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Emerica
02-13-2005, 03:04 AM
Heres an idea I had for a Naruto storyline. I guess this fits under the "fanfiction" label so help me god. I thought it would be a cool darker direction for the series to go.

Its in the future. 10 or 15 years. Sasuke has come back from Orochimaru and is now the Hokage of konoha. Naruto has become a missing nin and actually in hiding in the forests of Fire Country. The back story would be that after naruto leaves to save sasuke, and does so, sasuke sets up a conspiracy to make himself look like the hero. Upon returning to the village, he is greeted with warm welcomes. Naruto is still the outsider even then he is actually the hero. Sakura is still in love with sasuke and they start to develop a relationship. As the years pass naruto becomes more and more withdrawn as sasuke quickly rises up the ranks of the village. He later marries Sakura. Naruto watches with painful sadness but does nothing, thinking of his two friends and their need to be happy. Naruto finds it too hard to take seeing sasuke and sakura being together and leaves the village. What is unknown to Naruto, is that sasuke has set up a place to make naruto miserable by taking everything he wants. The title of Hokage and his love Sakura. Sakura becomes Hokage at the young age of 30/25(?). He excels in all areas of ninjustu, thanks to the cursed seal that he still controls. Sasuke wants to hurt naruto becuase he killed(?) orochimaru and destroyed the only hope he had of defeating his brother Itachi. To get his Mangekyou sharingan, he has to kill his best friend, Naruto. Naruto himself has not been idle however, honing his skills in the remote forests of the country of fire. Unbeknownst to the other villagers, he and Sasuke have set up a pact that no one is to enter his territory, which is a vast expanse of forest next to a mountain. His emotions have had many years to stew and have twisted his mind. He believes that the people of Konoha are his enemies and all want to hurt him. He believe that sakura hurt him intentionally and he feels betrayed over all. Too hurt to be vengeful, he lives his life in quiet solitude, doing the only thing he takes comfort in, training. The actual story line would be Narutos path down the trail of deceit that sasuke has constructed. He will see the players behind the curtains (akatsuki?) and start to figure things out.

Benjamin Linus
02-13-2005, 03:23 AM
Write it, before someone beats you to it and claims the idea as their own after reading it here.

CrumCon
02-13-2005, 04:19 AM
hey that was my idea!

Cinnabon
02-13-2005, 04:24 AM
What the hell is wrong with you people. WHAY to much time thinking about this, go get some young teenager and have an adventure exploring your bodies and feelings.

Emerica
02-13-2005, 10:49 AM
Umm..I can't believe someone with "tsunade tit club" in their sig is talking shit. Thats some mind fuck right there.

Brandt
02-13-2005, 10:56 AM
I think this idea sounds good! Go for it!

martryn
02-13-2005, 05:28 PM
Bleh, I don't like it. It makes it seem like no one is the good guy and there is no one the average anime watcher can relate to. Without having a hero of some sort, what DO you have?

Now if Shikamaru was in it, or Genma, then it would be awesome.

Sol 3dge
02-13-2005, 06:27 PM
OK, but Sasuke would never be hokage. His dream is to lead the Konoha Police. If anything he'll recreate that. Also, strongest and ninjustsu doesnt determine Hokage. He would never be selected because there are more worthy canidates. Also, Naruto's too loud to be a hermit at 25/30.

OniZabuza
02-13-2005, 07:30 PM
Its in the future. 10 or 15 years. Sasuke has come back from Orochimaru and is now the Hokage of konoha.
Um. No.
Haha Sasuke becoming Hokage after betraying Konohoa, and costing his peers their lives...
I only have one thing to say:
http://ucsu.colorado.edu/~hedmanr/misc/NO!.gif

nigggs
02-13-2005, 08:58 PM
yep! this is defenitely fan fiction stuff. gotta go....

Therahedwig
02-14-2005, 11:00 AM
It's a nice storyline, but very anti-sasuke-ish...

You can try to write it, but indeed sasuke is not the kind of person to be hokage...

He doesn't seem like the person that likes to be in the spotlight...well, only if he can bug naruto with it, though he wouldn't do it to hurt naruto...

You can make him do other stuff against Naruto, like setting up a plot against the owner of ichiraku ramen or iruka, so those guys will be gone, and naruto loses someone, adding the extra cause that Sasuke thinks naruto should feel how it is to lose someone...
Or make him the lead of some anti-naruto gang, and let him banish naruto from the village, and naruto will make a pact with either tsunade or kakashi(if you want him hokage...)

But don't make sasuke hokage, it would be to OoC...
But you can try to write it, though don't expect me in particulair to read it...
Too anti-sasuke and too angsty/depresive for my taste...
The sasuke haters out there might like it...