Capitan Jack Sparrow
02-06-2005, 11:54 AM
Rio
Rio’s Entrance
Chapter 1
Man: I now proclaim you the king of this planet.
Our king is a kind man with short back hair and dark blue eyes that reflect the moon and wears his families royal colours he is also tall and buff in build.
King: Thank you I will rule this planet with a kind heart and a determination to get rid of all people that made the last king suicidal.
Man: Well my king Pellete it is late and these people will need their rest for tomorrow’s war on Teras.
Pellete: Yes I must also leave I need to return to my wife and family.
Wife: I knew you would become the new king *jumps up and down*.
Pellete: Where’s my little champion?
As the king says this a boy of 5 enters from a side room with half his clothes torn off and scratches and burn marks every where he walks up to his father and offers his hand as the king looks at his second son he sees his wife’s dark green eyes and his own long dark blue scruffy hair.
After his father shakes his hand he goes out and starts to train.
(Young boys view)
As the boy goes outside he slams the door and goes out into the middle of the field that his family owns and starts to yell and concentrate on his body and moves all the energy inside of him into his hand and a small ball of light appears that makes the sky light up. He looks at the ball and it starts to grow and then he throws it hundreds of feet and then it shoots back at him and he flies towards it and starts to attack the small ball.
Boy: I can do this I can defeat this small part of my energy.
As he flies towards it his father and older brother appear in the sky.
Boy: huh?
Father: Rio you are strong but can you take me and Codrea down.
Codrea is just exactly like his father except he is taller and has lighter hair than both the king and Rio have.
Rio: Ok let’s go and I will win *grins*.
Codrea: Ha you can’t beat us both you will lose before you move from that spot *gets into a defensive position*
Rio: Ok let’s go I will win and I will fulfil my destiny *shouts* I will be the best warrior ever and you will all remember me as the greatest warrior of this planet.
As he finishes the little speech the King flies at him and thinks this must be the 20th time that he’s said that and then tries to punch him in the face but as the punch comes Rio sees the punch in slow motion and he dodges to the side and knees him in the gut *crunch* as he pulls away his knee he jumps on his back and pushes off towards his brother and kicks him in the side of the face *whack* but as he’s floating down his brother sends off a small ki blast and it hits Rio in the back *AHHHH* as he falls towards the field below he sees his father flying towards him and he elbows him in the back of the neck *crash!* and sends him flying even faster towards the earth as he hits the earth *Booom* a giant cloud of rubble and dust flies up and hits his brother after his father has hit the rubble Rio hits it too but his father gets up and flies back into the sky.
Chapter 2 coming soon
Rio’s Greatest Day
Chapter 2
As Rio gets up out of the rubble his father and brother land each side and shoot ki blasts just before they crash into the ground Rio jumps up into the sky at floats there gathering his energy to perform his ultimate attack. As he gathers more energy his hair starts to stand on end and go red from the normal long shaggy black that it usually is as he gets close to his peak of energy he shoots towards his father and brother.
Super Rio: Ultimo Rio Blaster!!!!!....FIRE!!!
As the blast comes out of Rio’s hands he falls from the sky and lands with a loud *crash * on the ground. As the blast flies towards the king and Codrea they both also charge up and they stop the blast and direct it toward the empty field in front of them as the blast hit the field *Boooooooom* the father and brother duo hit the dust in front of Rio and they both help up Rio and take him In and as they walk home the King tells Rio that he is going to go to Jinketsu’s school of warriors as Rio hears this he turns round and stops his dad.
Rio: Are u joking I m going to Jinketsu’s school that’s the best school there is and it needs a test but I haven’t had one yet.
King: Oh yes u have what was that you just did we got a call from Jinketsu saying that we could do you’re passing test along as we went full out *smiles*
Codrea: Nice job little dude *smiles*.
Rio: Thanks guys I really want to get good and become the greatest warrior EVER
King + Codrea: We know!
(Outside house)
As the sky becomes dark and the stars start to appear in the peaceful night’s sky they sit down to tea and then the talk about techniques over a large bowl of noodles that the kings wife had been cooking as the bowl in the middle starts to get empty they each start to go off into their own rooms to sleep for the long night to come.
(Morning)
Rio: Come on bro lets train *shakes*.
Codrea: *yawn* ok I will be up soon.
As Codrea gets up Rio goes out and is about to power up when he sees a man walking towards their house as he gets closer Rio goes into a defensive position and rushes him but before he can get 2 paces his brother smacks him over the head and Rio lands harshly into the ground.
Codrea: Ok little punk lets go *smiles*
Rio: *brush...Brush* you bastard you hit me over the head.
Codrea: You wanted to train so let’s train wimp.
Rio: Ok asshole lets train.
As they both rush at each other a ki blast goes between them and they both look left and see the guy that Rio had seen.
Codrea: Who the hell are you?
Rio: That’s Jinketsu I think but let’s go see if he’s the real deal.
Codrea: *winks* let’s give him the Super brother duo.
Rio: Ok let’s get him.
As they both charge up there spiritual energy there hair becomes red and stands up.
They both rush at the stranger with a flying kick as they are just about to hit with a crushing blow the man catches their feet and throws them away making them crash into the ground. As the dust clears Rio pops up.
Rio: What the hell I didn’t even see him move
Codrea appears with his uniform in bits
Codrea: He’s so fast that’s the real Jinketsu all right.
Rio: Yes!!!! He’s here to pick me up *jumps up and down* YAHHOOO
Chapter 3 Soon
Credit of the name Jinketsu goes to Alex Hiro (Crono)
Jinketsu’s School
Chapter 3
As Jinketsu stops and watches Rio fly towards him as Rio stops he looks into the face of Jinketsu what he sees is spiky hair and these dark black eyes although Jin has nothing hidden Rio gets the feeling that he has a lot to hide.
Rio: Hi
Jin: So you must be my next student.
Rio: *smiles* yeah that’s me.
Rio: Ok if you stay right here I will say bye to my family and I will get my stuff ok?
Jin: Ok but be quick we need to pick up other students
Rio: Ok
As Rio runs into the house he is greeted by his whole family and his mother with all his stuff all ready packed.
Rio: Thanks mom
Wife: That’s ok son now you go and be the greatest warrior this planet has ever seen.
Dad: Ok son just go and do your best.
Codrea: Ok moron go and become strong.
Rio: *grr* moron ill give you moron when your eating my shoe.
Once the good byes are said and everything is done Jin and Rio head to pick up the next student in the town of Ley which is a strange town with a lot of incredibly strong warriors that saved the planet when it came near to destruction which is seldom talked about these days.
Jin: Ok this is the place where Samariku lives.
Rio: Cool
Jin: Ok Sam lets go
Sam: Who’s the punk.
Rio: *arrrr* Punk ill give you punk when why foots half up your ass.
Jin
As they journey to all the near by towns they pick up new kids and the items that are needed for the journey back to the school but as they walk through the Konamarh woods Jin feels that they are being followed by a Teras mercenary as Jin turns round a throwing star catches him in the shoulder
Jin: *Ahhhh* Get together in a defensive circle
Rio: Why who is out there or should I say what is out there.
Jin: Rio it’s a mercenary
Rio: Ok so you think your so good do you picking on us show yourself and let’s punk.
Mystery: Ok little boy let’s fight
Rio jumps out of his defensive stance and flies into the sky and starts to power up then with a small bang his hair turns red.
Sam: Ok he’s as big a wimp as I though he was.
Jin: Rio get your little ass down here now!!!!
Rio: No! Now where are you bastard?
Mystery: Right behind you dunce.
Rio: Oh! Shit
As Rio turns round he charges a ki blast and sends it flying into mystery
Rio: AHHHH take this
Mystery: AHHHH that hurt punk you will.
As he finishes these words he throws twenty throwing stars at Rio as Rio doges them he gets caught of guard by a small ki blast from mystery and falls to the ground.
Rio: *panting* Ah that was a good trick but this is only the start.
As Rio gets up he charges his spiritual energy even more and his eyes go red.
Jin: Oh so this is the power of their family is it.
Rio: Let’s go scum I can take anyone down now.
Mystery: Let’s test that theory.
Mystery runs at Rio and try’s to punch him but at Rio’s current speed he doges all the punches with ease and sends Mystery flying with a kick to mid section.
Chapter 4 Soon
Rio’s Entrance
Chapter 1
Man: I now proclaim you the king of this planet.
Our king is a kind man with short back hair and dark blue eyes that reflect the moon and wears his families royal colours he is also tall and buff in build.
King: Thank you I will rule this planet with a kind heart and a determination to get rid of all people that made the last king suicidal.
Man: Well my king Pellete it is late and these people will need their rest for tomorrow’s war on Teras.
Pellete: Yes I must also leave I need to return to my wife and family.
Wife: I knew you would become the new king *jumps up and down*.
Pellete: Where’s my little champion?
As the king says this a boy of 5 enters from a side room with half his clothes torn off and scratches and burn marks every where he walks up to his father and offers his hand as the king looks at his second son he sees his wife’s dark green eyes and his own long dark blue scruffy hair.
After his father shakes his hand he goes out and starts to train.
(Young boys view)
As the boy goes outside he slams the door and goes out into the middle of the field that his family owns and starts to yell and concentrate on his body and moves all the energy inside of him into his hand and a small ball of light appears that makes the sky light up. He looks at the ball and it starts to grow and then he throws it hundreds of feet and then it shoots back at him and he flies towards it and starts to attack the small ball.
Boy: I can do this I can defeat this small part of my energy.
As he flies towards it his father and older brother appear in the sky.
Boy: huh?
Father: Rio you are strong but can you take me and Codrea down.
Codrea is just exactly like his father except he is taller and has lighter hair than both the king and Rio have.
Rio: Ok let’s go and I will win *grins*.
Codrea: Ha you can’t beat us both you will lose before you move from that spot *gets into a defensive position*
Rio: Ok let’s go I will win and I will fulfil my destiny *shouts* I will be the best warrior ever and you will all remember me as the greatest warrior of this planet.
As he finishes the little speech the King flies at him and thinks this must be the 20th time that he’s said that and then tries to punch him in the face but as the punch comes Rio sees the punch in slow motion and he dodges to the side and knees him in the gut *crunch* as he pulls away his knee he jumps on his back and pushes off towards his brother and kicks him in the side of the face *whack* but as he’s floating down his brother sends off a small ki blast and it hits Rio in the back *AHHHH* as he falls towards the field below he sees his father flying towards him and he elbows him in the back of the neck *crash!* and sends him flying even faster towards the earth as he hits the earth *Booom* a giant cloud of rubble and dust flies up and hits his brother after his father has hit the rubble Rio hits it too but his father gets up and flies back into the sky.
Chapter 2 coming soon
Rio’s Greatest Day
Chapter 2
As Rio gets up out of the rubble his father and brother land each side and shoot ki blasts just before they crash into the ground Rio jumps up into the sky at floats there gathering his energy to perform his ultimate attack. As he gathers more energy his hair starts to stand on end and go red from the normal long shaggy black that it usually is as he gets close to his peak of energy he shoots towards his father and brother.
Super Rio: Ultimo Rio Blaster!!!!!....FIRE!!!
As the blast comes out of Rio’s hands he falls from the sky and lands with a loud *crash * on the ground. As the blast flies towards the king and Codrea they both also charge up and they stop the blast and direct it toward the empty field in front of them as the blast hit the field *Boooooooom* the father and brother duo hit the dust in front of Rio and they both help up Rio and take him In and as they walk home the King tells Rio that he is going to go to Jinketsu’s school of warriors as Rio hears this he turns round and stops his dad.
Rio: Are u joking I m going to Jinketsu’s school that’s the best school there is and it needs a test but I haven’t had one yet.
King: Oh yes u have what was that you just did we got a call from Jinketsu saying that we could do you’re passing test along as we went full out *smiles*
Codrea: Nice job little dude *smiles*.
Rio: Thanks guys I really want to get good and become the greatest warrior EVER
King + Codrea: We know!
(Outside house)
As the sky becomes dark and the stars start to appear in the peaceful night’s sky they sit down to tea and then the talk about techniques over a large bowl of noodles that the kings wife had been cooking as the bowl in the middle starts to get empty they each start to go off into their own rooms to sleep for the long night to come.
(Morning)
Rio: Come on bro lets train *shakes*.
Codrea: *yawn* ok I will be up soon.
As Codrea gets up Rio goes out and is about to power up when he sees a man walking towards their house as he gets closer Rio goes into a defensive position and rushes him but before he can get 2 paces his brother smacks him over the head and Rio lands harshly into the ground.
Codrea: Ok little punk lets go *smiles*
Rio: *brush...Brush* you bastard you hit me over the head.
Codrea: You wanted to train so let’s train wimp.
Rio: Ok asshole lets train.
As they both rush at each other a ki blast goes between them and they both look left and see the guy that Rio had seen.
Codrea: Who the hell are you?
Rio: That’s Jinketsu I think but let’s go see if he’s the real deal.
Codrea: *winks* let’s give him the Super brother duo.
Rio: Ok let’s get him.
As they both charge up there spiritual energy there hair becomes red and stands up.
They both rush at the stranger with a flying kick as they are just about to hit with a crushing blow the man catches their feet and throws them away making them crash into the ground. As the dust clears Rio pops up.
Rio: What the hell I didn’t even see him move
Codrea appears with his uniform in bits
Codrea: He’s so fast that’s the real Jinketsu all right.
Rio: Yes!!!! He’s here to pick me up *jumps up and down* YAHHOOO
Chapter 3 Soon
Credit of the name Jinketsu goes to Alex Hiro (Crono)
Jinketsu’s School
Chapter 3
As Jinketsu stops and watches Rio fly towards him as Rio stops he looks into the face of Jinketsu what he sees is spiky hair and these dark black eyes although Jin has nothing hidden Rio gets the feeling that he has a lot to hide.
Rio: Hi
Jin: So you must be my next student.
Rio: *smiles* yeah that’s me.
Rio: Ok if you stay right here I will say bye to my family and I will get my stuff ok?
Jin: Ok but be quick we need to pick up other students
Rio: Ok
As Rio runs into the house he is greeted by his whole family and his mother with all his stuff all ready packed.
Rio: Thanks mom
Wife: That’s ok son now you go and be the greatest warrior this planet has ever seen.
Dad: Ok son just go and do your best.
Codrea: Ok moron go and become strong.
Rio: *grr* moron ill give you moron when your eating my shoe.
Once the good byes are said and everything is done Jin and Rio head to pick up the next student in the town of Ley which is a strange town with a lot of incredibly strong warriors that saved the planet when it came near to destruction which is seldom talked about these days.
Jin: Ok this is the place where Samariku lives.
Rio: Cool
Jin: Ok Sam lets go
Sam: Who’s the punk.
Rio: *arrrr* Punk ill give you punk when why foots half up your ass.
Jin
As they journey to all the near by towns they pick up new kids and the items that are needed for the journey back to the school but as they walk through the Konamarh woods Jin feels that they are being followed by a Teras mercenary as Jin turns round a throwing star catches him in the shoulder
Jin: *Ahhhh* Get together in a defensive circle
Rio: Why who is out there or should I say what is out there.
Jin: Rio it’s a mercenary
Rio: Ok so you think your so good do you picking on us show yourself and let’s punk.
Mystery: Ok little boy let’s fight
Rio jumps out of his defensive stance and flies into the sky and starts to power up then with a small bang his hair turns red.
Sam: Ok he’s as big a wimp as I though he was.
Jin: Rio get your little ass down here now!!!!
Rio: No! Now where are you bastard?
Mystery: Right behind you dunce.
Rio: Oh! Shit
As Rio turns round he charges a ki blast and sends it flying into mystery
Rio: AHHHH take this
Mystery: AHHHH that hurt punk you will.
As he finishes these words he throws twenty throwing stars at Rio as Rio doges them he gets caught of guard by a small ki blast from mystery and falls to the ground.
Rio: *panting* Ah that was a good trick but this is only the start.
As Rio gets up he charges his spiritual energy even more and his eyes go red.
Jin: Oh so this is the power of their family is it.
Rio: Let’s go scum I can take anyone down now.
Mystery: Let’s test that theory.
Mystery runs at Rio and try’s to punch him but at Rio’s current speed he doges all the punches with ease and sends Mystery flying with a kick to mid section.
Chapter 4 Soon