Need help on eyes

[MasterOfPuppets]

I need help making the right eyes on a naruto I made, could anyone post a correction with the right eyes?
http://img356.imageshack.us/img356/1706/naruto18zm.png

[PATMAN]

http://naruto-hinata.webcindario.com/wallpapers/Naruto.jpg here's some reference!

[Zaru]

The most important thing about his eyes are the thick black outlines on his lids and below. If you look at any manga panel with naruto's face on it, you will immediately see what i mean.

[MasterAka]

i edited it but its not brilliant ill post it soon

[MasterAka]

http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a174/ziggzyziggzy/naruedit-1.jpg

[MasterAka]

its still not like the real naruto though

[Iruka]

Here's some pointer on the eyes. I hope this help a little.

When drawing you have to keep in mind the expression your giving the character you draw. Whether it's sad, happy, angry, neutral, etc. How you draw the eyes can protrait the feeling the characters is feeling. :)

When drawing anime dont close all the line of the eyes. That way it make the eye look bigger and not small. The upper lashes is thicker than the lower lashes. When drawing eyebrow for an anime character, unless you meant for it to look like that the eyebrow should never be that of a single line.

Here's a couple example of eyes:
http://img288.imageshack.us/img288/7250/eyes9nc.png

And here's the small edit I did to eye (your picture). I hope it's not a problem with you.
http://img444.imageshack.us/img444/9082/image10hr.gif
what I did is:
-give the top lashes corners and curve and make it thicker
-make lower lashes thinner
-fill in the outer circle red
-thicken the eyebrow and give it color

[az0r]

good try and nice edit dobe!

[Fysh]

This is random, but i noticed you draw the opposite eye that I do to start out with. I always start with their left eye.

I love drawing the eyes, because it's one of the biggest ways that the characters' faces are differentiated. (Or to show similarities. For example, Sai's eyes are very similar to Sasuke's.)

I always think of the eyes (of naruto characters) as having sort of a rounded-trapezoidal shape rather than oval. It helps :)