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Karrata
06-18-2007, 12:43 PM
(first fanfic so dont be harsh plz it shit i no lol)

the followers of latranta ar much like the Ansuki (cant remember how to spell it the 1s witch have itachi and stuff in there gang) but stronger ALOT stronger Latranta himself is known as the demon prince and is the strongest and the leader he has 6 main followers and 7 agents(spys)


the first and strongest is Altala (apart from Latranta)

Ability:speed able to use a strange tpye of charkra called life stream to inhance punches and kick even a flick can almost knock an opnent out (this is a bloodline limit)

Background:unknown


other:none

(pic comeing soon it wont be awsome)




the second and second strongest Aruea

Ability: able to used shadow so attack (like gaara uses his sand not like shimikamaru) strong tiajutsuist (very strong!)

Background:the last of his clan but the irony is he killed them when he got possesed by a spirit this sent him insane when it left his body and the on has been raised by Latranta who found him


other: has a samuri sword

Sasori-puppet#111
06-28-2007, 07:33 AM
sounds good... add as much content as possible on Altala's background and make it relivent to the story (eg. His dark past forced him to become a warrior)

Freiza
07-15-2007, 04:17 PM
wow, i like the sound of it. you could use some more detail, but it's okay though. you could expand on their profiles....give some background on them.