My story

[Sasori-puppet#111]

This is the story i wrote (and am still writing). I would would give it an age rating of Teen... this is part 1 so... Injoy:

It was 3pm in the middle of summer, the sun was beating down on the rainforest in Dragar. The rainforest was empty, except for a family of 5, and another man. The man had his eyes set on a 13 year old boy named Zelax - he was energetic, and had long black hair and dark blue eyes. He was wearing long blue shorts, and a black shirt. His sister Agatha was 15 and was a cutter who was always wearing black. His brother Danny was a nice kid who was 14. Danny had short blonde hair and was wearing red shorts and dark blue top. The mother Talkata, and the father Nigel, are both 45, and always wore the same clothes as each other. That made up the Orthodocse family.
“Race you to the lake, Danny!” said Zelax.
“Ok, then!” said Danny as he darted off.
“Good thing I know a short cut,” murmured Zelax under his breath, and he darted off to the right.
The man was watching them all the time.
“Good… now I can get you…” said the mysterious man to himself. The mysterious man, ignoring Danny, started chasing Zelax from the tree tops, and then… he threw a rope cloche that hit Zelax and wrapped him around a tree.
“What the hell?!” said a panicking Zelax.
“I need to try out a new creation of mine,” said the mysterious man with a smirk on his face – the only visible part of his body. “The limb saw!"
Then, he brought out a giant saw that was big enough to chop all Zelax’s limbs off.
“Please, no!” Zelax started to scream. Then the rush of pain hit him as he saw his arms fall off. Then he screamed and screamed.
“Before I go - soul injection…” said the mysterious man as he injected a weird fluid into the boy’s eye. Then Zelax blacked out as the blood poured down his shirt, shorts and hair. It was a gruesome sight. As he fell to the ground, his eyes flickered red... then back to blue…

When he awoke he was in a white room with a small TV in corner of the room. Outside the small room were people in white uniform and after taking it all in he realized he must be in a hospital. But how did he survive, and who was that man who had done this to him, these questions and more where going thought Zelax’s head continuously.
“Ahhhhhhhhhhhhh you’re finally awake,” Zelax heard as a figure bounded in and hugged him and then Zelax realized it was his mum. “Who did this to you?!” She said whilst trying to retain normal breathing.
“To be honest… I really don’t know. It happened so quickly and all I could see was his bloodthirsty smile.” Said a still stunned Zelax. “He also injected something into my right eye. Wait how did I survive?”
“We don’t know we heard you scream and ran after the noise. Then we saw a note saying ‘You’re son is already at the hospital’ and when we got here you were here so that’s it we don’t know how you survived the journey”, said Danny as he walked into the room.
“Sorry but visiting hours are over” said a cute nurse.
“Oh I see, come on we better get going”, said a discouraged Talkata. They left and the cute nurse shut the door behind the family.
“Corfonga CTB” said the nurse in what seemed to be a mans voice. Then nurse took off her face mask to reveal a man his mid thirties. “We need to use you to test our experimental Full Metal Limb Construction or F.M.L.C.” exclaimed agent Confonga.
“Why me of all people,” said a bewildered Zelax.
“Because ‘he’ wants you,” the agent whispered.
“Who is ‘he’ and why does he want me?” Zelax whispered.
“Classified and we don’t know why yet”, said the agent while he straightened his tie. “The operation will start at eight pm”.
“You don’t even know if I want the operation”, murmured Zelax
“After the operation you will become a member of the CTB” said the agent
“wha….!” shouted a baffled Zelax.
“From now on you’re code name is Death Child or DC” said the agent as he left the room. “By the way you have no choice.”
Then the agent left the room. Zelax/DC stared out his window thinking about what had happened in the last few days. That man who was he and why does the FBI want him of all people?

“Now that the surgery is over you can tell you’re parents, but no other siblings do you understand DC” said the agent from before.
“Yes sir” said Zelax. His new body was amazing, full platinum limbs.
“Now let’s go through the weapons and accessories. Firstly…”, then agent Corfonga hit the ground, it was then that Zelax saw a man with two FG554’s.
“Your next kid” Said the assassin. Then he shot, Zelax cringed shut his eyes hoping for the best. But he felt nothing hit him, as he opened his eye’s he saw metal plated shields that had come out of his tricep's.
“What the…” Said the startled assassin? “The boss didn’t tell me about this. I’m leaving, see ya” And then he was gone in a flash. No one else had seen the assassin.

Zelax looked at his new arms, and thought about his new secret life as secret agent Death Child, what would his first mission be like and how many more weapons could these things have. He decided to get a breath of fresh air so he could think more clearly, it had no effect.
“Son what are you doing outside you can’t wa…” Talkata stopped as she saw his metal limbs.
“Mum the CTB gave new limbs don’t they look great!?” Zelax said as he walked towards.
“Oh son” As Talkata hugged him.
“MUM I CAN’T BREATH!” He said whilst gasping for air.
“Oh sorry son,” said Talkata as she let go of Zelax.
“Mum I have to tell you something before tonight and you have to tell dad but you can’t tell anyone else or I will have to kill them and you, I am a now member of the CBT now” Said Zelax in the quietest possible voice.
“What the… Your thirteen you’re far too young to be in the CTB” Asks the still bewildered Talkata.
“tell them "I’ve be come a high level motivational speaker."” Explained Zelax.
“Ok, when do you first leave,” Asks Talkata.
“When I get the details of my first mission,” said Zelax. ‘Beep beep”. Zelax pulled out his pager.

‘DC your mission is to ███ on a gang of assassins and find out what there next move is. There meeting at 55 scalefield road Talmor 7 p.m. tonight. Leave now and use your jet boots’. Then Zelax put his pager back.
“Ok I have to go now see you tomorrow,” said Zelax as he started to walk. Then he thought to himself ‘I have jet boots?!’ The tried kicking his heels together but that did seem to start them he spent an hour trying to get them to start but they just couldn’t start.
“I’ll just run to the nearest taxi pickup” Zelax said to himself. Then as he started to run they activated and he flew off on one leg trying to stay balanced, which was impossible but he managed to get on both his legs again.

At 6:50pm he made it to the assassins meeting location. There were already some assassins there so he hid behind a crate.
“You said this kid would be defenceless but he was fully armed, it almost like you wanted me dead,” said the assassin who had tried to kill him before.
“That is true, he was armed, but I didn’t expect him to be, you can’t blame me for something I didn’t know” Said the man with a very calm voice almost soothing. “But why didn’t you just use ‘it’”
“Because if I had used ‘it’ his ‘it’ would reveal it self and then I would have lost instantly” Said the assassin from before.
“FOOL” Shouted the calm voice man whose voice now seemed in raged “That was the idea to release his it but now you must DIE” He grabbed the assassin by the neck. Then he said “OBLITERATE!!!!” There was a massive blinding flash. When the flash ended there was nothing left but ashes were a man once stood. “Hum. Pitiful” Said the man now back in his ordinary calm voice. “And your next kid,” shouted the mysterious man pointed strait at Zelax.

[Sasori-puppet#111]

Now part 2-6...

Chapter 2



“You’re next kid” shouted the mysterious man pointing strait at Zelax. At what seemed like light speed the man darted behind Zelax.
“Good bye” the man whispered into Zelax’s ear. “Obliterate!” Then a light came out of this hands that surround Zelax’s body he felt like he was being ripped apart bit by bit then everything went black. As the light cleared it was replaced by a mass of smoke.
“He’s finished...” Said the man and he turned around.
“Fool!” babbled a voice in the smoke as the man turned around a fist launched in to the mans gut.
“What the…?” Said the man as he was spiting out blood. Then another fist hit the man under the jaw making him fly backwards. As the smoke cleared Zelax could see something that looked like a human figure but with inhuman feature's like; his body was a very dark blue shade, the build of his body was ten times bigger than any normal human, he had two five inch horns sticking out of its head and he had dark red eyes. The man whipped the blood off his lip as he got up.
“H… he re… relea… released it!” the man stuttered “THE DEMON OF PAIN!!!” The man babbled with a mad look on his face. So this is what they were talking about Zelax thought to himself as he looked at his body. Then a voice came into his head.
“Listen buddy i’m in control now so i’ll do the fighting from now on” Said this mysterious voice. Then Zelax nodded his head once.
“By the way my name is Demam” Said Demam. Zelax felt a rush and then, felt himself lose control of his body.
“It feels good to be in a body again” Said Demam in his normal deep voice. As he opened and clenched his fists. “It's showtime” then he clenched his fists for the final time just before Demam attacked the man said.
“Minions attack” Then the other men at the assassins meeting stood between the man and Demam. The assassin on the right had a giant hammer, it weighed ten tons and was made of pure diamond. The assassin in the middle had the ability to makes cracks in the ground and the assassin on the left could foresee the direction of attack's before the dealer had even thought about his next attack.

The assassin with the hammer jumped in the air and slammed the hammer down on Demam, the hammer landed right on Demam but he caught it with ease. He pushed it up in the air a bit pulled his arm back with a clenched fist and then he punched right through the hammer shattering it. Then the assassin in the middle slammed on the ground, but Demam just jumped over it and kicked the guy right in the face. The final assassin came up to him and when tried to punch him the guy just dodged it so he punched one way and the cut across hitting him in the stomach. With out even breaking a sweat he had defeated all three foes, no normal man would have been able to defeat.
“Your next wimp” said Demam with a smirk look on his face.
“Nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!” Shouted the man as Demam’s claws went right through his heart. As Demam pulled them out he saw masses of blood pour out of the wimp. Demam felt like he was fading away as Zelax gained control of his body again. Then sound of sirens came round the corner. So he came out of the building covered in blood. As he put out his FBI ID card they came round the corner.
“Kid don’t mess around this is a crime scene not game” Said an obnoxious Police Officer as he got out of his car.
“Amazing these are very highly leveled Assassin you think the person who captured them would stay for the reward,” Said another Police Officer.
“Um hello” Said Zelax as he tapped his foot on the ground.
“What now kid you going to say that you beat these guys?” Snorted the obnoxious Police Officer from before.
“Yeah I did.” Shouted Zelax. “And I’ll prove.” Then Zelax dashed to behind the Police Office facing away from him. “Boo” Zelax says quietly with a smirk on his face. Then Zelax elbows him in the back knocking the Police Office to the ground. This happened so quickly that the Police Officers couldn’t think about what was happening.
“Do you guys believe me now” Said Zelax as he looked towards the other police officers. The Police Officers backed away as they nodded their heads.

The next morning Zelax sat up in bed for hours. Thinking that now he had killed some one he was truly a murderer. But the FBI just told him to live his life as he normally would. Zelax felt like he was explode inside from the mere thought that he had killed someone.
“Zelax breakfast” shouted Talkata from downstairs. Zelax’s house was small for a family of five. It had an old English design, two floors, six bed rooms, thatched roof, the kitchen and the lounge were one room (the whole of the downstairs) and they live on a hill in the countryside. As Zelax walked down the stairs he kept thinking the same thoughts over and over. "Why me? Of all me people why me?” Zelax ate his breakfast (beans on toast). Then packed his bag and left for school. Just as he was about to leave he remembered the money he had been given by the CBI for the successful capture of the assassins. He raced up to his room and he grabbed the bag with the money in it. He ran back down the stairs and up to his mum and said.
“This is the money for doing stuff for you know who.”
“Oh I see,” said Talkata. Zelax left the door and ran to catch up to his brother and sister.
“Were did you go last night” Said Agatha.
“I went to a party with my girlfriend” said Zelax with a very bad poker face but his sister didn’t notice.
“You have a girlfriend” laughed Agatha. “Don’t make me laugh. You couldn’t get a girlfriend even if you had a girlfriend machine.”
“At least I’m not emo” murmured Zelax.
“Hey not in front of Danny” Agatha whispered into Zelax’s ear.
“What’s an emo?” Danny said in a confused voice.
“Never mind” said Agatha with a worried look on her face. “He’s so innocent” she whispered to Zelax. “We can’t flood his head with the stuff that we know.” As she finished Zelax nodded his head.
“I guess your right” said Zelax. Then Zelax realized that Agatha and Danny hadn’t said anything about his limbs. Telkata must have asked them to not talk about his metal limbs.

They finally made it to school. Zelax made sure no one could see his limbs by wearing gloves, a long sleeved shirt and jeans.

As he started lessons he was happy to be back with his friends. His best friend was a boy named George. His other friend was a girl named Henga. His only other friend was named Jack. They were all in the same class. There first lesson was Christian Studies so Zelax slept through the whole lesson. There next lesson was English so Zelax spent the whole lesson pretending to read whilst sleeping. Then they had lunch. After that they had Math’s which he worked in because he was put in the front of the class. Then in his final lesson, art, he had to draw a mythical creature and he chose a demon. As he was drawing the demon, a muscular man with something coming off his belt walked in.
“I’m looking for Demam” said the man in a deep voice.
“Sorry no Demam in this class” said the teacher in her soft voice.
“I wasn’t asking you” said the man as he pushed her to the floor. “I know you’re here or do I have to bring you out of hiding myself.”
“Here I am” Said Zelax as he stood on his desk.
“Get down this guy could kill you” said Henga as she saw Zelax role up his sleeves she, saw as with everyone else, he had metal arms.
“Ok then lets gets started” said the man as he pulled out the object from his belt revealing it to be a sword.
“Everyone run” Shouted Zelax. “Get everyone out the school you hear me?” They all nodded.
“But what about you?” asked Henga.
“Don’t worry about me,” said Zelax. “I’ll be fine.”
All the kids in the class got down and ran to the door. As the last were going out the man swung his blade into the ceiling above the door causing it to block the exit leaving Mianekan in the room.
“Leave her out of this!” Shouted Zelax.
“No she’s the perfect hostage” sniggered the man. “By the way my names Blade Age” said Blade Age as he jumped into a fighting stance.
“Fine then” Said Zelax. Blade Age swung his blade to hit the centre of Zelax but Zelax managed to catch the blade. Then he flung the blade back and out of no where two parts of a solid gold blade came out both his lower arms. They flew into the air joined together then Zelax managed to catch them by the handle.
“Now it’s party time” Blabbed Zelax with an evil look in his eye.

[Sasori-puppet#111]

Chapter 3


“Now it’s party time,” blabbed Zelax with an evil look in his eye. Then they jumped towards each other. Zelax blocked Blade Ages attack by creating an x with his swords. Then he pushed back Blade Age then slashed for Blade Ages head but Blade Age dodged, stuck his leg out, Zelax tripped over it and landed on his gut causing him to spew out blood. Then Blade Age picked him up by the shirt and flung him across the room.
“Don’t try and be something that your not,” said Blade Age as walked towards Zelax.
“Run now Henda now’s your chance,” said Zelax as he got up by pushing back on his hands and pushing up to kick Blade Age in the head knocking Blade Age down. By now Henda had ran out the door.
“Now we can really fight,” said Zelax. “What lying down on the job are we?”
“No,” said Blade Age from behind Zelax even thought he was still on the ground. Then the image on the floor started to fade.
“Now time to finish you,” said Blade Age as he swung his blade and almost hit Zelax on the head but he got flung away by something. What he didn’t see was that Zelax flicked the blade away at some faster than light. As he turned round there was a big hole in the building from where Blade Age had been flung though.
“Do you like my new look,” said Demam with a smirk look on his face.
“So you transform just in the nick of time,” said Blade Age. “I can do that to!!” His face started to turn red then the rest of his body started to go red as well. His muscles stated to grow. When his transformation had completed, his skin was a dark red his muscles were ten times the size of a humans and his sword had half melted into his hand.
“Now the fight really begins.” Said the now demented Blade Age.
“First, let me show you something,” said Demam as he pushed his shoulders up. The Demam started to strain as he pushed you could see something coming out of his back. It looked like a handle and then when the handle was full out Demam grabbed it and pulled it out to reveal a sword. If you looked a Demam from behind you could see a sword shape dent in his back.
“Hum a flesh eater sword,” said blade Age. “Sacrifice a large amount of skin to have an almost indestructible sword. Things are really starting to get interesting.”
“Now we can start,” said Demam as he set up a fighting stance ready to lunge. Then again they lunged at each other. But Demam’s caused him to spin horizontally creating enough speed to start a hurricane. Blade Age blocked but Demam’s attack cut straight through Blade Age’s sword and sliced Blade Age across the chest and arms knocking him back about a hundred metres.
“Should I repeat your phrase for you,” said Demam as he walked towards Blade Age’s body. “Don’t try and be something that your not!!” The he stabbed Blade Age right through the heart. It was over Blade Age was dead for good. As Demam put the sword back in his back he transformed back into Zelax. As soon as he was full Zelax again he fell to his knees. There was tears’ gushing down his face.
“Why do I have to do this,” Zelax said while sniffing.
“Zelax,” said a voice that was heading his way. Zelax wiped his eyes dry and turned around.
“Maianekan” Zelax said as he got up. “Are you ok?”
“Yeah and so is everyone else thanks to you,” said Henga as she looked at Blade Age’s dead body. “Is he…”
“Yes,” said Zelax answering Henda question before she could finish.
“But how,” asked Henda
“Don’t ask,” said Zelax turning his face away from Henda in shame.
“Oh,” said Henda.
“Oh Zelax you scared the hell out of us, are you ok,” said all the girls in the class except Henda. When they got to Zelax they all huddled round him. Henda blushed and walked away.
“You like him don’t you,” said a voice from round the corner.
“Who’s there,” said Henga.
“Relax it’s just me,” said Jack as he walked round the corner. “But it’s obvious you like him. Zelax might not be able to tell but almost everyone else can so no point hiding it. The only reason there acting like they care about Zelax is because you like him. They really hate his guts.”
“But why would they do that,” said Henga.
“Isn’t it obvious,” groaned Jack as Henga shock her head. “Because they want to see you take the chance now to ask him out so they can see you get rejected!”
“That’s mean,” said Henga with a vivid look on her face. “And there’s no proof that he would reject me.”
“Yeah there is try Bethany Limbark the hottest girl in our grade,” said Jack. “Just to annoy you she’s going to ask Zelax out and then dump him in the first week. Before you ask why they hate him so much it is because they think he’s a show off. Like just about half an hour ago he acted like a show off. Even though he some how killed him and saved the school they still think he’s a total show off.”
“How do you find out all of these things?” asked Henga flustered by all the information that had been thrown at her.
“Eavesdropping, the key to my success,” said Jack with a proud look on his face. Then Jack walked off to see Zelax but Zelax ran to Henga and whispered into her ear.
“I got a kiss on the cheek from Bethany, BETHANY!” Then he ran back to the group of girls. When he was running back he didn’t turn around to see the grim face on Henga face. Jack looked at her shrugged and sighed because he had seen what Bethany had done then he walked over to Zelax. As Henga walked away she heard a voice.
“You want him to love you, don’t you,” said a man clothed in black all you could see was his eyes. Henda saw this as the man came from the corner.
“Who are you,” stuttered Henga?
“Please call me Sir X,” said Sir X.
“So how did you know Sir X,” said Henga with snobbish look on her face?
“I know and see everything,” said Sir X in a very boastful tone.
“Ok, give it up Jack, I know it’s you,” said Henda but as she looked over to Zelax she saw Jack over by Zelax.
“Here,” said Sir X as he pulled out a needle and injected it into Henga arm. Henda screamed in pain they all turned round but Zelax couldn’t see the man but if he could have he would have understood the danger that he had put everyone he knows in danger. Before Zelax could push to the front of the pack Sir X had disappeared. When Zelax got to the front of the pack all he could see was Maianekan holding her arm and screaming in pain. Zelax ran from the away from the motionless group stricken with fear. Zelax picked up Henda off the ground and whispered to her.
“What happened,” but she didn’t reply. Zelax checked for a pulse but there was none. Then Zelax fell to his knee’s tears pouring down his face.
“YOU FIEND,” Shouted Zelax to the sky! Then Zelax heard a voice coming from Henga.
“Hey this is a nice body.” Said what seemed to be a female voice. Then Maianekan started to turn a dark green. Snakes started too protruded from her hair. Then she looks at the now mortified class. Then they all turned to stone.
“They call me Medusa,” said Medusa as she brushed her hair in the wind. The she looked strait at Zelax but somehow he didn’t turn to stone.
“Hmmm I thought so,” said Medusa whist stroking her chin. “Because you have the demon inside you don’t have the effect of a human but of the demon.”
“What did you do to Henda,” said Zelax in a stressed tone.
“Oh, that girl that liked you,” said Medusa. “Oh she’ll come back once I die don’t worry she’ll come back when I reach 80, so in about 50 years.”
“How about I make that down to 30,” said Zelax with a smirk look on his face.
“Oh really,” said medusa as she flexed out her arms. Medusa ran towards Zelax at the speed a normal human would run. Zelax tried to block Medusa’s attack but Medusa’s fist went straight through both metal arms creating a massive hole through them.
“What the…” said Zelax staring straight at his arms.
“Now do you see my full power,” asked Medusa with a big evil grin on her face?

[Sasori-puppet#111]

Chapter 4

“Now do you see my full power,” said Medusa with a big evil grin on her face. Then she lashed out Zelax again. Zelax let his arms fall limply and dodged the blow, Zelax followed up with a round house kick to the head. But Medusa saw it coming and ducked then she went for a straight kick to the head and hit Zelax up into the air. Then supporting her body with her hands she round house kicked Zelax in the side and straight into a building.
“Now lets make it a fact that I’m going to win,” said Medusa as she walked towards Zelax. She placed her thumbs and index fingers to make a triangle, she then put them up to her eyes aiming them at Zelax and shouted: “Blinding strike.”
Zelax felt a rush of pain in his eyes. They felt like they were burning away he couldn't help screaming.
“Do you feel the pain of death swarming you” laughed Medusa.
“Shut up” screamed Zelax as he lashed out blindly; waving his arms in the air all the attacks missing Medusa with now a disgruntled on her face.
“Are you really that pathetic?” Asked Medusa. “You’re not even worth my time.” Then Medusa grabbed his right arm, stuck her fist into his stomach, kneed him in the stomach and then followed through with a kick launching him into the air, she jumped up after him with her knee under Zelax now she clenched her fists together raised them into the air then slammed onto Zelax’s stomach causing his back to bend back round her knee and making him spit blood, she then let him fall to the ground. Zelax was rolling around on the ground writhing in pain.
“I admit it you have power but that’s nothing without control. You should learn how to take that power and focus it into training it, then we will fight again,” Said Medusa. “Good bye.” Then she disappeared. Zelax didn’t know, he couldn't even fell his body, he wasn’t even awake. “All hope is lost now. The one person that could stop this war gets beaten by Medusa, pitiful just pitiful,” said Demam from the inside of Zelax’s head.
“Shut up, just shut up,” said Zelax back to Demam. Then there was an eerie silence in his head.

“Zelax wake up, wake up” said Jack while shaking Zelax up and down.
“What happened” said Zelax as he got up he also saw that everyone had been de-stoned.
“I don’t know, one minute Maianekan was turning this dark green colour, then there was a flash and we saw you lying on the floor,” Said Jack as he got up. Zelax sat up and took a look at his arms didn’t have the holes in them now. Like it had never been touched.
“I don’t know what you’re doing in your life,” said Jack in a deep tone. “But don’t bring us into it!”
“Jack I’m sorry but…” said Zelax but then came to an abrupt stop.
“But what Zelax, but what?” said Jack in a bossy tone.
“I can’t tell you,” said Zelax looking away from Jack in shame.
“What can’t you tell your best friend huh what can’t you tell me?” said Jack still in a bossy tone.
“I can’t tell you that I am from now on quitting the CBI and becoming a demon hunter,” said Zelax with a fiery look in his eye.
“What?!” Said Jack with an astonished look on his face. “Why?”
“There was a man who injected her with some form of fluid right,” said Zelax as he turned his head around to look at Jack again.
“Yeah we thought he injected her with a sleeping poison,” said Jack with a puzzled look on his face.
“That was no sleeping poison… It was a demon!!” said Zelax with a raged look in his eye. “That’s why she started to turn green to. Also… I have a demon in me to.”
“But why aren’t you in your demon form like Henga.” Said Jack now even more confused.
“I don’t know, it’s like I can’t control when he comes out, but I can control when he goes in” said Zelax looking at jack with empty eyes. “But Maianekan couldn’t control it at all.”
“I see,” said Jack now understanding the whole concept. “Let me help you kill these Demons!”
“What?!” said an astonished Zelax.
“Yeah I help my dad with his inventions all the time,” said Jack in a proud tone. “And your arms and legs are one of them.”
“What your Dad invented these,” said Zelax whilst looking at his arms and legs.
“Yeah there inbuilt with golden plated swords, shoulder shields, jet boosters and a self restoring mechanism,” said Jack as he flicked his fingers to remember what it had.
“Yeah that’s exactly right, but how did you know it to such a degree?” said Zelax stunned by Jacks extensive knowledge.
“Because it was my idea,” said Jack even more proudly. “But there was one part that wasn’t inputted because of lack of money.”
“How much money did you need?” Asked Zelax.
“20 million,” said Jack.
“What the …that’s a lot,” said Zelax bewildered by the amount that was necessary for an extra. “What was it then?”
“A matter blaster,” said Jack whilst looking at Zelax’s wrist. “We would have some how would have made a way for your hands to transform into a cannon and created something that sucks in matter, and models it a spherical shape, and then release’s it in a powerful blast.”
“Nice description,” said Zelax still trying to take all the information in.
“So can I help you, please?” said Jack pleading for the opportunity. “I can help you train and upgrade your limbs. Come on, please?”
“Fine but keep it on the low,” Groaned Zelax.
“I’ll take you to my house,” said Jack getting ready to go. “But first say goodbye to your family because you may never see them again. Once you go today, you can’t communicate with anyone until all the demons are destroyed.”
“Why? You don’t have control over me,” said Zelax frowning at Jack.
“Think about they would be in so much danger if the demons found out that you had any connection to them.” Said Jack staring at Zelax madly.
“True,” said Zelax with a glum look on his face. “From now on I will only see you and your dad for the safety of everyone we know.”
3 hours later…

“Ok let’s get you ready to train” said Jack while he was leaning on an object that was covered by a white sheet in the middle of Jack’s dad’s laboratory.
“Were are we going to train? I would wreck the whole lab, if we trained here,” said Zelax with a puzzled look on his face.
“I know so voila,” said Jack and he pulled off the white sheet to reveal a circle that was missing a hole in the centre. “Say hello to the dimension warp.”
“What the…” said Zelax in astonishment.
“Now lets enter,” said Jack as he pressed a button on the dimension warp, there was a flash of light and when Zelax opened his eyes he saw a open area. All he could see was grass for as far as the eye can see.
“Welcome to the training dimension,” said Jack in a boastful tone.
“AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH HHHH” shouted Zelax as he felt a jolt of pain and started to grip his head. Then Zelax felt like he was being ripped in half. Then a blinding light surrounded Zelax, the light then disappeared and was replaced with a giant dust cloud. When Jack took a look into the dust Zelax was standing next to another figure.
“It’s nice to be in my own body again,” said the figure. As the dust disappeared Zelax looked at the figure and saw it was Demam.
“But how,” Asked Zelax?
“This dimension must not permit fused beings,” said Demam still not looking at either of them.
“What do you mean?” said Zelax as he tilted his head now even more confused.
“Do I have to explain everything?” sighed Demam. “Different dimensions have different rules on what you can and cannot do. Like in the demon dimension, control magic is not permitted. So if you tried to do control magic it wouldn’t do anything there would just be a flash and nothing would happen. That’s why X went to your dimension, the rule less dimension!”
“What there are rules in our world,” said Jack still trying to get over the fact that there was a demon standing in front of him.
“That’s different to dimension rules can’t be changed.” Said Demam now bored of talking. “Where as the rules your people make can be changed. You get it now.”
“Yeah I think I do,” said Zelax.
“So were going to train in the training dimension for a year,” said Demam looking up to the sky. “So are we going to start, or are you guys chicken.” Demam went into a fighting stance in the direction of Zelax and Jack.
“Ok then but don’t expect me to go easy on you Demam,” said Zelax as he went into a fighting stance as well.
“I’ll go find some food and water,” said Jack doing a fast walk to get as far as possible.
“Ok then I won’t go easy on you either,” said Demam. Then he lunged at Zelax as Zelax prepared to block. And that’s were will leave them for a year in this dimension (or 2 days).

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Chapter 5


“You ready for one last training match,” said Demam as he finished the fish he was eating.
“Yes, I need the practice,” said Zelax as he put on 50 kg weights on to his arms and legs. “Ok let’s get started,” said Demam as he got up.
“Ok then I’ll move to 3 km away,” said Jack as he cowered in fear.
“Why so far,” said Zelax as he had some warm up punches.
“Remember what happened last time,” said Jack pointing at a crater about 1km long and 2 km wide.
“Oh yeah with the Destruction ball,” Zelax mumbled whilst scratching the back of his head. “Well let’s get started,” said Zelax as he moves into a fighting stance. Then Demam threw a punch, Zelax ducked, then rapidly punched Demam in the stomach from underneath him then made a finishing punch knocking him about 3 meters in the air.
Then Zelax jumped up next to were Demam was floating then back flipped and kicked him in the back, which sends Demam plummeting straight into the ground, creating cracks in the planets surface. Zelax came down readied his hand to smashed Demam’s face further into the ground, when Demam opened his mouth and a blast of energy spurted out just missing Zelax.
“You’ve definate4/ly improved since we first fought here,” said Demam as he got up and cracked his knuckles.
“I could say the same thing about you,” said Zelax as he touched the ground with a big grin on his face. Then there was a flash creating 2 figures. One was on a human shape and one looked like a small dog or cat.
“Medusa,” shouted both Demam and Zelax.
“And some dog thing,” mumbled Jack from behind a load of bushes.
“Hey boys what you doing,” said Medusa While she stretched. Then she felt a quick jolt of pain. “What… the… my body, it’s ripping. AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!” At the same time the dog was howling in extreme pain.
“Demam grab the dogs human, I’ll get Henga,” said Zelax in a serious tone and Demam nodded. They both divided for the other half of the Demon (human) and caught them both. They then raced over to Jack before the smoke around Medusa and the dog cleared.
“Look after them Jack,” Zelax said in a deep and non-argumentative tone. Then Jack nodded, and Zelax and Demam dashed off back to where they were standing before like nothing had happened.
“What did u do Demam,” panted Medusa.
“A little pain surge just for and your pet,” Demam chuckled.
“I’m the one going to take out Medusa,” murmured Zelax. “You can take her little dog thing.”
“Fine but don’t come crying to me when you can’t handle her,” Demam said, giggling. Then Zelax ran towards Medusa, but the dog jumped in the way. Zelax just knocked it away into a nearby hill. Then as Zelax lunged to punch Medusa the dog started to turn red out of anger, then the dog grew and grew and grew till in was big than a Tyrannosaurus Rex and it roared shacking the ground and cracking it in half causing Zelax to jump back to avoid being 50 km under ground.
“Ho-ly,” gasped a shocked Zelax. Then the dog ran towards Zelax, but Demam jumped in the way and grabbed the beast by the leg and flung it as far away from Zelax as possible.
Then Zelax jumped over the crack in the ground and dashed to the left of Medusa then dashed towards Medusa, and then Zelax punched her strait in the face. Zelax went to punch her in the stomach, but Medusa grabbed Zelax’s hand.
“You’ve improved since the last time we fought two days ago,” chuckled Medusa.
“I couldn’t say the same about you,” said Zelax with a big smirk on his face.
“Well I’ll show you a new technique,” said Medusa. “Snake hair spears,” as soon as she spoke those words her snake hair turned in to spears floating round her body.

Meanwhile Demam was preparing a destruction ball to throw at the dog. In the back of Demam’s eye he could see Zelax dodging various spears doing flips and jumping from side to side.
“Time to finish you puppy dog… DESTRUCTION BALL,” Shouted Demam as he trusted his arms in front of him!!! The ball flew through the air strait towards the dog. The dog stood up and opened it’s mouth about were the ball was going to hit it. Then it swallowed the ball.
“What the,” stuttered a shocked Demam. Then the dog faced his head at Zelax, open its’ mouth and the inside of the dogs mouth started to glow.
“Zelax watch out,” screamed Demam at the top his voice. Zelax looked round whilst airborne and saw the dog glowing mouth and dived as quickly as possible Medusa who was watching Zelax, was still in aim of the blast. Then the dog’s mouth erupted with energy blasting Medusa, evaporating her into the air.
“I guess it’s now two on one,” laughed Demam.
“Beaten by her own team mate,” snorted Zelax. “What a way to go,” Zelax burst out laughing.
“I need you to distract this dog so I can blow it up,” said Demam now in a serious tone. “Just don’t throw it ok.” Zelax nodded to say he understood.

Zelax then jumped up in front of his face and started to repeatedly strike it between the eyes. Demam sprinted through the dog’s legs and flew up to over the dogs back and started to model a destruction ball. The dog started to snap at Zelax but he jumped away and Zelax fell to the ground. Even though Zelax spared little time… That was enough for Demam to prepare the destruction ball.
“Eat this,” shouted Demam as he trusted his arms forward. Some how the dog protruded his head in its body and it reappeared when the destruction ball was going to hit, and just like before the dog swallowed it whole. But this time he aimed it a Demam rather than Zelax. As so as Demam saw he was going to be fried if he didn’t move fast he dived for the ground hitting it head first. When he fell onto his back he saw the dog blast the energy beam in to air. After the dog shut its mouth the head moved it back to its ordinary place.

“This dog’s invincible, physical attack will just tickle it, and it adsorbs energy blasts,” groaned Demam.
“I got it,” shouted Zelax. “Can you make an energy ball about 10X’s bigger than the Destruction ball?”
“Sure why,” said Demam not catching on to Zelax’s plan.
“Because he maybe able to move his head but he won’t be able to swallow something that’s the same size as him,” said Zelax.
“Ok but I would need at least 5-10 minutes,” said Demam. “Do you think you can last that long, because before you only just lasted a minute.” Zelax nodded, and then they jumped in opposite direction. Zelax started to punch him between the eyes again. Yet again the dog thing started to snap at Zelax, but Zelax had a plan this time. Zelax got out his sword and thrust it straight through the dogs nose. The dog yelped in pain and started to hop around. Then the dog brought its head in then out again to remove the sword. The little that it did provided at least 3 minutes for Demam. Zelax got under the dog back flipped kicking it over a hill.
“You got it ready yet,” shouted Zelax.
“Not yet I need one more minute,” Demam shouted back.
“Just do it now while it’s down,” Zelax Shouted.
“Ok but watch out,” shouted Demam back to Zelax one last time. After he said this he trusted his arms forward and shouted. “DESTRUCTION BALL 90% MAX POWER!!!” The ball of energy travelled towards the dog lying on the ground. As Demam started to fall to the ground a giant head came out of the dog and started to grow to a size bigger than the ball of energy. Zelax caught Demam as he watched the beast swallow it whole. Zelax didn’t know if he was frightened or amazed but one thing was for sure… this couldn’t be good!! As Zelax landed he saw the giant head turn in their direction. Zelax knew what was coming so he put Demam on his shoulder and he started to run. When the blast hit the ground there was a gaping hole though the planet. Zelax dashed towards Jack and put Demam on the ground.

“Jack I need you and Demam to take Henda and the other guy back to our dimension.
“What about you,” stuttered Jack in fear?
“As soon as you go back into are dimension activate the portal once more,” said Zelax whilst hiding from the energy blasting monster. Jack nodded in agreement, as Zelax jumped out from behind the bushes and murmured to jack and Demam. “I’ll distract it you get out now.” After saying this Zelax ran as far away from Jack and Demam as possible. Jack opened the portal and jumped through with the small man on his shoulders and Demam carried Henda. After they exited, the portal shut. Zelax knew that it would be maybe a least an hour before the portal would open, and with this dog shooting energy beams out of its mouth like a machine gun its going to be a long and tiring hour. Dashing and jumping around all over the place, just to avoid the blasts let alone the flying rubble and the giant holes in the ground. About thirty minutes later Zelax felt really hot and sweaty. As he looked up he saw the planet was only 1000000KM away from the sun. Hurry up Jack, Zelax thought. It had only been about 2 seconds back on earth and then Jack pressed the button which took 2 seconds. Meanwhile Zelax was finding it hard to stand and the dog was still full of energy. The dog started to build up another blast but this time Zelax didn’t think he would be able to escape till a portal opened behind him. The only chance of survival came just at the right time. He jumped backwards into the portal then he saw a massive beam heading straight for him. Jack and Demam saw Zelax’s back for a moment then the beam went through the portal blasting Zelax and leaving nothing but a massive dent in the ground surrounded in smoke.
“It’s over there’s no way he could have survived,” muttered Demam hanging his head.

[Sasori-puppet#111]

Chapter 6



It’s over there’s no way he could have survived,” muttered Demam hanging his head.
“Oh really now that would be no fun,” said a figure through the thick dense smoke. Jack and Demam turned around and there he was, standing in the smoke: Zelax with one fried arm and burnt face covered in ash.
“But how?” stuttered Demam still shocked
“I don’t know it was almost as if time stopped after I left the portal for a few seconds giving me enough time to dodge the blast.” Zelax said as he stared up into the ceiling as if hoping to see something like a clue.
“That’s odd; even if the portal was still open it shouldn’t have slowed down time,” said a puzzled Jack.
“I don’t think it was the portal Jack,” said Zelax just confusing things more. “But I don’t know what it was but what ever it was I thank it greatly,”

As the trio started to walk towards the exit of the basement both Zelax and Demam felt a pull of force and then Bam! They hit each other becoming one again.
“Damn, I was enjoying having my own body again,” said Demam to Zelax in his mind.
“Oh, no, that can’t be good,” said Zelax looking at his arm as it faded in and out of demon form and human form. Then Zelax’s whole body started to do it. Then a small jolt of pain sends him plummeting to the ground.

Suddenly Zelax stopped fading in and out. But now everything was black. As Zelax got up he saw Demam standing next to him looking at something. Turning to where Demam was looking he saw himself. Then he saw Demam in his place. Abruptly a white light starts admitting from the Demam, such a strong light that Zelax couldn’t bear to watch. Closing his eyes and turning away until the light darkened. As Zelax turned round and looked to back where the Demam once stood was another figure a being that was a cross between Zelax and Demam.
“This is the really meaning of one,” said the being. “A cross between Demon and Human. DELAX.” Then another ray of light but this time when Zelax opened his eyes he was back in the real world.
“What happened to you Zelax? You just blacked out,” said a baffled Jack.
“Didn’t you see my body fading in and out with Demam’s body?” murmured Zelax trying to get up.
“No, what you talking about Lonny,” chuckled Jack as he patted Zelax on the back. Zelax still looking at the ground saw something shiny. So he bent down and picked it up. It was a triangle object with some writing on it. It said MITE! What could it mean though Zelax to himself? An incorrect of spelling of might or an anagram of some sort, either way it could mean something… or nothing. So Zelax stood up fully and started to walk along side Jack looking at his new stone. Then Zelax turned it over and it had some more writing which said ‘something that can never be stopped but slowed down or sped up.’ What the hell does that mean though Zelax?
“It’s a riddle stupid,” murmured Demam in the back of Zelax’s head.
“Ok if you so smart why don’t you figure it out,” said Zelax in a low arrogant tone.
“No way, I suck at riddles,” said Demam. “Ask Jack he’s smart.”
“Hey Jack,” said Zelax.
“Yeah,”
“Can you figure out this riddle please,” said Zelax handing over the stone. Jack read the stone and said.
“Not a clue,” shrugging his shoulders. “Wait is there something on the other side,”
“Yeah but it just likes an incorrect spelling of might,” said Zelax.
“Ah, an anagram,” said Jack his voice raising. “The answer is time,”
“What’s that supposed to mean,” said Zelax shocked that Jack figured it out so quickly.
“It means the answer is time,” chuckled Jack.
“No why is time on a little pebble,” asked Zelax as more of a rhetorical question.
“Don’t know,” said Jack also puzzled. “But what ever it means it’s got have to do with the Demons coming to earth,” As Jack said this the wall exploded leaving a formation of dust.
“Are you the one they called Zelax?” asked a figure through the screen of smoke
“Yeah… What’s it to you,” said Zelax in a low tone.
“Meet your maker,” said the mysterious figure. After he had spoken these words a flash of light in the shape of a sword appeared in the smoke. The smoke cleared to revile a man that could be no older than 25. He was fit, well built, muscularly, had dark blond hair and had an over confident look on his face wielding a blade that sparkled with a golden glimmer. The man lifted the blade… then charged towards Zelax. The man swung the blade at Zelax as if it weighed nothing more than a small pebble, Zelax easily dodged it but it still left a massive gash across his chest. Zelax felt the sudden surge of pain flood through him causing him to fall to the floor in pain.
“Wondering why you got that gash across your chest…,” snorted the mystery man. “Sorry I can’t tell you that’s my little secret!” As he said this he flicked his nose as if mocking the cringing boy pouring out blood.
“You want me to take over, Zelax?” asked Demam inside Zelax’s head
“No, this ones mine,” said Zelax to Demam. Zelax started to stand up then the man said
“Fool, you don’t know when your beat,” sniggered the man.
“My name isn’t fool, you should know that by now” said Zelax as he clenched his chest. “It’s Zelax, remember it… it’ll be the last name you ever hear.” Then Zelax pulls out his sword from its sheath and started to run towards the man.
“Idiot,” said the man mockingly as he easily turned the blow with a flick of his wrist. Then Zelax stopped running. He looked down and saw a deep gash across the whole of his chest and stomach. Over whelmed by the pain he screamed his throat until it was dry as a bone.
“Now that you’ve challenged me,” blabbed the mysterious man. “I’m going to make your death slow and painful. Let’s see, what should I take out first? Ah yes… let’s take off his arms.” The man lifted his golden blade and made a slashing movement in the area of the of Zelax’s upper arm. Almost instantaneously his arms fell to the ground, creating a massive vibration.
“Hum,” said Zelax gasping for air. “Shame that won’t work on me… you see my arms are made of metal after one of the demons cut them off,”
“Ah. You see I wasn’t planning on hurting you then,” chuckled the man. “Because now I have left you defenceless ha-ha-ha-ha-ha.” Laughed the man as he swung has blade wildly, each swing missing Zelax and Jack but cleanly slicing a bit of Jack house.
“Nooooooooooooo! The portal!” shouted Jack as a swing of the blade cut the portal in half, causing a mass surge of electrical bolts. One of the bolts hit Zelax’s arms frying them instantly and another hitting a wire shorting out the whole continuant of electricity causing the biggest power plants to set off a mass chain off explosions. The last one hit the man’s sword. The impulse of energy caused the sword to increase in size and the man started to turn a grey colour increasing in size as he morphed into his demon form. As he grew, a horn sprouted from his head heading downwards across his left eye. Then another one grew from his head also heading downwards across his right eye.
“The human’s stupidity has now leaked out of my body,” said the demon. “Call me Henda!!” Suddenly, his sword disappeared and was replaced with six kunai (Japanese throwing knives) with one between each finger. Henda jumped in the air and threw the kunai at Zelax, but he quickly dodged them, but was still sliced deeply by them. As Henda landed he created another lot of six kunai. Once again he jumped up and missed Zelax but cutting him deep. Henda continued to do this for ten minutes till Zelax was cut up so badly that all you could see on him was blood and cuts. Zelax only just being able to stand up right Demam talks to him and says.
“Let me take over Zelax. You’re going to get yourself killed otherwise!”
“Ok, maybe you’re right,” said Zelax back to Demam as if he were just conscious. Then a final surge of pain hit Zelax as Henga stabbed Zelax’s right eye with the kunai scraping it downwards towards the bridge of his nose making a scar across his eye. The eye’s juices poured out along with blood and nerves, Jack stood there and watched in horror as he saw what was happening, knowing there was nothing he could except hope that Zelax and Demam could save themselves.
“You had enough kid,” laughed Henda.
“I’ve told you… my name… before,” stuttered Zelax as he looked to reveal his right eye was a crimson red. “My name is… Delax!!!”


To Be Continued…

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alright my all my fans god i hope i have some lol) here's part 7 injoy :) :

“My name is Delax,” said Delax (a combination of abilities from Zelax and Demam). Jack didn’t if he had frozen out of fright or amazement. The fact that they some how managed to become one form or the thought going through his head of their power being too overwhelming and would back fire on them. As he thought this, he saw a ball of energy about the size of a golf ball in Delax’s arm that was totally blue. The rest of Delax’s body was crosses between Zelax’s and Demam’s original body.
“Eat this chump,” shouted Delax as he trusted this arm forward and releasing the ball of energy expanding the size of the blast to the height of the room blasting away Henda, leaving the rough foundation where the floor once was. As the dust cleared, he saw a bloodied Henda lying on the floor.
“Had enough… or do you want more, you imbecile?” sniggered Delax
“Stand down Henda,” said a dark red demon that appeared in between Delax and Henga.
“Oh yeah, and who are you,” said Delax as if trying to start a fight.
“I am the leader of the weapons squad,” said the leader.
“The what,” said Delax, now very confused?
“Pitiful, knowledge about the enemy was never your strong point, human!” said the Demon.
Demons are made up into four squads. There’s the weapons squad which composes of only weaponry users,” he continued, “the energy squad which uses energy based attacks, the elemental squad which were here to capture and finally the elites the highest ranks that aren’t leaders. Did you get that imbecile?”
“Yeah I did, what you take me for a moron?” shouted Delax at the leader.
“Step down Henga you’ve done enough,” said the leader in a soft tone. “Fusion,” shouted the leader as he merged bodies with an almost dead Henga creating a flash of light.

When the flash had cleared a black demon stood the in place of the leader. Behind him you could see steam rising from were Henda was once lain.
“The more strength the better,” laughed this new combination. “Let test this power out… hmm… I’ll kill you friend there just for kicks,” and before Delax could react a sword with four blades surrounding a circle appeared in the demons hand and straight away threw it at Jack. Jack froze not knowing what to do. Then a figure appeared in front of him, Jack thought it was Delax till he saw that this person was wearing a black cloak. On the other side Delax saw the being he most hated… the one that had left this endless sense of torture in him. Blind with rage he didn’t realize that the being had caught the blade with two fingers right at the very tip. Delax lunged straight at the being and babbled.
“I’m going to kill you for what you’ve done to me!” The man threw the blade at the wall and caught Delax’s hand and he started to crush it.
“Fool,” sniggered the being. “You’re no match for me!” Delax started to whimper in pain as the being started to crush it more. You could hear the bones in Delax’s hand being crushed to a pulp, after a minute or two he threw Delax aside, and then walked over to the Demon and said




“Don’t harm this one, I’m expecting great things from him,” whispered the being and pointing at Jack.
“Yes master what ever you say,” said the Demon bowing down on his hands and knee’s as if scared of him.
Jack couldn’t believe how the leader of a squad one of the highest rank warriors of the Demon race was so scared of this leader. There can’t be that much difference between them he thought.
“Ok, now there’s humans! lets go!” said the Demon as cop cars and news crews appeared in front of the now destroyed house. Jack and Delax saw them too. Delax got up waddled over to jack then activate his jet boots and they blasted as far away as they need to go then Delax collapsed on the ground not to wake up for another fifty hours.

Zelax woke up in a dark place which had nothing in it.
“Welcome to your closed mind,” said a voice in the background. As the figure came close it was revealed to be Demam. “The only time when we can be both in here is when were knocked out or out of control of are body. So get used to it for now.” Zelax went to fold his arms but remembered that Henga sliced them off.

Outside in the real world Jack watched a TV from outside a store window. On the TV he watched as a news report spoke in front of his half destroyed house.
“Early this morning a big chain of explosions happened at this 30 year old building. In the building a man and girl were found unconscious on the floor. The girl had been missing for 2½ days. No one has claimed knowing the man yet. More after this break.” finished the report. Jack felt his knees and started to whimper. What was going on? He had nothing left… no home… no family, nothing except for his dad. All lost from the war of his life.

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“Darling are you ok,” said a soft voice over a hospital bed. As the girls eyes fluttered open she saw she wasn’t at school any more. It has been 8 days she had been found in a half destroyed house… that she didn’t even know she had been to. After being unconscious for 10 days the first thing she said was.
“MAN I’M STARVING!!” clenching her stomach then hearing the groaning noise of her unused stomach muscles just praying for something to digest. Henda wasn’t the type of girl that wore dresses or make-up. No, she was more of a tomboy who enjoyed more male activities like: skateboarding, talking about pretty much nothing. But she still did have her girl moments. Like her feelings towards Zelax. Just as she was thinking about what happened to Zelax on that day she felt a tremor from underneath her and a scream of anger.
“Get off me, I’m fine now, let me leave!” shouted someone that defiantly sounded like… yep Zelax, thought Henga. As she thought this she saw someone run past her room with a bunch of doctors and nurses chasing after them, staring intensely at the door which the maniac just ran past she thought… defiantly Zelax.
“I’m telling you I’m fine,” said Zelax still running from the Doctor.
“But Sir you’ve just become conscious after 8 days you need to rest! your body is like a train wreck and you need to let it recover!” shouted one of the Doctors.
“I’m fine really now just leave me alone,” Zelax shouted back as he ran round a corner with a tsunami of smoke heading the other way. Before Zelax could react it hit him full blast with the doctors just staring at this projectile smoke. As the smoke cleared another wave of smoke came… and then another… and then another. Wave after wave of this smoke that was coming from nowhere, Zelax suspected it to be a demon so he grabbed his blades and charged at the smoke slashing through it. When he got to the end of the corridor he stared at the emptiness of the few meter’s in front of him. As he did this he got hit again this time from the side. As he turned around he saw another corridor. Once again he ran and slashed through multiple clouds of smoke. There was nothing at the end of that corridor ether. Once again getting hit from the side the chased after the clouds of well… smoke.
“This isn’t a good idea Zelax he’s just trying to run down your energy,” thought Demam to Zelax. Zelax being Zelax just ignored him. Corridor after corridor of finding no Demon until Zelax ended back where he started.
“What the hell this guy is pissing me off… ah,” shouted Zelax in front of all these confused patients. He started up again but this time he found it. The demon creating the smoke, he was here with a massive grin on his ugly blue head. Zelax hopped a little into the air to get some downward thrust to his blade but the demon caught the blade and started to laugh.
“Fool! you fell for my trap,” laughed the demon. “Tiring you down was just a bonus. You see those clouds weren’t just any clouds… they were…YOU,” Snorted the demon. As so as he said this Zelax saw blood fly past his eyes. He didn’t need to see what happened to know what happened. His chest had been cut over 100 times. Sure enough he was going to die in a matter of seconds. For what he knew would be the last moments of his life all he could think about was Henga but he couldn’t tell why. He thought about the way she smiled, the way when she cried he was there to give her a shoulder, the way he just could never get her out of his head. Then it struck him. With his last molecule of strength he shouted out.
“Henga… I LOVE YOU,” as he fell to the ground so did Henga’s tear falling down to the millisecond. This was it nothing more nothing less it was over.

[Sasori-puppet#111]

I Swear no one likes it :( if anyones read the first part i need comments please

This is also were i'll post part 8... which is now here for the world to injoy(note: this is part A because the whole part was to big to fit in one post lol) :

Death… very rarely to you glimpses someone’s life less body, if ever. That sense of pain and darkness floating around them, the emptiness in their eyes that just keep staring at you, the cold breezes of what feels like a spirit rushing by you even though you might not believe in the existence of spirits, you still have a feeling it is there.
Well, as Henga ran round the corner she felt most of these the sense of pain and darkness. The demon didn’t see Henga and started to lift up Zelax by the wrist of his right arm, raising him so their heads were level.
“Ha, fool for underestimating me,” laughed the demon still with a massive grin on his face.
“Who said anything about underestimating,” said Zelax with a pain motivated smile, which looked a lot like the demons. Just after saying this with his left hand he forced the demons chin upwards in am uppercut motion. As so as he hit the chin he felt surge of pain in both his left and right hands.

Looking at his left he saw a spike going through it and he just guessed what had happened to his right. He’s robotic arms now rendered total useless, and with blood spitting and oozing out of his chest he knew that he was going to be dead in maybe thirty seconds, a minute if he was lucky.

“Come on Demam I need you to surface,” thought Zelax to Demam.
“I’m trying you idiot what does it look like I’m doing,” thought Demam back to Demam. “Oh wait you can’t see me.” Now maybe 20 seconds left…. 10 seconds. Zelax started to feel drowsy when he started to fell like he was disappearing. “Yes, great work Demam,” Thought Zelax. As Zelax felt himself slipping away Demam felt himself rising to the surface of the body.

Demam dislodged himself from the spikes in his hands and went flying back 10 meters. Demam readied himself to jump, then jumped forward and disappeared, reappearing in front of the demon, Demam pulled back his arm ready to punch, but before Demam could land a blow, over one-hundred spikes drove into him and some going through him. He spat out blue blood, blood oozed down the spikes, he was in agony. He couldn’t breathe, let alone move.

“There’s a reason they call me Porcupine,” screamed Porcupine in a high pitch voice. “Neither demon or human could match me. I now must say goodbye.” As he raised his spike engulfed hand he heard the voice of a girl shout.
“STOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOP!!!” As Henga shouted this she pointed her left hand out to show her palm and her right hand gripped her left wrist. Then an energy ball appeared on her palm and then the ball was launched. Just avoiding Demam and hitting Porcupine in the face. In pain he grabbed his face causing him to recoil all his spikes back into his body, freeing Demam.
“Ah you haven’t seen the last of me fool,” screamed Porcupine as he teleported away.
Henga ran over to Demam still thinking it was Zelax only to see someone with blue skin. She stared at the blue corpse; like everyone, she had never seen anything like it. As the blue skin molded back into pink skin she saw Zelax’s face again.
”Where am I,” mumbled Zelax as he gradually sat up. “I last remembered waking up in a hospital bed and then… nothing.” A tear fell from Henga’s eye. “What’s wrong?” asked Zelax.
“Oh nothing,” whimpered Henga as she clenched Zelax.

People started too crowd around Zelax and Henga. Zelax fell limply on Henga’s shoulder.
“I need a doctor in here now,” shouted Henga. As Zelax was taken back to a bed by a nurse in her mid-twenties and an older doctor, Henga was revealed to be drenched in blood, from head to toe. She could barely move under the extra weight of Zelax’s blood. No one could even move her. After an hour or two they finally got her standing and into a hospital bed.

After hours of analyzing Zelax’s blood they made an amazing discovery, a new blood type different to what Zelax was born with. In fact a whole new blood type never discovered before. It was called ABO+. An assortment of all blood types which weights and heals ten times more than the other blood cells. It also increased the amount of CP that is stored and how quickly it can heal.

“We believe that his metallic limbs reacted with his blood causing a chemical reaction that makes him almost a super human,” reported a much exited doctor to the reporters. Zelax stared out the window at the now famous doctor.

“He’s wrong,” said a voice in Zelax’s head. “It’s not the metal limbs it’s your demon. You and I are the only ones that know it the truth. Like the reaction Henga had with her demon. She has become a witon, a demon witch. A very rare breed of demon, that died out over one hundred years ago. They can use demonic spells to kill off the demons at will. But the reason the leader wants her is to seal the elemental demons.” Zelax realized that the person he was listening to wasn’t Demam.

“Who are you,” Shouted Zelax as he clutched his head throbbing with pain. “What did you do with Demam?” Zelax felt like something was escaping through his mouth and eyes. He’s face was being dragged away from his head. The felt a rush of pain and saw a ghost like figure escape from the room. Zelax got up and started to chase it.

He ran through the hospital an amazing speed. All his wounds were almost healed but it still hurt to run to fast. From stairwells to corridors he chased the ghost demon till he reached a corner on the top floor where the demon disappeared. He looked round the corner and saw a person standing there covered in what could be ninja gear. You could only see his eyes, and the rest of his body was covered in a jump suit. Zelax thought to himself that the demon must have entered this person’s body; the other person was thinking the same thing.

They charged at each other for hand to hand combat. Fist and kick were flying every where, but neither of them was getting a blow. They were matching strike for strike, blow for blow.
“Can we see this amazing child,” asks one of the reporters.
“No not yet his wounds were far too deep to heal by now, even with his super blood.” As the doctor said this a massive hole had been smashed into the side of the hospital. Two figures fell from the hole. “What the...”

Zelax froze when he saw how high they were and the mysterious stranger took advantage and grabbed Zelax by the legs and threw him to the ground creating a shudder that coursed through the ground. Luckily Zelax landed on all fours. As he turned he saw the mystery person attacking him head on with his fist first.
“Get out of this persons body demon,” shouted Zelax as he stood up to match the opponents fist.
“Me the demon,” laughed the man. “Don’t try to trick me demon I have you right were I want you.” The two warriors coiled causing a blast of air around them. The man jumped away from Zelax’s fist with his fist as Zelax hopped back in the other direction.

“Your strong demon but I shall beat you,” both Zelax and the man panted in unison. As they jumped forward they raised their fists posed and ready then… blood pored from each mouth. They both took direct head shots in the jaw. They both staggered back and then fell over. Both of them had pushed themselves to their limit. They don’t seem to notice the amount of gasping reporters staring at them just imagining the headlines. ‘Super human or crazed maniac’ or others like ‘scandal, what do hospital really do to their patients’.

“I know your in there demon just come out,” puffed Zelax. “Tell me were Demam is and give him back now.” Zelax stumbled up and over to the man hitting the man in the stomach. The man cringed and then Zelax kneed him in the skull.

“I don’t know any Demam demon,” mumbled the man between portions of blood spewing out. “I’m just here to get back my demon!”

The man leaped up trying to uppercut Zelax but just missing.
“Shut up I know you took Demam some were and I’m not listening to your lies,” blabbed Zelax.
“My lies, you’re the one that’s lying, demon,” the man blabbed back.

“Ha you’re both fools,” laughed a voice. Both Zelax and the man looked up into a tree to see the demon’s ghostly body. “I just felt like joking with both of you and see how you would pit against each other… It was entertaining to say the least.” Then the demon disappeared into the air.

[watachi59]

what a long story...im sorry cause im just read chapter 1 and 2...yeah your are good in writing.! im like to read your story..

[Sasori-puppet#111]

k thanx watachi i've edited some bits to make sence (i got confused when using names a bit but it's fixed now... Some good news... my friend is going to do a manga for this story... the first few pages maybe here by christmas lol... Part 8b:

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“I’m sorry master, please forgive me,” squealed Porcupine.
“Why should I forgive you, pesky runt!” sculled the being hidden behind a large black hood. He kicked Porcupine on the floor. As he did this another demon entered with a ghostly figure.
“What is it,” shouted the being.
“He wasn’t useless for everything,” chuckled the ghost demon. “Look what he gave me the chance to do.” He put his hand down his throat and reached in to grab none other than Demam.
“Very good Grawl you have served me well,” smirked the being. Grabbing Demam and throwing him to the ground like a toddler with an old toy.
“Take him to the absorber to be biodegraded into a drink then, I’ll drink him all up,” laughed the being. “Then there’ll be no one to stop us,”

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Zelax bolted upright from what seemed like a dream. Sweat pouring from his skull drenching the rest of his body. His body was trembling violently out of fear. Porcupine, Grawl and the being all in the one place. They were going to kill Demam and there wasn’t anything he could do. As he started to realize were he was, he saw Henga, Jack and the man he had never seen before standing by his bed.

“Zelax I’d like you to meet Argon,” said Henga. “He was the one who attacked you before.” She leant over to Zelax and as she leant over Zelax thought to himself “Is it just me or has she gotten hotter in the last few weeks.” As he thought this another voice came into his head and said back to him.
“You have a sick mind boy. Please act more mature… By the way this is Argon.” Zelax heard this and felt like his head was about to explode, but he decided to let his words do the talking instead.
“GET OUT OF MY HEAD YOU FREAK!!!” Zelax shouted pointing at Argon. For a whole second or to the hospital ward went quiet looking at Zelax’s room. Then they all went back to what they were doing before. A nurse rushed in and asked if everything was ok. They all nodded and the nurse left.

“So what are you guys doing here,” said Zelax after calming down.
“We’ve come here to tell you that we’re all going training to hone our skills in each of our fields,” said Henga while wondering what went on in Zelax’s head. “Mine is this witon thing. Argon’s is hand to hand combat. But we can’t deicide what yours should be, either sword skill or training you how to use your other ego.” Zelax stared at her in a confused way so Argon stepped into help.
“Jack told us about another being that was far more powerful than you or Demam,” he explained. “That is why I went in your head before to find this ego and draw it out. I found some information about it. Firstly, its name is Delax, a combination between you and Demam. It can transform depending on the situation and how much you need its power. Oh yes and by the way were going to train… to save Demam.”

Then they left Zelax in his room. Zelax looked at his bedside table a saw the triangular stone from before, which had time written on it. He gazed at it of hours wondering what it could mean and if it was a fluke he had found it by or it was meant for him. Finally he fell asleep again and drifted off it what seemed like a better place.

After a few days they left the hospital to go train in the Avglar Mountains. They traveled only on foot to increase their endurance. Jack traveled by helicopter carrying all the equipment for the train, though Zelax, Henga and Argon carried a portion of it to help their endurance training.

After 20 hours and 50 minutes they made it to the base of the mountain range. The only person that could still move was Argon. They camped at the base till sunrise (only 20 minutes) and then they set off again up the mountain. After going up and down over 50 mountains they finally made it to the center were jack was waiting for them.
“Ok that’s the endurance training finished you can have some sleep till tomorrow,” said Argon facing jack, but when he turned around to see that Henga and Zelax were way ahead of him.

The day turned into night and the night back to day again. As Henga got up from her sleep she saw a book was gliding through the air towards her. She ducked and it hit Zelax straight between the eyes.
“Henga, that’s your first Witon magic book,” said Argon. “Learn the entire amount of spell’s in there, in chronological order. As you learn one show it to me and I’ll see if you can move on to the next. Now Zelax lets extract Delax, this will only hurt you a bit.” Argon grabbed Zelax head and then a surge of pain traveled through Zelax. Zelax started to writhe in pain. Rolling from side to side, screaming in pain.
Hold still I’ve almost got it,” said Argon while struggling to keep hold of Zelax. “Almost there, just a little more… got it!” After saying this Argon yanked his hand away from Zelax as what looked like a shell engulfed his body. Zelax closed his eyes in fear. As he opened them he saw that he wasn’t in his body anymore, but Delax’s.
“The extraction was a success,” Said Argon with a big grin on his face. But then Delax fell over and returned to Zelax.
“The extraction must have drained his energy,” sighed Argon. “Well all my focus is on you now Henga.” They left Zelax lying on the floor and started Henga’s training.

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“Are the armies ready yet Grawl,” said the being from atop his throne. “Also, when will Demam’s destruction be ready?”
“Not yet oh great one and in 30 earth days,” praised Grawl.
“Excellent it’s all falling into place isn’t that right… ZELAX!!”



To Be Continued…