sasuke penart

[Madara Uchiha]

yet another i did in school this was the first doone i hope you like pos reps if you like http://i162.photobucket.com/albums/t251/Portugeeguy13/sasuke.jpg

[Madara Uchiha]

i hope you like it ^_^

[Denji]

It's simple, but pretty good!

[Apollo]

Nice overall idea!

[Madara Uchiha]

thanx guys im working on gettin better

[Reina_Miyamoto]

yea the overall idea is nice oyu should darken it :D

[Reborn!]

Can't you work on art when you DO have the time? If you took your time, these would come out much, much better.

It's way too light too man, kinda hurt my eyes cause it was too bright.

[sarun uchiha]

nice idea!
good one too!
try coloring if possible!

[Madara Uchiha]

Can't you work on art when you DO have the time? If you took your time, these would come out much, much better.

It's way too light too man, kinda hurt my eyes cause it was too bright.

well i draw when idea comes to me and this was takeing time and its kinda good being done in pen and i dont like to darken it and im sorry it hursts your eyes

[FoxSpirit]

Simple, but good :).

[Madara Uchiha]

yah this is my first one i did in class and i even said it was goin to be simple

[~L~]

i wished it had a little more detail, but still pretty good. :nod

[Arcueid]

I'm not going to sugar-coat it, it needs more detail, but it's a good start. Don't know what's happening at the bottom of the pic though. :S

[Hio]

I'm not going to sugar-coat it, it needs more detail, but it's a good start. Don't know what's happening at the bottom of the pic though. :S

That is chidori i guess, but it's simple, and good. Like to see more things. but it's good:)

[nefer_sbedjieb]

it's good, but I think you should work a little more on the hair, the front part is a little odd.

[Madara Uchiha]

thanx i have done bettter this one was done on a day where it was like in the middle so i didnt put much detail in it

[♥Body Buddy♥]

I like the line art : > it's nice

[Madara Uchiha]

tahnx again buddy

[Brigade]

nice art you should mmmake it a bit darker and color it bro

[Madara Uchiha]

yah ik ill do it soon

[Brigade]

yup and it will spilt the the world in half
that is how good it should be

[guro]

I like all your little pen drawings

[Madara Uchiha]

tahnx guro...

[Fable (Zaru dupe)]

There's not really much shown on that pic, rather minimalistic lineart. Nice idea for pose/perspective, though.

[Madara Uchiha]

thanx alot im tryin hard to get the penart just right makin no mistkaes is hard enoguh

[Hiwaki]

I like it. The arm seems a tad short, but for a pen sketch, it's very good.

[Sai]

i think that's a nice sketch of sasuke with the chidori hes doing but there are just a slight problem with his hand..i guess they r way too long scretched down.

[Bresakar]

It's a good idea so far but is it a sketch? You should definetely stroke it more and use Kishi's manga panels with Chidori so you can see it there how it is drawn.

[Madara Uchiha]

thanx guys and berserker i will check taht out