.

[YamiNaruto]

i have made on but its in a picture and the picture dsecibes apearance better, http://www.deviantart.com/view/31812918/ very large picture in full veiw, but it has black flames, for the power and if you don't wish to full veiw its name is Black Sunshine (in english on purpose), its shikai is Hellfire sunrise and Bankai is Black sun setting on Hells fire, based on the picture if you can tell the swords shikai and bankai can tear someone up prettry good, the shikais a bility is to have black flames sorunnd the user and sword and bankai gives the user flame armor, think something like sensui from yyh's sacred armor, and the ability shoot a phoinoix shaped black flame ath the enemy fromthe third smalll blade between the two blades

[BlackMageDryfe]

ooohhh... nice sword...

also a gigai that lets u use ur abilities would be awesome!

[zagman505]

lol, nice modification, id. makes it a LOT easier to be able to escape death, but still a strong blade.

ok, goin to create a new blade after i get thru attempting to make banners for some fanclubs.

[oblivionblade]

Shikai
Name: Kiba Souseiji
Length/looks: Duel weilder. The sword is 40'' long. Towards the end it double spikes.
Skill: Kiba Souseiji can control the ability of sound and water. With he's ability of water he can heat or cool water. Kiba Souseiji also controls sound. With he's ability of sound he can basically remove sound or he can make something so loud it can destory your ear drums.
Jibakuha- Raito (the weilder of the zanpakuto) only have to slash her sword about giving her the ability to control sound and water. In the water is of course were she has the best control of her aquaic ability.
Release phrase: Gyakusatsu Kiba Souseiji
Bankai- Tsurugini is a very active ban kai. He has two forms. He has a gaint cat form. That listens to music as it fights. He is much taller then then Kyubi. He is a large black cat

http://img35.echo.cx/my.php?image=tsurugini2oc.jpg

Also Tsurugini has a cat boy form. He is very jrock looking. He is a very flirtious person that will hit on every girl. But he's heart belongs to another ban kai that he loves. Her name is Fuuja (no picture) Tsurugini is also a jokester. He loves to play tricks on people.

http://img76.echo.cx/my.php?image=tsruginihumanform16ls.jpg

hey dude...could u possily be describing the wo tail, nekomata? the giant black cat bijuu? idk jus reminded me of that

[mr_zoot]

The True Warrior

Shikai: The second stage of a true warrior is realized and a sword is no longer needed because a true warrior who is one with his/her surroundings can use anything as a weapon. A blade of grass can cut as deep and a gust of wind and spray of dirt can deflect a cut as neatly as a sword. So the sword disappears and the true warrior uses the surroundings as a weapon.
Special Attacks: Improvised on the spot and are never repeated.

Bankai: The third and final ideal of the true warrior is realized when violence is set aside completly. The Paradox of learning to kill in order to protect and preserve is abandoned. The true warrior is such a master of his surroundings, martial knowledge, and tactics that he/she is nigh unassailable. Like the grandmasters of chess the true warrior is always 10 steps ahead of an attacker, and always uses the totality of the situation to defeat every attack, usually before it even begins. Before long, an attacker realizes the futility of continued assault when it becomes plain that no blow will ever land and no cut will ever bite even if the battle were to last 100 years. The true warrior decides not to kill and in turn will not ever be killed.

[zagman505]

hm. first of all, welcome to NF =)

and now for ur zanpakutou. its interesting, thats for sure. although to me, it doesn't seem like much of a sword. O.o i like the effect, but i'd really prefer if i had some definite attacks...

and ur bankai is awesome. peaceful end to combat =) and an awesome ability to completely outmanouever ur opponent. only question is... wat if ur fighting some tactical genius like shikamaru, that can play like hundreds of moves ahead of his opponent? O.o

[mr_zoot]

Depends.... If your opponent is a main character like Shikamaru then he may well beat you at your own game, however I think in his case the battle would last like 20 seconds before he would say F it...lets go play shogi.

[Red_Ronin01]

I'm thinking of fixing my zanpakutou. Should I put it inside a new post or just edit the existing one?

[zagman505]

meh, just make a new post =)

i'm goin to be inactive for a short while, hafta study for my upcoming ap us history exam.

[Red_Ronin01]

Thanks. I just got around to fixing this. Hopefully, this works better.

Name: Kagematsuri (Festival of Shadows)
Appearance: 5 1/2 foot long katana with a 4 foot blade and an 18 inch handle. Also has a black sheath, purple handle, and silvery black fittings for both the blade and the handle.
Zanpakutou's Avatar Form: A large black wraith with a tribal pattern painted all over its skull and bladelike hands

Shikai Command/Technique: "Fall like darkness, Kagematsuri."

Once the shikai form is activated, the Kagematsuri will emit a shrill scream, like that of a ghost or a banshee, and immediately pull all shadows within a 75-foot radius of the user under its control. The center of the radius moves as Kagematsuri moves and the shikai form gives the user the ability to manipulate and control the shadows within that radius in numerous ways. He can paralyze his opponents via their shadows either by pinning them to the walls or any other surface using projectile weapons (knives or bo shuriken mainly) or by stabbing directly into their shadows using the zanpakutou, which would not only paralyze them, but also cause immense pain as if a real stab wound were inflicted. However, no physical damage comes as a result of the latter. Kagematsuri's shikai form also has secondary function which allows the user to blend into or become a shadow in order to hide from his opponent or escape either by moving through the darkness or by travelling in other people's shadows. Kagematsuri's abilities, however, are not all kido as it still has a tertiary, but unseen function that automatically infuses the user with his shadow as well as its own in order to augment or maintain any and all physical and vital functions during combat. The shadows which fuse into the user work like artificial muscle tissues that serve to improve the wielder's strength and agility as well as resistance to injury. They can also serve to plug up wounds or to stop internal bleeding in the case of fatal or near-fatal injuries.

Bankai Command/Technique: "Hear the caller in the darkness, Kagematsuri."

Once Kagematsuri's bankai form is activated, it will immediately blanket the entire area within a 5 km radius of the user in a state of artificial night before quickly forming and transporting both the user and his opponent(s) to opposite ends of a massive tunnel formed by the shadows while the bankai technique was activating. The user will then begin to draw his sword partially while charging forward with a huge wall of shadows taking up the entire space of the tunnel following close behind him before finally drawing his sword completely and yelling out the command stated above. After that, the user will quickly come to a halt and the wall of shadows close behind him will suddenly overtake him and absorb him into itself before suddenly transforming itself into a huge, six-headed shadow demon composed purely of fluid shadows with six massive wolf heads at its front and a raging torrent of shadows behind it as its body. The shadows in the form of the demon will then sweep all the way down through the tunnel's interior towards the wielder's opponents like a raging river; tearing, ripping, and thrashing violently at everything its their path as it goes. The shadow demon will only grow larger and gain more momentum as it surges forward and absorbs more shadows until it finally reaches the end of the tunnel and implodes violently in on itself, supposedly killing all its occupants except for the user. After that, the shadows will all fade and the user will be left alone in the middle of the field with the desecrated remains of his opponents lying around him if anything is left of them at all. There is no escape from the bankai except directly through it. However, despite all this, the bankai technique is still flawed and the technique's flaw is a major one at that. This is because Kagematsuri's bankai technique is a one-shot deal and can only be used once by the user in every battle. Therefore, if it fails to kill all the opponents on his first try, then he will be left completely open with all his reiatsu drained and his physical strength at a bare minimum. You need to kill your opponents on your first try using the bankai. Otherwise, you're as good as dead.

[kuro10shi]

hi red_ronin-chan! it's a shame, i liked the puppet thing, even though it was ok because it really is just an instant kill. nice job. this is only technical but the bankai command should be more like a technique name than an order. other than that i like it.

Qs:
1. the field of shadow control in the radius of the shikai, is it flat or a sphere, or extends into the sky like a cylinder, can you control shadows that are not on the ground but, say, on a wall instead?
2. what do u mean there's "no escape from the bankai except directly through it"?
3. while the enemy is in the tunnel, can they still move around or are they paralyzed? meaning they can try to attack the demon shadow if they want?
4. is it dark for them in the tunnel?

and can someone tell me how to insert the "show" button for hiding spoilers? thanx ^__^
i'll try to get my zanpakutou up, i'm working on pictures.

[borax3030]

my zanpakutou.......chuck norris. 'nuff said

[Red_Ronin01]

To answer your questions, Kuro10shi........

1. The field of control is spherical and shadows don't necessarily have to be on the ground to be controlled (e.g. getting your shadow pinned to the wall, or to the ceiling if you're unlucky....now that would make for a curious situation.....)

2. The bankai (the shadow demon) takes up the entire space of the tunnel as it is moving and both ends of the tunnel are blocked so there is no escape.

3. Enemies can still move inside the tunnel unless the user manages to paralyze them first. People inside the tunnel could also try to attack the shadow demon should they choose to do so, but its form and composition usually makes that a futile endeavor. Doing such a thing would be akin to fighting a tidal wave....that is unless you've got a seriously powerful technique capable of stopping the bankai such as Ishida's ridiculously powerful arrow that blew the living crap out of Mayuri and his bankai or something else that Aizen or Yamamoto might have up their sleeves.

4. The tunnel is completely dark, nullifying your sense of sight, but the rest of your senses remain completely intact....especially your hearing.

And one more thing......I just sent you the idea you requested for your bankai. You should be receiving it right now. I hope it works. Enjoy!

[thx123]

Okay, so I have a 4th sword idea, but it is really really long, like 3.5 pages in MS word at point 11 font. So basically, I guess I am asking for permission. Would you all mind if I posted it?

-Adam
On his birthday, Chuck Norris randomly selects one lucky child to be thrown into the sun.

[zagman505]

go ahead, thx =) i'd love to see ur blade if it takes up that much writing. probably goin to take a few posts, tho.

woot, i'm not the only person asking questions anymore! yay!!

and btw, i'm bak, after taking my exam =)

[thx123]

Okay, so this is kinda like my “God Sword” Zanpakutou, but I’m gonna try to make it interesting, if a bit cliché. It is suppose to be overpowered and highly preposterous.

THE USERS: There are 3 users, all siblings. 2 brothers, 1 sister. Through reasons not fully understood, their Zanpakutou are somehow connected to eachother. The 2 brothers are named Garak, andTenshi. The sister’s name in Yomi. They are all in the same Shinigami unit, though which one I’m yet to decide, most likely Ukitake’s. They are never seen apart, and seemingly spend all the time together. Their personalities don’t always mesh well, but hey, isn’t that the case with all brothers and sisters? The names of their Zanpakutou are as follows:

Tenshi - Keen Sight: This Zanpakutou is really no different then most. The only real noticeable feature is that the handle is an opalescent white color and the blade is extremely polished. It should also be noted that a small bracer is on his left forearm.

Garak - Unending Desire: Fairly standard. Only real noticeable features are that his blade doesn’t have a blood groove, and also the blade seems to have a bit of rust on it. It should also be noted that a metallic, multi-band, heavy looking bangle is on his right forearm.

Yomi - Flawless Truth: A zanpakutou that is a bit shorter then some, has a vibrant royal purple handle. Also, the blade edge squares off rather then come to a point. It should also be noted that a silvery chain is wrapped approximately 3 times around her ankle and lower left leg.

SHIKAI RELEASE: A multi-part poem is recited by the 3 to activate the shikai. It’s not needed, but for thematic flair, it’s preferred.

Garak - Darkness and light, while different are the same.
Yomi -We humble ask you turn your gaze toward us.
Tenshi - Help us strike down those that oppose.
All - This we do request!

Unending Desire’s Appearance: Garak’s blade, Unending Desire, turns into a moderate sized hand axe. Approximately 2 1/2 feet long. The axe has multiple tones and shades of red running through it. The axe has a demon art on it that allows Garak to hurl the axe at an opponent, and the axe will always return.

Flawless Truth’s Appearance: Yomi’s blade, Flawless Truth, becomes a fencing degen. The blade is thin, long, and flexible, while the hand guard is an ornate twisting mass of metal. It’s polish shines like a light in the dark, and a near silent hum seems to emanate from the blade.

Keen Sight’s Appearance: Tenshi’s blade, Keen Sight, Turns into a pair of long bladed tonfas. They extend well across Tenshi’s forearm, and extend a solid 20 inches from his fist. They shine brilliantly and the blade shifts methodically from serrated to smooth on the edge of the blade. The handles are a dark metallic brown, while the blades are aluminum colored.

SHIKAI ABILITES:
Unending Desire: Garak’s shikai enhances his Destruction arts skills immensely. Spells numbered up to about 58 do not require the full incantation for their full effect to be acquired. Spells past #60 do require an incantation, but their overall power is doubled, and in some rare instances, tripled. Garak can pour extra spirit power into many of the lower spells, such as #31 or #33, and dramatically increase the power of the spell even more. The use of an incantation on a lower spell also increases the power further still. In theory, a low level spell, such as #31 can have it’s power increased nearly 10 fold IF sufficient spirit power is added, and the incantation is fully used. Oddly, the shikai heavily impacts Binding Arts. Garak is nearly unable to use binding arts. Only about the first 10 are available to him, they require and incantation, and even then are quite weak.

Flawless Truth: Yomi’s Shikai enhances her Binding Arts skills considerably. Much like Garak’s Shikai. Binding arts on up through about #60 do not require an incantation. Of course the use of an incantation greatly increases the power of the spell. Just as with Garak, Yomi can pour spirit power into the spells, greatly increasing their power. Just as with Garak, Yomi’s Destruction Arts suffer dramatically when in Shikai. Granted, it’s not quite as bad as Garak, something that she frequently reminds him. Yomi can use Destruction Arts up to about #15.

Keen Sight: Tenshi’s Shikai is all about speed and damage. His two tonfa blades aren’t exactly the most bad ass things in heaven, but that’s not the point. His speed is quite impressive in shikai mode. He’s nearly as fast as a flash step, without actually doing a flash step. Granted, he can flash step to a degree, but it’s very hard on him, as he hasn’t quite mastered the ability yet. His blades do have spirit power continually flowing through them, which greatly enhances their overall striking power. The shikai also helps route his spirit power into his legs and arms, thereby allowing his increased strength and speed. Sadly, his shikai nearly removes and Demon Arts. Tenshi had nearly no demon arts before his shikai. With a shikai, they’re basically nonexistent. Basically, think of him like Rock Lee. No ninjutsu abilities, so he overcompensates by become a taijutsu beast. Tenshi is the same way.

SHIKAI NOTES: It is unknown if all three must be around for a shikai to be initiated. Most theorize that they do not all need to be together for their shikai’s to be used, but instead that their powers are amplified when together. It is also theorized that If only one person used their Shikai, they’re abilities would be somewhat muted, and also that the other 2 would feel that the one is in a combat situation. Again though, They have NEVER been seen apart.

BANKAI ACTIVATION: As before, a small poem is used
Garak: Together we powerful…
Yomi: Divided we are none…
Tenshi: We call upon the ancient flames…
All: Fuse us into one!

BANKAI APPEARANCE:
Upon activation, a brilliant light is generated, and the 3 siblings are merged into each other. What then exists is something truly breathtaking. A human figure approximately 7 feet tall, and appears to be glowing a bright yellow-orange. A light pulse emanates from the form. Also, there appears to be no apparent clothes, with the exception of the hakama and obi belt. In the person’s hand is a large Odachi sword. The hand is 2 feet long, the blade is 4 feet long. The form does have hair of moderate length, reaching just slightly past the shoulders. When the person speaks, all three voices of the siblings can be heard, speaking in unison. The eyes of the person are essentially white, with no pupils. Also, each limb is wearing the bracer or charm from each respective sibling. The right leg has no added armor or charm.

BANKAI ABILITIES:
Basically, the abilities of all three siblings are now instilled into the new form. Their abilities are also dramatically enhanced. This form can literally “pre-load” Art of Destruction and Binding, so that it can rapid fire off multiple spells in quick succession, all the while the person will be running about, engaging in melee combat. To a certain extent, the person can also force various demon arts into it’s sword, thereby increasing it’s power.

ULTIMATE TECHNIQUE – Way of Binding #99 Celestial Prison of Souls
This spell has only ever been used once in the history of soul society, and it was against a high level Menos Grande. The siblings were the ones that used it. So terrifying is this spell, that most avoid even speaking of it. The spell starts out by the 3 siblings suddenly breaking apart, and forming a delta pyramid around the victim. Walls of pure spirit energy are generated, and once they are up , there is no escape. A long incantation is then used.

- crumbled castle walls, 1000 shattered bricks, 78 burning pyres, cutting wind of leaves, swirling red waters, thunderous blue cry, history’s future, present’s past. The soulless shell seeks out that which he cannot achieve, the soul avoids the harmonic shell. Form a prison of those forgotten, form great walls of pain unknown. Lash this impure being into a world beyond. Way of Binding #99: Celestial Prison of Souls!

Once the incantation is complete, the pyramid of spiritual energy contorts and instantly binds and encapsulates the victim. The victim is then swiftly dissolved. Once completely dissolved, the capsule of spiritual energy dissipates into the air above. What this spell does essentially, is remove the victim’s soul from the systems of this world. They no longer exist in soul society, Hueco Mundo, or Earth. They have essentially been completely destroyed, their soul annihilated.

BANKAI NOTES: Theories abound. Many believe that there is, or was, a 4th sibling. This is partially due to the fact that every sibling has a piece of armor on a limb that carries over to the Bankai stage, and yet the right leg has no such item. It is theorized that IF this 4th sibling was indeed found, their combined powers would border on dangerous. Some also theorize that the 4th sibling was separated from them by General Yamato himself, sensing that the 4th would overpower them. None of these theories have been proven.

Also, siblings are siblings. While in Bankai, the 3 control the new form with combined minds and thoughts. When conflicts between them arise, the form can behave in curious or erratic ways. For the Bankai to be truly powerful, the 3 must be of one mind, one thought.

[zagman505]

i like it =)

you've vaguely answered the questions that i woulda had... such as whether or not they could fight by themselves, or whether or not there was a 4th, considering the armor stuff..

anyways, does the thingy they hav around their arm/leg do anything other than serve as identification?

can the final bankai ability be halted by another person? can it be used against more than one person? can it be used more than once?

btw, i think that tessai used a 99 binding spell on ichigo in the shattered shaft...

i'm interested in wat would happen if there was a 4th sibling... >.> wat would her (well, i'm assuming it'd be a girl, just to make it even) name be? wat would her abilities be? how would her being there affect the shikai and bankai?

[Hyouma]

Wow this is a difficult one, but i've finally thought of one.
I don't have any names for it however, my Japanese isn't that good, so feel free to come up with cool ones yourself if you'd like to :)

Zanpakutou design: A very small sword almost like a dagger, but at will, it grows to the length of an avg human.

Powers:

When activated, everytime it touches another Zanpakutou, it makes that shinigami lose its speed and go slower.

Bankai number one: With one touch you can't move anymore, even though you can still see and hear. You're completely paralyzed.

Bankai number two: My Zanpakutou transforms into a Shinigami that fights for himself.

The reasons i picked all these powers is because i'm a lazy guy so this would fit :)

[Zaru]

My zanpakutou is a vegetable. I can swing it around.

Just like Orihime does it. (http://www.warez-area.de.vu/)

[thx123]

Okay, so,
I didn't know if there was a 99 spell yet. I'm not into the Manga much, so I'm a smidge out of the loop in that regard. If there is already a 99, just make it 100, or 1 million, whatever. a GAZILLION! yeah.....I like that... "Way of Binding #GAZZILION!", even the opponent would be like "WTF? Gazillion?" Then they'd die.

One could argue that the pieces of armor/charms serve not just as identification, but also part of their zanpakutou, and possibly a way that the 3 are connected. Haven't really thought about it too much..... I guess I'll have to.

Can it be halted by someone? Inside, unlikely, outside, I suppose so, though when I think about it, I suspect the 3 siblings would be protected somehow. Sorta like during the Hokage Orochimaru fight, and how the sound ninjas created fields around themselves. I think that'd work.....

Can you do it on more then one person? Sure, why not. (so simple lol)

Can they do it more then once? Well, yes, and no. Of course they can do it again, just not like rapid fire or anything. I'd say that thay'd be spent for a while after doing such a spirit energy intensive spell. Basically, the 3 would be out of commision for a bunch of days, then maybe after a bit of time, they could in theory bust it out again. I doubt they would though. I believe it's one of those spells that is only done after much deliberation and waying of the options. It's not like Rukia and her #31. They don't just go around zapping people. That'd be kinda funny though. "I ordered light dressing on my salad!! LIGHT!!! ARGH! WAY OF BINDING #99!" *zap*

The 4th sibling....yeah, the 4th would be female. Maybe evil? I dunno. If i had to give her a name it'd most likely be either Abby, or maybe Cassie. I kinda like both. Basically, I think the 4th sibling would "throw the balance of power." It's one of those things where they'd be so powerful, they probably wouldn't be able to control it. I suppose if it was a TV show, the appearance of the 4th sibling would be a season finale or something. Something grand and epic, a person struggle for control. Ah, how dramatic.

In terms of her powers, Hmmm. It'd almost be more interesting if she had no real power at all. Her powers are purely latent in nature. Sorta like that "the water is always running full blast" analogy they use with Ichigo. I suspect she'd be rather unimpressive by herself. She, I think, would have no real abilities, or even a zanpakutou, of her own. It's her mere presence around the other 3 that makes them stronger. Then that would tie into the "Yamato taking the 4th away" idea. He sensed that she was so so so friggin powerful, that her very power was beyond a concept she could grasp. that, combined with this shared spirit flow that the siblings seem to have, she'd basically overwhelm the system the 4 share, and not even know it, not even being able to control it.

Huh, I like that a lot actually.

-Adam

[zagman505]

why'd you delete it? =O i like it, although it does appear a bit overpowered, the characteristics of the wielder greatly make up for it =)

also, really great drawings =)

[kuro10shi]

sorry, it's pretty long too. enjoy. ^__^


Zanpakutou

Name: Chitetsujin
Meaning: Blood Piercing Sword

Initial Form: Regular katana with 36in blade and 15in red handle, silver fittings, black spiked guard. Comes with a lacquered sheath in deep red, with silver design.

Shikai Command: "Drink, Chitetsujin"

Shikai Form: A 7ft long sword with a red hilt and black spiked guard in a cresent shape. The blade is worn near the base and behind it is a long black spike. It weighs only 3g, but still relatively strong, considering.

http://i62.photobucket.com/albums/h103/kuro10shi/2shikai.jpg

Shikai Technique: User cuts her left palm, and spreads her blood over the blade, which which changes into shikai form. A paper-thin absolute destruction spell surrounds the entire sword except the hilt inside the guard. It is the 113th Destruction Spell [Hadou HyakuJuusan] and the full chant is: "Great ruler, one who breathes the will of God, shattered wind, calm water, peirce the cold depths of sin with shining pain. Receive and protect that which flows through life, barrier of oblivion, Sakuyahashi"
Anything that comes in direct contact with the zanpakutou is destroyed/vaporized. This kidou is constant, so even if the zanpakutou stays still, anything trying to touch it, or falls on it, the effect is the same. If the kidou was laid wide and flat, it looks like dipping something in water [ripples slightly], except everything beneath the surface, instead of being wet, its simply gone [it cannot spread, like flame on paper, only what it touches]. This makes Chitetsujin able to cut anything as easily as air [no friction against 'nothing']. Even when the user lets her arm rest at her sides, the blade goes through the ground. If fighting against a shinigami, they cant touch it with their zanpakutou; if they try to slice through Chitetsujin, theirs will be cut in half. It's called "seikyou no ken," the perfect sword. It has no other abilities.

Bankai Command: "Seven Angels Hidden Blade Possession"
Natenshi Kakureru Yaiba Kitsunetsuki
[I have no idea about this translation]

http://i62.photobucket.com/albums/h103/kuro10shi/2attempt.jpg

Bankai Technique: The zanpakutou melts into a white molten liquid, which the user drinks, turning her blood into the same thing [her wounds flow glowing white instead of red]. It becomes the physical liquid form of the shikai, turning the user into living sword. Enemies cannot cut more than skin-deep, and when they try, multiple blades automatically shoot out from it, cutting up the enemy if they're not fast enough. Her strength and speed increase by 50% and sense of pain is muted, but she's still weakened from loss of blood and reiatsu. The reiatsu is used to control the blades' movement in the air [, it's not used to sustain the kidou]. It also keeps the blood from destroying herself from the inside. Requires concentration.
The user's main technique is to grow and control blades from any part of her body, all of which are covered by Sakuyahashi. However, she cant morph her body in any way or shape, but can only pull weapons from it. It is possible to form any weapon, but she has to learn how to make it first.

Iron Savior [Hagane no Kyuuseishu]: Her main sword comes from the original wound on her left palm [there's a permanent scar there with a history behind it] which is identical to the shikai form.
Twilight Cutter [Reimeikiri]: Two wing-shaped steel fans. The right one is shown here. There is a ring for the thumb to go through and the black peices of silk are wrapped around the forearms. Collapsable like a regular fan.

http://i62.photobucket.com/albums/h103/kuro10shi/2chikusei.jpg

http://i62.photobucket.com/albums/h103/kuro10shi/2blackpaper.jpg

Three Feathers Blood Mist [Sanbane no Chigasumi]: Long throwing daggers from the base of her fingers.
Faint Breath/At Death's Door [Mushi no Iki]: Her final weapon. Hagane no Kyuuseishuu glows white and turns into a scythe.

http://i62.photobucket.com/albums/h103/kuro10shi/2faintbreath.jpg


Her final [maybe only] technique, Sakuyahashi's true form, is an "absolute defense," Distant God's Cage [Toukami no Kago]. She uses the sword/scythe to draw a ring of ancient characters in the air or ground with blood [size depends, can be as big as a building or just room enough for her, obviously, the bigger, the more draining for the user], which spreads to form a sphere of the kidou as large as the diameter of the circle. It is safe to touch from the inside. This kekkai cannot move and lasts as long as she is conscious/alive or wills it away.



User

Name: Tenkaishi Lio
Ht/Wt: 5'4; 107lb
Hair: Gold yellow
Eyes: Maroon red
Visible Age: 17
Actual Age: 800s
Zanpakutou: Carried on back; Right-handed
Other: Has two spike earrings; Left arm and chest are covered in bandages.

Member of the Court of Pure Soul's Third squad, Fourth seat. Lio is fast and graceful, but falls down all the time. She is usually laid-back and optimistic and it takes a lot to get her angry, and when she does, she's very scary. She has an acute sense of self-preservation and extremely distrustful of strangers, but loyal to her friends.
In shinigami school, she specialized in attack spells and knows more of them than anyone except Kurotsuchi Mayuri [I think it was mentioned that he studies and develops them]. She is the only one alive that knows Sakuyahashi, though she didn't create it. Her sword skills were not that good. She is physically weak and, even now, can barely fight with her katana in its initial form [regular katanas are heavy for her]. This is the reason why she is usually underestimated, and why she is only fourth seat. She mainly uses Demon Arts to fight when not in shikai or bankai.
However, using her shikai, she's almost invincible. Because it's light and has the kidou around it, she can cut effortlessly, so weakness is not a problem; and the blade is long to increase her range and because a good enough sense of balance to fight with it [she falls down only from carelessness]. She is one of the few shinigami who is a kidou specialist yet mainly a close range fighter. Only one person has seen her bankai. Details when I figure them out. Ask later ^__^

Weaknesses:
1) if the enemy has a strong reiatsu [kenpachi if he concentrates] they can deflect the spell
2) have the user's own blood on them [the kidou is activated by it, and so is also negated by it, prevents her from accidently cutting herself. Won't fully work, cuz theres still the sharp blade underneath, ditto for weakness 1].
3) somehow get the sword away from her [if you can, only works in shikai]
4) be faster and dodge her attacks [not impossible, but difficult]
5) distract her so she'll trip on something [most likely of the seven]
6) during bankai, drain her reiatsu or cause her to lose concentration so that the kidou will fail to protect her from the kidou [a weakness she hides feircely, for good reason]
7) Have a technique like stopping time, taking away senses, stopping movement, zanpakutous that can seperate into pieces, basically anything that allows you to defeat her without having to cut or touch her. Actually, i can think of lots of weaknesses now... ^__^;;

[zagman505]

i don't mind if its long =) the long ones are usually good ones.

i really like the most recent ones i'v been seeing =) at least the long ones.

[kuro10shi]

Hountou ni hountou ni arigatou ne, red_ronin-chan! ^__^ for helping with the names, techniques and everything! *bows* Kagematsuri's user pictures coming soon!

[mr_zoot]

love the artwork

[Red_Ronin01]

Do itashimashite, Kuro10shi-san. (Bows even lower) That is some seriously beautiful artwork you've got there and I am thoroughly impressed. Excellent work!!

[thx123]

Okay, so, I figured since others are posting pictures, I would to.
I recently did up a drawing of the user for Shinmoku, and also through together a quick back story.
His name is Kaji, have yet to decide a last name. He lives on Earth and could best be considered a "deserter" of the Shinigami Corps. He has a real love of life and nature in general, and would choose to not ever fight then have to cause damge or harm to anyone. This goes in sharp contrast to his zanpakutou, and especially his destructive Bankai. Now on Earth, he swore to never fight again, not for Soul Society or anyone else. He lived a nice peaceful live until hollows attacked his village. So angered by the senseless destruction, he one again picked up his zanpakutou, and has started to actively hunt down Hollows.

He is a rather depressed looking man. Most would say he looks downright suicidal, but that just isn't the case. He is actually very caring and protective of others. Due to personal connection to his Soul Society home, he still wears a modified shinigami uniform. A standard Hakama and sandals, and the Gi top(s). The Gi tops are left open, and under them is a tunic.


http://img180.imageshack.us/img180/3969/kajix2dx.th.jpg (http://img180.imageshack.us/my.php?image=kajix2dx.jpg)

Hope you like the drawing. Long lunch breaks at my school give me much doodle time.

-Adam
Hai

[Chopped_Hige]

my zanpakutou.......chuck norris. 'nuff said

You are the biggest bish of all time, stealing my zanpakutou like that. Reps, Chuck Norris jokes never fail to make me laugh my ass off.

[Genis-Vell]

Zanpakutou Name: Hakuya

Shikai - Release phrase: "Tempting the lamenting darkness of night, the sword that cuts threw darkness with light - Hakuya!"

Zanpkutou special abilities - Can fuse Fire/Water/Earth/Air element onto its blade.

Suzaku: Fire Base Element - A fiery phoenix is summoned and takes flight. The Phoenix scorches anything in its path as the fire itself reaches high temperature.


Byakko: Air Base Element - A Tiger is summoned in a the forms of wind. Anything in its path is shredded and torn apart as the wind tears madly.


Seiryu: Water Base Element - A dragon is summoned in a liquad form. Anything in its path is crushed by its awesome force.

Genbu: Earth Base Element - A black tortoise entwined with serpents, and is both an offensive and defensive technique. Genbu's shell protects user from an opponent's attack, while the serpents bind and destroy them. (note. Genbu has a two part attack. it’s a defensive and offensive technique. Like it is stated first part protects the user. If the opponent manages to break the barrier, It can be followed up A) holding the opponent down. B) trapping the opponent and sealing it off).



BanKai.

~Kouryu~
4 Elements + Light/Holy Elements - All four Gods strike at the same time in all directions.
Suzaku------\/
Byakko >- Target - <Seiryu
Benbu-------/\
If the opponent survives/blocks/dodges the attack. It enters its second phase ware Buddha is summoned. The opponent is sitting on top of Buddha’s palm. Buhda then unleashes its spiritual/light/holy element attack from his palm.


1-Note : inspired and completely ripped of from the Manga Samurai Deeper Kyo.
2- Note: Yes I know Banki is vary cheap Im working on placing restrains on it.

[Ian Altano]

Name: Zenten Toucho

Normal mode: looks like a normal katana, about 4 ft long

Shikai
release phrase: fang of the wolve, sword of the lightest breeze, the one who defies the wicked, Zenten Toucho!
Skill: sword dissappears in my hand as i push it in, then, my body becomes liquid metal, and when hit, it just regenerates, and i can let swords appear from in my body if i want, where i want.
Release phrase: Hyouke, Goten Zanzoku

bankai
skill: spreads hands: sphere of same liquid metal as me appears, indestructable. Then, I walk into the wall, and I can melt together with it, and appear wherever i want.
release phrase: Hirogare, Goten Zanzoku Arashotai

[Kisame]

Final Villain mode; Suzumushi Mk II


Looks the same as Tousen's sword always.

Shikai Release: Nake, Suzumushi. Anyone who hears it loses there sense of orientation and if they are of Lower reiatsu than Tousen they die, no exceptions.

Shikai release fphrase 2: Benihiko, After pointing Suzumushi at someone. They get impaled...by hundreds of swords.


Bankai

Great Cricket Destroyer, King of Hell mode.

By looking at tousens sword anyone who sees it loses there sight permenantly. By hearing the sound from the ring they lose their ability of hearing and abilty to sense reiatsu, By being touched by Suzumushi all the pain receptors in the body is activated at once.

[Genis-Vell]

Zanpakutou Name: Diablos

Shikai - Release phrase: “My fist is the divine breath! Blossom, o fallen seed, and draw upon thy hidden powers!! Grant unto thee the power of the glorious 'Mother of Destruction'! ------Diablos AWAKEN!”

Zanpkutou special abilities - Fire/Ice/Water/Lightening can be fused onto the blade.

Kyuubi - Crimson Flame Element- A Nine Tail Demon fox appears, and scorches the land with its Hell Flame.

Fenrir - Artic Ice Element - A Demon Ice Wolf appears and freezing anything in its path.

Scylla - Dark Water Element- A sea Creature appears, it constricts and drowns its enemies in its path.

Quetzalcoatl - Lightening Element- Feathered Serpent appears and takes flight. It shocks and electrifies anything or anyone in its path.


Bankai
~13 sign~
All 4 elements + Darkness element - All 4 demons are unleashed at the same time.
If the opponent survives/doges/blocks the attack. The opponent is suddenly within the 13 zodiac constellation ware Ophiuchus appears and recies a full Dark element attack.

[kuro10shi]

isn't diablos the same as hakuya but dark element?

[Genis-Vell]

isn't diablos the same as hakuya but dark element?

Yup, “Hakuya” follows the theme of holy/divinity and consist of the Sacred/divine beasts.

While “Diablos” conists of both devine/demon god’s of various mythologies.

Im thinking of changing Diablos a bit. So it does not reflect Hakuya that much.

[hjkou]

bankai!!!!

[Shigure]

Thornbird
Old, tarnished sword, silver fittings.

Shikai: "Sing" Handguard becomes covered in crimson feathers, blade becomes a bit longer and has a mirror finish.

"Fugue" at the moment an attack lands, time 'slows' (The user's mind, eyes and arm speed up) and they are granted the ability to follow up with up to three more quick strikes anywhere within their arm/sword's reach; almost instantly.

Bankai: "Resonate" User can now 'slow' time at will, can move three steps in this state, can land up to ten quick strikes.

Ultimate counter: "Inversion" At the moment an opponent impales the user, it continues normally until the user decides to counter. The opponent is sucked into a small.. 'time fold' where they take the attack meant for the user and witness them attacking themselves. Completely unblockable but can only be used once per fight.

"Perfect Fugue" The user 'pauses' time and is given up to thirty instances of attack. Each attack appears as a semi transparently doppleganger and can only attack once. Obviously, the more attacks, the longer the opponent has to react and the attacks will begin to come out of sync. Dopplegangers appear one to five seconds before they attack and cannot be harmed. - The user is left vulnerable for a time proportional to the number of attacks and time it took to execute them while time was 'paused'.

This sword would eat TONS of energy. Still seems a bit too powerful. I put too much time and thinking into this as well. :sweatdrop

[Champloon]

Amaterasu(Fire and Wind Elemental Zanpaktou):
A simple katana with a scorched blade and a handguard shaped like the sun (with rays) normally wrapped with bandages

Shikai: "Erupt" Becomes pure blood red Twin katanas minus the handguard (like Rukias only all red :P)

Blaze (fire elemental): Cutz made by the blade automatically blaze up (catch fire with a small eruption) this is combined with some wind techniques for maximum affect
Other fire sword techniques used with this power addition (gotta make some up :wink)

Gust (wind elemental): Speed is raised significantly also various wind techniques can be used and combined with fire techs (also gotta make some up :wink)

Bankai: 2 Swords are combined to form 1 huge sword (a Zanbato, think Clouds Buster Sword)

Flare (fire elemental): When cut with the sword the area cut automatically explodes with flame. Also if the ground is cut a lava eruption occurs

Burst (wind elemental): Movement is on par with Ichigo's bankai speed but the user instead "flickers" from place to place instead of runs

UBER Attack: "Engulf" splits large sword into 2 large swords passes through enemy while doing various sword attacks (think omnislash) pauses behind and past the enemy. The enemy then proceeds to explode.

As u can see the blade focuses on speed and technique :laugh
Whoopz got to into it...sorry 4 the long post :P

[Genpaku]

Interesting

My zanpakuto's name: Raiden (Lightning and Thunder)
I would call out: Shatter darkness with your light, destroy silences with you cry, and pierce the night...
or maybe just "pierce the night, raiden."

My Bankai is: Raiden, Tenshu Kobushi (Lightning and Thunder, God's Fists)
It's a lightning type Zanpakuto, and the bankai is basically the sword flies into the sky and disappears. There's a flash and I'm holding the unreleased form. Above there are now thick storm clouds. THAT, is my bankai, the storm itself.

Still working on the idea, I want to use it in a fanfic or something. Any suggestions?

[Flapjack]

Name of Zanpakutou: Tsuna (lightning type)

Shape: Same as Auron's sword http://www.fantasysquare.com/pic/ff10/Auron_1.jpg

Ban Kai: http://www.sega.com/gamesite/otogi2/tsuna.html

Pierce the darkness, TSUNA!!

[Endless Mike]

"Get off your lazy ass and do something useful for once in your life, Piece of Crap!"

(As you can tell, my Zanpakutou would be the lamest one ever)

[Seitoukaichou]

Name: Masakatsu Agatsu (means victory over oneself)

Shape: An average Tachi (that's the longer type of Katana). The shape stays always the same, as I'm to lazy to even change the shape.

Incantation: "Mendoukse!" XD

Shikai: No real "ability", like Renjis Zanpaktou. Just your average Soulcutter designed for... erm... soul cutting oO"!

Bankai: My Zanpaktou feats on my laziness. So I stab myself with "Masakatsu Agatsu". Wich has two effects. One: I would be actually energized and determinded. Two: The Zanpaktou absorbs my laziness. And if laziness equals power, than you have one hell of a powerful sword Oo

[Replica]

Name: Tobihi (Sparks)
Shikai Incantation: Norou (Curse)

[EtherSword]

Zanpakuto name: Nebilim.

Normal form: Regular looking sword with a round hilt.

Shikai command: Devour, Nebilim.

Shikai form: The blade becomes a strected out figure eight shape.

Shikai attack: Everytime the blade clashes on the opponets blade I absorb like 1%/10% reiatsu from him/her.

Bankai form: About 6 blades form a spiral shape from my sword's hilt.

Bankai attack: The blades magnetizes the enemie's sword when it comes in contact, then the blades start wrapping around it and starts absorbing the reiatsu from the person to transfer it to me.

Um yeah, I think thats pretty original. It took me like 2 hours to think this out.

[UzumakiYondaime]

my soul slayers name would be natsuhiboshi (meaning summer star in japenese)
normal form:
http://img241.imageshack.us/img241/372/natsuhiboshi1jw.png

kai: Flare! Natsuhiboshi turns it into a red fiery sword and if you cut your opponent it hurts more because its like putting a match in a cut. and also you can control the flames you can make it spread and shrink, also if your dealing with a weak soul slayer it can burn it.

bankai: they get trapped in a world where a star in the sky (natsuhiboshi) constantly shoots flamming red lasers at the enemy, they cant move and their sword temp dissipears for 30 seconds. (thats enough time to kill them)

[Giorno Giovanna]

My zanpakuto's name would be Kazerouga (Wind Wolf Fang)

It's shikai would resemble that of a Masamune type katana, with the hilt being blue and has white wolf fur. It's command would be "Howl through the winds, Kazerouga!

Bankai: In its bankai form, the blade would take on the form of nodachi, but then it would disappear and my appearance would also change. I would have a blue vest over a black shirt, white pants and also my hair would turn white and my eyes yellow but more wolfish. The bankai ability of my sword would be that I would still have the hilt but when I swing, it is as if I am actually swinging with the wind instead of a sword. My bankai name would be Taiyoukai Kazerouga (Demon Lord Wind Wolf Fang)

[Giorno Giovanna]

Name: Masakatsu Agatsu (means victory over oneself)

Shape: An average Tachi (that's the longer type of Katana). The shape stays always the same, as I'm to lazy to even change the shape.

Incantation: "Mendoukse!" XD

Shikai: No real "ability", like Renjis Zanpaktou. Just your average Soulcutter designed for... erm... soul cutting oO"!

Bankai: My Zanpaktou feats on my laziness. So I stab myself with "Masakatsu Agatsu". Wich has two effects. One: I would be actually energized and determinded. Two: The Zanpaktou absorbs my laziness. And if laziness equals power, than you have one hell of a powerful sword Oo

Yes, power to laziness. That is an awesome idea, and it would even fit me too since I am extremely lazy. Very creative.

[nekoryuuha]

My command would be, "Shoot through from all angles!"
The name would be Aird.

At shikai, the blade would scatter into 30 diamond shaped pieces that fly anywhere I command them and fire beams of energy at my enemy.

Bankai would be a massive large scale version of the Shikai. 500 pieces instead of 30, all firing even stronger beams.

The special attack for both Shikai and Bankai would be Aird Requiem. All the pieces fire at each other and begin bouncing the beams off each other catching the foe in a firestorm.

[Usopp]

Name: Gohoshi (don't know if that's five stars)

Type: Ice/Snow

Shikai: Dive Deep! Gohoshi!

Shikai Effect: Blade turns to pure diamond (unbreakable), cold to the touch for an arctic burn with every cut, but doesn't freeze things instantly.

Bankai: Tabula Rasa! (to wipe away clean)

Sword dissapears, a set radius of 50 meters surrounds me (in a five star shape :P), everything surrounding me freezes to below 155 degrees celcius, anything within the radius aerial or not is frozen. I'm then free to do what I wish, like break the enemy(ies) into millions of pieces. haha

[Parell]

Does it matter how much reiatsu the enemy has? Or is it just pwning like Aizen's?

[Insipidipity]

Comon now, I'm not Japanese, why would my zanpaktou have a Japanese name? My Zanpaktou would be named John. Plain and simple. My command would be Go.

"Go, John!"

Or If I'm feeling especially energetic, "Go, John! Go!"

[Parell]

>,<

And its abillities would be?

[Neji]

mine would be "Pikachu. Thundershock!"


and obviously it'll have lightning based moves...

[Kisame]

Shine, RaitoRyuukajin


Silence, Benehiko

Chirp, Suzumushi


Nake, Uberswordofthemainvillain.

[Neji]

another one would be "jigglypuff, sing!" it puts you to sleep then slices up your face with drawings :o

[I.P. Standing]

Comon now, I'm not Japanese, why would my zanpaktou have a Japanese name? My Zanpaktou would be named John. Plain and simple. My command would be Go.

"Go, John!"

Or If I'm feeling especially energetic, "Go, John! Go!"
That makes like 3 times out of over 8k posts that you've said something not serious. Keep it up, and I'll have to keep a tally in my sig.

On topic: I'm lazy, so I'm just going to put what I made in another thread here.


Zanpakutou: Meimei, which can't look like anything, since it's invisible to everyone except the user. It's a part of a Daisho, a katana and wakizashi pair of swords.

Shikai: "Jigaderu, Meimei!" ("Reveal, Dark/Invisible/Divine!") The shinken goes from completely invisible to light transparent red. It's only shikai ability is an attack called Kakasu. It's an ability that makes it so that so any cut that misses an opponent, causes the residual reiatsu let over from the missed cut to try again in a different spot 3 seconds later. It follows the opponent even if they are moving quickly. The user can chain missed cuts by missing intentionally to overwhelm their opponent.

Bankai: Still in training for it, the zanpakutou turns into two a large no-dachi, roughly the size of a tractor trailer, one of which is invisible. Ketsudan, the only known ability, gives the user the ability to use their own reiatsu strings to control the visible no-dachi with their mind. Whenever a cut or stab is attempted with the visible no-dachi, the invisible one immediately follows up with a blast of reiatsu or a stab, and is completely random.

[silversnowfox]

Just found this, so I am taking a crack at it.

Name: Divine Burden
Sealed Appearance: In its sealed state, this Zampaku-to takes the form of western sword, and when sheathed resembles a cross, with the blade being the long section. It rests in a sheath upon the wielders back.

Release Fraze: Shoot down the guilty, Cut down the definant

Shikai: Upon being released, this Zampaku-to takes the form of two small crossbows, each of which is connected to the wielder's arms like a gauntlet, with a trigger and grip resting in his hands. Each one is capable of firing his spirit force in the form of arrows that can achieve different functions such as simple arrows or exploding arrows. Each bow has a blade moving off its front, making these.

The Bankai for this Zampaku-to is similar to the sixth squad captain’s, Kuchiki Byakuya, in that it comes in two forms… execution form, and battle form. The execution form is an incomplete form of bankai, while the battle form is a complte form of bankai.

Incomplete Bankai Fraze: Destory those judged Guilty
In its execution form, this Bankai is connected to the wielders right arm and looks like a giant cross, approximately fifty feet from one side to the other, and 100 feet from top to bottom. It only carries five shots of super compressed spirit force, however, each one is comparable to an attack from the Soukyoku (The giant Zampaku-to with the power of one million soul slayers.) However, because of its extreme power, it is slow to move, difficult to aim, and not an effective weapon to use in combat.

Complete Bankai Fraze: Massicar the armies of the wicked
in its battle form, this cross bow becomes much sleeker. Instead of the massive struts jutting out from the bow, now they run almost straight down the side of the bow. The bow now has an unlimited ammunition source… the wielders spiritual force. His spirit force is collected and drawn into the bow for firing, and he can actually fire similarly to that of a chain cannon. The bow is not only 10 feet long, and looks similar to the right attack arm of Magna-Garurumon (the one that looks like a shot gun.)

[zagman505]

well. some nice blades all around =)

anyways, i'm busy right now so i will come bak and ask questions later.

[Uchiha Kai]

This is from an old Bleach RP I belonged to.

Beni Hana (Crimson Blossom)

Length/looks: When in sealed form, it has the appearance of a small harmless dagger, and it has a platinum blade with a red metal hilt with one bell and two long black ribbons attached at the end. In shikai form, the zanpakuto becomes six times its original length, and increases some in width. Sharp gashes that jut outward in curves are present at the edge of the blade capable of causing fatal wounds.
Skill: Beni Hana's main strengths lie within velocity. The higher the velocity, the more destruction it causes.

Shingetsu Hikisaku Joukuu (Crescent Moon Tears the Skies) The blade becomes covered in a white spiritual energy, guarding against attacks and making attacks. It is able to slice through almost anything, and enables it to be less visible to the naked eye.

Takamagahara Takikowasu (The Heavens Shatter) The zanpakuto can dissipate anything the blade touches or hits.

Release phrase: Sakebidasu (Cry out)

[zagman505]

hm. that's pretty interesting. seems a tad overpowered :P

but wat do u mean by the higher the velocity? the faster the user is moving, the faster the sword is moving, the faster the opponent is moving, or wat?

and wat kind of things are dissipated by the takamagahara takikowasu? is it only spiritual forms like zanpakutous, souls, hollows, etc? or could u use it to 'dissipate' a building?

[Uchiha Kai]

hm. that's pretty interesting. seems a tad overpowered :P

but wat do u mean by the higher the velocity? the faster the user is moving, the faster the sword is moving, the faster the opponent is moving, or wat?

and wat kind of things are dissipated by the takamagahara takikowasu? is it only spiritual forms like zanpakutous, souls, hollows, etc? or could u use it to 'dissipate' a building?Well, I condensed it, if you like, I can put weaknesses for those, also. Velocity referring to the speed, if I hypothetically had one, I would swing it. In case you become further confused, I posted the weaknesses that went with it at one point in life.

And besides, I made my character initially weak. Third seated member of the Fifth Division. And still my character was weak; the zanpakuto merely made up for the weakness. :nod

Shikai Weaknesses: In Shingetsu Hikisaku Joukuu, the blade's energy must be fixed at an even flow. Thus, concentration is essential, but spiritual energy is limited. Too much spiritual energy may cause the zanpakuto to shatter. Too less will render the attack ineffective. Fighting too long in this state can provoke damage to the user's physical body. In the latter, the zanpakuto can only destroy your every day objects, like trees, humans, hollows, some shinigami [depending on reiatsu level], etcetera, but not a shinigami's zanpakuto, depending on the spiritual energy.

[silversnowfox]

Intersting blade Uchiha Kai

Blade number 2

Sealed state: in its sealed state, this Zampaku-to takes the form of two small to medium throwing axes.

Release fraze: Obliterate my adversaries, Burn my enemies

Initial Release: this Zampaku-to is released by placing the two axes together. The form it takes is a massive double-sided battle-ax, and a pair of metal glove gauntlets. Not only is it a it fearsome looking weapon, but it also glows red hot to the touch, only the wielder can handle it, because the metal glove gauntlets protect him from the heat.

Bankai Fraze: Cool under my touch, increase my speed, release the black flames of Hell, choke the enemy with your cloud of death

Bankai: in its Bankai form, this weapon does not change all that much. The red-hot glow is gone, all of the spirit force that was formerly used for that having been channeled to other places. The battle-ax becomes much more sleek and aerodynamic, and at the top of the central staff, lies a small igniter with three ‘claws’ reaching up from the sides. The ax is now capable of summoning black fire along both blades, and the igniter can either act as a flame thrower or it can be used to create a small ball of black flame that the wielder can hold in his hand and use as he pleases. (The black flames only burn living things, and draw out that being's life force. They also produce a randic smelling smoke, that infects the body when it is inhaled. The infected person will be drained of physical stamina, and will eventually choke if they inhale too much smoke, as it blocks the person's body from taking in oxygen.)

[Uchiha Kai]

Much thanks. :nod

All I can say is that your zanpakuto's bankai is much awesome. Yes. Good job. ^^b

[Hissatsu]

Swords name:Kotoryu(wood dragon)
element: wood
description:Black hilt wrap and a circular crossguard connected to the blade by an x-shape
Release phrase:Okiru(rise)
Shape and abilities:Drasticly changing to the form of a simple looking bokuto and only activates it's abilities when touching the ground, once in contact with the ground the weilder can telepathicly create, grow, and manipluate vegatation, both local and artificaly created of spirit pressure. The created plants can have abilities ranging from seeds shot at bullet like speeds, poisionous pollen, to affecxting foreign spiritual pressures.
Bankai name:Ennma Bana-Kotoryu(Hell lord's flower-Wood dragon)
Shape and abilities:In this form Kotoryu takes the form of a sword once more only with a new handguard shaped like a dragon's claw, also the weilder grows fairy like wings and a large halo with an x in the center, hovering behind his back. In this form Kotoryu has gained the power to now telepathicly comunicate and control plants with out touching the ground, also it has the ability to create a feild of flowers within a sixty yard radius of where the bankai was released, these flowers can project the weilder's spiritual pressure and manipulat it into an barrier that works as a cage and a sheild.

[Art of Run]

Name: hanamaru
Element: wood
Realese phrase: Disperse...Hanamaru
Shikai: the actuall sword vanishes and leaves only the hilt. but there are tiny parasites that are controlled by the hilt. the parasites devour anything they touch.
Bankai realse phrase: Devour there inpureties...irichin hana
Bankai: a giant slime like, tenticled, fanged, puprple and red eyed monster appears and you have to mount its head to controll it but you need he hilt. the slime it is made of is a rare kind of acid witch is harmfull to all. it has 3 techniques, Grand ball where it shoots a large ball of slime/acid at the enemy, Rout where its tenticles go into the ground and reapear as sharp spikes in another location and then theres aura where whoever gets closes to the parasite gets his or hers energy drained.

[silversnowfox]

Good Zampakuto guys.
I just finished reading the entire back archive of this thread.
Most of the Zampakuto are great, with a few exceptions due to idots or lack of detail and imagination.

Now, for Zampakuto number 3

Sealed state: in its sealed state this Zampaku-to looks like a normal katana. However, appearances can be deceiving as the blade is not actually drawn, rather it springs through a hole that is hidden on the butt end of the grip. There are three grip sections on the blade. One where a grip would be on a normal sword, one just below the guard on the sheath, and one on the very tip of the sheath.

Release fraze: Take root

Initial Release: when this blade is released, it sprouts into a forest of vines and actually takes root into the wielder's arm. After which, a second blade can sprout out of his opposing arm. Both blades are metal and connected to his arms. His ability is called 'Forest of the Iron Bamboo', after the initial release of his zampakuto, he can then stab his weapon into the ground and cause bamboo made of iron to sping forth.

Bankai Rlease fraze: Grow like the forest and become everlasting

Bankai: after releasing this blade’s Bankai, the wielder transforms into a living tree person. His hair becomes moss, and small branches sprout out of his head and grow leaves. His body transforms into a living tree, similar to Treebeard in the Lord of the Rings series. After transforming, even if he is damaged, he can still regenerate entire sections of his body, using his spiritual force as a power source. In cases of extreme emergency, such as if his entire body is in danger of being destroyed, he posses a small seed hidden in his very core. If his body is destroyed, he can regenerate from this small seed, and eventually recover from the experience… unless the seed is destroyed or he does not possess enough spirit force.
The abilities of this form is that the wielder grows incredibly large, and other then that simply has overwhelming physical strength. (This is a major or slight omage to Treebeard from Lord of the Rings, as he is one of my favorite characters).



Well another one down... who knows how more to go.
By the way, if there is anyone out there who could give me some names for these last two zampakuto, that would be great (both normal and bankai names). I have been racking my brain to give them names, but can not think of anything that sounds right.

Next time, I will be revealing three to four zampakuto. They belong to a four man group that was created by a friend and myself. Three of the characters have bankai, but the fourth does not. We have yet to have her trained in bankai (they belong to a story my friend is creating.) He doesn't plan on writing the story out, as he is a terrible writer. But the story is in his head so he describes it to me.

Well, try to come up with those names please.

Also, if Tsukiyomi is around, you seem to the the best at rating and giving a good analysis of zampakuto, so if you are still around could you please give me some ratings on these zampakuto and the other I am going to post.
Thanks either way.

[nekoryuuha]

If anyone is willing, could they PM me with how my Zanpakutou's Name and Release phrases are said in Japanese. I've been far from successful finding it myself.


Shikai Name: Aird
Shikai Release phrase: "Shoot through from all angles!"

Sealed appearance: An Odachi (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Odachi) without a sheath that's wrapped in cloth on my back. The hilt is in the shape of a 8-point star.

Shikai: The blade scatters into 75 diamond shaped pieces 1 inch long and 1/2 inch across that fly around around under my control. Each piece is able to fire a high powered beam of energy from the end of it at the enemy with very little drain on my reiatsu and can reflect spiritally attacks like Kidou and its own beams.

Bankai Name: Crystal Storm Aird
Bankai Release phrase: "Shoot through everywhere at once!"

Bankai: The sword disappears from my hand and ten swords each exactly the same as the original appear floating around me and scatter, creating 750 pieces identical to the one in the shikai, but in addition to them, eight 6-inch long blades circle my body. These eight blades auto-defend me against my own beams as well as sword attacks if my foe managed to get close, but are unable to attack. The hilt of the original blade is attached to my right wrist minus the 8-point star(the 8-points are now the 8 floating blades).

Bankai special attack name: Aird Requiem

Bankai special attack description: From the hilt the hilt attached to my wrist, I fire a powerful beam into the cloud of Aird and split the beam 8 ways off one of the pieces and continuously reflect the 8 beams around the cloud at my opponent until all the beams are gone.


As you can probably tell, I'm a fan of unleashes like Senbonzakura.

[Blizzard chain]

Name: Shunhebi(flash snake)
Appearence:Resembles an dotanuki with a slightly shorter hilt. At the crossguard, 8 spikes, each one seperated equally protruding to the side parrelel to 2 points on the circle.Above view makes it seem like an 8 bladed fuuma shuriken.

Release phrase: Freeze time in your wake.

Released form: The hilt turns to wood though it seems hollow when tapped, is actually harder than iron. The blade is straightened and 3 other blades appear out of the hilt giving the sword 4 blades in a square formation.

Released ability: By tapping any part of the hilt, the vibration created spreads around and freezes time in the area of the vibration temporarily(user not affected in addition to targets that the user selects).
EX. If a projectile is thrown at you or in the area of the vibration, it is unable to move. May also be used in close combat.
The harder the hilt is tapped, the larger the effect. It may be tapped continuosly like a drum to continue the effect. The highest effect is made with the bottom of the hilt.

Bankai name-Ring of purged reaility

Effect-In the surounding 20 yard radius, time and reaility is controled by the wielder. The controler may freeze enemies, slow down or stop them entirely, even reverse time in it. The user appeares to move at extremely high speed when in reailty, the minds of the enemy have been affected to be slowed down. On the outside of the area, the user appears at normal speed though they cant attack because any attacks will be frozen once they touch the area.

[hatake404]

Name: Blah
Skill: Blow up the planet everyone dies including me :P

[silversnowfox]

Good ones nekoryuuha and Blizzard chain.

As for you hatake404... if you arent serious, then please leave.
There have been quite a few jokesters throughout the history of this particular thread, and most aren't as funny as they seem to think that they are.

[clouded_fate]

name: muramasa
meaning: demon sword
apearence: an ordanary zanpakutou, except its completly red
effect: whenever something with spirit power is cut by this, muramasa leaches off some of their power

release phrase: drink deep, muramasa

bankai name: masamune
bankai apearence and power: the sword is like regular, except its covered with images of cloud. im surronded by clouds, similar to hitsugayas(sp?) ice bankai. im able to stand on the cloud, and increase speed. ice daggers can also rain from the clouds

[HiroX17]

I call it: Suijin Oh (Water God King)

I command it to: Oyoide! (Swim!)

Shi Kai:
The blade turns completely into a mass of water that the user can control at will....and...it can turn to ice or mist.

Ban Kai: (Suimon no Jigoku)
The blade converts the user's reiatsu into more water. So, the more energy you have, the more water. And it submerges the area in a watery prison within a 1/2 mile radius to 5, depending on the energy level. And while in this watery prison, the captured is rendered weak and powerless unless you have super swimming skills and the shinigami can manipulate all parts of the water. (NOTE: There is a limit, after a certain amount of energy is used, the water will slowly recede.)

[HiroX17]

What's in a name? : Kin Kuma (Metal Bear)

Tell it what to do! : Okotte! (Get angry!)

Shi Kai:
The single blade becomes a three-pronged claw: a large gauntlet with three protruding metallic blades. Each blade is attached to a chain. So the user can choose to extend the claws and use the weapon as a three-pronged whip.

Ban Kai: (Jirai Souga)
The user can summon seemingly unlimited giant metallic blades from beneath the ground with varying speeds.

[HiroX17]

What is thy name: Kamen Noh (Noh Mask)

Command it and it shall be: Nigekakure! (Run and hide!)

Shi Kai:
The blade turns into a mask. The user simply wears the mask and he/she will be substitued with a masked puppet. The mask is sharp and metallic and so it can act like a shield or a throwing projectile. As to where the actual body goes when substituted is up to one yard away from the battle in any direction.

Ban Kai: (Sen Noh Kamen Senshi)
A field of a ONE thousand puppets heavily cloaked in black all wearing the exact same mask. The user holds a wheel-blade connected to wire. The user can jump into any chosen cloaked figure and teleport between the one thousand. It is a sneak-type attack.

[silversnowfox]

That is a good sword clouded_fate.
HiroX17, those are some impressive and creative weapons there.

Now, as promissed, here are the three major swords.
Note that I will be updating this page as more information becomes confirmed and decided. These are Zampakuto that my friend is creating for me along with characters for a story that I am in the process of writing.

Zampakuto number one

Wielder: Name unknown (matt)
Zampakuto: its name is Howling wind. Its materialized form is that of Squall from FF8.
Sealed state: In its sealed state, it looks like a regular katana. Its guard is shaped like feathers (think Hitsugaya's but instead of a star it is feathers) the handle has blue wrapping.

Release phrase: unknown

Initial Release: In its initial release state, it looks like a combination between the Buster sword and gun blade. It ability is that it can somewhat control the wind. The wielder can use wind to somewhat increase his speed as well as create wind armor (is only high speed wind wrapped around the person). Its two attacks are Tornado and Turbulence. Tornado is exactly what it says, the wielder rotates the blade above his head, concentrating the wind and creating a tornado that he then 'throws' at the enemy. As for Turbulence, it is an attack similar to the Kamaitachi from Naruto, except that it is a wall of cutting wind that cannot be re-directed and flies in a strait line once thrown from the blade.

Bankai: This blade's Bankai is similar to sixth squad captain's in that it has two releases.

Bankai phrase:

Incomplete release phrase: unknown

Incomplete Bankai – In its incomplete stage, it takes the form of a giant bird (FLY from CCS) with four wings and nine tail feathers. This release is similar to the twelfth squad captain's in that it is a materialized animal of sorts.

Complete release phrase: unknown

Complete Bankai – In the complete form, the user gains armor (breast plate armor, gauntlets –each has two feather blades- steal plated boots) as well as two wings giving him a 15-foot wingspan. In this form, he can control the wind much more greatly. The abilities of the initial release also exist here, only amplified.

Zampakuto number 2

Wielder: name unknown (danny)

Zampakuto: its name is Searing Flame. Its materialized form is a mixture of Jack Sparrow and Radar Man (Paranoia Agent). He possesses Radar Man's red cape and wears a mixture of red and white.

Sealed state: In its sealed state it looks like a regular Katana with a guard shaped like a sun (when turned, looks like the sun is rotating.) The handle has red wrapping.

Release phrase: Scorch, Searing Flame

Initial Release: It takes the form of a 'Flame blade' (swiveling blade).
http://elfwood.lysator.liu.se/art/r/i/riinear/sword_design.jpg.html - Bottom sword, except not a snake for a handle. I will post a better picture once I get one. And it can catch fire.
Its only known attack at this time is called Heat Wave. The user simply calls out ‘heat wave’ releasing a wave of fire in all directions. This wave continues for about twenty five feet, igniting everything that can catch fire within this area.

Bankai phrase:

Bankai: Its Bankai is similar to the twelfth squad captain's. It materializes into a ten-foot tall lion, with flaming (fur) mane and tail. Color of his fur represents his current strength (red being weakest to blue being strongest). Its strength increases with the amount of time that it is materialized.

Zampakuto number 3

Wielder: Name unknown (rick)
Zampakuto: this zampakuto's name is Shadow moon. Its materialized state strongly resembles Vampire Hunter D.

Sealed state: regular katana, guard shaped like four crescent moons circling the guard joint. Black wrapping.

Release phrase:

Initial release: completely black almost straight sword, resembling a sword similar to Ichigo’s Bankai. Guard stays the same. Upon release, the sword casts an area, similar to Tosen’s Bankai. The area is fifty-foot circular area (it is fifty foot from one side to other.). Anyone caught inside is cast under an illusion of near total darkness with a crimson moon floating in the sky. This area is meant to confuse and disorient the enemy. Along with this, the user’s speed is pushed to the limit of their body, putting an incredible amount of strain on them (think Kenshin’s ultimate technique, how it uses god like speed that will eventually result in the body being damaged beyond repair… only not as severe.) The user’s enhanced speed comes at a price however, as every time their feet meet the ground it creates a chiming that can be heard if a person concentrates enough (the chime is the exact same sound that is heard when Ichigo first shows his Bankai to Byakuya in the anime /episode 85, time code 14:10-14:12/)

Bankai phrase:

Incomplete Bankai: The wielder of this blade was subjected to an experimental technique for the creation and manifestation of Bankai, similar to what Urahara under went. This resulted in two separate Bankai. The incomplete form of this Bankai is quite interesting. Upon releasing the Bankai, the user is split into two persons. Each one looks and acts exactly the same. However, one of them is the actual wielder of the technique. In its incomplete form, the wielder and his apparitions share everything, with the wielder controlling the action of his physical apparitions. Each apparition is a physical corporeal being that cannot be simply be destroyed. However, this form of the Bankai is more of a confusion technique then anything else. Every time any of the clones or real person is injured, they all manifest the injury. This can result in a very bad situation for the wielder, if he is not careful. However, with the abilities of his initial release still there his apparitions are meant for him to blend in and make the enemy doubt which one is the real one. This form is incredibly straining, as it actually wastes more energy then necessary due to how the Bankai was created.

Complete Bankai: upon realizing that his Bankai was not truly an effective technique, and that it was not the true form of his Bankai, the wielder set out to find its complete and true form and succeeded. Upon releasing, the technique is the same as above. He splits into two forms… however, in this Bankai, all of the apparitions are real people. Each one operates independently, yet linked, as they are all the real person. This form is less stressful, and is the true form of Bankai, with a faster replication rate and that fact that they do not share wounds. In this form, the user can literally overwhelm even the most massive army, given the right amount of time. With all of the abilities of the initial release, this Bankai can easily become one of the most massive if it is given enough time. So, even if a clone is severely or mortally injured, but is still alive, when it generates another form, this form will remain uninjured. The true strength of this Bankai is that it cannot be defeated or destroyed unless all of the forms except one are destroyed. In that moment, the wielder will be subjected to a severe drop in energy, likely resulting in the person blacking out. However, even if the person does not black out, he will still require at least 24 hours to recuperate before he can even attempt to use even his initial release again.


Well, that is them... comments are appreciated, and I will answer any questions to the best of my ability.


Now, lets see some more zampakuto out there.

[clouded_fate]

oops, i forgot materialization for muramasa, uh... it materializes as a blood red serpent with eyes that look like clouds

ok, heres a new one

name: frozen steam-touketsu jouki
release phrase: rise and fall, touketsu jouki
shikai: its like a whip made of ice, and at the base of it, is my regular zanpakutou covered in a layer of ice(for close range fighting)


materializes: a crane

bankai name: frozen steam, crumbling earth-touketsu jouki, shouhen tsuchi
bankai: i now control thousands of ice spears(similar to the 6th captains bankai), and in my hand is an whip with a thousand ends, the whip is made of earth, and can become diamond hard at any time, including making the tip razor sharp and daimond hard.
bankai attack name: ice prison, peircing blades-aisu kangoku, ketatamashii katana
bankai attack: the ice spears form a prison, on all sides, and i jump above them, then my razor sharp whips go in from every hole in the prison, and impale them


if anyone knows the japanese words for frozen steam, crumbling earth, ice prison, and piercing blades, then id apreiciate it

[Cthulhu-versailles]

...
Sword Name: Higayahshimino
Shikai's: Drought of Despair, Singing Curtain
Bankai: Affinity Network Omega


The Swords Apperance:
A long white and orange sword, with hexagonal indents on the blade.
The blade itself splits towards the top and has a curve near the bottom of the hilt, on the orange side, that is 70 degrees.
The curve sticks out quite a bit, and by apperance and structure is a tripled up "bladed aread". The left side, the more white part, is more blunted and the middle most part has two pockets of a thin layer, where they come out to make it look like a cross. The bladed part sticking has two small round red smudges at it's end.

Shiaki 1
-Drought of Despair-
Essentially, this ability lets me warp friction in conjuntion with my sword atatcks, (swings) and or anything within the vicinity of my sword.

How this attack works: This attack moves the two red smudges from my blade onto each seperate side. The hexagonal indents as well as the cross shape serve as a conduit, which let these smudges travel freely around and build. At the same time, I would use my reiatsu to compress the build. I do this in order to make the building energy less stable, and in essence cause a chain reaction. My ability then takes affect when I release my reiatsu at the curve point of my blade. This energy resignates out of the blade, like a constant unseen mist. This mist is what allows me to negate or increase the laws of motion, within the area of my sword and swings.

Shikai 2
-Singing Curtain-
This shikai serves as a slider-extension and slight shield. Of which can use and store impact, to later cause and direct pressure ripples.

Basically, the blunt side of blade that has the little cross part sticking out, becomes able to extended, to a degree, and freeform, always staying blunt; as long as it does not exceed the mass of the other parts of my sword. The point of this ability is to allow me reach, and slight protection. Like ther other shikai there is a resignating mist. Along with the reiatsu, this someone lets me destablize air, and then immeidately release or slowly build and then release pressure ripples.

-Bankai-
Affinity Network Omega

Half of my sword deludes and becomes liquid. Soon after a huge 3 kilometer network of biological like wiring forms. This wiring is semi solid. The point of the wiring is that within this area my Reiatsu can be perfectly controlled. My reiatsu also slowly continually increases within this network. In short, the point of this Bankai makes the Reaistu System like Nen. In essence, I can perfectly switch around my Reiatsu to focalized on defense, offense, movment or what have you; so as to maximize on any of the others when there is need.

Part Two of the Bankai

Depth Beat

The part of my sword that remained solid plugs into the wiring. This part of my sword then deludes, but I still hold a small portion of it. The deluded part mixes in with the wiring and creates minature wiring system thorughout the area, that are infact extensions of myself, in a broken down form. These system are uni-linked into the larger wiring system. This basically lets me interact with my sword as though we shared affinity. So, the sword serves as a pieces of my body; I can attack with pieces of my body, that would really be my sword. My sword becomes my body and my body my sword. Moreoever, this plug would let me see from any vantage point within the wiring system.

[silversnowfox]

Well, I am back after a short leave.
clouded_fate, that is great. But dont worry about materialized forms. I dont remember many other giving them but me and now you. The reason that I gave them was because I thought someone might want to know, and because they will appear in my story.

Now, Shika shika boo, that is a great weapon there. And quite original as far as I have seen. Although, it is a bit strange for my tastes... but then who am I to comment, I have a dude that turns into a tree, a lion made of flame, and a dude that turns into his own personal army. In other words, keep up the good work.

[HiroX17]

Hello, my name is: Tori no Miko (Avian Priestess)

If you tell me to: Utatte! (Sing!), Inotte! (Pray!)

Shikai:
"Sing" commands Tori no Miko to release a tranquil and soothing melody through vibrations in the sword. It can cause the target to fall asleep, put them in a trance, or create illusions.
"Pray" amplifies spiritual or physical power.

Ban Kai: Kami Ame (Divine Rain), Kasa no Tensho (Heavenly Umbrella), Kami Kaze (Divine Wind)
Kami Ame showers the battle field with healing water.
Kasa no Tensho transforms the blade into a giant umbrella that acts as a shield.
Kami Kaze absorbs energy from around it and then, on command, will explode.


PARODY ALERT
Zanpakuto name: Naruto
Command: Dattebayo!!

Shikai:Zanpakuto Bunshin
Ban Kai: Ran Sen Gen Zanpakuto

Ha ha? No ha ha?

[silversnowfox]

That was a prety good sword.

As for the parody, that was perty good.
Just dont start giving all parody stuff.

[Tiger_lili]

wow. You guys write alot.

[HiroX17]

THANKS. This is a great thread cuz you can just put up anything that you think of. Good way to vent out ur creative tensions.

My next three creations will be triplet zanpukuto belonging to triplet shinigami. Since identical siblings share a sort of bond, these three swords were born from similar reiatsu.

Yaiba no ICHIRO(Sword of the First Son)

Name: Kumo Yanagi (Spider Willow)

Command: Kumo...Taisan! (Spider...DISPERSE!)

Shi Kai: The sword transforms into eight long slender spider legs connected at one point, the hilt of the sword. It can shoot out indestructible reiatsu based threads to capture opponents. The user can use this sword to travel as well. Each tip of the eight blades are covered with poison.

Ban Kai: --see bottom--

Yaiba no JIRO (Sword of the Second Son)

Name: Denkou Yanagi (Lightning Willow)

Command: Denkou....Taisan! (Lightning....DISPERSE)

Shi Kai: The sword transforms into a blade of pure lightning. When the user desires, this lightning blade can extend and split into 8 -12 strands of lightning. It can be used to imprison enemies as well. It's specialty is stunning and it can cause earthquakes from striking the ground.

Ban Kai: --see bottom--

Yaiba no MISTUO (Sword of the Third Son)

Name: Teikatsu Yanagi (Tornado Willow)

Command: Teikatsu....TAISAN! (Cyclone...DISPERSE!)

Shi kai: The blade turns into rapidly spinning blade. When swung, it sends a decent sized tornado toward the enemy. When used while above the enemy, many smaller tornadoes will originate from the one swing and encompass the enemy.

Ban Kai: --see bottom--

Ban KAI

The triplet shinigami can only activate their Ban Kai when the following criteria are met:

1. All three must have sustained a significant amount of damage/ or near death.
2. All three must be at least 2 miles within each other.
3. All three must activate their Ban Kai at the same time.

When activated, the three blades merge into one entity to become:;

OUSAMA YANAGI (KING WILLOW)

A giant willow tree will appear with three wooden pedestals on three different sides of the three. The tree's diameter is 1.5 miles wide. The three users can choose to transform any of the vine branches into there respective SHI KAI blades. The tree is indestructible.

[blacklusterseph004]

Name: Pied Crow

Command: The fallen cannot rest ,and the living weep, as the lord of sorrow feasts. Gaze upon the barren land, Karasu

Sealed: The sword has no hand guard, only a golden bracket in it's place. This is the only way to tell where the blade begins, as the handle is black like the sheath.

Shikai: The gold bracket turns white. A white line appears running from the end of the handle to the tip of the sheath. In this release state, the sword can't be drawn and thus can't cut (like a bokken). However, a strike from the weapon has an explosive effect, making the blow 50 times stronger than the force applied by the user. The explosive effect ruptures spirit force it contacts. Meaning a glancing blow to an undefended flank, would cause broken bones and ruptured internal organs. If the opponent has low spirit pressure, then blocking a blow from this weapon can cause the enemy zanpakuto to shatter.

Bankai: Bracket turns black, and the sword can be drawn. The same effects as the shikai are in effect (ie. the explosive ability) but now it can be done as the blade is cutting as well, causing massive damage on a successful attack. The sheath can also absorb trace amounts of reiatsu which the enemy leaks and imbue the blade with it when ever the blade is sheathed. Thus drawing techiniques are extremely dangerous as they carry more reiatsu and have a greater chance of breaking the enemy's zanpakuto.

[WhiteCherryBlossom]

Ooooh I was gonna start a thread about this, good thing I searched first.

Name: Touketsu Sunadokei (Frozen Hourglass)

Bankai Name: Iroshuusa Touketsu Sunadokei (Chromatic Frozen Hourglass)

Release Command: Appuku jikan (Overpower Time and Space.)

Sealed: Swords hanguard looks like an X. The sword is short and is carried on the side. The handle is a dark Green, with a nice texture.

Shikai: When released, similar to Tousen, emits a wave out of the tip of the blade. Sword does not change in appearance. All caught in this large area of effect will have all time stopped. Except the one holding the blade. Thus, allowing endless attacks. Shikai releases after 5 minutes.

Bankai: When released, swords handguard changes from an X, into an hourglass. Bankai allows transfer between alternate space. A.K.A. teleportation. Bankai also does not stop time, it controls time, allowing for increase or decrease, however, you cannot go back in time. With this, the users Reiatsu decreases at a rapid pace, Ultimatly, giving a high-spirited use a maximum of 3 minutes of bankai.

(I tried to make it balanced, I really did!)

[silversnowfox]

I had to leave town for a few days on a road trip with some friends.
HiroX17... the three connected swords was a good idea. I didnt personally like the ones that you created, but they were quite creative so dont give up. You have created some masterpieces here.

blacklusterseph004, that was quite a sword. I expecially liked the fact that the sword couldnt kill in shinkai, and was a good drawing sword in bankai. Nice touch of Rurouni Kenshin/Samurai X there. (Either that or I am just looking too much into this, and know too much about anime.)

Now, Sakura_is_awesome... that Zanpakuto is quite intresting. The concept is intresting. And although I dont personally like this one, keep creating and you will definately create one that I think is a diamond.

I will be posting some new Zanpakuto here soon. Look forward to them.

[WhiteCherryBlossom]

Now, Sakura_is_awesome... that Zanpakuto is quite intresting. The concept is intresting. And although I dont personally like this one, keep creating and you will definately create one that I think is a diamond.

I will be posting some new Zanpakuto here soon. Look forward to them.

Hmm, what did you not like about it? The controlling time part? I put alot of time into shikai, but when I found this, I threw together a 5 minute bankai.

[zagman505]

actually, i kinda think the controlling time bit is overpowered, but considering my sword, i dont think i hav a right to call anybody's sword overpowered =)

[Hanimaru]

Dont know the japanese name but here's a try.

Name: bahamut (final fantsaty X I know :P)
Looks like a normal zanpaktu. Katana like length.

Shinkai release prase: Awaken Bahamut!
Shinkai: The blade becomes a 2 sided blade (like in star wars (dart maul), and the blades are also sharp on both sides.
Abillity: Yu can trow it like a rotor blade. It's connected 2 the usres spiritual energy so it always retrurns. Yu can also make it spin by using your spiritual enrgy.

Bankai: Dragon King Bahamut
Realease: You trow away the blade witch starts spinning verticaly in mid air. Then the blade lights up and The spirit of bahamut comes out (you dont have a blade any more!). Bahamut's spirit funktions on its own but yu can give it comands. It doesnt take a real fisical form. Also this bahamut doesnt look like the on from FF X. It's A chineese stile dragon thats about a hundred feet long. His presence also strengthens you a bit, witch makes it possible for yu 2 fight as well. Witch means yu can fight your opponent from 2 sides :).

Ultimate attack: Final Flare
A massive energy beam! (and by massive I mean really big!!)
You and bahamut combine your spiritual energy's 2 create this power.

[HiroX17]

I had to leave town for a few days on a road trip with some friends.
HiroX17... the three connected swords was a good idea. I didnt personally like the ones that you created, but they were quite creative so dont give up. You have created some masterpieces here.

:( ...:cry ....:P ....:amuse ...smile-big

If my japanese vocabulary was more extensive, I could make them better.

The Time COntrolling Zanpakutoh is really cool. And your command phrases, Sakura_Is_Awesome, did you come up with those urself?:nuts


Zanpakuto: Nyu-Nezumi (New Mouse)

Command: Makenai! (Don't give up!)

Shi Kai: It is a very weak sword when activated. Its effects are similar to Kira's Wabisuke. Each time it hits something or each time something hits it, the power of the sword doubles in terms of durability, handling speed, and its special skill is realized at a certain point.
The user can choose to transfer power accumulated from the sword to himself. So, the user can attain Ban Kai speed or strength in Shikai form. However, the user has to choose one or the other. High speed means low strength and vice versa.

Ban Kai : Shitsuyou!! (Persevere!)

The Ban Kai grants the user 10 lives. At the first stage, the user's power is at 10x more powerful than the shi kai form. Each time the user is killed, the user's power is decreased by one notch.

[clouded_fate]

http://www.freedict.com/onldict/jap.html




shikai name: forever fearless-itsumademo konjounosuwatta
release phrase: spin as life, itsumademo konjounosuwatta
shikai: similar to ichigo's shikai, except this is double sided, like a pinwheel with two parts.
shikai attack name: reckless wisdom-nonki rikou
shikai attack: the sword splits in two. i hold one part regularly, and the other part like a dagger, with the back of the blade next to my forearm. for 10 seconds, speed becomes 5 times greater, and after that, it becomes 1.5 times greater.

materialization: a lion with two black angel wings

bankai name: faithful spirit, forever fearless-chuujitsu seirei, itsumademo konjounosuwatta
bankai: like my shikai, but this is a 4 sided pinwheel. another one is floating under my feet, like skis, with them pairing up to form a christmas tree like shape, allowing me to fly.




joke:
shikai name: pr0nicle
bankai name: bondage pr0nicle

[WhiteCherryBlossom]

The Time COntrolling Zanpakutoh is really cool. And your command phrases, Sakura_Is_Awesome, did you come up with those urself?:nuts

Yeah, me and a friend were thinking about this one night, took a loooong time for a release command hahaha. His was all about darkness and bleeding. It was really demonic...

[clouded_fate]

shikai name: mask-fukumen
release phrase:
as i watch the passage of time,
even the fire weeps.
as i rise the blade of death,
even the skies may melt.
mask the power!...for now
shikai: a mask forms on my face, the part covering my left eye and cheek is that of a hollow, the part over my right eye is the quincy symbol(blue against white) witht he cross over my right eye. the rest of the mask is completly black. my zanpakutou is seamingly the same, but my attacks gradually seem to get sronger, and my movements seem to get faster. this is becuase whenever i clash blades, spirit energy is released, and i am able to absorb the released energy into my zanpakutou. and whenever a hollow is killed, the blood from them never comes off and dries instantly, always remaining bright red. when my blade is completly drenched in hollow blood, the shell of blood cracks, and my zanpakutou seems to be even sharper.

materialization: a man with a complete hollow mask on him. he wears shinigami robes, and a quincy cape. the right half of the robes have the quincy symbol on them(forming a sideways "T") and the cape is completly black

bankai name: mask and might-fukumen seiryoku
bankai: i have gloves with claws, much like a hollow's claws, and with it i can create a cero. my zanpakutou is the same, except now the hand guard has become a quincy energy bow. the energy bow acts like a sheath, for when it is slipped off of the blade, the zanpakutou becomes stark white, and is able to send shockwaves of spirit energy whenever the sword slices something, be it the air or another blade. however, i am able to gather the shockwaves of spirit energy into the quincy bow, and i can either fire it, concentrating the spirit energy into a single small point, increasing power by 5, or i can save the energy,a nd gather more power over the duration of the fight. even without gathering the power of the shockwave though, the bow can still fire using the spirit energy in the air, using the power that initailly went to the zanpakutou. a more powerful attack though, is to put the zanpakutou into a sheath(not the quincy bow) then, with my now free hand, to fire cero, and with my other hand, gather all of the power of cero into the bow. this focuses the blast into one point, and also releases the cero beam in a single burst. the hollow claws are just as sharp as a zanpakutou, and thus can be used for defense. and i still have my mask.
bankai attack name: hidden behind, cry out-hitoshirezu kouhou, nakigoe auto
bankai attack: my mask falls off, and a type or portal apears from the back of the mask. i plunge my zanpakutou into it, so only the hilt is sticking out. my hollow claw gloves and quincy bow turn into spirit particles, and go into the portal. i them pull my zanpakutou out. i can now shoot cero and quincy shots with the sword(think megaman arm) the attack power of my zanpakutou is 5 times stronger, i am now 3 times faster, and i have two zanpakutous, to dual weild.

[silversnowfox]

Those were some good zanpakuto clouded_fate. The last one seems more like one that would be possessed by a vizard, am I right?

Sakura_is_awesome, it is nothing personal, but I just dont like things what mess with with time. Time is such a tempermental and fluid thing that, when you mess with it, there tends to be consaquences that no one can understand/fix/predict. The can take shape immediately, or they can gradually build up an effect over time.

For example: "Seven Days" during the series premier, it is revealed that when you turn back the clock, things dont always happen the same way. Also, during another episode, due to a solar flare, Frank was blasted out of our demention and into the tunnel to the next world (what ever you want to believe the next world is.)

Plus, controling time seems like a power that no one, no matter their power can control. Because of its fluid nature, time can slip out of control and result in thing that no one wants. (Thank you zagman505).

Now, Hanimaru, that was ok. Keep going, it looks like you have got some tallent.

HiroX17, it is not the Japanese. I dont care about that. It is just that your was a little... shall I say, strange. It is not that I hate it, it is just that I dont like it. There have been plenty of swords that I just didnt like from the history of this particular discussion. If you want me to name a few, I can.

And finally, Sakura_is_awesome... I agree, with you about something, Hitsugaya X Hinamori all the way!

However... in the same breath, you have also stepped on dangerous ground. I absolutely detest, Naruto X Sakura... I hate it as much as I hate Naruto X Sasuke. Personally, even though it is unpopular in Japan, I am a Naruto X Hinata man myself.

Then again, it should be if that is what I am writing!

Any way, back to subject... I will be posting the new zanpakuto by sunday. Then, I will vanish into the mist as I move my stuff into my dorm room. And will not have internet for a few days... so, everyone behave and post alot! I want to read some intresting stuff when I get back.

[zagman505]

hm. i think that i'll get down to creating another sword either today or next week. i renamed my former sword, and i'm planning to make another sword named tennokumo instead. and of course, it'll be stupidly overpowered, but i just like it like that. -_-; i'll make sensible swords later.

[WhiteCherryBlossom]

Those were some good zanpakuto clouded_fate. The last one seems more like one that would be possessed by a vizard, am I right?

Sakura_is_awesome, it is nothing personal, but I just dont like things what mess with with time. Time is such a tempermental and fluid thing that, when you mess with it, there tends to be consaquences that no one can understand/fix/predict. The can take shape immediately, or they can gradually build up an effect over time.

For example: "Seven Days" during the series premier, it is revealed that when you turn back the clock, things dont always happen the same way. Also, during another episode, due to a solar flare, Frank was blasted out of our demention and into the tunnel to the next world (what ever you want to believe the next world is.)

Plus, controling time seems like a power that no one, no matter their power can control. Because of its fluid nature, time can slip out of control and result in thing that no one wants. (Thank you zagman505).


Hmm, well, my zanpakuto could never go back in time, only slow/speed it up for the user. Maybe I should give it a limit to its altering power. Well, thanks for your inpu smile-big

Yes!! HinaXHitsu

And please don't get me into debating mood about NaruSaku / NaruHina, I'm already debating with 3 people currently. Best to leave it, Ne?

[clouded_fate]

yeah, mask is kind of a vizard/quincy thing. and i still like pr0nicle best, =\

shikai name: central tiger-chuuou tora
release phrase: show your fangs, chuuou tora!
shikai: the blade of my zanpakutou becomes a white tiger fang covered in black tiger stripes, witht he hilt completly white. the front of the fang/blade however, is very sharp(like a katana, dull on one side, with one sharp side and a sharp tip)
shikai attack name: tiger's place-tora tokoro
shikai attack:my outfit and hilt takes the same collor scheme as the blade, and the opponent is sudenly surrounded by white with random tiger strips. this can not be escaped unless they can land at least 3 hits on me. the entire thing leaks spirit power so they cant sense me. while like this, my speed and agility doubles, my foot steps are silent, and my zanpakutou gets dozens of teeth on the dull side, like a knife on one side, a serrated saw on the other side.

materialization: a black tiger with red stripes.

bankai name: tiger's flight of crane wings- tora hishou kijuuki tsubasa
bankai: my outfit automaticly takes the color of tiger stripes, but now i have crane wings. i have two zanpakutous now, like a tiger's fangs. my speed is 5 times greater, and my movements all have the fluidness of a tiger.

nakai attack name: tiger's glare- tora giragira
bankai attack: tiger's glare is an illusion, to make my opponent think i have attacked. with more spirit pressure or killing intent, i can make it seem like im attack from many places at once. its power is so powerful that even without looking, they feel like they are being attacked, like im attacking them from behind, or even below. usually, im attacking with the illusions. not only that, but with enough spirit power, i can make it seem like an army is attacking, with the fluttering crane wings weakening their senses even more.

bankai attack name: crane feathers, hidden shadows-kijuuki umou, hitoshirezu kumori
bankai attack: i fly above them, and the feathers of my crane wings fall off, like a storm, blocking out all sunlight. in this endless storm of feathers, i attack, and with my speed, the direction of attack changes very often. this can be combined with tiger's glare, for more feathers and more confusion

[clouded_fate]

shikai name: hawk claw-takatsume
release phrase: bare wittness, takatsume
shikai: my zanpakutou turns intoa 2 pronged trident(a trident with only 2 prongs) and the hilt turns into a spear pointing opposite of the trident spikes. while in shikai, i am able to use boomerang shunpo, where i am able to warp to any point for a splitt second, and then return, like a hawk's eyes, that can see everything.

materialization: a a swarm of birds that all talk with one voice(hawk, falcon, eagle, swan, crane, pigeon, etc. etc.)


bankai form 1: flock of feathers-mure umou
i have hundfreds of tridents that i can control, like byakuya's bankai, and i have a zanpakutou with a hilt guard as big as wings., a hilt like a fan/bird tail, a a dagger sized blade, about as long as a birds beak. i can i can fight by having the tridents and the zanpakutou fly around, but i am able to use transfer shunpo with the zanpakutou, so it goes where i am, and i go where it is, be it in an enemy wound, or above them.

release phase 2: great condor-ooinaru hagetaka
all of my tridents for together, like a Y fitting into a Y, so i now have a giant trident. the blade of my zanpakutou is then plunged into the trident, to turn it intoa massive tonfa (its likea sideways L where i hold onto the short part, and the long part is next to my arm) in this form, i can use vacuum shunpo, where, becuase of my large trident, when i take it with me in shunpo, there is a large air displacement, drawing the enemy towards me. if i use shunpo to get behind the enemy, the sudden apearen will push air outwards, to make them drawn into the vaccuum even more. while being drawn into the vaccum, the will be imobilized, giving me time to attack.

bankai release phase 3: king of flight, falcon's fall-kokuou no hishou, taka botsuraku
i have i giant bird with razar sharp claws and beak, garrented to slice any vice captain and below shikai in half. this form is able to use barrage shunpo, where it is able to attack during shunpo, using it so often and in so many directions, that after just 1 minute, you will look like you were attacked by byakuya's bankai.

[silversnowfox]

zagman505, I don’t think that your sword is so incredibly overpowered. After all, think of Genryusai, supreme commander of the Gotei 13. His sword can destroy pretty much any enemy. I don’t even think that Aizen could take him down, while even some of my greatest characters, wouldn't likely have much success in fighting him.


Well, I just found out that I cant leave for at least another two to three days, so I will still be here until then.

Here is a Zanpaku-to that I am just creating right here, right now for your enjoyment only.

Zanpaku-to: Flower Storm - Hanaarashi
Materialized form: Its materialized form is that of a person made of sakura petals.
Sealed state: In its sealed state, this Zanpaku-to takes the form of a regular katana. Its guard looks like the branches of a sakura tree covered in pettals. The girp looks like the actual trunk of said tree.

Release Phraze: Shatter and reform, kudakeru soshite kaisei
Initial release: Once released, the sword fragments, becoming multiple metal shards. It is similar to senbonzakura, however, it is not a cloud that can be controled. The shards can simply seperate and recombine into a solid sword, making it incredibly hard to block the sword, as the wielder can simply seperate when the person blocks, then the wielder can recombine the sword once through their defense.

Bankai - Infinate storm of the Sakura Tree, Bakudai Arashi no Sakura Ki: After releasing this bankai first the sword reforms. Then the user's spiritual force is gathered into the guard, where sakura petals begin to fall. The sheer ammount of petals created is massive. After only a few seconds, the petals become a storm of petals, blocking out everything else. The wielder hides inside this infinate storm of petals, waiting and attacking the enemy when ever possible. The user can also use a technique similar to Kawarimi, where he replaces his body with a cluster of sakura petals.

Bankai Attack ichi: Illusion of Blood - : This attack is much more brutial then most. When the person attacks using their spirit force alone (since this a zanpaku-to is physical spirit force, the sword simply becomes non corporial). The attacker has only one slash to accomplish their goal. If they succeede in fately slashing their opponent, the person will begin to leak blood from all of the orifices on their body. (This is take from both "Samurai Deeper Kyo" and "Samurai Champloo"). This attack is a one-hit KO attack.

Bankai Attack ni: Suicide Attack - : this attack takes avantage of the greatest weakness of this zanpaku-to. The wielder dives outside the swirling orb like storm. He then simply ignites the petals. Turning them into a blazing ball of fire. The hope is to trap the eneym inside and then ignite the petals while they are still in the center, hopefully either severly injuring the enemy or even killing them.

So, what do you thinK?

[HiroX17]

Actually silversnowfox, it IS the japanese. my creations are limited by my japanese vocabulary...like the commands...i use simple easy-to-find phrases from the internet and from that i make it.

u know what would be AWESOME? ppl should post their own illustratinos next to their zanpakutoh more often.

[Luckyday]

Took a while think of a good one but here it goes.

Name: Arashi (storm in japanese)
apperance: a dao blade
Shinkai release prase: freeze all eniemies.
Shinkai: the blade becomes a sapphire-like color
Abillity: When ever my Arashi cuts the opponent, his blood as well as his body part becomes frozen (Inside the body instead of on the layer of the skin.)

Bankai: hurricane Arashi :amuse
Realease: My entire blade evaporates into a huge cloud. In the center on the top of the cloud there is a slape of ice of where I can sit on it. In order to tell how many enemies there are below I make my cloud rain and use the rain drops to feel the eniemies as when the raindrops fell on the victims' head or bodies (sorta like seismic sense but from the sky.) After I get an account of many people there are I then strike my entire arm in to the base and command it use lightning and aim at ever one that has been hit by my raindrops.:kukuku
With this sword I can destroy entire armies.:evil
note: I forgot to mention that my sword can heal people inside it's very core.:wink

[silversnowfox]

Intresting blade Luckyday.

My turn:

Zanpaku-to: Thousand Year Game
Materialized form: An ancient Japanese war stratagist, clad in full samurai garb.
Sealed state: In its sealed form, it takes the appearance of the Tessaiga from Inuyasha in its own sealed state. The blade however is clean, and is split down the middle. On one side it is white, and on the other it is black. The guard looks like a othello piece.

Release phraze: scatter like the stones on the board...
Initial release: the user chants the release phraze, and then flicks the blade from left to right. As he does this, the blade scatters into hundreds of Go stones. The guard then becomes totally black and the user is ready to attack. By using the guard and hand as a 'picker' and 'placer' the wielder focuses his spiritual pressure into the blade. He must move the Go stones in accordence with the rules of Go (first black then white). By pointing at a stone the user can pick it up and then fling/place it where he wants it to go. Each stone can be used in three ways: 1, each one can explode, so they can be used as land mines and explosive projectiles. 2, he can place a demon art inside a stone, the release the demon art whenever he wants from that stone. 3, if the user manadges to surrounde his opponent with one color of stone, then surround that group with another, with his opponent standing in the middle, he can then use his initial releases greatest attack... Thousand Year Defeat. This move instantly drains all of the opponents spirit force, usually rendering them unconcious. However, if the person manadges to say up, they will begin to be plagued by doubt as to how strong the wielder really is. This doubt is planted there by the zanpaku-to itself. This causes them to make many mistakes and usually ends up in them becomeing a live target for the wielder's bomb stones and demon arts.

Bankai: Eternity Game Master - Once this bankai is released, there is no stopping it. After releasing the bankai, the wielder as well as all of his opponents are drawn into pocket dimention where no one can leave or enter. Inside this place, the zanpakuto comes to life, taking its materialized form. The zanpakuto forces everyone to play a "Life and death" game of Shogi. With the opponents take the place of the pieces on the board, and must capture the the wielder who is the opponents king. Each opponent can move as he likes, but the wielder controls his sides pieces. The game does not end until one side wins. The shogi pieces take corporial forms of warriros while playing. The major problem here is that if someone dies in the game (Meaning that their piece is captured, then they die for real.) If the wielder wins, everyone of his opponents dies instantly. However, the same can also be said for him. If he is taken, the his chances of surviving are slim to none... however this should not be taken as he will not survive, as when he is mortally wounded, his bankai will collaps instantly, thus giving him a very small chance for survival.

"Do not fear me... when we first battled, you did not fear me out of ignorance. Now that you have gained experience, you see my moves, and can clearly make out the edge of my sword. And it is because of this that you hesitate... and because you hesitate, you loose the battle. Do not fear my sword... MAKE MY SWORD FEAR YOU!"

I want everyone to guess who the quote is from.

[WhiteCherryBlossom]

Is that quote from Zangetsu? Just a guess ^^

[clouded_fate]

silversnowfox, your a hikaru no go fan, arent you

hehe, hikaru no go, episode 26(or 27...) the blade of sai, which hikaru fears

[Luckyday]

Intresting blade Luckyday.

My turn:

Zanpaku-to: Thousand Year Game
Materialized form: An ancient Japanese war stratagist, clad in full samurai garb.
Sealed state: In its sealed form, it takes the appearance of the Tessaiga from Inuyasha in its own sealed state. The blade however is clean, and is split down the middle. On one side it is white, and on the other it is black. The guard looks like a othello piece.

Release phraze: scatter like the stones on the board...
Initial release: the user chants the release phraze, and then flicks the blade from left to right. As he does this, the blade scatters into hundreds of Go stones. The guard then becomes totally black and the user is ready to attack. By using the guard and hand as a 'picker' and 'placer' the wielder focuses his spiritual pressure into the blade. He must move the Go stones in accordence with the rules of Go (first black then white). By pointing at a stone the user can pick it up and then fling/place it where he wants it to go. Each stone can be used in three ways: 1, each one can explode, so they can be used as land mines and explosive projectiles. 2, he can place a demon art inside a stone, the release the demon art whenever he wants from that stone. 3, if the user manadges to surrounde his opponent with one color of stone, then surround that group with another, with his opponent standing in the middle, he can then use his initial releases greatest attack... Thousand Year Defeat. This move instantly drains all of the opponents spirit force, usually rendering them unconcious. However, if the person manadges to say up, they will begin to be plagued by doubt as to how strong the wielder really is. This doubt is planted there by the zanpaku-to itself. This causes them to make many mistakes and usually ends up in them becomeing a live target for the wielder's bomb stones and demon arts.

Bankai: Eternity Game Master - Once this bankai is released, there is no stopping it. After releasing the bankai, the wielder as well as all of his opponents are drawn into pocket dimention where no one can leave or enter. Inside this place, the zanpakuto comes to life, taking its materialized form. The zanpakuto forces everyone to play a "Life and death" game of Shogi. With the opponents take the place of the pieces on the board, and must capture the the wielder who is the opponents king. Each opponent can move as he likes, but the wielder controls his sides pieces. The game does not end until one side wins. The shogi pieces take corporial forms of warriros while playing. The major problem here is that if someone dies in the game (Meaning that their piece is captured, then they die for real.) If the wielder wins, everyone of his opponents dies instantly. However, the same can also be said for him. If he is taken, the his chances of surviving are slim to none... however this should not be taken as he will not survive, as when he is mortally wounded, his bankai will collaps instantly, thus giving him a very small chance for survival.

"Do not fear me... when we first battled, you did not fear me out of ignorance. Now that you have gained experience, you see my moves, and can clearly make out the edge of my sword. And it is because of this that you hesitate... and because you hesitate, you loose the battle. Do not fear my sword... MAKE MY SWORD FEAR YOU!"

I want everyone to guess who the quote is from.

Thank you!:glomp
I also think that your blade is cool!:nod :thumbs

[silversnowfox]

Ok, I only have one guess, but I cant wait to tell everyone who said this.
*drum roll*
And the quoted person is... me.
I came up with the quote off the top of my head. I like to do it and see who people think said the quote.

Now, clouded_fate... yes, I am a fan of "Hikaru no Go". However, I have never actually seen the anime. I only read the manga. I got hooked on it from the american "Shonen Jump". I collect it, and have all but a few volumes. Most which are missing becaue the store either ran out, or no one was carrying it at the time. I stayed up all last night reading my back log of Hikaru that I had yet to read. I tend to read everything, and then go back and read it on mass, getting my fill without having to wait for alot of it.

Luckyday, thanks for the compliment.

Well, anyone else got a new one?
Or should I throw out another one.

[clouded_fate]

id ont feel like making one right now, how about we guess what yamachika has.

[silversnowfox]

His bankai?

[EtherSword]

Zanpakuto name: Nebilim.

Normal form: Regular looking sword with a round hilt.

Shikai command: Devour, Nebilim.

Shikai form: The blade becomes a strected out figure eight shape.

Shikai attack: Everytime the blade clashes on the opponets blade I absorb like 1%/5% reiatsu from him/her.

Bankai form: I stab the ground with my sword, then tentacle like swords come out of the ground. I'll have to keep my hands on the hilt to control the tentacles and have the energy transferred to me.

Bankai attack: (Now for my bankai attack which took some thinking). The tentacles will try stabbing the person or something else similiar, (to the reader use your imagination). It still absorbs reiatsu too when a person tries blocking the tentacles with their sword, since its bankai form, I get like 5%/10% spirit energy this time.

To silversnowfox: I don't think editing was worth it, all it did was make my sentences longer. Because what I said in the edits means the same thing from what you quoted me on.

[clouded_fate]

reminds me of my muramasa, the first one i made

[Ruach]

Yeah like many of you I have thought about this in my spare time, so I have a lot, my first one would be mine, the others are just extras.

Name: Twilight Knight

Command: "Fade into existence(sp?) Twilight Knight"

Shikai:*both sword and sheath would become the weapon*
-Appearance-would be a Lance great/broad sword hybrice colored black grey and white.
-Ability-It would have the ability to control light and darkness only to the extent of light and dark based attacks (cannot create illusions).

Bankai: Has two Bankai, only one can be used at a time, and at times the user is incapable of controlling which form he will take.

Bankai1: Seraphim Twilight Knight
-Appearance-Like the original, but a little more angelic looking and colored gold and white and a little longer (about 6 ft). Two flamming wheels would appear with wings on them that float around the user user that allow him to fly and move add super-shunpo speeds.
-Ability-It would have the ability to increase the users speed and allow him to absolutely control the offensive power of light. Essential the same upgrade type that Hitsugaya gets.

Bankai2: Daemon Twilight Knight
-Appearance-same deal looks eviler and is black and Gold. The user sprouts one ornamental black demon wing over his right shoulder that can act as a sheild.
-ability- The speed and offensive power increase is not quite as drastic as with the seraphim form, but one very important ability is added. In this form the user can traverse through darkness, effectively teleporting and become semi-invisible(combined with the blur effect of the speed the user is effectively invisible when in motion).

Yes there is more,(this one... er two is my favorite)

Name: Masamune and Murasame(look up the REAL Masamune on Wikipedia, not Sephiroth's/Final Fantasy, he has an interesting story)

Command: "Strike with precision Masamune, Strike with devestation Murasame"

Shikai:
-Appearance-Like Ichimaru Gin the swords' are a single attack type rather than a form.
-Ability-since there are two swords it makes sense that they get two abilities, and if it doesn't so what. Masamune's ability is called vorpal slash(stolen from Golden Sun). This allows the user to teleport instantaneously from one point to another. The weakness is that the user builds no momentum, so the attack is only as powerful as the user's standing slash (or double slash). Also the user must stop before he attacks so is momentarily vulnerable. The user must also know where he is going, because he cn not change direction in mid-warp, this also causes a problem qith quick escapes, as you may end up stuck in a building if you don't know where you're going. Murasame's ability is a little different, by combining both swords into one (or two depending) you can copy the shikai (not bankai) of any shinigami, *spoilers*Vizards or Arrancar*spoilers* the user is able to hit. Unfortunately combining the swords removes their masamune's individual ability. Also, the initial hit inflicts no damage.

Bankai: Precise Masamune and Unruly Murasame
-Appearance-once again, it is an attack more than a form
-Ability-Masamune has the ability to freeze time in a specific area by way of using the user's reiatsu, which as you can imagin, is a huge drain. Like holding your breath, the user can only do it for a limited amount of time, but can regenarate reiatsu at an increased rate depending on the condition of the user's body and the bankai. The second ability is like Murasame's original ability, but instead of consuming Masamune to do it, it can perform it on it's own. In this form it can also copy bankai. It can also use any Shikai it has copied within a certain time limit, or whose user it has slain without the use of any other sword (including masamune). The most unique aspects of these abilities is that by sacrificing one the user can double the power of the other, ie dual bankai(they have to be different though). The Bankai can only be copied from someone who has attained Bankai. The weakness of these Bankai is that the user of Murasame has not trained with everyone's individual bankai (or their Shikai for that matter) so the user will indelably be less proficient with it.

This is the last one (sort of), I promis, well at least for now.

Name: Phoenix and Halcyon*
*this is a very unique sword in that it is cut in half, and belongs to TWO people, so is in actuality two different Bankai, but you will see why thay are put together.*

Command (Phoenix): "Burn for eternity Phoenix"

Shikai:
-Appearance- Half a VERY large Great/Broadsword (Phoenix is 1.5ft wide and the blade is 6ft long). The hilt is more of a rod than a hilt measuring about 4.5 ft and 2 inches in diameter.
-Ability-Pretty straight forward (at leats compared to the last one) works like Hitsugaya's Shikai, but not quite as potent. It summons a Phoenix that surrounds the user (basically like phoenix from X-men). This allows the user to generate and control fire using his Reiatsu, as well as fly to some limited extent. No real speed increase but fire can be used to create a missile like attack, but shunpo is still faster.

Command (Halcyon): "Fly as an arrow Halcyon"

Shikai:
-Appearance-just like Phoenix
-Ability-The user is now surrounded by a mini tornado that acts as a semi-protective barrier as well as causes the user to float. The use has the ability to combine Shunpo with a form of Shunpo the Quincy use(substituting the reiatsu with wind) to allow unbelievable speeds. The user is constantyl levitated above the ground and can jump extremely high and use wind to hover(but cannot really fly). The user can form the wind aura into various(but essentialy the same) attacks.

Bankai: Lord of Legends, True Phoenix
-Appearance- Halcyon and Phoenix combined into one double edged sword
-Ability- The users are fused into one entity upon activation. The user is engulfed in a smaller, white version of the phoenix aura. The user otherwise shares the characteristics of both Phoenix and Halcyon, with the added ability of full flight. The user can now combine fire and wind to attack and defend. The user gains a special attack "Meteor", by condecing the reiatsu of Phoenix into a dense, solid form the user can crash down from extreme heights to inflict massive damage, with minimal damage to the user (and True Phoenix if the blade is used to attack). This form burns out after a maximum of 49 minutes and 99 seconds, any longer and both users will die, by the end of 30 minutes at minimum output the combined users are weaker than either Phoenix or Halcyon.

I have more, but I'll spare you, and no I am not a complete Bleach Nerd, these are all adaptations of characters I created long before Bleach was ever created.

[HiroX17]

Zanpakuto: Akuma Byakuren (Devil Lotus)

Command: Steal the soul!

Shikai: The sword becomes a blood-red lotus bud. When it blooms, it aggresively shoots out a bloody vine with an expanding spike-claw in hopes of piercing the enemy. It then drains the enemy of it's blood. Afterwards, if the enemy zanpakuto is still in tact, Akuma Byakuren devours it. It's blood draining ability is then replaced with the devoured zanpakuto. [if Akuma Byakuren is currently possessing another zanpakutoh, it is unable to activate the enemy zanpakuto's Ban Kai nor its own]

Ban Kai: Only accessible if no enemy zanpakuto is devoured.
The blood within Akuma Byakuren is released and forms into a cloned version of the enemy.

[clouded_fate]

shikai name: crater spear-funkakou yari
release phrase: rise from hell itself, funkakou yari
shikai: i stab my blade into the ground, an the ground slowly sinks, forming a crater. while like that, a spear rises from the ground, impaling enemies from under. and the crater grows bigger, the size of the spear increases equally. one is has grown the right amount, the crater will flash red and the ground becomes normal again. i can then pull out my sword. the entire blade has become one long hilt.
second release phrase: take your glory, funkakou yari
second shikai: a spearhead apears on the long hilt, making it a spear. 2 hilt guards apear at whichever place i put my two hands, and the rest of it is able to become a blade attached to the spear head.

materialization: a bull with the left horn broken off.

bankai name:raining spear of scars-ameyari tsumeato
bankai: hundreds of spears criss cross to forma floating platform that i stand on. thousands of other spears fall from the sky. the spearheads are capable of of forming a blade of spirit energy int he direction the the enemy, so even if the actual spear doesnt hit them, then they are still hit.

[Corgi]

shikai
name: ephemeral vortex
appearance: long blueish katana without hilt
ability: allows the user to fire off many slicing shockwaves from all directions by warping the space and time around the blade.
bankai
name: eternal cadence
appearance: the blade stays the same.
ability:releases ten blue rings that surround the user. these rings are controlled by the user and can manipulate space and shoot off and extend spikes and can create shields.
2nd form bankai: eternal cadence sanctum
apperance: the rings combine to turn into one ring which surrounds the sword. the blade of the sword then turns into a giant reiatsu blade which can fire off giant blasts and the blade's ability to do damage is increased,and the user can control space and time, allowing instant teleportation.
final attack: ethereal retribution
the blade is pointed towards the sky and disintegrates. then, a vortex appears and it rains energy arrows followed by an enormous beam.

[silversnowfox]

Ok, here is another:

This zanpakuto is likely one of the most powerful I have ever created. The reason for this is because it is the zanpakuto of an extremely powerful being that will appear in the story I am writing. The character is the leader of an orginization. He is younger then you would think, but he is my stories equivilant to Itachi. (In other words he is a super genius). Not only that, but this zanpakuto is not actually his. This zankaputo is like Tosen's, it is not actually the wielder's. This zanpakuto was created long ago by an incredibly powerful being, the man who founded "The Orginization". Each leader passes the sword down to his replacement.

Zanpaku-to: Shadow Reaper - Kagekarite
Materialized form: This zanpakuto is unique in the fact that it has two materialized forms. The forms are the two people in this picture: http://www.ko-chan.org/miko/src/1152167055856.jpg

Sealed state: The blade is a combination of both Kadaj's sword from "Advent Children" with a curved grip. (The curved grip is illustrated in the following pic: http://www.trueswords.com/images/prod/TS-FT1352GDNB.jpg) However the grip, is much more curved. The left blade is red and white and the red blade is black and silver.

Initial release phrase: Purify demons and clense the wickid
Initial release: With a flash of light the zanpakuto transforms into a single blade form. In this form, the blade is pure white and the hilt is pure red. While in this form, this zanpakuto has two abilities:
One: Demonic Purification - this ability is one of the most powerful ever seen in soul society. With this ablity, the wielder can actually reverse a hollow transformation. The blade does this by purifying the body and energy of a hollow. With this ability, any weak hollows will instantly be returned to their former human state.
Two: Wickid clensing - this ability is similar to the Demonic purification. However, this ability is much stronger and slightly different. This ability allows the person to strike down any being in any form. After that being has been struck down, the soul is absorbed by the zanpakuto, and after it has been completly clensed of everything that makes it unique, it is released into a new soul.


Bankai: Shadow Soldier - when the user summons this bankai, the sword dissapears, disolving into nothing. From that point, shadows open under them, which they dissapear into. The wielder now takes the form of the materialization (the back one in the picture). He is now able to move through the shadows, using them as a dissapearance point as well as an appearance point. His blade is only one of his attacking abilities now, as he is fully equiped with the weapons of a supreme assassin/shinobi.

Bankai initial attack: Blade of devouring shadows - if it becomes nessicary, the wielder can draw his sword from the sheath on his back. The sword is now completly encased in corporial darkness. If the wielder slashes an opponent, the darkness that comes off inside the would will slowly sperad across the body until the person is completly consumed by them. If the person is comsumed, then they will become a shadow puppet. Inside the casing of darkness, the person is still alive, but now the darkness moves their body, and suppresses their control of their abilities and power. Those encased in the darkness are the puppets of the wielder, and will follow his orders no matter the circumstances.

If this happens to the person, there are only two ways to be released. Either the initial release's abilities, or for the zanpakuto to be destoryed and defeated in battle.

Bankai Supreme attack: Shadow Storm - This attack is a storm of physical darkness. All of the shadows inside the area of influence (this depends on the power imbuled to the zanpakuto) will simply begin to fly about as if the darkness were a corporial thing (Think like the shadows are snow/water/sand/etc.) The shadows will either shred its targets, or simply encase them, as if they were attacked by the sword directly. NOTE - (This attack is the second most powerful that this zanpakuto possesses. This attack is only to be used as a last resort. The ammount of strength put into the attack determins the power. However, once the attack has been initiated it cannot be stopped, and it will drain all of the person's remaining spiritual force, leaving them completly defenseless.)


Zanpakuto Ultimate attacks: These two attacks are the greatest attacks that this particular zanpakuto can create. Both are incredibly powerful, but there is a reason for this. Read everything before you condem them.

Attack One: Divine Light: Hope of the Forlorn - This attack is one of the two supreme attacks that this particular zanpakuto possesses. It is capable of reviving any person, no matter the circumstances. This means that even if a preson were to have been dead for a year, or have been completly vaporized in an explosion, or even a combination of both. When the person activates this attack, the blade begins to "smoke" from its edge, while in actuality the smoke is pure light in a corporial form. This begins slowly, but eventually encompasses the entire blade. As the 'smoke' rises, anyone exposed to it will begin to feel refreshed and their wounds will begin to heal at a rapid rate. Once the blade is completly covered, the actual blade will glow with pure white light. Once this happens, all the wielder must do is is either slash the actual body, or visualize the body and stab it in the heart. Once the body has been 'wounded' they will be completly healed and revitailzed of all wounds. If their body does not acutally exist, then it will corporelize. Once this ability is complete, the wielder will simply fade out of existance, leaving behind only the zanpakuto.

Attack Two: Divine Darkness: Douple Serpent Requiem Strike - This attack is the second supreme attack of this zanpakuto. Once activated, the darkness around the blade will take the form of a corporeial black serpent. This serpent will then wrap itself around the person's upper body, snaking aroud both arms under his arm pits, around their upper chest, and round their kneck, then going back behind his head. The snake's head will rest on the user's head. In the moment of the attack, the serpent will bite the person, piercing both their jugular and corrated attery. In that moment their attack becomes a one-hit-KO attack. The instant their opponent, is struck, the serpent will release their neck, and will attack their opponent. When the serpent bites them, even if it is not a fatel attack, it will kill them. The serpent's bite is that of a venomus serpent, but the venom is known as shadow venom. Once the opponent is infected, they will die within less then a minuet. The wielder is left to bleed to death.



So, what does everyone think of this monser of a zanpakuto?

[silversnowfox]

Sorry, I forgot to respond to everyone else at the beginning of the last post.

Kakashi19... intresting concept. However, please speak properly. What I mean to say is, "anyways, the tentacles will try stabbing the person and stuff." Please dont say, 'anyways' or 'and stuff'. The 'and stuff' part is what gets me. This is a serious forum, so try to act seriously.

HiroX17, that is a great one... though it remindes me of one that I think is in the archive, but I cant remember which one and am too lazy to go back through right now.

clouded_fate, good one. Although, the bankai is a little strange. But I still like it.

Corgi... again, I cant say it enough. Please, People, stop with the time manipulation. Manipulating space/altering perception should be good enough to satisfy anyone. By manipulating space, just about anything is possible. By compressing space, you can create a barrier that is cannot be breached, unless the space is uncompressed. By manipulating space, you can move from one spot to another in less then a second, this is done by warping space so that one point touches another. If you need a representation, then look to one of the latest 'the making of stargate'. In it, they explain the physics of some of the physics of the 'stargate' are explained in this one.

Other then that, good job guys. Keep up the good work everyone!

[Kurosaki_Naruto_]

Bleh my first post ever on my first day on this forum.
anyway...
my sword:
NAME: Tendrils of Darkness =p
Sealed state
It has no crossguard, and the handle is just black cylinder. The sword is abt 1 and half feet, and it gradually gets thinner from the cross guard..i think u get what i mean.
okay, even in the sealed state it has a very basic ability and tht is extending the sword. I prepared this zanpaktou for high-captain level person so yeah...
Most below 5-seaters or so in divisions will probably die from this move, since its like half the speed of Gin's shikai.
anyway...
SHIKAI
Phrase to release shikai (no translations whatsoever): Spread out, (whatever japanese translation it has)
The blade part starts to fall apart and abt 15 small scrolls (or like tendrils) extend from the crossguard part for abt 2 feet. There isn't any special names for his abilites, but
ability ONE: Through the soul.
This move is applicable for any part (you can switch words with "soul" to whatever body part u wanna stab through). First the tendrils can extend very long and far, to hold onto the enemy with incredible force, and the holder saids, Through the (bodypart), and the enemy sees sudden blackness for 1 second, and an invisible beam is shot from the crossguard (theres a hole there) through the enemies body part. If it is shot right in the heart the enemy dies instantly. anyway..
ability TWO : this isnt rly an ability, but its a defence. The tendrils can shorten back to the lengths of a normal sword and curl into a spiral and harden and form a sword type of weapon. If there is a beam shot at it, it can withstand about the power to a few cero shots put together.


BANKAI: All is gone
The user commands the tendrils from the sword to shoot onto the ground, and suddenly tendrils shoot out from every where holding onto the enemy. The enemy is trapped by the tendril's magic and is put in an otherworld time zone where everybody is stopped. the zanpaktou turns back into its sealed state shape, and the holder slowly walks towards the enemy and stabbes through the enemy. suddenly the tendrils that are holding onto the enemy all have spikes in them and stab the enemy all over.
Blahh!! tht is my ultimate zanpaktou!!!

NEXT
Name: Sealed battle ox.
Sealed: in its sealed state it looks like normal katana.
Shikai:
Phrase: Give me everything, sealed ox.
The sword suddenly falls to pieces looking as if the holders losing or smth. But suddenly actually the pieces are joint and swing about. They come back together. Now, the sword shikai is just like its normal sealed state look, but u can change the shape to no matter how big or how small and any shape. Well u cant make it like bigger than earth, since the swords size depends on the amount of spiritual energy you have. U can make a shield around u with the sword, and the shield would be made of what your sword is. U can make it really long and swing it about, and its an ultimate sword. U can make it to the shape of a hammer, a blade, a spear, or wtv. you can even duplicate the sword to more blades, or anything, just THINK. U can even make a house out of it..lol. Anyway it has a weakness, cus the sword is divided to how much spirtual power u have. like if u have 1 spiritual power, and u have 5 square feet, it's 0.2 per square feet or wtv...

Bankai!!!: Let them see you, sealed one...
The sword explodes and its like so amazing like ichigos bankai like dirt everywhere and stuff..hahaha.
The sword now appears to be an ultra big ox, like konamura (captain fox guy) and it still have the abilities of ur sword, but its now fully enhanced. The back of the ox is linked to ur sword. U can now make like 50000 bazookas or smth and shoot them. Ur spiritual power division rate is now 1:1 no matter how big space u are moved to.
Final move: Destroy all you see.
Now a cannons appear all over the oxes body, and all of ur spiritual power - 1% (which is not all every bit of it) is collected into a beam of power spiritual power, and is released to a pure beam and killed. killed!!! its is so strong u need atleast 5 times the spiritual energy to be able to dispell this attack, or everything there is will just be destroyed depending how far the beam goes...

anyway these were my first ever made-up zanpaktous. The first one, as you see is an ultimate captain level sword, the second one is kinda a vice-captain one but since its bankai probably its a medium captain level or so.
yeah hope u like it

[zagman505]

welcome to NF! =) hope you have a great time. and great first post btw :)

anyways, the first one is, as you said, incredibly powerful to the extent of being too powerful >_< the only thing i don't really like it is its ability to instant-kill, but that's just me. also, the shikai somewhat reminds me of byakuya's senbonzakura... just the way that the tendrils are used for both attack and defense. the bankai however is pretty cool, although i would personally prefer a bankai that didn't instantly kill the enemy. but i guess that the kill rate would just depend on the power of the opponent for everything. overall a very cool and powerful sword =) i like it.

as for your second one.

i like the ability for you to do whatever you want with the shikai, although i would also like to see some definite techniques rather than just messing with the shape of the sword. also, the description of your bankai kind of confused me. if you put 1 spiritual energy into 5 square feet in ur shikai, it'd be about 0.2 per sq. ft or watever, so if u do the same thing in bankai, it'd make it so that it'd be 1 per sq. ft? that's how i interpreted, you might want to clarify. i like your final attack, it does seem like a last gasp attack considering that it leaves the user with about 1% of their reiatsu left. however, the bit where you need 5x the spiritual energy to control it confused me. 5x what spiritual energy? that just confused me, and all i got from it was that you needed a lot of energy to dispel the attack. all in all, i liked it, although i think the bankai had a few confusing bits in its description.

great stuff for your first zanpakutou =)

[silversnowfox]

Kurosaki_Naruto_... prety much the same comments as zagman505. Although... 50,000 bazookas? Isnt that a bit extreme, even for a bankai?

Here you go guys, another one for the mix:

Zanpaku-to: Disfigurer

Sealed state: regular katana, nothing distinguishing.

Initial release phrase: Reach out and cut someone
Initial release: In its initial release form, this zanpakuto takes the form of a kodachi of approximately 50 cm in length. Its guard is a clawed design, the following picture is an example: http://www.trueswords.com/images/prod/TS-DRAG4CLAW41.jpg
Its blade is a dark polished red, and looks as though it is stained in blood. The grip is similar to this, as the white bandages used to wrap it are stained with specks of what looks to be blood. However, there is nothing to distinguish what the sword's ability is.

Zanpakuto ability: This zanpakuto's ability is that it can cut at any distance. It does not extend like Gin's or anything along those lines. It simply cuts from any distance. Say that you are 20 meters away from me. You would think that you are safe from my blade, but that is untrue. If I slash at you, my sword transfers the damage as though were were standing in front of our opponent. However, if I were to make for a horizontal slash across my opponents chest, and he were to raise his sword as a defense, my slash would be blocked, and I would feel the resistance.

The wielder of this sword fights mainly at a distance, not wanting to actually touch the opponent with his sword. But, he can use it if nessicary. The reason he does not want to actually cut the person with his blade is because the blade itself, while it looks sharp, is acutally as blunt as Kenshin's reverse blade sword.


Bankai: Infinate cutting blade - In its bankai form, this zanpakuto's form shifts into something similar to Sephiroth's Masamune from Final Fantasy Advent Children... only longer. Insted of being only about five feet long, the blade is now 15 feet long. The guard is now the same as the guard of Kenshin's reverse blade sword.

Bankai ability: This sword's ability is similar to that of the initial release ability. However, it is different. With this sword's ability, the wielder cuts everything he wants along the straight line of the blade. Meaning that this is similar to Gin's ability, except the blade does not extend. Now, even enemies who think that they are in the way, are simply extra cutting points. The slash can be blocked, but it is better to dodge, as the blade carries alot of momentum and can cut through alot of other zanpakuto and katana.

Materialized form: I have no clue for once. I couldnt think of an appropriate one for this magnificant blade. If someone wants to suggest something, I might give it the form, and credit you for it.

[Corgi]

shikai
name: empyreal coalescence
appearance: katana with green blade
ability: the users body gets healed when the sword is released, and the user slowly drains the oppents reiatsu with each hit that the sword lands.

bankai
name: seraphic recrudescence
appearance: the user gets six reiatsu wings on their back which can attack opponents by extending and also these wings greatly increases their speed and allows the user to fly. the user gets a shield that can reflect attacks and constantly heals the users body, and a long double edged sword which increases the users strength with each hit and allows the user to fire off long reiatsu spikes which expand on contact into giant reiatsu crosses.

[silversnowfox]

Good one Corgi, I knew you could do it!
Although... constant healing you say. Does this healing have a limit?
Because if it doesnt...

[clouded_fate]

so many energy leecher shikais....

[EtherSword]

Kakashi19... intresting concept. However, please speak properly. What I mean to say is, "anyways, the tentacles will try stabbing the person and stuff." Please dont say, 'anyways' or 'and stuff'. The 'and stuff' part is what gets me. This is a serious forum, so try to act seriously.
What do you think of my edits? And to the part where you say I should try to act serious doesn't make sense since I'm always serious in my posts.
so many energy leecher shikais....
I guess its hard for us to come up with something original when you have so many shinigamis in bleach with different shikais. Even though most people leech spirit energy, at least they try making their own way of doing it.

[silversnowfox]

Originally Posted by Kakashi19
What do you think of my edits? And to the part where you say I should try to act serious doesn't make sense since I'm always serious in my posts.

Kakashi19, sorry for my harsh words. That day was a bad one for me. Some stuff happened that I would rather not discuss... or even thing about for that matter. I was reading some other stuff and when I came here... I think that I just lost it. The Zanpakuto shouldnt be counted for this, because I made that in advance. But my comments were made with a clouded head, so if they are good, take them to heart, if they are bad, just ignore them.

In fact, if anyone wants me to remove that post, I would be willing to do it. Or even edit it.

BTW, I dont know if anyone has been paying attention to what I have been saying aside from my zanpakuto, but if you have then you know that I am working on a fanfiction involving bleach. It is actually a cross over that was going to involve "Inuyasha", "Yu Yu Hakusho", and everyone favorite anime/manga... BLEACH! However, after much though, it is getting harder to write in the Inuyasha stuff without the story going all 'funky' on me. So, I have decided to edit the Inu stuff out.

Now, since it was originally planned to have Inu in it... I am left with a gap to fill. I was wondering, would anyone like to be written into the story? I can work together with anyone who does to build them a good character with a good back story. As for weapons, create your own, use one of your own zanpakuto, one of mine (depending on if it is not going to be used by another character), we can create one, I can create one for you, or if you want to use someone else's just let me know who and I will try to get in contact with them to find out if I can use it my story.

Well... the clock here says that it is 3:05 AM... and yet mine says that it is earlier... what a strange thing.

Oh well...

[clouded_fate]

i dont plan do do anything, but maybe you could add gundam into it?

oh, and if you dont want echnology to kill off magic, make it so that magic messed up with technology(lights going out, guns and trucks wont work, ect. ect.

[silversnowfox]

No, I dont think so. I can understand the magic and technology together thing, as that is similar to what happens in FMA, Yu Yu and a couple of other series. But I am not a big fan of Gundam. And besides that, this is mainly set in the Bleach world, and as far as I have seen Bleach is the equivilant of modern Tokyo.

Also, I dont think that I could do gundam justice in writing for it. That is another reason for not writing under an Inu combination. I dont feel that I could do Inuyasha the justice that it requires. I have spent years perfecting my writing to get wo where I am, so that I could do Naruto the justice it deserves before I really even attempted to seriously write for it. And I still plan to go back to the stuff that at the time I though was good, and now looking back at it, is actually really bad.

So, anyone else, I will cross you off of the list clouded_fatel, but anyone else who wants to appear in the story can still do it.

Now, I will post another zanpakuto later today, since I cant think of one at the moment. Everyone keep thinking about what I have said. If you dont want to, please let me know. I need to know what characters to put into the story's plan. If I dont get any responses after a while, I will just close the offer and plan the fic as is.

And dont worry about what you character is like. You can just tell me what you character is and I will make him or her any way you want.

Any way, everyone keep up with the good work. We cant let the would of shinigami go without zanpaku-to now can we?

[Red_Ronin01]

Here's a zanpakutou I've been wanting to create but never had the time to, so here it goes.....

Name: Chikusei (Voice of the Bamboo)
Appearance: 13.75 inch tanto with an 8 inch blade and a 5.75 inch handle along with a white maplewood sheath and handle.
Zanpakutou's Avatar: A female samurai with a lithe body, pale skin, red eyes, and long, flowing black hair, wearing a flowing white robe with silver and/or green trimmings. She also has a dark green sash wrapped around her waist, a ronin-gasa (one of those semi-conical straw hats worn by the ronin), and a katana strapped to the small of her back which turns into a naginata, similar or identical to the weapon's shikai form.

Shikai Command/Techniques: "Hear the wind's call, while the leaves echo your fall...."

Upon activation of the shikai form, a strong gust of wind accompanied by numerous bamboo leaves will swirl around the user's feet as the tanto is partially drawn and quickly turns into a naginata with a dark green shaft and a silvery blade on the end. The shaft is 6 feet long with gold fittings near the center and on the ends and the blade is curved with a 2-foot length. There are four primary shikai techniques for the weapon:

"Kaze no Tengai" or "Wind Canopy": It is a defensive technique in which the user summons the wind to guide their movements, which allows them to twirl their naginata with such flawless speed and precision that they can deflect any and all projectile weapons flying towards them. This, however, excludes most energy-based projectiles (eg. the projectile fired at Izuru Kira from Tobiume).

"Ten no Boufuu" or "Heaven's Gales": The user slashes upward with their naginata, causing a powerful wind to come in and break and/or disrupt their opponent's defenses before using that same wind to propel themselves forward and rain blows down on their opponent with the wind boosting the force of their blows exponentially until the user's concentration breaks or the wind finally dies down.

"Kiba no Boufuu" or "Teeth of the Gale": The user launches themself forward and unleashes a flurry of forward strikes, cutting and slicing at everything in front of them with such precision and fury that the technique is extremely difficult to block or retaliate against. (It is very much like what Ichimaru Gin did to Hitsugaya, except much faster and with far longer reach....a naginata has A LOT more reach than a wakizashi, obviously.)

"Fuujin" or "Wind Soul": The user holds the naginata directly in front of them with the blade pointing straight upwards before suddenly losing form along with the zanpakutou and becoming a powerful gust of wind with numerous bamboo leaves trailing behind them. It is good for escaping or simply getting around if you are too lazy to use shunpo. The user cannot be harmed in such a state, but cannot attack while in that state either. However, he/she can quickly materialize and strike out from that form if they have to.

Bankai Technique: "Seiran" or "Storm from a Clear Sky"

To activate the bankai, the user sets Chikusei down into the ground in front of them with the naginata's shaft sticking into the earth and the blade pointing straight up at the sky before giving out the bankai command, causing a massive illusion to form around them and themselves along with the zanpakutou to fade out of view. Here, the user literally becomes the "voice of the bamboo" in which they are able to travel quickly and seamlessly through the illusion without being seen, heard, or detected by any other means until they attack or are wounded to the point that the bankai cannot be maintained.

The illusion is that of a massive bamboo forest at mid-day with a clear blue sky and thousands upon thousands of bamboo stalks standing all around you. You can see the leaves kicking up and blowing gently around as the wind picks up from time to time, as well as the numerous rays of light tricking down to the forest's floor from the forest's canopy. There is also the faint smell of grass and tea carried by the breeze, but that smell is actually generated by the bankai and has a powerful narcotic effect that not only dulls the opponent's senses, but also neutralizes the part of their brain that inhibits fear. The illusion is almost serene.....that is until the user tries to kill them or the second stage of the bankai is activated. The user can attempt to kill them in this state, in which all the opponent's senses and motor functions are severely dulled and their ability to suppress their fear is completely inhibited as well. This makes quick retaliation on their part very difficult if not impossible, which in turn leaves them vulnerable if not helpless in some cases. (So sue me they can’t fight back…..since when was a fight ever supposed to be fair? And since when was a bankai ever designed to make a fight fair?) However, none of this is where the bankai gets its name.

The bankai gets its name from its second stage which comes into play when killing the opponent in its initial stage proves difficult. During the second stage, the wind would start to pick up and the opponent can hear the sound of leaves coming down from the forest's canopy as a strong wind comes down and carries them in from every direction. The leaves would then suddenly begin to pick up speed and turn into thousands of tiny, palm-sized blades before coming together and swarming towards the user's opponent, cutting down all the bamboo stalks in their path as they come.

The blades merely turn back into leaves if they are destroyed, but can quickly regain their form and continue attacking again until the user is either killed or wounded to the point that the bankai can no longer be maintained. The sky would also darken and begin pouring as the bankai goes into its second phase, and as wind turns to gale, the blades would come down even harder and faster, cutting and slashing furiously from every direction, until the user comes in and breaks the opponent's defenses or the opponent is overwhelmed by the sheer number of blades coming at him. And should the opponent be overwhelmed, the blades will come in and encase him in what works similarly to an iron-maiden, continually tearing and slicing at his bones and his flesh until the user comes in and swings the naginata towards it, cutting straight through the "iron maiden" and its occupant and causing all the blades to turn back into leaves before the opponent falls to the ground, either dead and bleeding or cut up beyond recognition.

[Kurosaki_Naruto_]

made lots of zanpakutou but then this is rly good ><!!! This zan is made for a person with very high spiritual pressure, and the character that i invented this zan for is a high spiritual like ichigo, but different character made by me..
Name: SliceZ
Sword look: A normal katana but the sealed state looks like two swords, one long and one shorter stuck together, but the total width is just like a few mm wider than normal katana. abt 3 feet long.
Shikai!!!:
Cut open, SliceZ!
The two "swords" split apart to form a half-katana sized gap between them. still, one is shorter a bit than the other.
Ability of shikai: The shikai is similar to ichigo's, but...
U first focus ur spiritual energy to the sword, and u can slice up things with ur ultra spiritual focus. When u focus lightning or electricity will form between the gap, and it willl cut so many things. The limit for this skill is like only 2 minutes for each time u focus. but it will cut through so manythings like a zanpakutou. If you're ultra high spirit then u will even cut through yamamoto's sword...lol...
shikai no.2!!!: I dunno if thisi s possible but there's a second shikai cus its not strong enough like the BANKAI.
this is like a near-bankai ability. The user focuses spiritual pressure all onto the gap of the sword. A big bang, and the sword is thin as a sausage, like those pirate's swords =) With this u can whip it around!!! yayyy.
well not exactly. Since as everybody knows, if u focus lots of sp in a small spot it will become even more strong. And even with this, u can swing it and it becomes longer! okay ithink this abbility is absurd =( But anyway, with this 2nd shikai ur speed also increases due to the spiritual pressure there is...

okay sorry but this zan doesn't have a bankai cus its intended for a vc prodigy.
next sword::
During my bleaching times, i always thot up new characters with ultimate zans, and one of them is this:
"The Unmovables"
Number 1:
Manipulator
The crossguard is four pointy things curving downwards like those clown's hats, with a ball at the end of them.
Shikai
Phrase: Open your eyes.
The character tht i intended this for is a depressed person. I didn't include the sealed state because the character does not unsheathe the sword or use it. When he fights he just dogdes the attacks and uses hand skills.
Like the name saids, they are unmovables. They don't need to move when they fight.
Ability 1 : Utter destruction, anyway, the ability of this sword is utter destruction. Invisible particles is how he attacks his enemies. U cannot see it, and when the shikai is used u will only be able to defend by : running away! It is like Gaara's sand, but this time its invisible. plus the sand will harm u when u touch it. anyway, when the skill hits something, it can devour it and destroy it.
Ability 2: Generation, with a wave of his arm, he can create large blocks of metal to appear above his enemy and crush them. This is a zanpak-kidou technique, and it uses a bit of spiritual power each time he uses it.
Ability 3: Infinite black lightning, like those kidou skills they use in bleach, this time its a black lightning instead of white, which is pretty cool! actually its more powerful that that, plus it can go forever until the user has no spiritual energy left. ...so it's not exactly infinite is it? lol!

Bankai!!!:
Phrase: The end.
lol!! this phrase is pretty catchy and like...yeah. By say it, the user finally unsheathes his sword and pulls it out, and when he does black lightning pours out of the sheath and ichigo bankai effects come agen, except the user is hit by a black lightning.
After the dust/smoke clears, there is a giantic menos-like monster standing before you. Actually he is a giant black-costumed jester/clown. in the center is the user, whose sword is now the jesters hand. In this bankai, there are two attacks.
One: Final End. The sword/hand of the jester is pointed at the desired enemy. The jester charges towards the target and the sword is facing it, with the jester's hand, the whole jester engulfs the target, and immense destructive spiritual power is exploded, and this is like a large version of its shikai, except you'll need to be 100x times faster than yourochi to dodge this!!! If you aim this at the soul society they might all die. This can penetrate the sereitei shield thing!
Two: Great Jester Mobilization. U can move the jester around, and with each step it takes the last step is devoured. U can extend the jester's arm, and it can destroy things, like the black lightning but now really bigger.
yay! finished 1!
posting the second and third on another post...

[K-deps]

Name of Zanpakutou:Chameleon
its 5 ft long

SHIKAI COMMAND: Hide n Seek Chameleon

SHIKAI POWER: The blade of the sword dissapears and it gains 6 ft in length
and the power of the blade increases as well as the speed of the user

BANKAI COMMAND: Mass Attack Chameleon

BANKAI POWER: Hundreds of clones are made and each have the invisble blade and they all stab the helpless opponent with their huge blades


thats the power of CHAMELEON!!

[silversnowfox]

Kurosaki_Naruto_.................................. ......

Super swords that are basically as powerful as Genryusai-dono's..........

This is totally unrealistic. These zanpakuto are super strong and have not weakness. If you havnt noticed, even my strongest swords have weaknesses.

You are reminding me of a poster from way back:

Originally posted by: Z~K

Shikai
Name: Asaindou (“Morning Requiem”)
Length/looks: (coming soon)
Skill: Asaindou has two abilities, the first one is constantly active and makes the blade of the sword invisible which makes it hard to predict the exact length of the weapon and the way it is designed. The only time the blade becomes visible is either the moment of sunrise or the moment of sunset. Asaindou`s second ability allows the user to destroy the soulcutter of every other shinigami for the next 24 hours. This only applies when Asaindou is used at the short time span of dusk or dawn.

Release phrase: “Welcome to the funeral diner, Asaindou!”


Bankai
Name: Reprieve (I couldn`t find a Japanese translation for that..)
Length/looks: blade stays the same, formless Bankai.
Skill: Like Asaindou, Reprieve got two abilities.

Stroke of Luck: reduces the power/effects of every soulcutter/bankai by half for the next 24 hours when ever Reprieve is hit or the bankai of the opponent is released/used. Example: If Tousen Kaname were to release his Bankai, the victim wouldn`t be totally blind, deaf and without the ability to smell, those effects would be lightened, meaning you can slightly see, hear and smell. If Reprieve would be hit by Wabisuke, the soulcutter of Kira Izuru it would compensate its effect (double the weight of the blade with every hit) and thus the weight would stay the same and lightened with every further hit.

Black Sunrise (kuro hinode): The effects stay the same as in the case of “Stroke of Luck” but if the Bankai is released at dawn or dusk, the amount of time in which the soulcutter/Bankai of the enemy is weakened increases from 24 hours up to 365 days.


Release phrase: “My day hasn`t come yet, this is my reprieve!”

However, yours do seem to be more geared toward the goals of the shinigami.
BUT STILL.... over powered zanpakuto tend to have an extremely serious weakness. Such as Aizen's weakness that he can effect those who dont see. And for that matter, he likely wouldnt be able to beak Zaraki.

Anyway, keep up the good work everyone.

OH YEAH!

Red_Ronin01, That was an awsome zanpakuto. Now, what I would like to see is a battle between your zanpakuto and its wielder plus me and my zanpakuto (Kagatsuki).

[silversnowfox]

Sorry for posting again, didnt catch Hitsugaya-Gin's post before I posted.
Now, Hitsugaya-Gin... interesting zanpakuto. Advise from the archives. More detail. Other then that... just hope that your character never gets caught in an enclosed area. He will end up like Ichigo from the beginning of Bleach, with his sword stuck in a wall, the floor, or the roof.

[K-deps]

Sorry for posting again, didnt catch Hitsugaya-Gin's post before I posted.
Now, Hitsugaya-Gin... interesting zanpakuto. Advise from the archives. More detail. Other then that... just hope that your character never gets caught in an enclosed area. He will end up like Ichigo from the beginning of Bleach, with his sword stuck in a wall, the floor, or the roof.
ugh just realized that
i was tryin to think of more detail but i just couldnt
im gonna try to think of a better one
ill try and post tommorow
i got football practice in a bit
thanks for the advice



tommorow my new Zanpakuto will OWN!!(i hope:P )

[Red_Ronin01]

My thanks, silversnowfox. However, where is this zanpakutou of yours posted exactly? These pre-med subjects are seriously eating up a lot my time, so the amount of time I have to search on these forums is minimal. If you could point me in the right direction, then I would greatly appreciate it. Thanks.

[silversnowfox]

Here is a link:
http://forums.narutofan.com/showpost.php?p=4727187&postcount=469

and if that doesnt work, it is on page 24 in the middle of the page. My zanpakuto is the third in the post, it wielder's name is posted as unknown, because my friend and I were creating the zanpakuto, and their wielders for my fanfiction story. And I didnt think that my name, it being american, would sound good for a shinigami. So I just threw a random name for the wielder.

I still havent come up with a good name for me that is japanese yet.
But that is a different matter.

[Kurosaki_Naruto_]

Hehe sorry for making over-powered zans, but anyway I still have others that aren't as over-powered. This one here is like Urahara's zan cus it uses blood, but this sword doesn't originate from his...
Name:血の月 (Blood moon)
Sealed state: It looks like those ANBU ninja's sword, looks very normal. Nothing different.
Shikai: Blood Pool.
Phrase: それ割り当てられるこぼれるため (Let it spill)
The user bites a bit of his thumb to let a drop of blood onto the blade. The blood drop now starts to spread to cover the whole sword to turn bloody red.
Ability One: Blood poisoning.
If the sword gives the enemy a cut, a few blood drops will be put onto the wound from the zanpakatou (since its covered in blood). Then, if the user wills, he can mentally make the wound bigger or cause more pain to the wound.
Ability Two: Blood spikes.
The user can extend the blood from the sword to make it really long and cut stuff. The blood spikes can only sustain for about 5 minutes, which then it will evapourate.
Ability Three: Blood stitch.
The user can make the wounds on himself to immediately seal to stop bloodloss.
Backdrop: Since every human has limited blood, if he uses to much there will be no more supply for blood to be used onto the sword. If he forces it he will die of blood loss...

Bankai: 半月の血の殺害 (Half-moon blood kill)
Phrase: Let them spill their lives out.
The sword will explode and blood-coloured mist will cover up the whole battlefield. Even dogs or those tracking stuff can't smell where he is because the blood is stinky =p. The enemy will look everywhere looking lost, and suddenly the user then goes near him in silence, and draws a half moon shape, from the top to draw a curve, and then he slices from down to up to cut the enemy, and a more powerful version of blood poison will effect upon the enemy.
Bankai second attack: 完全月の血の刺し傷 (Full-moon blood stab)
If the first bankai is foiled, he will use this one to kill. Since the first attack is blocked, the user will jump back into the dense mist to hide. Then he will make a solid blood sword-edged circle around the enemy. Then slowly the circle will go smaller to cut the enemy, which gives a full moon, then the user jumps high, and he uses the blood spike (shikai attack) to extend the sword and stab through the enemy, and then he will now stab through the enemy with the original sword.
I dunno if this is good enough, but pls comment!!1

[Red_Ronin01]

That's a really nice zanpakutou, you've got there, silversnowfox. The shikai and the bankai seem quite formidable and I'd bet my paycheck that it could stand up to a lot of the others I've seen so far. However, if you want to have duel between our two zanpakutou's and their wielders, you may want to take a look at a previous creation of mine. It might be worth looking into. Just click on the spoiler tab below.

Name: Kagematsuri (Festival of Shadows)
Appearance: 5 1/2 foot long katana with a 4 foot blade and an 18 inch handle. Also has a black sheath, purple handle, and silvery black fittings for both the blade and the handle. (Shikai) Has a 28 inch blade and a 10.5 inch handle in its initial sealed form.
Zanpakutou's Avatar: A huge black wraith with a purple tribal pattern painted over its skull and bladelike hands

Shikai Command/Technique: "Fall like darkness, Kagematsuri."

Once the shikai form is activated, the Kagematsuri will emit a shrill scream, like that of a ghost or a banshee, and immediately pull all shadows within a 75-foot radius of the user under its control. The center of the radius moves as Kagematsuri moves and the shikai form gives the user the ability to manipulate and control the shadows within that radius in numerous ways. There are four primary shikai techniques for the zanpakutou:

"Yuurei no Ito" or "Phantom Strings": Upon activation, the user's shadow along with that of his zanpakutou disappear and fuse into his body, acting like a web of artificial muscles and a failsafe system. His physical strength, speed, agility, and resistance to injury are boosted significantly and he gains a second sense of perception from his zanpakutou, making it very difficult to sneak up on him or catch him, as he can easily read people's presences via the darkness around him, which absorbs minute amounts of reiatsu and automatically relays other people's locations to him. It can also serve to plug up wounds or stop internal bleeding in case of fatal or near-fatal injuries.

"Kusari Yuurei" or "Phantom Chains": The user can paralyze his opponents by pinning their shadows to the walls or any other surface via projectile weapons (bo shuriken mainly) or by stabbing directly into them using the zanpakutou, which would not only paralyze them, but cause immense pain as if a real stab wound had been inflicted. However, no real damage comes as a result. Paralyzed opponents are vulnerable until the bo shuriken or zanpakutou is removed from their shadow or until struck. (This is normally fatal for the opponent and it may seem unfair, but consider that it requires the user to hit the opponent's shadow on the fly first.....usually not an easy thing to do....)

"Kurotengai" or "Black Canopy": The user holds his sword in front of him in the reverse grip position and quickly positions his palm behind his sword hand. A large and fluid mass of shadows will then rise up in front of him, forming a spherical shield and blocking any and all projectile weapons flying towards him. This includes energy projectiles. However, this does not protect against direct attacks, which can easily cut through the shield and wound the user. An offshoot of this technique is where the user forms a spherical globe of shadows around him and sinks into the ground, becoming a shadow and gaining the ability to move quickly and seamlessly through the darkness without any chance of detection. He cannot attack or be attacked in this form, but he can quickly rematerialize and attack should the need to do so arise.

"Kagemusha" or "Shadow Warrior": The user can quickly assume "wraithform" and change into what looks like a grayish, whitish, and faintly glowing undead form of himself. He is immune to any and all physical attacks in this state, including those from zanpakutou's as they will simply pass straight through him as long as the technique is in effect. However, it can only last for several seconds at a time and takes an inordinate amount of energy and concentration to pull off. It also renders the user vulnerable to most kido attacks and the damage caused by such spells is amplified in this form.

Bankai Command/Technique: "Hear the caller in the darkness, Kagematsuri."

Once Kagematsuri's bankai form is activated, it will immediately blanket the entire area within a 5 km radius of the user in a state of artificial night before everything fades into darkness and the user jumps back some distance away from his opponent(s). And once he goes into his fighting stance, the entire area around him will erupt into a burning sea of white reiatsu before the user goes into wraithform and the reiatsu quickly takes the form of a massive, six-headed ghost dragon.

The dragon itself takes the form of an ancient Chinese dragon, except that it has six heads and looks sickly, aged, and pale all throughout its form....almost as if it's about to die. However, this is just the opposite of what it is, as it can move like the wind, cutting through the air with unparalleled speed and precision, sucking the life and the youth out of the user's opponents, and causing them to shrivel and weaken with age within milliseconds after contact. One can literally age from 20 to 100 in human years within a few seconds upon feeling the chill of the ghost dragon's body and most opponents are rendered feeble, crippled, aged, and helpless soon after contact. The user is then free to cut them down in their aged forms without any fear of retaliation from most of them. The bankai, however, has an inherent weakness in that it cannot kill the opponents. Only the user can. It also takes an enormous amount of concentration and energy to pull off and the user will be left completely open with most of his reiatsu drained once the bankai finished. Anybody who survives it will take about a week to return to their normal age. Until then, they will be old, feeble, and crippled.


As for the wielder, his name is Kawazoe Masato; 4th seat, 13th Division. However, unbenknownst to Ukitake and the rest of his division, he is already a captain-level shinigami with a hollow kill count greater than anyone else in the division except for Ukitake himself. He is also a direct descendant of the shinigami who forged soukyoku and can work with zanpakutou's easily, but not at the same level as his great-grandfather who forged soukyouku long before he even came into existence in Soul Society. (Still writing up more details...)

[silversnowfox]

Kurosaki_Naruto_, getting better.

Red_Ronin01, I remember that one. All I needed to see was the first few lines and I remembered it. Although, I do adimit that I forgot that it was you who made it. I has been a while since I went through the archives. I went and read everything there, I thought you might have changed some things with the zanpakuto (I am glad I did).

Now, at the end you told me about the character that wields that zanpakuto. It is only fair that I do the same.

Click the spoiler button, I made some changes to the zanpakuto itself. Just a few minor things that have been refined, but still.

Zampakuto: this zampakuto's name is Shadow moon. Its materialized state strongly resembles Vampire Hunter D.

Sealed state: regular katana, guard shaped like four crescent moons circling the guard joint. Black wrapping.

Release phrase: Rise, Kagetsuki

Initial release: completely black almost straight sword, resembling a sword similar to Ichigo’s Bankai. Guard stays the same. Upon release, the sword casts an area, similar to Tosen’s Bankai. The area is fifty-foot circular area (it is fifty foot from one side to other.). Anyone caught inside is cast under an illusion of near total darkness with a crimson moon floating in the sky. This area is meant to confuse and disorient the enemy. Along with this, the user’s speed is pushed to the limit of their body, putting an incredible amount of strain on them (think Kenshin’s ultimate technique, how it uses god like speed that will eventually result in the body being damaged beyond repair… only not as severe.)

The user can further enhance his speed by releasing his raietsu out of his feet when they touch the ground. When they do so, the raietsu expands and then contracts quickly, pushing his feet up off of the ground faster. However, there is a weakness to this speed, as every time his feet meet the ground it creates a chiming that can be heard if a person concentrates enough (the chime is the exact same sound that is heard when Ichigo first shows his Bankai to Byakuya in the anime /episode 85, time code 14:10-14:12/).

Bankai name: Army of the shadow moon

Incomplete Bankai: The wielder of this blade was subjected to an experimental technique for the creation and manifestation of Bankai, similar to what Urahara under went. This resulted in two separate Bankai. The incomplete form of this Bankai is quite interesting. Upon releasing the Bankai, the user is split into two persons. Each one looks and acts exactly the same. However, one of them is the actual wielder of the technique. In its incomplete form, the wielder and his apparitions share everything, with the wielder controlling the action of his physical apparitions. Each apparition is a physical corporeal being that cannot be simply be destroyed. However, this form of the Bankai is more of a confusion technique then anything else. Every time any of the clones or real person is injured, they all manifest the injury. This can result in a very bad situation for the wielder, if he is not careful. However, with the abilities of his initial release still there his apparitions are meant for him to blend in and make the enemy doubt which one is the real one. This form is incredibly straining, as it actually wastes more energy then necessary due to how the Bankai was created.

Complete Bankai: after realizing that his Bankai was not truly an effective technique, and that it was not the true form of his Bankai, the wielder set out to find its complete and true form and succeeded. Upon releasing, the technique is the same as above. He splits into two forms… however, in this Bankai, all of the apparitions are real people. Each one operates independently, yet linked, as they are all the real person. This form is less stressful, and is the true form of Bankai, with a faster replication rate and that fact that they do not share wounds. In this form, the user can literally overwhelm even the most massive army, given the right amount of time. With all of the abilities of the initial release, this Bankai can easily become one of the most massive if it is given enough time. So, even if a clone is severely or mortally injured, but is still alive, when it generates another form, this form will remain uninjured. The true strength of this Bankai is that it cannot be defeated or destroyed unless all of the forms except one are destroyed. In that moment, the wielder will be subjected to a severe drop in energy, likely resulting in the person blacking out. However, even if the person does not black out, he will still require at least 24 hours to recuperate before he can even attempt to use even his initial release again.

The wielder of this zanpakuto's name is Ichiken Kaemon (One sword - Joyful, righthanded Old Samurai name). He entered the shinigami academy at a young age, but was quickly propelled up the ranks. Upon entrance, he was placed in their most advanced class and scored top marks on everything. However, it was soon discovered by three other students (His later friends and the wielders of the other two zanpakuto in the post where Kagetsuki was found, plus one girl who wielded an Ice/snow type zanpakuto) that he wasnt actually attending class.

He had actually created a spiritron body in his form, then gave it a copy of his memories. The copy can act exactly like him, but is a different being. He was actually training himself in the more advanced aspects of shinigami while the others were still learning the basics. By the time that everyone at the shinigami academy formed their zanpakuto, he had already done so much earlier, and had mastered his shinkai. His goal, while everyone else was just going through the basics of zanpakuto, was to find a short cut to bankai.

However, at this point, it was discovered that he had replaced himself with the fake, and he was forced to return to his classes. He told everyone that he had dismaneled the replacement. Then, when it got closer to graduation, Urahara (Who was captain of 12th squad at the time) found out about what he had done, and instantly offered him a place in 12 squad.

The rest is inside the spoiler tag as it has to do with some of the history in my fanfic.


During his time in 12th squad, Urahara singled him and his three friends out for speical training. He took them out and taught the other three how to use their shikai, then used a few different experimental Bankai creation processes on my character and the two other men. The woman had been captured by 'The Orginization' and the three of them wanted to rescue her. They succeeded in achieving bankai, and rescued her.

Then, Urahara created the Hogyoku and was sentenced to exile, he was vice captain, and was given the job as a replacement captain until a someone more appropriate could be found. He never took over the Shinigami Research Institute, prefering to play all of his cards close to his chest.

During this time, he founded the 12th squad's "shadow information society" which was filled with unknown shinigami who all wore masks and never used their real names (Think ANBU from Naruto).

However, six months after being given his possition, he was sentenced to be excuted for creating "Bakudai Kukan Ayumi (Infinate Space Step)". The device allowed the user to create an untraceable portal to anywhere they wanted. No barrier could stand in their way. Central 46 found it to be too much of a threat and sentenced to die for his 'crime' (the real reason was because they saw him as a person that could end up creating something for any enemy that came along in the future).

He was arrested and executed by decapitation. The same night, the 12th squad "shadow information society" committed mass sepuku, leaving only one member unaccounted for. The bodies were never fully examined as the headquarters was burned to the ground in a massive, highly intense fire.

However... the truth is that he switched himself with the spiritron body, which he had kept in 'cold storage'. Not only that, but the SIS was actually nothing more then his bankai on constant release. When the arresting shinigami came, the spiritron body forced place transfer (The fake body and Ichiken both have a form of demon arts inscribed on their backs that allows them to communicate over a long distance, and transfer their possitions without anyone being able to find out. The spiritron body's concisouness decided to make sure that Ichiken survived and used the replacement method to remove himself from the picture, and allow Ichiken to escape.)

At this point, he went into hiding on earth and has yet to be discovered as still living by soul society. (The reason for that is because he wears a device similar to the bracelet/item that Ulquiorra made Orihime wear that blocks anyone but the arrancar from sensing her presence. He made a variation that actually seals all of his raietsu inside of the barrier around his gigai.)

At the moment, his gigai looks like a person in their late teens/early to mid twenties. He dresses like a punk, wearing manily red and black and a spiked dog collar. His zanpakuto has been sealed inside of his soul because of his barrier device.

Wow... I wrote alot of stuff...
Hope I didnt over do it...

[clouded_fate]

name: third blade-sanbanken
release phrase:
rise and fall
defend and fear
wait as war
strike the cursed soul
see light once more, sanbanken
shikai:it is a normal soul cutter, yet it is very brittle. even the weakest of hollows or shinigami can crack it. but it never shatters, it only cracks.once there are enough cracks in the blade, it all breaks, leaving just a hilt

second shikai name: second sword-nibanken
release phrase:
from nothing, come
from everything, leave
from darkness, blaze
from light, freeze
from sheath, take my strength,
as you will, nibanken
shikai: the shards all melt as they fall, and fall on the ground in a puddel,the melted blade shard take the form of the three symbols(gotei 13, special ops, and demon arts) and inbetween the three symbols rises a blade, with three hand guards(instead of two). as we know, usually, half of the blade is in its own shadow. with my blade, any part in light is a sword of glistening ice, and the part is darkness is blazing fire(guess where that came from)

shikai attacks
name: ichi
attack: the blade becomes sharp enough to cut through the strongest of a vice captain's shikai, however, this drains spiritual power quickly

name: ni
attack: i am able to use shunpo an unlimited amount of time for 30 seconds, yet this can only be used once every hour

name: san
attack: think of megamans arm, my sword tip basicly turns into that, fireing any spell i use, so without even chanting, its five times as strong as if i had chanted, and if i do chant, then it is 40 times as strong as if i had chanted without the sword. i can use up to 8 demon arts before this cant be used again for the rest of the day.


third shikai name: first sword-ichibanken
release phrase:
white as the tiger
black as the dragon
red as the phoenix
blue as the sea serpent
fast as ichibanken
in this form, it is a giant feather, with one part of the feather as a blade. i am able to have is enter four other forms.
form 1: white as the tiger-a curved katana, like a tiger fang. the blade is white, while the rest of it is black and white, in the tiger stripe paterns.
form 2:black as the dragon- completely black, except for the pomel(thing at the end of the hilt) which is a huge ruby held by what looks like a dragon claw. the blade is serated.
form 3: red as the phoenix-the blade is basicly set on fire. the pomel is a phoenix head(figurene)
form 4: blue as the sea serpent-very similar to zabimura, a whipe that can have any part of it turn solid. asa given, it is blue, with whatlooks like a blue scaled tail.

materialization: a tiger, dragon, phoenix, and floating sea serpent(who'd a thunk it)

bankai name: final cry of the sword-ketteiteki nakigoe no tsurugi
bankai: i ride on a bird with pure white feathers, and have all four of my beasts to use for fighting. the phoenix is similar to the exacution pole thingy. i am still holding my ichibanken from atop the white bird


well? havent made one in a while

[silversnowfox]

Well, I am pissed! I was trying to post these zanpakuto, but I accidently closed the windown... effectivly reasing everything.

This is in celebration of the latest good news about Bleach.

Zanpakuto 1: Black Dragon Meijin
Materialized form: (for me to know and you to guess)

Sealed State: Black sword. Lookes like it is scaled. Gurad is a dragon circling the connection points.

Release phrase: Forsee the movements of the enemy,
Initial release: Transfoms into a blade that looks like a dragon. The blade is flat, but the grip is multi dimentional. The entire blade looks like it is a dragon. The dragon's back feet curle around the top of the wielder's fist, and the tail wraps around the bottom. The ability of this zanpakuto is called 'dragon's eye'. Everytime the wielder and his opponent cross blades (IE: actually cross blades, cut each other, etc.) the wielder gets a glimps of the opponent's mind. Eventually, he is then able to predict his opponents movements, and can then dominate.

Bankai: the blade of the sword now becomes flexable. This flexing is similar to that of Zabimaru, and is controled by the wielder. The wielder now has, 'Eyes of the Dragon' and can see every possible future event. The more likely, the more clear the semi solid image they see will be.

Supreme attack: Dragon of the East. The sword instantly disolves into dragon scales, similar in style to senbonzakura, except the entire sword disolves. Once this happens, they come together and materialize into a black scaled eastern dragon. This dragon will attack any opponent at the comand of the wielder. All of the dragon's attacks consume raietsu, and once the raietsu of the wielder runs out, the dragon vanishes, leaving behind only the blade in its sealed state.


Zanpakuto 2: White Tiger Fujiwara
Materialized form: (Same as above)

Sealed State: Pure white blade. Guard looks like two eastern paper fans.

Release phrase: Show your teeth,

Initial release: The blade now gains black stripes. The blade is now sereaded, resembeling a chainsaw. Its ability, 'Tiger Fang Chain Saw' allows the 'fangs' to move down the blade like they are teeth on a chainsaw.
(Warning parody content: Dont play with your zanpakuto, you could put your eye out!)

Bankai: once the wielder calls out for the bankai, the blade splits into two identical blades (initial release blades.). However, the back of the blades are now straight sharp edges. Not only that, but they are now equiped with old fasion samurai riding armor. Also, he is riding a materialized tiger equiped with similar armor. The rider has normal ability, while the tiger has the ability to shunpo, as well as possessing god like speed.


So, what does everyone think?

[Dave]

name: Ryukenden(a large black dragon)

sword:black

shikai call: ryukenden obliterate
when the call is made the user can blast black rays from the zanpaktou
also if needed, the user can say "Ryukenden shoot" and the clouds will become black and even bigger rays will come out of the sky at your opponent

Bankai: black fire of dragons(could change)
Black clouds form if not already, and instead of just one ryukenden 5 come out of the sky. Each of them keep blaststing super fast black fire at the opponent. If the opponent is hit with the black fire then the black fire will emidiatly attack the soul. burning it until it disapears forever. if this doesnt work then the user can obsorb the 5 dragons and controll the black flames
(like byakuya controlled the petals in his bonkai) the user can shape the fire anyway he wants

[silversnowfox]

HollowIchigo... Intresting, if not a little over powered.
However, the major thing is that it is Bankai, not Bonkai, OK?

Now... where is everyone else?
I want someone to guess what the materialized froms for my two new zanpakuto are.

[Dave]

Woops........

[cryodragoon]

name: no idea yet... help???

locked form (/sealed form/normal form): a normal katana, with beige-lightbrown wrapping, and a golden, round tsuba, with diagonal stripes, so that it becomes a multitude of crossing lines, also has a few circles around the spot where the blade "comes out", on the tsuba.
the saya (that's the scabbard, isn't it) is made of black, sturdy leater.

Shikai: by saying: Nirame, ... (glare, ...)
the end of the hilt (the other side of the hilt, than the side where the blade comes out of), out of the kashira (pommel), a thin , 5 centimeter long cord comes out (white) on which a long, yet thin piece of white cloth is attached (+/- a meter long).
At approx. 3/4th of the blade, at the non-cutting side, there is a small hole in the blade,
Out of this hole, are two small cords (gold-brown) with tassels at the end (also gold-brown).
the string can also be used to swing the sword around like a “whip”

(like hollow-ichigo does)

note: when i talk about the drain of the spirit power, i do it in a percentage... i think that spirit power isn’t stamina, so if i attack you, and i get tired, i still have 100 % spirit power left...
however, if i use spirit power, this WILL affect my stamina... so...
when i lose the full 100 percent of my spirit power, i will be near-unconsiousness...

abilities: -Candle Blast (RousokuBakuha)
-Hollow Exorcising Bullet (HorowuKakuseiTama) (sub-ability of the
candleblast)
-Tsunami (Tsunami) (sub-ability of candleblast)
-Wall of the Righteous (GafunNoGaiheki)

ability 1: Candle Blast (RousokuBakuha)
after saying the command words, the long string will be enveloped with flames... i will then place my hand at on the blade, near the tsuba, after which the flames will gather, and form a small compressed fireball...
after i aim, i will glide my hand over the blade (like renji’s “hoero, zabimaru” thingie), after which the fireball will be launched from the blade, and it will grow untill it’s diameter is around 20 cm). When it hits something (preferably it’s target, ofcourse), it will explode into a small explosion (a large orange-red flash, with lots of smoke, and a big boom)... .
Spirit power drain: around 20 %
Command: “Hassure, ...” (“Emit, ...”)

subability 1.1: Hollow Exorcising bullet (HorowuKakuseiTama)
when it hits a hollows mask directly (this ONLY works on the mask), it will drill a small hole, and then it will inject the energy directly into that point, after this, the energy will begin reacting with the hollow’s inner energy, so that the outside of the hollow (it’s skin) begins to smoke, after 4 seconds, the energy from the blast will be annihilated by the hollow’s inner energy (think matter-antimatter annihilation), and the hollow will burst apart in a fiery shockwave-explosion that lasts for 5 seconds. (note: the “hollow exorcising bullet” only works on sub-hollows (separate parts of the main hollow (like the little exploding maggots, and the exploding frogs of the shrieker, and the imitator-tentacle-puppet of the grand fisher, they weren’t actual hollows, just a part of the main hollow), small hollows, and normal hollows, NOT on great hollows, Menos, Arrancar, or Vaizard...)
Spirit power drain: around 30 %
Command: “Hassure, ...!” (“Emit, ...!”)

Sub-Ability 1.2: Tsunami (Tsunami)
Instead of forming the energy into a ball, this ability channels the heat-energy from the string to the blade (by holding the sword up in the air, as if you want to attack), gradually heating the blade until it glows bright red, as if it is near it’s melting point... this is so hot that the air around the zanpakuto is rippling from the heat.
When the zanpakuto is slashed down (or sideways), the heat is released into a vertical (or horizontal), crescent-moon-shaped energy blast, it acts like a shockwave of fire, setting things ablaze while pushing them aside by the great force it carries with him. The blast isn’t as powerful that the ground is ripped open, but it will still melt some of the stone at the surface, it will also leave a black burn-mark, and the ground will be left smoking when the shockwave has rushed past...
The shockwave has a range of 10 metres, after which it will gradually dissipate into hot air, heat ripples in the air, and smoke...
Spirit Power Drain: around 30 %
Command word: “Hassure, ...!” (“Emit!”)

Ability 2: Wall of the Righteous (GafunNoGaiheki)
By holding the katana in a guard position and saying the command words, a 2 meter long, 0,75 meter wide crystal shield will be made (with the inside that is multi-faceted), with a flash that looks like a sound-barrier braking air-effect, after the flash, the shield will appear by quickly growing in size, so that it looks like the shape expanded from a center point.
The shield is shaped like a tower shield (with rounded edges, like a riot shield). The crystal, however will be constantly vibrating,... now when an enemy hits the shield, the vibrations will automatically catapult him back... (this is not the star wars force push, but the effect will be more like this: you attack from above your head, attack hits shield, and the sword will be flung back, over your head, a little bit further than where you originally swung it from, the counter-attack of the shield may be just enough to "forcepush" the sword out of your hand, so that it lands (maximally) 1 meter away from you... you won't be catapulted back, but maybe have to step back to not fall over...)
The shield can be shaped to some degree, the shield can be bent to shape somewhat like a v, when you look from the top, as the (imaginary) vertical line in the middle of the shield can be bent.

There is a weakness, however: the vibrations weaken the shield, so that it will be easy to break... example: it can easily fling back two to three zanpakuto hits, or one hollow punch, so that i won’t be slashed in two, or crushed into a pulp... but the crystal will break, and the shards will cut and harm me... (even if it’s slightly)
also: the shield can be moved, but it requires some strength...
the shield will float in the air, and i won't have to do anything to keep it lifted, but if i want to move it, i will have to forcefully move the shield, this isn’t heavy, but you will have to carry the shield to move it.

When the shield is being bombarded with heat (like at the aftermath of the hollow exorcising bullet (the fire-shockwave-explosion), the shield will not break, it will only melt at the sides, thus creating these “horizontal icicles of crystal”...
Spirit Power Drain: around 40 %
Command: “Katamare, ...” (solidify, ...!)

Bankai: still thinking

True form/materialisation: still thinking (but probably a (talking) lion).

So:
-stay tuned
-if you have the time, please review what i have already
and
-please help me get original and memorable commands and name (in japanese ofcourse) :D :D :D

[silversnowfox]

Well, well, well... a new guy! Welcome to the thread cryodragoon.
Intresting zanpakuto... although your writing was a little confusing. But I have read worse explinations, so dont be discouraged.

Now, what do you mean by 'True form'?
Are you talking about how Zabimaru is a baboon with a serpent for a tail, and how Zangetsu is a middle aged man and Ichigo's inner hollow?

Because if that is what you are talking about, that is their 'materialized' form.

[Red]

my soulslayers name: seitei
form:double edged cythe
activatio phrase:shed tears seitie
ability:any wound that is made by seitei dosent heal and the blood will keep on flowing...while the pain steadily grows and grows till it becomes unbearable.
basic move:hasnt told me yet
advanced move:hasent told me yet
bankai:do I look like a captain too you
materialization:A small ethreal girl with light blue eyes and a blood stained robe with angel wings.

[silversnowfox]

Welcome icha-icha_paradise.
Well, if you are not captain level yet... then lets start your training!

*pulls out Kagetsuki*
BANAI!

Now, lets get to training!

[clouded_fate]

banana?

and what did everyone think of my ichibanken?

[silversnowfox]

I thought that it was great!

[cryodragoon]

Well, well, well... a new guy! Welcome to the thread cryodragoon.
Intresting zanpakuto... although your writing was a little confusing. But I have read worse explinations, so dont be discouraged.

Now, what do you mean by 'True form'?
Are you talking about how Zabimaru is a baboon with a serpent for a tail, and how Zangetsu is a middle aged man and Ichigo's inner hollow?

Because if that is what you are talking about, that is their 'materialized' form.

whoops...

and yup... my "true form" is your materialised form :P

[Red]

Welcome icha-icha_paradise.
Well, if you are not captain level yet... then lets start your training!

*pulls out Kagetsuki*
BANAI!

Now, lets get to training!
oi thanks for the welcome...well lemme kick ur scrawny a-*trips on a stone and looks foolishly around* i look stupid no wonder seitei doesnt want me to know her bankai :sweat

[Kurosaki_Naruto_]

Sword name: 地獄の最も暗い根 (Darkest root of Hell)
Sealed state: It is a normal lengthed zanpakutou, but it is kinda rough like Zaraki's one. There is a carving of a tree spreading across the sword.
Shikai: 暗闇の刃からの伸張 ! (Stretch from the blade of dark!)
The carving from the blade will grow into a real-sized tree, it weighs tonnes but the true owner can hold it as if it was the weight of a normal sword.
This shikai is like Sasori's Sandaime Kazekage's Iron Sand "around the world" ability (or smth), the user can stretch and make the tree go bigger and slash it around, and it will act like a tree that can cut things. If something jams between or stick to the branches the user can't retract the sword to a smaller size or make it bigger. He can just only remove the jam to change the size.
Bankai: 地獄の一見 (A glimpse of hell)
The user will stab the branches onto the floor, where the roots will grow to the ground. Suddenly a giant tree will grow from the floor to form a giantic black tree. There will be no leaves. The user can control the branches individually very fast. The user can also make the roots of the tree bigger and longer to attack enemies from afar.
Ability 2: 黒は去る (black leaves)
black leaves will come out of the trunk to form a circle and a dark energy ball to shoot at people. The user can use it so many times a day.

[silversnowfox]

icha-icha_paradise, dont be so down. Why, when I trained to release my bankai, Kagetsuki tried to KILL ME! My friends got it easy, freaking getting to play board games and answer riddles!

*silversnowfox paces around fuming*

I AM PISSED!

Art of destruction number 90: Black Coffin!

*his car gets surrounded... the spell vanishes to reveal the car is destoryed*

MY CAR!
NNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Akakiri]

My Zampakuto would look like a normal Katana in normal form.

In Shikai it becomes 2 lightsaber like swords that could extend their width from as thin as a needle to as wide as a broadword

Its Bankai would be that the swords split apart into thousands of lazers that surround the target and fly directly towards it from all directions. Kind of like Xemnas from kingdom hearts 2 if you've ever played it.

[Kurosaki_Naruto_]

My Zampakuto would look like a normal Katana in normal form.

In Shikai it becomes 2 lightsaber like swords that could extend their width from as thin as a needle to as wide as a broadword

Its Bankai would be that the swords split apart into thousands of lazers that surround the target and fly directly towards it from all directions. Kind of like Xemnas from kingdom hearts 2 if you've ever played it.
wow that is one great description...but rly short. lol! there isnt a limit or minimum or smth..but well thts is like rly short

[silversnowfox]

No, there isn't a limit on how long or how short. However... that is really short. That has to be one of the shortest zanpakuto discriptions to date... I cant even remember one that was so short.

[clouded_fate]

frozen steam is still my favorite zanpakutou, the second one i made, i think.

[silversnowfox]

Hmmmm.....
I've been thinking...
and my thoughts are going along this line...
"How do boy bands and crapy Pop singers stay so rich?!"
Boy was that a good laugh.

Now, back to buisness: I learned something tonight. And from a VG no less. All I have to say about that is UP YOURS everyone who says videogames are not even worth the time that it takes to create them!

"According to legend... the carp must swim up the Yellow River. It must strugle against the current and evade everything that wishes to take its life along the supremely long and winding river. Then, after reacing the cave at the end of the river, it must face down and defeat a powerful opponent. If it can do this... then the carp will become a dragon."

This is what I learned tonight. All thanks to a videogame.

[Akakiri]

wow that is one great description...but rly short. lol! there isnt a limit or minimum or smth..but well thts is like rly short

O well, that quite describes my sword, plus I had to go so I rushed T.T

O well, Lets just say, my sword will own evry1 elses. It can widen it's width and look like a giant, Lazer shield with a hilt instead of a strap.

And my finisher is almost unbeatable.

[clouded_fate]

meh, nibanken with demon arts san or shunpo ni could easily defeat you, not to mention my old fukuma in bankai, witht he cero/quincy arrow attack

[silversnowfox]

Dont get cocky Akakiri! If you get too big of a head, then I'll just have to knock you down. Whats that old saying, "The bigger they are, the harder they fall".

After all I move at the absolute limit of physical ability, and can still increase my speed further. Not only that, but if I am given any time to prepare, then I can have a good sized army ready and waiting for you.

And by the way - III: Xaldin, The Whirlwind Lancer

[Akakiri]

meh, nibanken with demon arts san or shunpo ni could easily defeat you, not to mention my old fukuma in bankai, witht he cero/quincy arrow attack

O plz, A shield of lazer will fry anything that touches it. Like lets say.... something made of energy like a Quincy arrow does'nt stand a chance.

And, Silversnowfox, u've played KH II I see so you know what Xemnas's final move is I suppose. Now imagine that, except the lazers lock on to the target.

[silversnowfox]

You are just asking for a beating. If we were really shinigami, I would so knock you off your high horse. Actually, I would probably get my friend that's bankai is a riding tiger to knock you off, let his tiger eat the horse, and while that was going on, I would kick you around.

As for Xemnas... I was never scared of him. The truth is that I beat him at level 30. It took me less then 24 hours of game play to beat the game.
The only character that I have had to level up to face is the ultimate test of strength... Sephiroth! Now he is tough. Xemnas... meh, he couldnt kill JFK if he was given a sniper rifle and a building to shoot him from.

Now... Akakiri, lets examine this:

You wip out your zanpakuto. You are faced off against Ishida (from before he removed his glove during the soul society ark). Your sword length means squat, as well as its over all size. Ishida fights from a distance. Not only that, but lets examine this situation: Ishida fires a spirit bolt at you. You put up said 'laser shield'. Suddenly! You head explodes because Ishida used Hirenkyaku to move the instant you were blind and fired another blast almost instantly.

This then lends credit to the argument that shunpo could be used. Ichigo and Yoruichi can shunpo so fast that it is like they are in two places at once.
So, lets review: You put up shield, shinigami opponent uses shunpo to get behind you. Then they - 1: stab you/slash you/decapitate you/etc. or 2: they activate a kido spell and blast you from behind.

To top it off, spells like kurohitsugi could simply engulf you from all sides. This defeats the ability of a 'shield'.

Further more, lets say you went up against the wielder of 'Thousand Year Game', one of the zanpakuto that I create back on page 25. He could store Kido spells inside the GO pieces. So, that way he could attack you with multiple kido attacks/binding spells at the same time. Not only that, but if he surrounded you, then all of your raietsu would be drained. AND!!! If he activated his bankai, it doesnt matter what your bankai is. It could be that you unlease ten billion energy blasts, each one capable of destorying an entire ten thousand strong army. The blasts would have no effect, and you would be penalized for violating the rules of the game.

Never think that you are invincible. I know that my character isnt. I know that my zanpakuto could be defeated. My natural enemys are Byakuya and Genryusai, because of the massive over all size of their bankai. Genryusai could destory an entire army because of the fact that his sword destorys everything in the area of battle... and beyond! And then Byakuya can create a storm of infinate blades capable of simply transforming a person's body into nothing but a fine mist of blood!

Everyone out there can be defeated... because no matter how strong you are, there is always someone stronger.

[Akakiri]

You are just asking for a beating. If we were really shinigami, I would so knock you off your high horse. Actually, I would probably get my friend that's bankai is a riding tiger to knock you off, let his tiger eat the horse, and while that was going on, I would kick you around.

As for Xemnas... I was never scared of him. The truth is that I beat him at level 30. It took me less then 24 hours of game play to beat the game.
The only character that I have had to level up to face is the ultimate test of strength... Sephiroth! Now he is tough. Xemnas... meh, he couldnt kill JFK if he was given a sniper rifle and a building to shoot him from.

Now... Akakiri, lets examine this:

You wip out your zanpakuto. You are faced off against Ishida (from before he removed his glove during the soul society ark). Your sword length means squat, as well as its over all size. Ishida fights from a distance. Not only that, but lets examine this situation: Ishida fires a spirit bolt at you. You put up said 'laser shield'. Suddenly! You head explodes because Ishida used Hirenkyaku to move the instant you were blind and fired another blast almost instantly.

This then lends credit to the argument that shunpo could be used. Ichigo and Yoruichi can shunpo so fast that it is like they are in two places at once.
So, lets review: You put up shield, shinigami opponent uses shunpo to get behind you. Then they - 1: stab you/slash you/decapitate you/etc. or 2: they activate a kido spell and blast you from behind.

To top it off, spells like kurohitsugi could simply engulf you from all sides. This defeats the ability of a 'shield'.

Further more, lets say you went up against the wielder of 'Thousand Year Game', one of the zanpakuto that I create back on page 25. He could store Kido spells inside the GO pieces. So, that way he could attack you with multiple kido attacks/binding spells at the same time. Not only that, but if he surrounded you, then all of your raietsu would be drained. AND!!! If he activated his bankai, it doesnt matter what your bankai is. It could be that you unlease ten billion energy blasts, each one capable of destorying an entire ten thousand strong army. The blasts would have no effect, and you would be penalized for violating the rules of the game.

Never think that you are invincible. I know that my character isnt. I know that my zanpakuto could be defeated. My natural enemys are Byakuya and Genryusai, because of the massive over all size of their bankai. Genryusai could destory an entire army because of the fact that his sword destorys everything in the area of battle... and beyond! And then Byakuya can create a storm of infinate blades capable of simply transforming a person's body into nothing but a fine mist of blood!

Everyone out there can be defeated... because no matter how strong you are, there is always someone stronger.

I guess ur right....


O well, time to make a new one I guess. Hmmmmmm.

Kazesame

BITE, KAZESAME

In Shikai form, the blade is a Huge almost transperant scimitar. The hilt is normal and the blade is a foggy color. When I slash the sword, it has the ability to create sharp gusts of wind, slicing the foe bitterely, much like Baki's wind blade, except length isn't an issue. You can be far away and the wind will still slice you.

In Bankai, Kazesame creates a huge slicing tornado surrounding me. I can spread out the tornado at my will. The gusts will keep the foe back, and If he comes near, he will become slashed by the winds. I can move with the tornado spinning around me. As I move, the tornado moves as well. It's an unbreakable defense/ offense. Plus even for Ishida, if he even tries to get within range, to shoot me, the dust from the tornado will cloud his vision.

[silversnowfox]

HA! Again you miscalculate! If a preson has a high spiritual tracking ability then they could easily sense where you are. That is not even counting materialization of spiritual ribbons/threads.

And, to top it off... Angle, the wielder of 'Divine Burden' could easily shoot through your little 'wind shield' with his sword in Execution mode. Then, to top it off, the wielder of 'forest watcher' could impale you with iron bamboo from below!

HA HA!

Now, in all seriousness... stop being so damn superior you damn New Yorker!
This is not a competition. We are just here because we enjoy creating intresting zanpakuto! If it were a compitition, then Tsukiyomi would win hands down! He still has everyone here beat... including me!

Unfortunatly, he no longer visits this thread... so I cant get his input on all of my kick ass zanpakuto! *goes off into a corner to cry*

Well, lets see, it you want to make this a test of supremely powerful zanpakuto... then I will accept. I was planning on saving these zanpakuto for a special occation, but I will just have to release them here!

Just give me a few days to finish them, and then you will be whitness to the strongest zanpakuto ever to invade this thread!

NEXT TIME on Your Zanpakuto:

REVIVAL! ENTER THE INFINITE TEN!

[Red_Ronin01]

Here's another zanpakutou I've had in mind for quite some time. It's a bit overpowered, but you will see why later on. I hope you guys like it.

Name: Housenka (Can be translated as: "A Thousand Blazing Fires")
Appearance: 38-inch katana with a 28-inch blade and a 10-inch handle. Also has a brown sheath, dark-red handle, and gold fittings for both the blade and the handle.
Zanpakutou's Avatar: An old shinigami captain, whose identity has nearly been lost to time, but does not bear the ravages of age....only the scars of numerous battles fought over the millennia. The insignia on his captain's coat has also been torn out by what appears to have been a very large bird's talons and his mere prescence tells you that he is as old as or maybe even older than Yamamoto himself. However, he also radiates a familiar aura and the wielder almost feels as if he is staring at himself when confronted by the zanpakutou's avatar.


Shikai Command: "Soar through the burning sky, Housenka!"

Upon activating the shikai form, Housenka will fly smoothly and effortlessly out of its sheath, almost singing as it is drawn, before the area around the wielder suddenly explodes into a sea of burning gold/white reiatsu whose power is so intense that those who caught within the blast almost feel as if they are suffocating or burning. This, however, only lasts for a few seconds and upon completion of the activation phase, the blade will shine as clear as day with a faint golden light surrounding it. The user will also leave a trail fire where he walks and the blade will do likewise to whatever it touches. (Dragging the blade along the ground while leaving a trail of fire in its wake.) This, however, is not the blade's true power nor is it its primary technique.

Housenka's true power lies within its ability to burn reiatsu. That's right....burn reiatsu. The amount of damage dealt to the opponent is directly proportional to the strength of his reiatsu, meaning that stronger opponents such as Aizen, Kenpachi, Ichigo, or Yamamoto would take a great deal more damage than their lower-level counterparts. As Housenka cuts through an opponent's flesh, it forcibly ignites or combusts their reiatsu, causing it to turn against them and burn them from within, inflicting massive damage with every strike. Therefore, even a small cut can hurt like a strong blow, and a critical strike can severely wound or even kill the most powerful or elite of opponents. As an added effect, Housenka's strikes will not only burn an opponent's reiatsu, but also deplete it, making them more vulnerable and adding insult to their injuries as well.

Bankai Technique/Name ---> "Dance of the Phoenix"
Bankai Command ---> "Awaken, Soukyouku!!"

Upon activation of the bankai, the user will call out the zanpakutou's true name, Soukyouku. This is where the zanpakutou really came from. It was forged by the user's older brother, Masato who found the few remaining pieces of Soukyouku and made them into a blade shortly after the Aizen incident. The blade nearly killed Masato during the forging process, but when Haku grabbed Kagematsuri off his fallen brother's side and faced Soukyouku in what would have been a brave yet futile attempt to kill his brother's creation, Soukyouku immediately saw the true nature of Haku's character as well as his fighting spirit and the limitless amount of potential he had inside him. He accepted Haku as his new wielder, but only under the condition that he could prove himself worthy of wielding him within several years time.

When the bankai form is activated, the user will perform a complex and circular dance, leaving a trail of fire in the form of numerous symbols on the ground while the sky turns dark and ashes begin to fall from the sky. This however, is just the calm before the storm......once he finishes making the final circle, the user will draw his sword and the symbols will suddenly flare up and erupt into flames before taking the form of a giant summoning circle which he just formed on the ground with the user right in the middle of it. And upon completing the circle, the user would call out the zanpakutou's true name and raise it high above his head before it lets out a shrill scream like that of a phoenix before beaming with pure energy and catching fire. After that, the user would stab it into the ground and the summoning circle would explode, sending a powerful wind and vibrations out in all directions, fanning the flames and causing them to burn more intensely before a phoenix of tremendous size and power suddenly sweeps down from the sky and envelops the user in its wings. The user would then be engulfed in flames, but remain completely unscathed as he slowly fades from view and the phoenix fans its wings out, letting out a powerful cry and blasting everything within hundreds or thousands of meters away with fire and pure energy. And once that is done and the phoenix's onslaught dies down, the phoenix, consumed by its own fire and energy would fade away.......

The wind would die down, the last of the flames would burn out and the ashes would fall once more.....just before the sky turns bright again and the user reappears where the phoenix was standing with his arms in the same position as the phoenix's wings before it unleashed its attack. The phoenix would also leave one of its primary flight feathers in his hands after it fades. This is to revive any his comrades who may have fallen during the fighting, but there is only enough of to bring back one.

The bankai is ludicrously powerful and uniformly lethal towards everyone, save for the user and his comrades, but it possesses one very big weakness. That weakness is that it takes a long to prepare, leaving the user vulnerable during that time. If he gets whacked before the summoning circle is complete, then it is useless.


Wielder: Kawazoe Haku

Haku is the younger brother of Masato, Kagematsuri's wielder, and an unseated member of Komamura's 7th. He is roughly half of Masato's age and appears to be between 11 to 12 years of age in human years. He received Housenka as a graduation gift from his brother after being accepted by the 7th Division, but not before realizing its true origin during the final phases of the forging process. Haku's tremendous potential and strength of character were Housenka's (or rather, Soukyouku's) main reasons for accepting him as his new wielder. However, Housenka/Soukyouku still considers him to be a child and will not take orders from him until he proves himself worthy on the field of battle. As of now, only Masato who reforged him, can call Housenka into his shikai form.

Haku has not even achieved shikai yet and still knows very little of himself or his weapon's true potential. This however, may soon change as he has developed a talent for mastering high-level weapons and skills in relatively short amounts of time, which was his main reason for being accepted so early into the 13 Gotei. His zanpakutou's avatar is that of his great grandfather who forged Soukyouku generations ago and is technically responsible for the creation of Housenka and many of Soul Society's older zanpakutou's as well.

[Akakiri]

I only bragged once silversnowfox, and i apologized for it. Ur the one talking about how all of ur zampaku-to could own mines. I'm just sharing my ideas, so don't get all cranky. Stop being a hyppocrite and have fun.

Ps. Tornados lift people off the ground, ur iron roots thing won't impale me, for I can hover up my twister.

[silversnowfox]

Well, I wouldnt be surprised if 'forest watcher', 'divine burdan', and 'hell fire' could compete. They are the blades of the 'Three Kings'. Then there are the the 'Two Supreme Kinghts' and the 'The Kyuubi' or 'King'.

Plus, have you ever seen how high bamboo can grow? It not your regular everyday crab grass.

And I am not saying that our zanpakuto 'own' yours.

However, that is not to say that I am not 'scolding' you. Keep zanpakuto in the bounds of reality. Making them more realistic makes it more fun for everyone. That way, there is more detail. Just saying, "Oh, my sword is a a super weapon that creates a supreme defense and attack all in one! That way, there is no way it can be defeated." makes this thread boring. Every zanpakuto I create has weaknesses. Every zanpakuto I create can be defeated. It just needs the right enemy to be defeated.

OK, I am finishing up a post that I was working on earlier and I will post that later.

[Akakiri]

Well, I wouldnt be surprised if 'forest watcher', 'divine burdan', and 'hell fire' could compete. They are the blades of the 'Three Kings'. Then there are the the 'Two Supreme Kinghts' and the 'The Kyuubi' or 'King'.

Plus, have you ever seen how high bamboo can grow? It not your regular everyday crab grass.

And I am not saying that our zanpakuto 'own' yours.

However, that is not to say that I am not 'scolding' you. Keep zanpakuto in the bounds of reality. Making them more realistic makes it more fun for everyone. That way, there is more detail. Just saying, "Oh, my sword is a a super weapon that creates a supreme defense and attack all in one! That way, there is no way it can be defeated." makes this thread boring. Every zanpakuto I create has weaknesses. Every zanpakuto I create can be defeated. It just needs the right enemy to be defeated.

OK, I am finishing up a post that I was working on earlier and I will post that later.


Realistic? ................. I'm trying to make mines realistic, a wind element blade like Hitsugaya's or Yamamoto's ice and fire blades. I mean, a bankai is an ultimite move right? A giant tornado sounds like a good enough bankai for a wind element blade I suppose. And if it could be easily beaten, it must be realistic enough.

[cryodragoon]

ok then, people, can anyone make a name & commands up for me PLEASE, if it's just in english, i don't care... i'll find a way to translate it to japanese...

just get me some inspiration, please...

[clouded_fate]

^sound of ice
hear their graves, sound of ice

bankai: notes of the wind, melody of frozen death

[cryodragoon]

problem is: my zanpakuto-idea had nothing to do with ice (see page 27, near the end)...

[silversnowfox]

Would you like me to make an Ice/snow type zanpakuto for you?

Its no problem, I could post it with the new and improved versions of some of my older zanpakuto that I am planning to rerelease.

[cryodragoon]

what the...?

damn thats nice... but i have made myself a zanpakuto that (i think) is good enough... (see page 27, near the end...)

i just asked for an appropriate name :D

but if you'd like to make one for me, be my guest... :D

[Akakiri]

Hmmmm. Your Zampakuto seems Ghostly. Something chilling should be the name. Soulrender, Phantom, or Frostmourne *(which i got from a game) sound like good names.

Whisper, Glare, Drain, appear sound like good calls.

[cryodragoon]

i know what game you mean ;)

whisper and glare are cool calls...

but the name is so... normal (i know, i know... i whine, therefore, i am)

[Red]

some one read my sietei onpage 27....and tell me if it's original I changed it...

[Akakiri]

i know what game you mean ;)

whisper and glare are cool calls...

but the name is so... normal (i know, i know... i whine, therefore, i am)

Of course you do, you have Arthas on your sig.

[silversnowfox]

I was just offering to make you one because you said that it wasnt an ice/snow type. Which seems to be something that you wanted. I'll post those later, after I get back from dinner and then finish cooking some stuff that will spoil other wise.

[Red_Ronin01]

Did any of you all see the new zanpakutou I made recently? It's on page 28. If any of you all can give me some input on it then i would greatly appreciate it. Thanks.

[silversnowfox]

Now, first off.... Red_Ronin01... FAN FUCKING TASTIC! Sorry for my crude language, but that was a great post! Not only the zanpakuto, but the character as well.

Now, let’s begin my favorite game... The life and death struggle of improving my past zanpakuto!

-ONE-
Zanpakuto: This zanpakuto's name is 'Howling Wind'.
Materialized form: Squall from FF8. He enjoys riddles, and used a riddle game to test Kazehiko for his Bankai release.

Sealed state: In its sealed state, it looks like a regular katana. Its guard is shaped like feathers (think Hitsugaya's but instead of a star it is feathers) the handle has blue wrapping.

Release phrase: Cut without end...

Initial Release: In its initial release state, it takes the form of a combination between the Buster sword and gun blade. It ability is that it can somewhat control the wind. The wielder can use wind to somewhat increase his speed as well as create wind armor (is only high speed wind wrapped around the person). Its two attacks are Tornado and Turbulence. Tornado is exactly what it says, the wielder rotates the blade above his head, concentrating the wind and creating a tornado that he then 'throws' at the enemy. As for Turbulence, it is an attack similar to the Kamaitachi from Naruto, except that it is a wall of cutting wind that cannot be re-directed and flies in a strait line once thrown from the blade.

Bankai: This blade's Bankai is similar to sixth squad captain's in that it has two releases.

Incomplete Bankai name: Divine Howling Wind

Incomplete Bankai – In its incomplete stage, it takes the form of a giant bird (FLY from CCS) with four wings and nine tail feathers. This release is similar to the twelfth squad captain's in that it is a materialized animal of sorts.

Complete Bankai name: Windigo of the Divine Howling Wind

Complete Bankai: In the complete form, the user gains armor (breast plate armor, gauntlets –each has two feather blades- steal plated boots) as well as two wings giving him a 15-foot wingspan. In this form, he can control the wind much more greatly. The abilities of the initial release also exist here, only amplified.


-Wielder-
Name: Kazehiko (no family name)
Kazehiko came from a similar back ground as Rukia and Renji. He grew up in the worst of conditions. However, in spite of all of the horrors he was exposed to, he forged ahead with only one goal. To become the supreme shinigami commander so that he could purge Soul Society of evil, and turn it into the paradise that it was supposed to be.

He worked hard and was able to get into the shinigami academy on his first try. He quickly excelled, and just as quickly was sent crashing down. His first encounter with Yukio no Jigoku (the top class ace) was one that scared him for the rest of his life. He immediately realized that as long as Yukio was alive, he would only be second best. So he set out to become his friend... then when Yukio let his guard down, kill him. However... before he could do this, it was revealed that Yukio was never actually at the academy. He was forced to come back and by that time... Kazehiko saw that he was already at the level of a seasoned shinigami. He dedicated himself to following Yukio and waiting for the moment to kill him.

Both were assigned to the 12th squad, and were singled out (along with two other shinigami) for special training by Urahara. During their long term training mission to earth, the female member of their group was captured by the Orginization. Urahara sped up their training so that they could be ready for their near future encounters.

After rescuing the female team member, they were confronted, and each of the three men fought a powerful opponent. Each one defeated the opponent, and they returned to soul society. Shortly there after, Urahara was exiled from soul society for his crimes. For lack of a better candidate, then vice-captain Yukio was installed as a temporary replacement until a better one could be found.

Six months later, Yukio was executed for similar crimes as Urahara. At this point, Kazehiko was transferred to the CROSS or 'Covert Realm of Spirit Squad'. A group of shinigami charged with keeping track of the 'realm of spirit' (Spirit World from YU YU). He has since gained a reputation for ruthlessness, even going so far as to cut off the right hand of a shinigami that refued one of his orders. He then sealed the wound so that the hand could never be replaced or grown back.


-TWO-
Zanpakuto: This zanpakuto bears the name, Searing Flame.
Materialized form: Its materialized form is a mixture of Jack Sparrow and Radar Man (Paranoia Agent). He possesses Radar Man's red cape and wears a mixture of red and white. He has a fondness for puzzles, as well as mind and board games. As a result, he tested Natsu for his bankai by making him play one hundred different games all at once. Natsu defeated him... 51 to 49. Resulting in Searing Flame's submission.

Sealed state: In its sealed state it looks like a regular Katana with a guard shaped like a sun (when turned, looks like the sun is rotating.) The rapping on the handle is flame red.

Release phrase: Scorch, Searing Flame

Initial Release: It takes the form of a 'Flame blade' (swiveling blade).
http://elfwood.lysator.liu.se/art/r/...esign.jpg.html - Bottom sword, except not a snake for a handle. I will post a better picture once I get one. And it can catch fire.
Its only known attack at this time is called Heat Wave. The user simply calls out ‘heat wave’ releasing a wave of fire in all directions. This wave continues for about twenty five feet, igniting everything that can catch fire within this area.

Bankai name: Sun Scorching Raion (Sun Schorching Lion)

Bankai: Its Bankai is similar to the twelfth squad captain's. SSR materializes into a ten-foot tall lion, with flaming (fur) mane and tail. Color of his fur represents his current strength (red being weakest to blue being strongest). Its strength increases with the amount of time that it is materialized, meaning that the blade will continue to grow stronger with time. However... this has a limit. Eventually, his power will exceed that of its ultimate sustaining power. At this point, it will be so hot that anything that can burn will combust when in the vicinity. Concrete and metal will melt under the extreme heat, and eventually its power will become so strong that the wielder will have to reseal it to keep it from destroying everything. At its highest possible temperature, SSR will have the power to actually 'burn/scorch' the sun.

Ultimate Bankai Attack: Sun Scorching Raion Nova
Once the attack is unleashed, SSR will begin to grow larger, reaching 50 feet tall. Once this happens, SSR will suddenly collapse back on itself with such force that it will bounce back. Resulting in a 'super nova' of sorts. Everyone, including the wielder can be injured in the ensuing blast, so it has never been used in actual combat.


Wielder: Natsu Musuko (Summer Son) Nickname: Nat (as in the bug)

Natsu was born in soul society. His parents had more then most, but not too much. His personality is very well balanced, and he is a person that idealizes 'warriors of justice'. He believes that those who fight for good, defending the weak from the oppressive and evil strong, are the true 'gods'. He entered the shinigami academy at the age of 21. He didn’t have any real strength, but his mind was sharp, and he found ways around not having overwhelming strength.

During his schooling years, he carefully watched Yukio, believing that something about him was strange. Then he, along with two friends discovered that Yukio had been replacing himself with a 'spiritron' body. Yukio swore them to secrecy, and they never revealed his secrete. As a result, Yukio developed a way of improving Natsu's spiritual pressure. The technique was a 'seal' that bound the wielder's raietsu, limiting them to only a fraction of what it actually was. Over time, their raietsu would build up to match what it was. Then the seal could be released or increased in power to further develop their raietsu. (Think of training with weights or in high gravity. You get used to the weight... you turn it up and get stronger.) When it was revealed by the teachers that Yukio was not actually at the academy, Yukio was forced to return. He told Natsu that he had 'dismantled' the spiritron body, saying 'The experiment ran its proper course. And in the end, it wasn’t the body that failed to pass the inspection... it was the researcher.'

Upon his graduation, he was taken in by 12th squad and taken for training along with Yukio and Kazehiko. Later in his life, he was shocked when Yukio was arrested, and was a personal witness to his execution. He personally handled the funeral ceremony, and since then has lived with a Raietsu Seal that constantly cuts his power in half, without allowing growth. He still blames himself for Yukio's execution, believing that it was the result of him creating a cure for a sickness that had infected his family. Those given the cure gained a healing ability that kept them from being able to be killed or die at all.

It was immediately confiscated, and further testing revealed that it did so by combining shinigami, hollow, and human spirit energy and raietsu together into a single form of energy. The cure was given the title, 'Devil's Elixir' and all materials relating to it were destroyed.

He is the current leader of the Hunters, a group of shinigami that Hunts down renegade shinigami for the purposes of imprisonment and execution. However, since he took over, not a single prisoner has been handed over for execution. His policy is, 'No one shall be executed as long as I am the commander of this group.' This has led to him being ostracized by shinigami, and has even resulted in a few assassination attempts.

[silversnowfox]

-THREE-
Zanpakuto: This zanpakuto's name is Kagetsuki (Shadow moon).
Materialized form: Its materialized form is on that strongly resembles Vampire Hunter D. He possesses a love for battle that rivals Zaraki's. So much so, that if he could, he would take on an army of any size, skill, or level of power alone. In battle, he looses himself and finds joy, but outside of it... he is cold, calculating, and murderous.

Sealed state: In its sealed state, it takes the form of a regular katana, with a guard shaped like four crescent moons circling the guard joint. The wrappings are black.

Release phrase: Rise...

Initial release: Once released, it becomes a completely black almost straight sword, resembling a sword similar to Ichigo’s Bankai. The guard stays the same as in its sealed state. Upon release, the sword casts an area, similar to Tosen’s Bankai. The area is fifty-foot circular area (it is fifty foot from one side to other.). Anyone caught inside is cast under an illusion of near total darkness with a crimson moon floating in the sky. This area is meant to confuse and disorient the enemy. To add insult to injury, the user’s speed is pushed to the limit of their body, putting an incredible amount of strain on their body (think Kenshin’s ultimate technique, how it uses god like speed that will eventually result in the body being damaged beyond repair… only not as severe.) The user can further enhance his speed by using the 'raietsu step'. When doing this, the user forces his raiesu out of his feet. It expands and then suddenly contracts, forcing his feet up much faster then normal. This further enhancement comes at a price however, as every time their feet meet the ground it creates a chiming that can be heard if a person concentrates enough (the chime is the exact same sound that is heard when Ichigo first shows his Bankai to Byakuya in the anime /episode 85, time code 14:10-14:12/).


Bankai Name: Rikugan no Kagetsuki (Army of the Shadow moon)

Incomplete Bankai: The wielder of this blade was subjected to an experimental technique for the creation and manifestation of Bankai, similar to what Urahara under went. This resulted in two separate Bankai. Both incomplete and complete Bankai are similar. Upon releasing the Bankai, the user is split into two persons. Each one looks and acts exactly the same. However, one of them is the actual wielder of the technique. In its incomplete form, the wielder and his apparitions share everything, with the wielder controlling the action of his physical apparitions. Each apparition is a physical corporeal being that cannot be simply be with minor actions. However, this form of the Bankai is more of a confusion technique then anything else. Every time any of the clones or real person is injured, they all manifest the injury. This can result in a very bad situation for the wielder, if he is not careful. However, with the abilities of his initial release still there his apparitions are meant for him to blend in and make the enemy doubt which one is the real one. This form is incredibly straining, as it actually wastes more energy then necessary due to how the Bankai was created.



Complete Bankai: upon realizing that his Bankai was not truly an effective technique and that it was not the true form of his Bankai, Yukio set out to find its complete and true form and succeeded. Upon releasing, the blade exceeds the three shaku (katana measuring length) mark, making the sword and grip just less than six feet long. Its abilities are the same as above. He splits into two forms… however, in this Bankai, all of the apparitions are real people. Each one operates independently, yet linked, as they are all the real person. This form is less stressful, and is the true form of Bankai, with a faster replication rate, as well as the fact that they do not share wounds. In this form, the user can literally overwhelm even the most massive army, given the right amount of time. With all of the abilities of the initial release, this Bankai can easily become one of the most massive if it is given enough time. So, even if a clone is severely or mortally injured, but is still alive, when it generates another form, this form will remain uninjured. The true strength of this Bankai is that it cannot be defeated or destroyed unless all of the forms except one are destroyed. In that moment, the wielder will be subjected to a severe drop in energy, likely resulting in the person blacking out. However, even if the person does not black out, he will still require at least 24 hours to recuperate before he can even attempt to use even his initial release again.


Wielder: Yukio no Jigoku

Yukio has no memories of his past in Soul Society. Records from the Kuchiki family archive suggest a linkage between him and one the most famous Shinigami, Tsumi no Jigoku. Tsumi was the first renegade shinigami to pose an actual thread to Soul Society. This prompted the creation of the Hunters. Their original mission was to hunt down and kill Tsumi. However... his zanpakuto was so powerful and he along with it, that he cut a swath through the Hunters. While on earth, he taught humans how to gather their spiritual pressure and spiritrons... later resulting in the creation of the Quincy.

However, he was eventually struck down by one of the first humans to ever attain shinigami powers. This 'replacement' shinigami's zanpakuto, 'Infinite Universe' swallowed up Tsumi and his Zanpakuto whole.

It is not know exactly how the two may be linked, as Tsumi never had children, and his soul was never allowed to enter the 'infinite rotating stream' (the cycle of reincarnation on earth, death, new life in soul society, and then eventually, death in soul society, and reincarnation all over again.)

He was seen as a master of anything that he took to. So much so that at one point a group of renegade souls tried to get him to help them over throw the 'king of soul society' and kill the shinigami. When confronted by their leader, Yukio, then only 7 insulted the man. The leader of the rebels, enraged by the insult, attacked Yukio. In the ensuing battle, Yukio took the mans own spear and decapitate him with it. He took the man's spear and everything he had, claming that it was rightfully his since he killed the man. He then used all of his resources to get into the shinigami academy. He was accepted on his first try at entrance at age 12.

He was propelled up the ranks of the academy faster then anyone could have predicted. However, unknown to any at the academy, Yukio attended only the entrance examination for the academy. Instead of training at the, as he put it, pace of a hollow without a head, he trained almost night and day without end. Within a month he had already mastered shunpo, and materialized his zanpakuto. Within two, he had already gained the initial release of his zanpakuto. From that point on, he studied mainly demon arts, and researched looking for a way to gain Bankai without such extreme measures as ten years of training for that specific task.

After six months of this, he was discovered by the academy administration and forced to return. At this point he was forced to repeat most of what he had already accomplished until his graduation one and a half years later.

Just before graduation, Urahara visited the academy to find out who he might want to take into the twelfth squad. After hearing of Yukio’s exploits, from the spiritron body to when he modified a kido spell and destroyed all of the targets on the kido range in a single blast, he immediately put Yukio down for acceptance into the twelfth squad.

He was taken to earth for exclusive training with Kazehiko, Natsu, and Maiako. Upon their arrival, Maiako was abducted by the Organization. Yukio immediately gave chase, but was immediately defeated. Urahara then trained both Natsu and Kazehiko in their initial releases, and then used a variation of his materialization doll for Bankai training all of them.

Unknown to any at the time, the doll that was used by Yukio was slightly flawed, the resulting Bankai became flawed as a result. After rescuing Maiako, Yukio and the others were successful in defeating the first wave sent to recover Maiako. It was one of that group that revealed the flaw in Yukio’s Bankai.

After returning to Soul Society, Yukio trained night and day for five years to achieve his true Bankai. Shortly after achieving his true Bankai, Urahara was exiled from soul society and he was instated as the temporary replacement.

For the next six months he remained secluded, only meeting with his seated officers and the other captains. During this time, he created what would be later called the ‘Devil’s Elixir’. After six months, he was arrested for crimes against soul society. He was executed by decapitation without trial.

: No further information in Soul Society Main Data Base:
: No further file has been kept:

However… that is not where his tale ends. The truth is that Yukio was not executed… in truth, the spiritron body he created was the one killed. He himself was given a chance to escape soul society, posing as a no account Shinigami being sent out on patrol. After leaving soul society, he immediately created a variation of Urahara’s untraceable gigai. This variation doesn’t split the user’s raietsu, resulting in the deterioration of the Shinigami. He then sealed all of his raietsu inside of the gigai and vanished into the crowds of earth.

[Akakiri]

Hmmm, I have one. Its an earth type blade.

Zampakuto name: (Not sure)

In its sealed form, it has the apearance of a slong machete which has a hilt made of rock. This blade has no guard.

The Materialized form looks like a totem pole. Instead of walking, it kinda reappears.

The Realease phrase is "Shake the Earth"

In Shikai form, it looks like a giant, grey tomahawk. The user can pound the ground to create a shockwave which spreads out all around him. Another ability is that it can raise a giant wall of rock blocking attacks from the enemy, much like Sandaime Hokage did when he was fighting Shodaime and Nidaime. He can also raise stalagmites from the ground to impale his opponent as well as making rocks fly to him to create a thick coat of rock armour.

Bankai Realease: (Don't know yet, can you help me think of one)
In Bankai, the user hacks the ground with his zampakuto and causes a gigantic fissure, making a hole in the earth's crust, causing the magma below flow up to the surface, creating a volcanic eruption, with lava all around him. In this state, he can freely control the landscape of the area, and shape the ground at his will.

Can someone help me with the names and the user.

[silversnowfox]

Ok, here is a name:
Ancestral Mother... only translate that into navajo.
Bankai: Ancestral Earth Mother, again translated into navajo.

As for the wielder... he was a navajo before coming to soul society. That's all I got for now.

[Akakiri]

PERFECT NAME. I knew it needed a native american name that's perfect. Ty silversnowfox.

Now I can attempt to create the wielder.

Wielder, Stone Raven (Translated)

After he died, he wondered soul society aimlessly searching for his brother and training in the wilderness. As he was wondering one day, asking others if they've seen the man that matched the description of his brother, one told him that he was a shinigami. The man told him all about what a shinigami is. Stone Raven figured that the only way he could get to see his brother again is by becoming a Shinigami. He entered the Shinigami academy and learned abnormaly fast. Soon he was acceppted into the 7th division along with his brother and reunited with him.

One day, when his brother was on a mission to slay a powerful hollow with another shinigami named Oboroki. After slaying the hollow, Oboroki created a dense mist with his Zampakuto. Stone Raven's brother didn't know what was happening and Oboroki stabbed him in the back with his sword

When Oboroki returned to Soul Society, he lied and said that Stone Eagle's brother was killed by a hollow. Later on, when Oboroki was alone with Stone Eagle, he mocked him and then told him the truth about his brother. Stone Raven couldn't take it, then releasing his Shikai, hed impaled Oboroki with a stalagmyte coming up from the ground.

Stone Eagle's doing was discovered, and he was ready to be executed for killing another Shinigami. But Komomura overheard what Oboroki said and pleaded that Stone Raven, who was one of his favorite students not to be executed, admitting that he overheard Oboroki saying that he killed Stone Eagle's brother.

It was decided that he wouldn't be executed, but banished from soul society, before he was caught by the other Shinigami, he escaped. He used his bankai to create a giant fissure between him and his pursuers. After he left the Shinigami place, he became a bounty hunter. He has ties with Urahara Kisuke, Shihuin Yoruichi and the Shiba clan.

His apearance is that he's tall, with broad shoulders, long black hair, tan skin and gray eyes. He ussually has no shirt, animal skins on his shoulders, biege deerskin pants and a yellow, red and blue headband with a triangular pattern. He also has a number of beaded necklaces around his neck. He doesn't talk much, has a deep voice and has much respect for elders.

[Akakiri]

How do you like him? Think his description matches his zampakuto?

[Red_Ronin01]

Thank you, silversnowfox. Your input is greatly appreciated. As for your own work, I am thoughroughly impressed. I have a couple more zanpakutou's (one earth-based and the other ice/moonlight-based) in the works right now and I will try to get at least one of them posted by the end of this week.

[silversnowfox]

That was great Akakiri! Good job. I cant wait for you next creation.

Red_Ronin01, Well get those new zanpakuto out here, after all, you are the 'Zanpakuto Dealer', pay a little extra to get them overnighted to your shop! (Serisously, I cant wait to see them.)

Now, everyone, remember to keep a look out of my post titled, 'REVIVAL'. This is likely the largest project for this that I have taken on at once. Ten zanpakuto, ten wielders, and likely... ten posts, one after another. If anyone doesnt want me to do this, then let me know, and I will post them one at a time and give everyone time to absorb them. Other wise, watch out, because that flood is coming... it just hasnt reached the city yet!

Keep up the good work everyone!

[clouded_fate]

i dont feel like translating this into japanese

name: rain of fire
phrase:
as the flame falls,
as the blood falls,
as the sword falls,
as the light falls
the rain is also endless
this rain of fire
shikai: my zapakutou turns red, like heated metal. the sky is covered in fire, and whatever my zapakutou attacks is engulfed int eh fire, and it finds a new target with each thing i attack. after 5 minutes, i fire extingishes, leaving bot the feild and my sword being covered in ashes. the ashes then form into thousands of ash swords, that do the smae as the fire did. while the ash swords are brittle, they ae also sharp. with each attack i do with my ash covered sword, some of the ash falls off, eventually it all falls off, revealing a start blue blade. once this blue blade is revealed it is wrapped in flames. this flame does the same as ichimaru's sword, it extends quickly to attack.

materialization: a dark blue whale

bankai name: the sides of fire, the forms of flame
bankai: the fire that engulfs my sword takes ont he form of a massive sword/whip, and the sword becomes double edged, with the flame on the other side being able to turn into any weapon, such asa scythe or a mace. the giant flame is able to block any of my attacks automaticly, like gaara's sand.

[silversnowfox]

clouded_fate, another good one.

Now, I dont know about some of you, but I not read the manga of Bleach, I also watch the anime. And I have to admit... how did not one of us think of a zanpakuto that could control light?! I am not angry, I am just stumped... I mean, with as long as this thread has been around, and with how many people have come up with zanpakuto, I never even thought that about a zanpakuto that could control light.

After all, think about it... if you control light, you could warp all of the light around yourself, there by rendering yourself invisible!Which is what the orignial rouge shinigami character in the Bleach anime has been doing, althought they only revealed that this week!

I am shocked, I never even though of that.
Did anyone else ever think of something like that, and be honest. Dont post saying, "Yeah, I thought about making one like that but I thought that everyone would yell at me" or some shit like that. It doesnt matter if you did or didnt think of it. I just want to know.

[Abyss of Dreams]

Shikai
Name:Shugotenshi (Guardian Angel)
Length/looks:65cm(regular form like a regular katana), in shikai it become a claw like glove. It's like a sliverish blueiish as it's main color and a swirl of different sorts of colors in the middle.
Skill:Can throw claw fingers and each has a different elemental destruction tag on it (like burn, or shock) and can be used for close contact.
Release phrase:Soar toward the Sky, Shugotenshi!

Bankai
Name:Soshi Shugotenshi (Element Guardian Angel) (I think that's how it is)
Length/looks:The claws become metal gauntlets and look similar to the shikai
Skill:To activate Bankai you must throw all your claw fingers into the ground with speciic elemental tags and they become Elemental Guardians hence the name. They are controlled by the user, but can move on their own too.
Guardians:
Kasai: The fire guardian. He has short spikey black hair and is in armor that's sliver and has symbols on it that are gold. He weilds a sword and a sheild. Fire is within the sword so if he slices, stabs, cuts, etc it'll burn
Mizu: The water guardian. She has hair simalar to Hinamori only her color hair is a dark blue. She weilds a trident but she uses it for water magic.
Raikou: The lightning guardian. He is pretty muscular and has sleeveless fishnet shirt and has a tatoo under his right eye and has long spikey blonde hair. Uses brass kunckles to fight with includes lightning witin them.
Kaze: The wind guardian. She has light light light green hair in a ponytail. She wears a long scarf around her neck and wears green kimono. She fights by using a fan with hidden blades on them.
It's really hard to master because all focus must be all the guardians for them to move.

Yes i have been thinking for a while.:nod If its seems cheap to you well than i dont care.

[nekoryuuha]

I'd like your input on this one I made earlier please


Shikai Name: Aird
Shikai Release phrase: "Shoot through from all angles!"

Sealed appearance: An Odachi (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Odachi) without a sheath that's wrapped in cloth on my back. The hilt is in the shape of a 8-point star.

Shikai: The blade scatters into 75 diamond shaped pieces 1 inch long and 1/2 inch across that fly around around under my control. Each piece is able to fire a high powered beam of energy from the end of it at the enemy with very little drain on my reiatsu and can reflect spirital attacks like Kidou and its own beams.

Bankai Name: Crystal Storm Aird
Bankai Release phrase: "Shoot through everywhere at once!"

Bankai: The sword disappears from my hand and ten swords each exactly the same as the original appear floating around me and scatter, creating 750 pieces identical to the one in the shikai, but in addition to them, eight 6-inch long blades circle my body. These eight blades auto-defend me against my own beams as well as sword attacks if my foe managed to get close, but are unable to attack. The hilt of the original blade is attached to my right wrist minus the 8-point star(the 8-points are now the 8 floating blades).

Bankai special attack name: Aird Requiem

Bankai special attack description: From the hilt the hilt attached to my wrist, I fire a powerful beam into the cloud of Aird and split the beam 8 ways off one of the pieces and continuously reflect the 8 beams around the cloud at my opponent until all the beams are gone.

Materialized form: A tall young woman with a blue crystal dress and long blonde hair. She's barefoot and her eyes were ash grey.

[Ichigo Uzimaki]

Name:White Razor
Initial Release:Internal cut
Phrase:Inside Peanutbutter outside jelly
Look:sword turns blue and gets skinny
when ur hit by it it cuts ur insides instead of ur skin
BanKai: Knights Release
Phrase:Medevil attack
Look:You get blue knights armour and your sword is double edged
Does the same as the initial release but when you hit the armour you get cut
Material form:A tall skiny knight In armour and his eyes are covered by his helmet

[silversnowfox]

nekoryuuha, I thought I recognized that from a previous post. I am just glad that you didnt take someone else's zanpakuto. I remembered the zanpakuto, just not the poster.

Now, Ichigo Uzimaki... Good concept. But give a little more detial. Not only that, but please dont try to be 'funny'. What I am meaning is, "Inside Peanutbutter outside jelly"... that is not a good release phraze for that zanpakuto. But, if you keep it, then that's ok. It your creation.... just dont expect me to respect something with that kind of release phrase.

Well everyone, I might not be posting within the next few days, I have alot of work to do, and I need to review for a test on tuesday.

So, see you on the other side.

[Akakiri]

Ok Im making 2. The wielders are twins. Their descriptions are at the end of the post.

Zampakuto #1

Name: Koujin

Sealed form: It looks kind of like a short sword.

Materialized Form: It looks like a small cloud of dust with two bright red lights as eyes.

Shikai Call: Drift Koujin

Shikai: In Shikai form the hilt looks like that of a knife, and it's round and cylindar- like. The blade looks like a large saw but is jagged on both ends, like that of a sawfish. It can cause dust to float up freely. The dust can surround the opponent and solidify in an attempt to constrict him. It can also for into rock needles which fly at the opponent. He uses the sword to control the dust.

Bankai: In Bankai, the user holds his Zampakuto up and suddenly a giant cloud of dust surrounds the user swirling around him in a whirlwind. The user then fuses with the dust, freely controlling it. The only part of his body that remains normal is his head, thus making that his weak spot.
In the form of the dust, the user can gather particals from the ground, fusing them with him, making himself bigger and bigger. The dust is much like Gaara's sand, except, he can make it solid or free whenever he wants. He can turn parts of his body back to normal at his will.

Zampakuto #2

Zampakuto Name: Kemuri

Sealed form: In sealed form it looks like a short sword.

Materialized Form: A small cloud of black smoke with 2 bright red lights as eyes

Shikai Call: Immolate Kemuri

Shikai: The Zampakuto Looks Kind of like a large Sai. The Zampakuto creates a dark red phosphorus-like smoke that burns whatever it touches. The user points his Zampakuto at the enemy directing a large streak of smoke at him/her. He can manipulate the smoke and create a ring of it around him.

Bankai: The user's whole body becomes smoke except for his head. He canenvelope the enemy and burn him in a matter of seconds. He can expand himself outward surrounding anything around him. He can turn parts of his body back to normal at his will without burning himself.

Dual Bankai: Double Storm of Ash and Destruction:
The 2 brothers, unlike any other shinigami can fuse their bankai together to create a final Bankai. In this form, the dust turns black like ash and is now super hot, burning anything it touches. The cloud of this substance is now enormouse. The dust particals from the ground still add to the cloud to make it bigger and bigger while they burn searing hot and turn black. The storm can spread outward, burning anything in its path. It can also solidify like Koujin and become a hard coal-like rock, blocking runners. The two brothers can freely control the storm at their will

Wielders: The two weilders of these Zampakuto are twin brothers. Their names are Hokori (the dust guy) and Enmaku (the smoke guy) They both look somewhat like the demon brothers in naruto except Hokori has biege colored robes and Enmaku has dark red robes.

Tell me what you think.

[Kaydot]

Woah, thats lots of info Ruach.
My zanpaktou would be Zidane. I don't know what the command or the shikai would be, but for bankai, it would turn into Zinedine Zidane and headbutt everyone within a half-mile range.
(I know, kinda random. But it would be so cool!)

[silversnowfox]

Intresting Akakiri, not many people try to do twin zanpakuto/wielders, as it can be quite difficult to create two zanpakuto that compliment each other in the right way. But, you struck the nail on the head. Although, both were a little over powered, but not by much.

In other words... GREAT JOB!!!!!!! :cry (note: I wanted something akin to when Guy and Lee do their super sappy/happy cry, but there was nothing that matched as well as this one).

[Akakiri]

Thanx for the compliment silversnowfox. =)

[silversnowfox]

Your welcome buddy...
I need to go now...
too much saki...
cant see really well.

[HiroX17]

~God of Go~
Command: Rise, Five Stones!

Effect:
Five Go pieces appear. The sword as a little socket to fit one Go piece at a time.
Each Go piece has its own effect: (effects happen to sword, not wielder)
1) Enhanced Speed handling of sword
2) Enhanced Strength of sword
3) Random Chaotic Emission of Energy
4) Uncontrollable handling of sword because of overload of power
5) Sword petrifies
The user has to use up all the energy from all five Go pieces before he/she can execute a "Capture" command which seals the enemy through petrification.

Ban Kai:
Wider Ranger of petrification and increased energy from Go pieces.
Ban Kai Effects are as follows:
First Piece: Sword Duplicates itself everytime it is hit (ONE MASTER SWORD CONTROLS OTHER SWORDS)
Second Piece: Sword(s) double in size and strength everytime it is hit
Third Piece: Sword(s) explode randomly from any locataion
Fourth Piece: 10 second session of infinite rain of swords...
Fifth Piece: All duplicate swords vanish and master sword shatters

FINAL EFFECT: every chosen target within a five minute radius will be petrified

[HiroX17]

~Sword of Sealing~
Purpose: To counter the effects of the Go sword
Command: Negate!

Effect: Whatever it hits, it negates or temporary seals its power. For zanpakuto, the sword's power is sealed and renders the zanpakuto useless for a while. For regular things like bricks, trees,etc, they become stone.

Ban Kai: Sends out an emp-like shockwave within a 5 mile radius and negates all powers, abilities, and life.

[clouded_fate]

NAme: core
Phrase: Pierce them to the very Core
Shikai: The sword basicly becomes a lance(like what horsemen use)

Materialization: A black horse with blue eyes

Bankai name: The Second Core
Bankai: i have two horses now, one that is white with blue eyes, one that is black with red eyes. These horses can move at high speeds, and use spirit energy for traction, so unlike normal horses, these are able to turn easily and instantly. I control both horses, and I can shunpo from one horse to the other so quickly that even a captain must strain their eyes in order to see it. And of course, i still have my lance, which is able to extend like Gin's shikai.

[Orofan]

I want to do this but cane someone translate it all for me? Thanks.

[silversnowfox]

Orofan, I would be willing to translate for you.

[Kurosaki_Naruto_]

hey can anyone show me Tsukiyomi's page ( i mean the zanpakatoh) thingy....i wanna see

[silversnowfox]

This one?
http://forums.narutofan.com/showpost.php?p=998775&postcount=20

Or this one?

[url]http://forums.narutofan.com/showpost.php?p=998775&postcount=20[url]

Then there are these three:

[url]http://forums.narutofan.com/showpost.php?p=1118804&postcount=126[url]
[url]http://forums.narutofan.com/showpost.php?p=1180290&postcount=185[url]
[url]http://forums.narutofan.com/showpost.php?p=3160573&postcount=289[url]


Take your pick... Tsukiyomi is a god around these parts. Enough said... All bow before the great Tsukiyomi!
*Bows very low*