Aggression of the Dragon (custom fic)

[Kitsune_Arashi]

Hello um, this is my first Naruto fic (I write Pokemon fics @ Pe2k, but still...) ANyways, I have kinda started this at Pe2k already ^_^;; but, um, anyways.... As the title says this is a custom fic meaning: Pretty much all of the characters are made up, you will see an occasional canon character, but not too often (except maybe Itachi >.<) This is centered on a girl named Kaiumi Uchiha and her team(s). Kaiumi's personality is greatly dependant on mine, and her friends are represented by mine. (take for example her friend Hyato, is based, somewhat, off of my friend Carly) Anyways, this is a LONG, violent, PG-13, pwnsome,(etc.) fic. (Sorry, but I'm on a sugar rush) ahem, uh, you may notice some characters from the actual anime/manga (say, Iruka-sensei) but very seldom. The timeline is a bit odd, stuck in between Kakashi Gaiden and the normal anime/manga time. Uh, let's just say it's when Naruto, Sasuke, Sakura, etc. are all 6-7. Now, please be consructive, but not too harsh on rating it. Last note, since Kaiumi is an Uchiha, and I do somewhat go along with certain events from the actual Naruto series (not plagerism I swear) she does eventually get killed by Itachi. Aww, poor thing.:( And, just to say, the characters names don't particularly mean anything important (if some of them mean anything at all >_<)And, most importantly... there is NO hentai, yaoi, or yuri! Well, now the user notes are done Xo.

Chapter linkage:
VOLUME 1
1: Enter Kaiumi Uchiha
2: Team troubles
3: Begining the challenge
4: The test
5: The test part 2
6: The test part 3
7: Kaiumi's "Happy Birthday"
8: A new mission
9: A new mission part 2
10: A new mission part 3
11: Attack of the rogues
12: Attack of the rogues part 2
13: Attack of the rogues part 3
14: Attack of the rogues part 4
15: Attack of the rogues part 5
16: Mission complete
17: Mission complete part 2
18: Training before conflict
19: Training before conflict part 2
20: Training before conflict part 3
21: The Chuunin exams
22: The Chuunin exams part 2
23: The Chuunin exams part 3
24: The Chuunin exams part 4
25: The Chuunin exams part 5
VOLUME 2
VOLUME 3
VOLUME 4
VOLUME 5
VOLUME 6
VOLUME 7
VOLUME 8

CENTER]Enter Kaiumi Uchiha[/CENTER]
The academy bell had finally rung; I was out of there in an instant. No more classes for the day; or anymore to be exact. As I rushed out the front doors with several other kids I couldn’t exactly recognize, I proudly wore my new ninja headband, signifying that I was now an official kunoichi (female ninja) of Konoha (Hidden Leaf Village). My blue “kimono” (the top was a zip-up vest…thing, and the bottom was a sort of skirt in the front) swayed by the opening on the sides of my legs and my long, black hair whipped in my face. But the bangs covering my left eye were held stationary.*Good thing too, now there isn’t much of a risk for people to see…then again, I am going to have to start using it in battle on certain missions from now on. Ah well, who cares?*

“Kaiumi!” a boy shouted. I spun around to meet one of my best (okay, only one of three) friends, Takeshi. It’s not that I was unpleasant, no; I was a very calm person. People just… avoided me during my childhood and most everyone up till now. I never knew why, but I assumed it had something to do with me being an Uchiha clan member. After all, most people did fear the Uchiha clan’s power. Takeshi was wearing his favorite jacket; red with white flames on it.

“Hey, Takeshi! What’s up?” I replied, a grin on my face.

“You busy tonight?” He asked me.

“Sorry, I am. You know teams are chosen tomorrow for our class, I’m going to be forced by my mom to prepare for my ‘life on the road.’” I waved my hands in the air for the emphasis on sarcasm.

“Oh…well, alright then. See you tomorrow!” and he ran off while tying his new headband around his head of (really) dirty blonde hair. I couldn’t exactly tell, but I think Takeshi had a crush on me. I mean, I liked him too a little, but then there was my other annoying friend Pachi. Pachi liked me for sure, a lot. But he was seriously irritating; I didn’t even know how the heck we became friends. Anyways, I didn’t like him back so he got somewhat jealous of Takeshi and they became rivals. I always chucked at the idea that it was all over me.

“Takeshi!!” I shouted. He turned and paused, “Promise me you’ll work hard! Oh, and don’t be upset if we’re not on the same team!” He smiled, nodded, and then continued to head home. *Yeah…I just hope we are on the same team. Pachi would get to be even more of a nuisance if he was with us, and I doubt that Hyato would get to be on the same team, too, I mean usually only one girl was put on a team…. Well, I guess tomorrow we’ll see!* Then I continued my run home, happier than ever before…ever since Yuki disappeared that is.

* * * * * *

7:30 AM I was out again. I was rushing to the academy as fast as I could in the crisp November morning air. I’d be really early (the explanatory meeting wasn’t till about nine), but I wanted to just walk around, maybe sit by the dock for a while for some peace and quiet. I was just like that, nobody ever questioned me (not surprisingly as only Takeshi, Pachi, Hyato, and my family ever did talk to me). After the ten minute or so run I arrived at the empty school yard. I smiled.*Today’s going to turn out really well, I can feel it!* A strong gust suddenly blew, pushing away the bangs over my left eye. Anybody watching could see the scarlet of it and in force of habit (and fear if anybody saw it) I quickly put my hair back in place.

* * * * * *

Around 8:45 I walked into the classroom. Many people were already there, but the majority of the class was still missing. I sat down at an empty bench and sighed out of boredom. *That’s what I get for coming so early I suppose….*

“Yo, Kaiumi!” I turned my head. It was Hyato. Hyato was a member of another “royal” clan of Konoha; the Hyuuga clan. But, the clan was split up into two houses: main (where as one might expect, the members are treated magnificently), and the branch house. Branch members were there to protect the secret of Hyuuga clan’s special kekkei genkai (bloodline limit): the Byakugan. Byakugan appeared in all members of the entire clan at birth. It was in the form of white eyeballs able to see nearly everything. Hyato was a branch member, but she didn’t seem to mind. In fact, she was a very cheerful person. Ironically though, her parents and older brother were killed when she was young, placing her into the care of her aunt and uncle who were main house members. But she still wasn’t treated as an outcast and her uncle secretly taught her Hyuuga taijutsu (which was only normally taught to main members). Anyways, she told me a ton about her life and stuff since we were close friends.

Hyato was wearing a classic white tee and beige shorts that morning. I smiled as she walked in.

“Hey. Good morning.” I said. She sat down next to me and smirked.

“Takeshi here yet?” she whispered. I told her a lot about my life too, including my crush on him which she always liked to pick at me with.

“Oh, be quiet. No, he’s not.” I crossed my arms and looked away, pretending to be mad, though I still couldn’t hide the grin on my face. She nudged my ribs with her elbow. *Heh, 15 minutes is going to pass by slowly.*

And it did. Other kids were flocking through the classroom. Our teacher, Iruka-sensei, had a stack of papers in his hand when everyone was there. Takeshi sat down next to me, and when I meekly smiled and said “hi” Hyato started to chuckle.

“Congratulations for all of you who have passed…” *Blah, blah, blah. Congrats, yeah, I know. We’re now Genin, teams of three… I know this already! Cut the crap, just announce teams!*

“First group,” he stated. “Is-” *Not me, not me, not me. Second group, blah! Third, still don’t care. Fourth- hey! Hyato! Let’s see, and that one dude Sarosu, and Hamari, interesting. Fifth team, blah. Sixth, more blah. Seventh group, aw come on! Me already!! Eighth, ninth-*

“Finally, group ten is Kaiumi Uchiha, Takeshi Kamisu, and Pachi Rimata.” I looked up in surprise, and then sighed, somewhat in annoyance. *Dang it, now it’s going to be a heck of a time shutting up Pachi, just my luck.*

“Your jonin teachers will be announced later in the afternoon. Until then, you are all dismissed.”


~~~END of chapter one. Ah yes, and if you guys want me to make sprites of the characters, just tell me okay?

[Kitsune_Arashi]

Team Troubles

“Finally, group ten is Kaiumi Uchiha, Takeshi Kamisu, and Pachi Rimata.” I looked up in surprise, and then sighed, somewhat in annoyance. *Dang it, now it’s going to be a heck of a time shutting up Pachi, just my luck.*
“Your jonin teachers will be announced later in the afternoon. Until then, you are all dismissed.”

I looked back a row or two to find Pachi staring at me with his head cupped in his hand. I felt my eye twitch and turned back. *Whyyyyyyy?* I let my head hit the desk, then quietly raised it and banged it again twice. Most of the kids already head out for lunch.

“Hey Kaiumi,” Hyato stood up, “See you later, okay?” I tilted my head.

“Sure, see you.” I paused for a moment then got up too and walked to the door…only to hear Pachi starting to bicker.

“You’d better not steal Kaiumi from me!” Pachi hissed.

“I don’t think she likes you that way Pachi.” Takeshi retorted.

“What?! She likes me! You know it!”

“Then why is she so annoyed with you, huh? It’s me she actually accepts.”

“Just shut up!”

“You shut up!

“No, you shut up!”

“BOTH OF YOU SHUT UP!!” I shouted. “Pachi, you be quiet! You’re giving me a headache! Takeshi, you just ignore him! Now both of you! Go and eat your lunch… I’m outta here.” And with that I walked out the door, down the hall, and outside. *If this is how it is now, I’ll be in a living nightmare next week….*

It was nice out though, so I could enjoy myself. The sun was shining brightly, there were barely any clouds in the sky, and a slight breeze was blowing; it was perfect. That is, until I heard footsteps. My hearing was very acute, and so was my vision (no surprise to due my….), and, well, all of my senses were fine tuned.

“Hey, hey, hey! Kaiumi!” Pachi was running up to me. What a sight he was outside. He wore a green sweatshirt (well, a large green stripe, then gray, then brown, and green again) with green camouflage pants, to top off brownish silver hair. He looked like a running tree!

“Listen, I’m sorry about that scene with Takeshi. I just… I dunno, got--.”

“Agh! I don’t want to hear it!” I put my hands over my ears.

“But--I--.”

“I’m not in the mood right now. I’m sorry, but just go. I don’t want to talk, okay?” and I walked off without a second glance. Sure, it was kind of mean, but I had a headache, I was bummed as it was, and (for his sake) we were already on the same team.

But the mission right now was to survive and keep myself sane for the rest of the day.

“K--Kaiumi, wait up!” Pachi ran a few steps forward and stopped. I did too, and turned around.

“Pachi, not now! You’re just annoying me. So let me have some peace and quiet. We’ll talk later, okay?” I softened up just a bit.

“Oh, um, okay. Sure, I guess. See you after lunch then.” Then he waved me farewell and ran off. *What a pain in the butt.*

Anyways, I decided to sit on the bench not far from the front door of the academy.
My lunch was light; just some sushi and rice cakes. A treat my mom packed for today I guessed. I smiled and leaned against the bench with my legs crossed. I felt so relaxed. *Too bad it will only last a half hour. Heh, nothing good stays forever I suppose.*

“Kaiumi!” a voice called. *Oh no, what now?!* But it wasn’t Pachi; it was Hyato and her team members Sarosu and Hamari. For once I was relieved today.

“Hey, looks like you three are getting along well.” I mocked. Hyato only sneered in response.

“What about you and the guys? Where are they?”

“I don’t know. Pachi, once again, got on my nerves so I sent him packing. And I don’t know where Takeshi went….”

“Aww, feeling left out?” Hyato put her hands to her hips. I stared in annoyance.

“No. Just be quiet.” I muttered. Hamari turned to Hyato.

“What are you girls talking about?” he asked. Hamari wore an iron grey leather jacket and jeans; not very common among Shinobi. Hyato paused.

“Uh, nothing. I guess we’ll be going now.” She smiled.

“’Kay, see ya.” I saluted (it was my usual way of saying goodbye instead of waving). Hamari, Hyato, and Sarosu started to walk off when Hyato turned.

“Oh, one more thing. Who’s that little creep--?”

“No, not again!” I groaned.

“No, it’s not ‘him,’ sorry--.” She continued.

“Hyato!” I broke her off.

“It’s--.”

“Lalalalala! I’m not listening!”

“Heh, that still bugs you? Whatever, bye!”

I sighed somewhat pleasurably. Most people would never know what just happened. And, they never would. Just a picture I drew with a certain misread caption that Hyato just loved to tease me with. No more explanation at the cost of my dignity. But, I was really good at drawing. It was just a simple pastime hobby.

I turned back to my lunch. *Time to finish up I guess.*

* * * * * *

Everyone was back in the classroom waiting for the news about our new jounin teachers.



“Alright!” Iruka-sensei started, “I will now announce the names of the jounin team leaders!” *Okay, now I don’t care. First, blah, second, blah, third, blah. Fourth is Hyato’s team so… Megumi Yuuko. Huh, she sounds cool. Fifth, don’t care; sixth, don’t care, seventh, blah, eighth, blah, ninth, blah. Okay, finally! Team 10’s sensei!*

“Lastly, group 10’s jounin leader is Satoshi Takahashi. They will meet you here in around 15 minutes.”

Various chatter soon ensued among the kids in the classroom. *So, Satoshi Takahashi, huh? Wonder how he’s going to be like… though, he might be the first to find out about my… special ability…. I guess it doesn’t matter. Still, let’s see how long he’ll take!*

~~END Yeah, since this is early in the series and you should really pay attention to the title, don't make assumptions too early. Hope you liked it ^_^

[Kitsune_Arashi]

Beginning the challenge

10 minutes of nothing but waiting was taking forever and driving me crazy. I even considered falling asleep. I hated how waiting for something just dragged on and on….

Hyato’s sensei came and went. She had reddish brown hair that fell to her shoulders and wore the classic chuunin vest, so there wasn’t much to observe. Others came and went… till only three teams remained. Team 1, team 9, and good old team 10. I had my head cupped in both hands and then turned to Takeshi.

“Hey, Takeshi, we’ve been waiting for-- how long?” I asked. He looked up at the clock then yawned widely.

“Thirty seven minutes.”

“How long is he going to take?!” I impatiently shouted.

“How long is who going to take?” A voice asked. It was another jounin, he had brown hair and had an energetic feeling seemingly “emanated” from him.

“Oh, uh, the leader of team ten. That’s my team,” I pointed to
Takeshi with my thumb, “and his too.”

“Well then… that’s me!” he beamed. I paused. *This is Satoshi-sensei? I guess my cousin didn’t lie. He is different!*
“What are you waiting for? Come with me!” he turned and started to walk to the door.

“Oh, um… yes sir!” and I hurried after him with Takeshi and Pachi following behind me. We went across a few halls, up a few floors, and up to the roof of the academy. Satoshi-sensei walked over to the rail and sat on it.

“I guess you guys can introduce yourselves now.” He stated.

“But, um,” Pachi spoke up, “what exactly are we supposed to say?”

“Things you like, dislike, hobbies, dreams, wishes, etcetera.”

“Okay then… how about you first?”

“My name is Satoshi Takahashi. I like many things, and don’t dislike much anything.” *Yeah, just wait till you hear Pachi….* “Anyways, I never really had a dream, or many wishes worth of note. And my hobbies are pretty much to myself. That answer your question?” All three of us stared at him.

“… uh… sure….” Pachi muttered. I turned to Takeshi.

“We didn’t really learn anything new about him.” I whispered.

“Alright,” sensei started up again, “now it’s your turn.” He pointed to Pachi.

“Okay, um, my name’s Pachi Rimata. I like um…” he glanced towards me. *Oh, dear God….* “I like… turtles. And… I dislike him.” He pointed to Takeshi. “And my dream is to get my face put in that mountain! To be a Hokage!” *Yeah… good luck with that.* Satoshi threw him a look half saying “wow you’re and idiot” and half “this is going to be interesting with you.”

“Okay, now you, on the left.” He pointed to Takeshi.

“Okay! My name is Takeshi Kamisu. I like swimming and racing and I don’t like to fail. Or Pachi over there. My dream is to be Hokage also, and I will succeed.” He enthusiastically said.

“Hey, I’m gonna become Hokage!” Pachi snapped.

“Yeah, dream on!” Takeshi replied mockingly. Then random generic insults flew and they broke into a fight once again. I sat there simmering for a second till I blew my top.

“WILL YOU TWO JUST SHUT UP?!” I shouted. In an instant they stopped and sat back down. *Heh, thought so.*

“Oh, wow. I guess you’re last then.” Satoshi-sensei looked surprised.

“The name’s Uchiha Kaiumi.” Now he looked even more impressed. “I like peace and quiet, although it’s hard with these two around. No offense guys. I don’t like to wait unless I’m relaxed, and as you can see I have a bit of a temper. My dreams and wishes… I don’t want to say. They’re way too personal… and… destroyed anyways. As you can assume, I was trained in Katon jutsus” (fire element techniques) “among other abilities….” I twiddled with the bangs over my left eye, and was given a fascinated look

“Anyways,” I continued, “There is one thing I’ll advise you to not do in front of me. I know you were the leader of my cousin’s old team. Never compare me to him.” I warned. Then silence.

“Hmm, you seem to be the most intriguing. But I remember who you’re talking about. You do look quite a bit like him, and your eyes seem to resemble-- uh--.” I was gritting my teeth so hard I might have accidentally pierced my tongue.

“Yes. Um, I think this will be a very different experience training you guys. Oh, speaking of which, you three will have a test tomorrow.”

“A test?! What kind of test?” Pachi demanded.

“A survival test. You see out of the ten teams that passed it is expected that at least three will remain, if not less. You see, the academy graduation test, was only to see how many of you were qualified to become Genin. This test, which every jounin will do, although mine is a bit different, will confirm those numbers and see how many official Genin there are.”

“WHAT?!” all three of us exploded.

“Well, see you at nine tomorrow morning! Bring your ninja gear and meet the training grounds behind the academy. Oh! I almost forgot… it is forbidden to eat breakfast tomorrow morning.”

“And why not?!” I retorted.

“Well, with all the running, jumping and gut-wrenching action… there’s an 89 percent chance of puking!” He chuckled. I shrank back in shock. Then he jumped off and disappeared. I looked worriedly at Takeshi and Pachi.

“So… who’s this cousin of yours?” Pachi asked. I glared at him.

“If you really knew me you’d know that after Yuki left I have become very ‘sensitive’ about that so stay out of it!” I snapped.

“So his name’s Yuki?”

“I said STAY OUT OF IT!” and I stormed away. *Damn it, this is going to be harder than I thought….*

~END okay not much to say... Except that Satoshi is not just like Kakashi. He's based off of my friend Logan who.... is extremly unpridictable.

[Kitsune_Arashi]

The test
*That Pachi! He doesn’t even know who Yuki is! Yuki’s not even a guy! She was a hero! How the heck would he know anything?! And then there’s “him….” He’s always been put at the top! I’m always told I’m just like him, always just compared! And even Satoshi-sensei now too? I even told him not to! That’s it… I’m not letting this slip any longer… I’m going all out with this. Heh, I’m probably going to surprise everyone… all the more reason I suppose!*

Anyways, I was fuming now, stomping down the halls and floors, all the way home. My parents weren’t there when I arrived. But then again, I didn’t really care. Either my mom was out shopping, or both of them had a mission for the Konoha Police Force. I trudged into my room and flopped lazily onto my bed. But the side I landed on only brought reason to my bad mood.

It was a family photo taken when I was five. My parents stood together with me off to the right. But I wasn’t alone. An older girl held me “piggy-back" style and I was smiling so widely, both my hands showing the peace sign. I must have been so happy then… So care free. I was so glad to have a sister like Yuki... but... then something happened…. About six years ago.

A demon with nine tails and a horrifying lust for death, destruction, and blood came attacking the village. During that time, Yuki, was 14, and at chuunin rank. She was sent out as a re-enforcement for the village.... A hero….

I had pleaded she would come home safely…. But that was and impossible dream. She never returned home. Nobody was even able to find her body. Then I was all alone. Ever since I entered the academy a year before, nobody was there beside me; only Yuki. I was always given these weird looks like I was some sort of evil spirit. I was always given a look of fear, yet it still had respectable admiration... but that was probably only of power.

I never understood why. It was then I decided I would try to be just like Yuki, if not better. I wanted to train hard, but a certain pain in my heart always told me to keep things hidden from others. That was only natural, I thought, though. All those stares must have meant they feared the Uchiha clan, me. But I still didn't want to be so lonesome and show off, that's why I kept (and still keep) my abilities hidden.

Yet, I still had a little rivalry with my cousin. He was always the best, and me just below him. I wanted to graduate from the academy as soon as possible, and beat him. Then again, it was because his power that I formed a deep hatred for him over the years. Even though I will admit I did stay back of my own accord, I still couldn't stand that Itachi was always so good. He was closer to reaching my dream than I was. But, then, I wasn't so alone anymore, and that's why I kept myself back. I'd find my own way to beat Itachi on my own, from where people thought was unexpected. That's why I was where I am now.

But remembering such a past only brought me into spiraling sadness. I turned over onto my side, silent tears streaming down my face.

"Why…?" I quietly asked myself.

* * * * * *

8:30 AM I was up and out the door. My full sling backpack bobbed around everywhere while I ran. I was all set, mission, survival, pretty much anything, I was ready for it. The sun shone meekly through the November morning mist. Yet, I was still early. I couldn’t help it really. It was just something I picked up from Yuki- neichan.

Then again, that was a good thing. Whatever it was we were doing out there, I'd need a precise plan on how to do things, and react to certain movements, because, if I was correct, since Satoshi was also my cousin’s sensei, I’d be even more prepared if we were doing what I thought we were.

Still, weather, wind speed, the angle of the sun, I had developed an incredible strategist mind. That factor alone probably made me the most formidable person on the team (besides Satoshi- sensei that is) *I'll pass this test for sure.*

* * * * * *

When the training field was under my feet I had fifteen minutes till nine. That was perfect timing. So, I laid my backpack down, and sat at the brink of the small river. *Okay, let's see.... The wind's blowing about five miles per hour. Okay, so if I needed to throw a shuriken or kunai it would be… ten degrees off original target. Alright there are plenty of leaves that are on the ground since it’s the beginning of November. So, moving around on the ground quietly will be a tad difficult. And… hmm, oh yeah! Once the mist clears the sun should be....* I pointed to the sun with two fingers, then following the direction of its light pattern. *It’ll be shining sixteen degrees north east. Those are favorable conditions....*Then for a little bit I sat there in peace and quiet. That is...Until I heard random grunts, noises and shouts. *Let's see... 10 meters, tops... two people, fairly loud and... Oh jeez... Pachi and Takeshi are racing again? Aren't they? By the looks of it... er, sound, Takeshi’s winning.*

"Jeez, are those two going to fight twenty four seven now?!" I asked myself.

"So those guys fight often, huh?” A voice behind me inquired. I practically jumped up. Then spun around.

"Satoshi- sensei?! How long have you been here?!" I demanded.

"Hmm, about as long you have. So what were you doing? Measuring The sun’s light pattern?”

"...Uh... no…." I lied.

"Oh, alright then. You say you're the cousin of Itachi, I just thought you'd be more like him, and actually…."

I was staring at him hostilely again.

"That's right.... You hate that. Never mind then. Oh look, here come your friends."

Takeshi and Pachi came panting up to us and set their backpacks down next to mine. "I won, sucker!" Takeshi whispered.

"Well, now that everyone's here we can get this started! Listen up you three, your 'test' will be treated like an actual mission, and failure is not accepted without price. Your objective…."He held up two bells.

"Wha? What are those for?” Takeshi asked.

"Each of you is to get a bell by noon." Sensei replied with a smile.

"But there are two bells and three of us! How will the last person complete the mission?"　Pachi objected.

"Well, you guys figure out the true answer to this and you'll find out how that one person passes the test. Now there is something I do have to say....Those who fail... it could be just one person, or it could be all three of you. The ones that are subjected to failure, even if they find the real answer and work hard to pass with your teammates, will be tied to a log and will not get any lunch."　*So that's why we weren't allowed to eat breakfast…. Cheapskate!*
"Now..." Sensei continued, "If nobody finds the real answer and maybe even if one of you gets a bell, that or those people will be sent back to the academy. You will need to use your shuriken, kunai, and your other weapons and abilities to get a bell. Unless you have the strength to kill me, your mission will fail."

"But isn't that too dangerous? What if you do get killed?" Pachi asked.

"Do you really think that's possible?" Satoshi- sensei joked. Pachi glanced nervously at me.

"I'm not sure…."

"Okay, on my signal.... Start!"

~~END Okay, I know I did Kakashi's bell test, I don't care. In here, really, only Satoshi uses it, okay?

[Kitsune_Arashi]

Now, this introduces something I'll use fairly commonly: POV (point of view). Normally I have it in Kaiumi's, sometimes I'll put it in third person (most of the POV changes will be this) but also well, quite a few other characters (especially in battles) I know you may think, "well then why didn't you write in third person in the first place?" Well, I write better in first person, plus I wanted to add an intresting twist to the story. Enjoy! ^_^

The test part: 2


“Now... If nobody finds the real answer and maybe even if one of you gets a bell, that or those people will be sent back to the academy. You will need to use your shuriken, kunai, and your other weapons and abilities to get a bell. Unless you have the strength to kill me, your mission will fail.”

I grit my teeth. *So, failure’s not acceptable no matter what. I'm not gonna go back to the academy, no way!*

“This exercise was actually used by The Third Hokage himself. You three should be honored to be involved. However, this also means that this is the hardest test to take. Okay, on my signal…. Start!”

Takeshi and I jumped off and disappeared into the trees, or underbrush, or wherever he was hiding. Pachi, however… looked extremely confused until he disappeared somewhere too (after about thirty seconds of stuttering, that is). *What--an--idiot…. Okay, so a bell by noon… I guess that’s easy enough….*

I jumped from tree branch to tree branch to get a better view of the area. *Alright focus. I have to confront sensei by my own will; any surprise attack won’t be very useful in this situation. I mean, I could hold out toe to toe with him for a while, but not very long….*

I shifted and looked around, searching for some environmental advantage, but nothing. *This task is impossible for us, we can’t beat him by ourselves!*

I jumped to the ground. *But maybe… that’s what we’re supposed to think! It all makes sense! We work as a team! If all three of us worked together, then we might stand a chance! But to pit teammates against each other in such a way… it’s sorta cruel.*

Now I was running around the base of trees, and into Satoshi-sensei’s opposite direction, coming across a clearing. *Good…. Now I have to find the guys and convince them this is the “true answer,” thinking about it though, they might not listen to me, but if this goes as I think it will, they’ll be so desperate for a bell they’d need my help….

*Well, I guess I can say having the same sensei as Itachi has means I get family advantage. Hehe, this time, I’m going to show that my abilities are more than enough to recognize!* And with that I sprinted across the field, searching now with high powered vision and tracking abilities. The bangs over my left eye were taken out of place, and from now on… they’d stay that way. The secret was out, and now was the best time.


* * * * * *
Over world POV

*Oh man, this is gonna be so hard! I don’t stand much of a chance do I? But I don’t wanna get sent back to the Academy! Kaiumi can probably do this, but Pachi’s gonna fail for sure. Hehe, I guess that’s just as well. He can’t do a darn thing!* Takeshi looked around from the foliage of the tree leaves over the starting point where Satoshi stood.

“Well, I guess everybody is taking the most important rule of Shinobi into account; disguise and concealment. I wonder when the madness will begin….” Satoshi muttered to himself.

A strange feeling was forming in Takeshi’s stomach. *Oh gosh, I can’t do this, I just can’t…. No… no you can Takeshi, just get a grip. I’m behind him, and Pachi will most likely be jumping out of nowhere soon. Okay, I’m gonna take my chances….*

Then almost predictably, Pachi came jumping out of the underbrush and started a scene. However this was never going to work as his sensei quickly got the upper hand (literally) and held Pachi’s against his back.

“Shinobi essential: the element of surprise. You don’t really seem to get that, do you?” Satoshi lectured his student, “Setting traps or creating combinations are better suited for you.”

“How can you tell that?” Pachi asked.

“You’re an idiot who needs to learn a bit more. That’s written all over your face.” Satoshi remarked. His only response was a few shouts complaints.

*How did I know that Pachi would do that?* Takeshi reached for some shuriken. *Here goes…* And with that he threw them with precision speed, and even hit his target….


A replacement log. *What the?!* And he jumped down into the clearing.

“Hey! I was just about to-!”

“No you weren’t. I saw the whole thing. You owe me one!” then Takeshi ran off in search of his sensei. Pachi stood there dumbfounded for a second then ran off too. Kaiumi was busy looking for her teammates meanwhile….

*Somebody’s nearby, please be one of them….* But when she rounded the corner, an unexpected face was met. And definitely not one she wanted to see at the moment.

~~END Okay, I know. I added to the intro. And I know it's kinda short, the next one is longer.

[Kitsune_Arashi]

The Test: Part 3
*Gah! Why haven’t I found them yet!? It should be easy knowing them, not to mention using Sharingan! Where the heck are they?!*

I dashed around the underbrush. *…! Somebody’s nearby! Please be one of them!*

But as I rounded the corner, the face I met wasn’t one I wanted to see. I didn’t even know why he was….

“Itachi?! What the living heck are you--?!” I exploded. *Something isn’t right… he’s supposed to be on a mission… let alone show up here….*
“Oh Kaiumi. I never though you would be out in the open. Very funny coincidence.” *Okay, that is sooo not natural.*

“Acts up sensei. That was pathetic, really pathetic. I realize you haven’t seen him in a while, but if you thought anybody would fall for that….” I put my hands on my hips.

“Hehe. You got me.” A puff of smoke obscured sensei for a second till the real smiling face appeared.

“But it wasn’t to fool me was it? Pachi and Takeshi don’t have a clue, in fact, they’re fairly recent friends.” I stared at him.

“Oh, hey! Look at that! You can use Sharingan already?” he asked with an impressed tone.

“Well, yeah, but that’s not the point!” I snapped.

“Well I’ll be… it even has three tomoe! When did you awaken it?” he questioned further.

“I said that’s not the point! But if you really want an answer… fine. When I turned 10, that’s three years, as of tomorrow. I was always alone, my sister died, I was never too happy about family either. Although recently, then, I had just gotten my first friend; Hyuuga Hyato. I always thought it was the incredible power of the Uchiha clan everybody feared, but as a fellow of the noble clans of Konoha, I guess it was only natural. Anyways; I didn’t want people to find out about my new power, but I still wanted to use it. So I came to this conclusion…. Train in one eye for an entire year, graduate, and then show my worth. Of course, it’s insanely hard to maintain the charge of this doujutsu in one eye for so long, but I accomplished it. There! Happy now?!”

“So that’s why you had bangs over your left eye… well congratulations!” *Huh wha--? Congrats? Dude… what the heck? He is way too energetic….*

“Although…. I wouldn’t have given that out if I were you,” sensei continued, “now I know how to fight against you.”

“Yeah, well, consider it a lost cause. I’m not looking to fight you; I need to find the guys. This so called ‘hard test’ was nothing. Now if you’ll excuse me, I have some teammates to find.” Then I started to walk off.

A few seconds of silence passed.

“You know, you really are just like him.” I heard sensei mutter.

“What?!” I violently turned around.

“You really are just like Itachi. You focus on one thing and consider anything else slowing you down as a mere inconvenience. You know what you want and do what it takes to accomplish your goals. Plus your eyes are exactly the same.”

“I already told you! Never say that we’re alike! Unless you absolutely want a fight, I’m warning you to stay quiet.” My voice had growing hatred in it.

“OK, OK, fine,” Satoshi-sensei took a few steps back “I don’t know what happened between you two, but Itachi isn’t so bad. In fact, I’d think quite a few people would want to be just like you two.”

“SHUT UP!!” In that moment I could feel a strange surge of power running through me. But I wouldn’t take it anymore. This time, I wasn’t just gonna sit back, this time it was serious.

Over world POV
In the moment Kaiumi was bursting with anger Pachi and Takeshi (both in completely different areas) were able to clearly hear the shout: “SHUT UP!!”

Both saw this as an opportunity to get a bell from Satoshi and rushed of in search of the sound.

But that “surge of power” Kaiumi felt was nothing natural, in fact, she didn’t even notice it, but a very faint purple glow surrounded her hands.

*…! This girl… could she be the last of “them?” I thought that they became extinct in the great ninja wars…. Now I understand, I think, but then the other two… are they the same?*

Then, in a split second, Kaiumi formed some hand seals.

“Katon: Housenka no jutsu!” (Fire element: Phoenix Immortal Fire Technique) Then multiple blasts of fire scattered in Satoshi’s direction.

Satoshi, skilled as he was, was only barely able to dodge them. *So rage and aggression give her more control over her accuracy and power. That just confirms it! She is the last one of those special Shinobi.*
(Anyways) Once Satoshi evaded the blasts, Kaiumi charged in for a frontal assault. Without the time to escape this attack, Kaiumi blasted her sensei in the face with one heck of a punch, sending him at least five meters away.

Had it not been for getting back her control, Kaiumi might as well have killed him on the spot. *…No! No, get a hold of yourself! That wasn’t supposed to happen! … I… when did I…?*

The glow around her hands shone just like the full moon, and then… faded away. She was looking at them with slight fear. As scarred as she was by Yuki’s apparent death she really never wanted to do something this drastic, it didn’t differ at that moment who it was.

“S--Sensei? Are you….” She could scarcely breathe.

“I’m fine.” Satoshi said slowly standing up, and wiped a trail of blood from his mouth away.

“I’m so sorry! I didn’t mean… I never meant to… I--I--!” Kaiumi stuttered.

“Everything’s okay. I think I have an explanation, to this and something else.” Kaiumi stepped back, and then started running away. She deactivated her Sharingan and kept running, not looking back. And she kept on running until Takeshi appeared in her path.

“Kaiumi, hey. Did you get a bell yet?” he asked kindly.

“No….” she looked away.

“Oh. Well, what happened so far?”

“I’m not gonna do this anymore.”

“What?! What do you mean?”

“I’m not gonna do this! That’s what I said! Now leave me alone!” And she started running again. Takeshi could only stand and watch. *What was I thinking? “Show my worth?!” What the hell was I thinking?! That’s only going to repeat everything! Somebody’s going to die again, it’s all my fault!* But then she stopped, Takeshi was in her way again.

“What do you want?!” She snapped.

“To know what’s going on.” He replied firmly. “This isn’t like you. I know I’ve only known you for so long, but I know that this isn’t natural.”

“And that’s why. It isn’t natural.”

“Well what are you gonna do?! Just run away from whatever it is? Will that really help? Will you really give up on how hard you worked getting here so far? Is that the real Kaiumi?!” I looked away.

“….No. No, you’re right….” *Oh god, was I doing what I thought I was? Would Yuki give up like this? No! I still need to teach Itachi a lesson on who’s the strongest among the family! No more running!*

“C’mon! Let’s go!” Kaiumi started dashing off in Satoshi’s direction. “I found the true answer: teamwork. It makes sense, why would they put us in teams of three. Now, we need to find Pachi!”

“And where would we find him?” Takeshi asked barely keeping up with her.

“Where do you think? Setting traps for sensei.”

It was true. Pachi was setting traps. Wire, Kunai, even some exploding tags were set up in an elaborate scheme. You’d really never be able to guess it was all from Pachi. Satoshi never moved once Kaiumi ran away. *She’s going through the same thing my other teammates did. I guess this is her first time experiencing this… it must be hard knowing she’s the only one… plus, if this gets out, bounty hunters everywhere will be after her…. This is bad.*

And at that moment the two kids burst through the trees, newfound confidence brimming in Kaiumi’s blood red eyes.

“Pachi! Can you hear me?! We need to talk! And don’t try to pretend you’re not there, I can see your flow of chakra!” she shouted out. Then he jumped down across from her.

“What is it? And why is he here?” he asked, pointing to Takeshi.

“Oh just shut up and listen!”

Then the three of them devised an even more complex plan than Pachi’s together. The boys threw a pair of shuriken at Satoshi, and the moment he avoided them Kaiumi doubled the number. Those too were dodged, but a quick pull of wire and their sensei’s legs were tied up. Pachi then threw a kunai at one of his traps, released it and then, as Kaiumi predicted it, he was able to snap the wire and dodge that too, but Pachi and Takeshi dashed in and held him down, while Kaiumi retrieved the bells.

*Mission… Accomplished…!*

~~END So there we go. Not too much to say, but this: There is NOT a demon in anybody but 2 chracters in my story. 1) is the obvious Naruto and a character introduced a bit later. So, yeah. Bigger and better.:tongue: And this is how far I've gotten at the moment, so, yes, it's still new.

[Misa]

This is not quite the place for naruto fan fics ^^;;;

You can post naruto realted fanfics here~http://forums.narutofan.com/forumdisplay.php?f=130

[Kitsune_Arashi]

This is not quite the place for naruto fan fics ^^;;;

You can post naruto realted fanfics here~http://forums.narutofan.com/forumdisplay.php?f=130

Okay thanks. ^_^;;

Huzzah for n00bs. :sweatdrop

[Misa]

Okay thanks. ^_^;;

Huzzah for n00bs. :sweatdrop

haha not really its a pretty big place and you can easily get lost ^^.