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Minzara
02-03-2007, 07:43 PM
Story was posted...but i got enough advice...thanks
DemonicGhost
02-05-2007, 03:31 AM
The last part seems like a rip-off of Itachi and Sasuke.
Minzara
02-05-2007, 06:19 AM
The last part seems like a rip-off of Itachi and Sasuke.

Few lines are inspired, slightly word for word. Not quite the same thing though....Sasuke thinks of nothing but revenge..... Rafe has a little different idea, as he is trying to save everyone, and trying to make friends still.

Besides I hate Sasuke...bastard annoys me
Minzara
02-05-2007, 04:26 PM
Thread can be trashed now...thanks