Will she like it????

[Pontago]

I believe in angels,
The kind that heaven sends,
I am great friends with an angel,
But I call her *****.
Friends will come and friends will go,
The seasons change and it will show,
I will age and so will you,
But our friendship stays, strong and true...All the love that history knows,
is said to be in every rose.
Yet all that could be found in two,
is less than what I feel for you.

[olaf]

this poem lacks coherence. It looks like it was made from parts that don't fit together.

Sorry for the harsh words, but when I read this piece I don't see a person, I see every romantic movie, every pop song about love.

[Pontago]

well i usually write things more...deep but im trying to dumb it down. She doesnt know how i feel yet...and she always needs explanitions of alot of my writings. thank you tho.

[olaf]

if you put it that way...

let me rephrase my opinion: person which doesn't read much poetry and which enjoys finding rhymes should like that poem